Our love never ends-devakshi os – by priya

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Hi, guys …..this is priya aka padmajaa here…I m dedicating this epi to darshana di, shruthi di, ayushi, niks, shruthy luvly sissy, sumo, heshine, rithika, niki baby, darshini akka, aamu sissy, princess, harshita, aarti di, juhi di, riti di, harini, moni akka..
Stopping my bak bak…let’s start…
I m sure ur gng 2 experience a different luv story….I hope u will like it…
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Character sketch
Dev : smart, handsome, buisness tycoon,luvely son 2 his mother….waiting forh his girl..he is having 1 school crush..none other than sona…
Sonakshi : beautiful, gorgeous, only daughter to his father, luves him a lot..but hates his father for 1 thing… (don), she has 1 school crush(dev)..
Bejoy: father of sona..loves her a lot..don..rowdy of delhi city…
Elena: dev and sonakshi’s school friend…
Ishwari : lady don… (haahaa)….
Guys, important…dev’s mother is asha…
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Guys, pls read character sketch, so that u can understand
It was a beautiful morning,sun just shining the warm golden light over the small temple…hush descended over the temple as oly two of them are there..let’s see what happens there..
Dev’s POV
Our hero….I mean our handsome hunk seen praying the god joining the hand.. (guys, in my story dev belives in god…u do pls see our hero in different manner yaar)
“God, pls…I want a girl who loves me, who understands me, who adjust with me, who respects me, who will make me live with happiness, who will see my heart instead of my money and charm….I want a girl like that…pls show me” I asked closing my eyes and joining my hands..
Next scene, which I saw made me dumbstruck….I was standing like a statue after seeing her…
When I opened my eyes, I saw a girl , in white anarkali, I was mesmerised by her beauty…for me that is love at first sight… (she is none other than our beautiful sona)…
Cool breeze lifts the soft shining hair, they play with her hairs… I wish , I could have born as her hair…
In my bg….music were going on…and in the hot summer…I feel like snow is falling on me…yeh..its definitely love
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(Oh zaalima song from raaes film plays..)
OR
Senjitaley senjitaley song from remo (for tamilians)…plays..
Pora Pokkil Oru Looka Vuttu Enna Senjitaley
Enna Senjitaley
Paara Patcham Paakkaama Kooda Vechu Senjitaley
First Looka Vechu Bokkunnuthaan Onnu Vechuttaale
Onnu Vechuttaale
Loveu Booku Onnu Nenjukkulla Open Senjitaley
Ora Paarvaiyaala Enna Senjitaley
Enna Senjitaley Enna Senjitaley
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“Y…I feel like she is my school crush sona..”…
“No , it can’t be…becoz she is plumpy
My thoughts were disturbed when I saw her leaving the temple…I followed her…
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@the way to sona’s house..
Sona’s POV
Why I m feeling like somone is following me…I turned back and saw but no one was there…no sona..no sona..no one will be there …it will be ur illusion…
I again started walking..when someone pulled me and hugged me..I was hell angry..I was about to slap without seeing his/her face…
“Sonaa, sonaa…aahhh..don’t slap me ..I m sorry” a voice interrupted from the person…when I saw that face of the person, it was elena…omg…what I was gng to do her…slap her.. I immediately hugged her and said sry..
“Sona , what happened to u…why u was about to slap me…” elena asked with concern
“Nothing happened ele, I m fine”..I said frowning

Dev’s POV
I started following her…she turned back becoz she would have felt that I m following her…I hid near that tree…she again started walking…I followed her…I was shocked when some pulled her and hugged her and she was about to slap…I think she thought that I would have hugged her.. (follower)
And I saw elena…I was thinking elena,what she is doing with that girl…I just went near them , I heard ele saying her name as sona…omg…that means, she is my same childhood crush sona..she was plumpy but now she so leen and beautiful… omg I m falling for her every second…I went near to talk her

