“MY LOVE , MERI JAAN” BY DOLLY , RIYA & ALIA : CHAPTER 8

Hey guys …it’s Dolly, riya and alia back again …thank for the response but it was so low compared to last episodes …

Please guys comment …

So ya we had 4-5 comments longer ….and the winner is #rakiba.

So we dedicate this episode to rakiba …..she can any ff she wants from the list which was posted in last episode ….

Congrats dear …and here u go with the chapter ,

Flashback,

Shekhar comes home …

Shekar (relief) : you are all right na swara….I was scared to death

Swara (smiling) : Haan dad I am all right

Shekar : who dropped u here …

Swara : sanskar

Shekar was confused ….

Shekar: seriously …then you he kidnapped u

Swara (lies) : no idea ….dad ..

Shekar : God damm…we missed him ….next time will surely catch him

Swara looks on

Sehakr : anyways u r safe now …that’s what I want …

Swara smiles …shekar leaves….

Swara gives a relief …..

Mishti comes along with ragini

Mishti : u both get ready

Swaragini (confused) : for what ma……

Mishti : vo ..ur dad’s Friend is coming to see us so

Swara (teases) : only for seeing us …or anything other than that…..

Mishti hits her playfully

Ragini (tensed) : Haan…ma …

Mishti : don’t know …but he is ur dad’s long time Friend….so get ready…we r leaving to hotel for lunch

Swara smiles and leaves ….whereas ragini was tensed ….whether they are finding groom for her .

@maheshwari mansion

Sanskar was deeply in thoughts of Swara…

Suddenly the door bell rings….

Sanskar : sahil open the door ….

Sahil who was watching TV…goes to open

After opening he had all his teeth shown up , yep it’s Swara.

Swara (smiling) : hi ….sahil

Sahil (suprised) : hi …Swara….u here

Swara : why I can’t come

Sahil : no no ….u r most welcomed .

Sanskar from upstairs shouts : who is at the door sahil

Sahil (smiling) ; Swara bhai ….

Sanskar was shocked….he was suprised …he come out for the room and sees her through corridor

Swara looks up to him……..both were lost …..in each other .

Sahil : come in Swara have a seat .

Swara smiles and sits on the sofa…along with sahil

Sahil : so any work .

Swara : hmm….ya …actually we r having prom night coming up ….so I thought I will ask u for the partner .

Sahil happiness was no boundaries

Sahil (happily) : seriously ….

Swara (smiling) : ha …will you ?

Sahil : of course Swara…..

Swara smiles .

Sahil : oh ..I forget wait I will get something.

Swara ; no no formality sahil

Sahil : come on u came to my house first time …have something

Swara smiles.

Sahil smiles and goes in to kitchen .

Swara looks at all the pic hanged on the walls

It’s of sahil and Sanskar…their birthdays….and then …..something she saw which confused her.

She took the photo into to her….

Swara : I saw her somewhere…she looks like ….

Before that Sanskar comes …

Sanskar : what happened Swara…

Swara : whose pic is this? ….(it was a lady and man pic)

Sanskar (sad tone) : my mom and dad…..

Swara feels bad….but she knew she has seen the women somewhere….she is very close to it

Swara : I am sorry…

Sanskar : it’s OK….it’s all compensated .

Swara smiles ….Sahil comes with three mugs of coffee.

Sanskar : thanks brother…..Sahil smiles….

Swara also smiles and drinks .

Suddenly she spits it out …this shocked Sanskar and sahil

Sahil (concerned) : are u all right….

Swara wipes her mouth
Swara : sahil what’s this …huh ?

Sanskar (confused) : coffee ? Why ?

Swara : come on yaar…..u have added salt instead of sugar …

Sahil confused while Sanskar too

Sanskar : but I thought this is coffee taste .

Sahil also nods …

Swara (shokced) : that means u both were drinking this only ….

Both nods ….Swara slaps her forehead…

Swara : how do u eat these tasteless….why don’t u keep an cook …

Sahil : I am allergic to their food so ..we both make it up for ourselves .

Sanskar nods ….Swara signs impossible

Swara : wait so from today I will cook and keep for u both….

Sahil and Sanskar smiles …or u can say their feelings increase for her.

Saying this she goes to kitchen ….Sahil follows her ….Sanskar stands there admiring her .

Swara turns and looks at him …..this was unnoticed by sahil ….who was staring Swara.

Swara : it’s OK…Sahil…u go I will cook

Sahil : no no I will help .

Swara: I said na go …just 20 mom’s everything will be ready

Sahil later leaves .

After 20 mins

At dining table ..there where many varieties of food …Sanskar and sahil were shokced….Swara smiles

Swara : come sit ..

Sanskar: u know cooking also

Swara (teases) : there is nothing …that Swara doesn’t know.

Sanskar smiles…Sahil hugs Swara…..

Sahil : omg thanks Swara….

Swara smiles : welcome

Sanskar looks down : enough…enough …come have food sahil

Sahil breaks the hug ….Swara smiles seeing his jealous .