Sona’s POV
“Ele, what r u doing here…long time no see…”
“I m doing fashion technology, I want some things regarding my project , so I came here..”
And she too asked about my carrier , family and I said about my nutritionist profession and about my family..
“Oh accha…as u r a nutritionist …ur leen …but ur not nice now… I want that chubby bubbly plumpy sona”…she teased me..
When I was about to reply , someone called me shona…
Wait..waitt…what did he said shona…omg I was about to kill him becoz of calling my nick name…I turned to see who is that
I was shocked to see dev standing there, omg he became more handsome than b4…I m just falling for him again..I luv him…I just wanna go and hug him but I couldn’t…no sona…u can’t…then , he will die..
“Hi , shona…how r u??…hi ele…how r u???..” he asked..
I ignored him and asked who r u???..
I m not shona…I m sonakshi…after saying this I can see clearly his pain in his eyes..
ele interrupted me saying that “That’s dev, u can’t find him…don’t say lie..”…..
“No, ele…I don’t know him…I don’t know who he is….. just say him to go and …u ele, y r u saying passer by as dev …childhood friend..u just come with me…” I just pulled ele and we ran a little distance…
He was broken down, after I said him as a passer by….sry dev, I m really sry…I m just doing for u only…pls forgive me…if I didn’t do like this …u will die…I m sry dev….” I cried…
Ele consoled him..”.I know , u said this becoz u just want him happy….I can understand don’t cry”…she said….
We went to home..

Dev’s POV
Idk ,…y she said these…I can’t hear those words…I became deaf after she said me as a passer by…I just wanna die … my world is stopped…I was broken down…y sona ..y did u did this.. she ran away from me…I think something is bothering her…I will find that…I will not leave her…I will not leave my love …
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Third person POV
Next 1 week, dev followed her everywhere, where ever she went…sona was in cloud nine but she snubed him…she will see dev always in the corner of her eyes …dev noticed this…he thought of executing 1 plan..
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@Bus Stand…
Nxt day of that week…
Sona’s POV
She was searching for dev…turning right and left …she couldn’t find him since morning..she was somewhat scared thinking whether dev could in danger..omg..dev, where r u???..dev…dev.. pls come, I will say u …how much I luv u..pls..come..no, sona… what ur gng to do…u should not say him, u should not miss him..but my heart didn’t alow me..I was again searching left and right…
When someone tapped my shoulders…I can feel the same the familiar touch…I turned and see….it was …DEV…
“D..De…Dev….” I stumbled with my words…
“Are u searching for someone…and u know my name…dev… wow…that day , u said me as passer by but now, I know u r searching oly for me..y r u doing this to me , sonakshi.. I m just dying daily…pls say y r u pretending that u don’t luv me…” he said shaking me by holding his hand on my wrist and shoulder
Tears was falling down from my eyes as river…
“Say me, say me sonakshii..”..he raised his voice to high..
Suddenly, I reminsed my baba…”Don’t dare to love anyone”..
“What rubbish r u talking??..y should I pretend…the truth is that I don’t luv u..”….I said making my heart as stone…
I ran…but he pulled me with a greater force , in which I just fall on his chest…
“Pls…again..don’t say lie…I can see ur luv for me in ur eyes…… y r u saying a lie again and again,..I know something is bothering u…say me what is that…I will help u…I will not leave u,..say me sona “…he said holding her in my hands…
“Nothing is bothering me, u just stay away from me”…I said while trying to come out of his hold…

Dev’s POV
” I LOVE U SONA..say me what is bothering u..”i said making my grip on her more and whispered this words on her ears and brushing my lips on her..”
She became weakened by my sudden gesture… I have that much efect on her..
She didn’t say me , anything…she was just humming..mmm
“Sonakshi, if ur not going to say me…I will just fall from the cliff…dying one time is better than dying daily”..he said…
She was shocked..she just gave me a bone crushing hug and said…
“I LOVE U DEV….I LOVE U…I LOVE U…so much…don’t do that…
I m sry”..she said crying..
I was so happy, at a sec, I placed my lips on her…she too reciprocated after a while…after tasting both our mouth..we released becoz of lack of oxygen..
“Ok..now say me , what is bothering u??”….I asked while panting..
“Dev! Dev !….my baba is a don..he warned me not to luv anyone when he come to know I luved u in childhood… I wrote a luv letter for u in my maths note..he got that and warned me not to luv u and don’t dare to luv any one..and if I luv means, he will kill the man whom I luv too…so I thought he will kill u too if he come to know…I luv u…I m sry dev…”she said..
“Luv letter..seriously in maths note…u didn’t show me that luv letter ….where is that???….and ur baba is a don…omg..I m gonna marry a don’s daughter…and don’t worry, nothing will happen to me…see, I will impress u papa..k” he said kissing her forhead..
“I will show u, after our marriage..and yeah, I m don’s daughter … if u do anything..I will kill u “she said chuckling
When, some goons towards the direction of sonakshi..
“Ur sonakshi bose right,daughter of bejoy bose..”one of the goon asked her..
“Ye…ye..yes…”she said stammering and clutched my shirt tightly…
“Heeeey..she is only sonakshi yaar..come baby …come..”one of the goon pulled her…
The nxt second, that goon got nice beat from me and he was lying on the floor..
The goon started coming to my direction…I bet all them blue and black..when bejoy bose..don..came…
When, one lady came and was about to stab my sona, I pushed her and got that stab…
“DEV….DEV…”She shouted….
In the same time, bejoy shouted…”shonaa…beta…ur fine right”.. and he come towards sona..but she didn’t care and said ……… “Dev…Dev get up….” she crys,…
That lady was ishwari…”I will not leave u ishwari..”bejoy said..
Third person’s POV
Dev is admitted in the hospital…and sonakshi crys outside… and after a while, doctor comes and says now he is fine…
Sonakshi come and sits behind dev and hold his hand and crys…
“Dev , it’s all becoz of me..”..sona said…