Swara serves them …..Sanskar and sahil were suprised with the taste …

Sahil : it’s delicious Swara……

Swara smiles…..back

Sanskar: Haan it’s nice smiley .

Swara looks on ….

Swara & sahil : smiley ?

Sanskar (smiles) : she always keeps smiling that’s why

Swara was looking at him lovingly …she sees then sees the time

Swara : shoot …I am late …bye guys

Sahil : what happened…

Swara : vo….dad’s Friend is coming and they have invited us to the hotel so

Sanskar: ok then….thanks for coming and take care…come soon (smiling)

Swara : sure bye …

Sahil: take care bye ….

Sahil goes to wash his hands….Sanskar goes to main door to drop Swara….

Sanskar (smiling) : smiley

Swara turns

Swara : what ?

Sanskar : nothing……(he smiles)

Swara also smiles ….Swara leaves in her car ….

@Sunway Manor hotel

Swara was looking like an angel…with red frock ..hair open …red lipstick ….a layer of kajol….dazed and stunned seeing her .

While ragini was not less than Swara..she was in her gown with simple earing ….and less makeup .natural beauty…

Both were the stars of tonight .

They all sit …in a place …

Then dp, ap and laksh comes …laksh was also hot in his red jacket and jeans (we am a Namish fan )

Laksh knows ragini is the one whom they are going make him marry .

Swara leaves to washroom

Shekar: hey dp ….how are you?

They both hug ….

Dp: I am all fine how are u

Shekar : I am fine .

Dp : meet my family

Dp : this is ap my wife …

Ap : namaste ji!

Shekar and Mishti: namaste

Dp: and this is my son…laksh

Shekar and Mishti were happy seeing Laksh

Shekar: hi laksh ….

Laksh bend and takes blessings……

Shekar: my family ….this is Mishti my wife …

Dp and ap smiles …

Shekar: that’s my elder daughter ragini…

Ragini Comes and was shocked seeing laksh …she was happy that…her dream is gonna come true …..

Laksh Winks at her …ragini blushes….

Ragini takes blessings from Ap and dp

Ap (in mind) : hmm mm..she is okay ok for laksh …not that much .

Dp : she is very beautiful na

Ap gives a fake smile

Shekar : then there is my younger daughter Swara

All turns and looks at Swara coming ….laksh was lost in her beauty …..he was memerised seeing her…..

Ap (in mind) : she is perfect match for laksh .

Laksh winks at ap…..ap smiles.

Swara bends and takes blessings ….

Dp : khush raho beta …..

Swara smiles..

Laksh (smiling) : hi …I am laksh …(he shakes hand with her)

Swara smiles: I am Swara…..

Both departs…..

Shekar: come let’s have lunch and talk …

All nods and sits ….

Will laksh cheat ragini ? How ?

Stay tuned ….

Thanks for reading…please comment and the game is still on

Rakiba u can ask us any ff from the list which was in last episode …

We will post it …keep it in mind …that will u mine forever will be a new story and not continuation

Same goes with meri aashique….it would be a new start….

Others all will be same continuation

The game is still on for others too…

Thank you

ALIA posting

21 comments

  1. Rakiba

    Thanxxxxxx a lotttttttt……
    Loveeeee uuuuu 3 sis……
    I m sooooooooo happyyy…….
    This epi was Amazing,
    Awasome ,Nice,Superb…..
    Nd
    again Thanx a lottttttt….
    Plz write
    My love story stages………
    Best of luck for nxt epi……
    3 sis plz take care ……
    Love u 3 sis so much….
    Love ur ffs……
    All ffs r tooooo gdddd……

  2. Mica

    |Registered Member

    yay! i love you three… so fast update..
    well AP is mother of Sanskar and Laksh, so which one elder ?
    aawww…Swaraaaaa…….she makes 2 brothers falling for her.. just kinda in the serial… 😀 😀

  3. Divyanshri

    |Registered Member

    awsome…. I didn’t read from first….so I am not getting some parts… anyways…. as soon as I will get time I will read it… Dolly Di…. how r u…. why u disappeared suddenly……. hope to see ur ffs again…..

  4. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    I know I know, I am late but what to do I was busy with my college assignments😭😭😭..

    About chappy, stupendous.I loved it…Hmmm, they have a gala time in sankys house…Sanhil don’t know how to make coffee,lol😂😂..Well, sanhil ne kabhi outside coffee nehi pi😉😉.. Sankyyyy, you are jealous,not bad ha😁😁..Sanhil share a great bond.. It shows that ki hamesha blood relation sab kuch nehi hote… Swara is cooking,why not, after all,sanky is her would be husband and sahil is devar😉😉.. Swara go for it dear.. BTW, swara always look like an angel*dreaming… And laksh, I know he going to cheat on ragini…But he is handsome yaar.. So, that’s why I can’t hate him😉😉.. Keep it up guys.. Waiting for nxt..
    Take care
    Keep smiling
    Keep updating, hehe😘😉

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