Next second, dev captures her lips and said..
“It’s not becoz of u..it’s becoz of me..I should have protected u… I m sry baby…”.. dev said..
And police investigated and he said to arrest ishwari…ishwari got 30 years jail…
Dev came to bejoy’s house and talked with him for hand of sona…he agreed..and dev asked him 1 help and said something..and he agreed…
Dev went and bejoy called sona and said…
” u should marry oly the man , whom I says..ok sona” bejoy said..and went..
Sona nooded her head..and went weeping..
Sona’s POV
God, y r u doing this to me…wait, I will call dev and say..
“Hlooo baby…r u missing me..??…I m near ur house oly.. I m in rose park come there” he said and cut the call without waiting for her reply…
It’s 11 o clock…seriously saying me to come out..omg..
I came out of the house…some one blind folded me…
“Don’t worry..don’t get panic…I m dev oly”..dev said, I was relived..
And he took me somewhere…

After a while, he opened my blindfold,
The nxt scene, which I saw was breath taking, that room was full of my pics, my child hood pics, tennage pics, many more..
I hugged him and said “Dev, I LOVE U…pls don’t ever leave me, if u leave me, I will die…” I said…
“Shhhh..shhh…don’t say that..I will not leave u ever, ur mine… oly mine..” he said..
And the clock striked 12 o clock,
“HAPPY BIRTHDAY SONA….” he said and hugged me and kissed me passionately
“Ok, give me a gift dev..now”
He phoned someone and said something and gave me..
“Hlooo..Shona beta…u can marry dev..I m ok with dev…he is so nice man…he deserves u…marry him itself and happy birthday shona beta”..he said..
“Whatt….thank u baba…luv u…”I said…
“Dev….Dev….this was my best gift ever dev…thank u for cmg in my life….Luv u ..luv u dev…” I said and hugged him tightly…
Then, our marriage happened..

After 2 months,
Dev’s POV
“Good Morning dev..”sona said and kissed his eyes..
“Good morning…my sweety” I said and hugged her…
“Wake up dev, wake up…see time is 10…till how much time., we will sleep in bed itself..wake up and cook breakfast…I m hungry”..sona said…
“Arey, it’s oly 10..let me sleep for 5 more min and sona can u pls do breakfast today alone…pls..”I said..
“What…breakfast , meee…dev…get up..”sona said…
“Okay..I will myself do”…I said,.
I went to the kitchen and started doing our breakfast…
Sona came and sit on the kitchen counter and started humming song..sanam re..
“how much time , u will take to cook breakfast…I m hungry..fast”….sona said
“See don’s daughter , dominating like don…”I said..
“Wat don’s daughter…I will not leave u”…sona said and started throwing the vegetables…
I took the pan as the sheild and said “sonaaa…sonaa..sry..le..lea…leave mee..” I said…
This was the end guys..
Devakshi’s life goes like this…..
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Pls do cmts…it means a lot for writers…It took 8 hours to write…pls do cmts…silent readers wake up and cmt..
Niki (niki645)…where r u…this is specially 4 u…
U asked me for ur birthday but I couldn’t write…seriously sry.. take this as ur belated gift…
K..bah bye ..friends …pls do cmt…

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39 Comments
  1. Awesome

    1. Priya12

      Thank u princess..

  2. Darshini

    Priya dear,…it’s beyond good…aww so cute devakshi!!
    Love them…
    Haha!!sona u got caught…dev played the trick…
    Oh gawddd dev u got stabbed for sona…wat a love…
    Highlight was childhood crush…semma da…
    And sona’s best b’day gift was dev…
    Osummm!!
    Hehe!! Dev’s dialogue”don’s daughter is dominating”wow…
    Dinamum nee daana cooking expert dev-the wanted chef…funny!!
    Total blckbuster…
    Tc da…luv u loads???
    And belated wishes to you niki????

    1. Priya12

      Thank u so much, darshu akka…
      And niki, I don’t know , where she is??..
      She is not cmg 4 tu…
      I will be happy, if she sees it…
      And once again thank u akka…
      Luv u…

    2. Niki645

      Thanks a lot di!!❤️❤️

      1. Priya12

        Ur always welcome, luv u a loads…

  3. V.V.harshita

    Hey I am Akshada ….u did nt even add my name…..????
    Anyways was jst awesome and don seriously !!!

    1. Priya12

      Sry, akshada..I usually dedicate my os to the people who cmted in my previous os…
      I think harshita oly cmt and not u…
      I m really sry….
      Thanks 4 ur cmt…
      I will surely add ur name in my nxt os….
      Luv u..

      1. V.V.harshita

        Oh…..actually she never ever cms to TU itself…..it’s me .. who commented frm first till last….she is always busy in wattpad….perukku dhan ava account use pandra dhu naan dhan….and all the ff (both the stories )
        Were actually posted by me…she jst reads it…-Akshada

    2. Priya12

      I m sorry da..
      Neeyum wattpad la irrukala..v.g.akshada…
      I m padmajaa12..wattpad id…
      And don’t worry ….kandipa unnoda name, eludhuven…I m sorry da…
      Nee ff post panriana…y r u giving credits too her too???

  4. hehe…ishwari got 30 years jail….superb…wish this to be real… devakshi’s childhood crush,young age love,marriage,happy ending at last…great…amazing

    1. Priya12

      Thanks a lot, ekani..
      Keep supporting me…

  5. Aarti32

    Awesome..Lovely..N Bijoy Baba as don??

    1. Priya12

      Thank u di…
      And actually , I was having this idea before a month but couldn’t post…
      That time ishwari and bejoy make me mad by separating devakshi, so I made them dons..
      Thank u once again…
      Luv u…

  6. Dessertqueen

    Lovely!!! Waiting for more of these… 🙂

    1. Priya12

      Omggg….marzia di…u…omg..seriously. ..
      I couldn’t belive…I was pinching me whether it’s dream or truth…I can’t belive di..
      After seeing ur comment, I was in cloud9…
      Even in ur exams, u commented…..
      Really,….thank u so much….
      Luv u a loads..
      All the best for ur exams…
      I know , u will do well..
      Luv u…

  7. Nikkita0194

    an amazing o
    1
    an awesome 1
    stunning 1
    lovely 1
    abordale 1
    love all u wrote
    it contains every things crisp cuts enthusiasm efforts pain n lol movements
    n when i was reading i felt like m the witness of all the thing u wrote
    actually i was reading but in middle i left cuz of some work but i was totally thinking abt wat is gonna to b nxt
    n i must appreciate ur efforts its not that much that u wrote it 4 eight hrs but u wrote it 2 times n then u wrote it on wattpad u r a gr8 hardworker dii
    luv it from bottom of my heart
    urs Nikki

    1. Priya12

      Thank u so much niks..
      I m so happy after reading ur beautiful cmts…thank u…
      To write this os, it takes 4 hours and it got deleted and again I wrote it for 4 hours…
      And in wattpad, I just copied,…
      After my os deleted, I thought not to do the same mistake by writing in tu…so I wrote wps office..I had a copy…so I pasted in wattpad…
      I m really elated after reading ur cmts…
      I m so happy that u luved my os this much..
      Thank u…
      Luv u …

      1. Nikkita0194

        luv u 2 dii????

  8. Akshita

    Awesome❤❤

    1. Priya12

      Thank u akshita…

  9. Riti1107

    It was lovely!!!
    ❤❤❤
    My favorite part was Ishwari getting 30 years imprisonment????

    You took 8 hours to script this
    Great dedication

    1. Priya12

      Thank u riti di…
      Haan, ishwari irraitates me always …
      So , I sent her jail for 30 years…
      Yeah, di…my os got deleted, I wrote another time…so , it took this much time..
      Once again thank u…
      Luv u..

  10. Hi padmajaa…luv tis os. …especially the songss zaalima,senjitaley,sanam re…all those r my fav songss. ..and get nick name as shona…bejoy as don….bday surprise….everything i luvedd yaar…great effort….awsome os of my bestiee????

    1. Priya12

      Thank u so much rashiga (moka)…
      Ik , u luv these songs…
      And ik , if I would have added sirikkadey song…u would have luved it more..
      I m so happy that u like my os…bestie..

  11. ShrutiP

    I am really sorry priya…I could not comment earlier and even didn’t reply to your message….I already read it when it got posted itself…But could not comment as I was busy with my studies… Coming to the Os….I already you I love your works…I had been waiting for one since your last…. Beautifully written…Bejoy as don…Ishwari jailed…Good work keep it…You simply nailed it and I loved it….Will be waiting for more of your works…And phir se sorry late hone ke liye…
    Love you???
    SHRUTI

    1. Priya12

      Arey, sorry bolne ki koi jarurat nahi hai di…
      How can u say sry to ur sisy..??? So no sry..
      I know , u will be busy somewhere, so I waited eagerly for ur cmt…
      And thank u so much for ur beautiful cmts..
      I will try my best to write a os or ff…
      Luv u a loads..

  12. Kriti249

    Di I’m so sorry for late comment but what to do I got busy with studies and my ff so couldn’t comment and coming to the os it’s awesome….bijoy as don lol??

    1. Priya12

      Thanks Kriti dr… No problem.. Ur busy na.. K..
      Once again thank u..

  13. Niki645

    First of all, so sorry for the late comment! Reallyyyyyy very sorry?

    Thank u so much for this wonderful OS!!??Really loved it so much!! This is really the best birthday gift ever! Hats off to u for ur hard work in writing this!

    Again, thanks a lottttt for this!

    Love u loads❤️❤️

    1. Priya12

      Arey, niki, it’s ok 4 late cmt…
      But where u went these days…seriously…
      I was missing u…
      Sometimes, I was in verge of slapping u and to ask y u left tu..
      Thanks 4 ur cmt…I m so happy that u read it..
      I was just praying that at least u should see this,..I m so happy that u cmted…
      Luv u a loads..

      1. Niki645

        Sorry??Didn’t leave TU dear….. I was just busy finishing a story on wattpad?

        I really loved it!! And I missed u too!

        Luv u❤️❤️❤️?

    2. Priya12

      I read ur story in wattpad…
      You never gave me a chance r8…
      It was really nice but couldn’t vote and cmt…
      Luv u a loads

  14. Swarna494

    Priya super maa. Semaiya irundhuchu.. Romba romantic aa think paniruka.. Tamil fans kaaga senjitaley… Paarata vaarthaigal illai..
    And the hilarious part was luv ltr inside d math buk…
    It was so interesting,and i wen i read this i imagine those scences in my mind… Superb superb superb????

    1. Priya12

      Thanks akka…
      First time, romantic try panniruken …
      Luv at first sight LA.. Adhar senjitaley song poten… Adhukum mela, I luv that song akka..
      Maths book LA love letter… Thonichu eludhiten…
      Thank u so much 4 ur beautiful cmts akka..

  15. awesome. it was too good and cute. I loved it. bejoy and ishwari don. ishwari 30 years jail. end was amazing. come back with another soon. and sorry for late comment.

    love u??????

    1. Priya12

      No need of sry…
      Thx 4 ur beautiful cmts..
      I will try my best to post another…
      Love u too..

  16. Awesome priyanka reva……I didn’t really expect these things from u…….but really awesome padmajaa……but keep trying padmajaa. …..Great!

    1. Priya12

      Adii pavii..social site enoda name aa disclose panra…manathaa vangada ma..
      Thx for beautiful cmts…ice vikira aayaa..
      U didn’t expect from me???
      Expect the unexpected from me…

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