Love Makes Life Beautiful – Shot 1

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Hey this is sangee again with a update but a new one… a few shots on account of valentine s day…
While the whole world celebrate the day of love why not us 😀 so here goes the first shot of Love Makes Life beautiful …pls read and comment ur reviews… All of u who get to see and read this pls comment at least a word…

Love Makes Life beautiful:
O God this is killing me….. I face palmed myself for my stupidity…. Now I need to refactor the whole logic…. This bug is torturing me for past two days…. hey bagwan …what sin did I do in my previous birth u made me take cs as major…. And made me fall for programming… Now iam hating myself for taking this as my career…. My whole body is painning like hell because of this fever… Now this bug is giving me extra headache ?….Even though I love programming but whenever I got stuck with some issues this is making me go insane…. I think every programmer in the world have love hate relationship with their carrier…. I love my work at the same time I hate this…. Arghhhhh….i banged my head to the table…. OK cheer up girl u can do it… I started the server again…. It will take atleast 15 mins… I will grab a cup of coffee in the meantime…. I rotated my neck to relax the muscles and got up from my chair….. its almost 5 in the evening
As I turned I got to see a beautiful sight in front of me….. Cloths scattered here and there…. Dried plate over the table with some left over bread slices…. Two coffee cups ☕. ☕. And some spilled coffee over the table … Some dresses over the bed….
My whole room looked total mess…. Not only my room… I too look as horrible as my room…

The mirror to my left side Cleary shows my messed up state…. my shoulder length curly locks in a messy bun… Some strands are still falling over my face hiding my view… I gathered them and tucked them behind my ears… My face all red because of constant sneezing…. ahhh-choooo… Yes thinking abt dat itself making me sneeze again…. I pulled out another tissue from the pack and cleaned my nose and throw that into the dustbin…. My off shoulder comfy t shirt was all wrinkled… My brown color night pants…. Wat wait wait… It must be pink colour yes it’s pink colour one… Whack I look dirty from head to toe… I wish I could take a long cold shower… But. It will only increase my sickness…. At least I need to change this dress… I turned towards my cupboard to pull out a dress… I stopped in my tracks wen my mobile sang my favourite tone. I can identify the caller by the ringtone…. I have set separate ringtone for every contacts in my phone…
I sat on the chair as I lifted the phone and place it over my ears all the while sniffing my nose…. Gosh I feel like someone is tickling me inside my nose….

Radu how are you….. My frnd Sam shouted from other side of the phone
Oops sorry I forgot to introduce myself yes iam radika… Radhu for my closed ones….
And this one over the phone is sammander Singh… Shortly Sam and Sammy for our gang….
Radu r u there….. Sam shouted again

Spare me for few mins I will continue my introduction session after dealing with this loud chatter box….
Yes Sammy iam here… Bolo baba… Mai theek hoon…. Y r u shouting like this… I think my ears gonna bleed
Sam: Ok supper so u r fine…. wats the status of that task yar… are u able to debug dat?
So u didn’t call me to check about my health… u called me to check about the status of the bug …
This very unfair sam…
Sam: gosh radhu u said dat u r fine so only I asked … now u r locking me… ok leave that now say me r u fine or not …shall I come there …
Its ok sam iam feeling better than yesterday… I also found out the cause of the issue I just need to fix dat ah-choooo ah-choooo ugh!! … give me 2hrs I will fix and let u know…
Sam: radhu u just mail me the cause of the issue I will look into it… don’t take stress it will worsen ur condition
Its ok sam I will try if not I will ping u with the details…
Sam: ok take care baby I will catch u after sometime …love you baby… bye…
Love you darling bye …
I got immersed myself into the code after I disconnected the call….

After 2 hrs of struggling I finally fixed the issue … I tested it once before pushing my code… all I remember is hitting enter after pushing the code… fever and this bug took a toll on my body…I was tired to the core… I dozed off in the same place…
I came back to senses partially when I felt something cold over my right shoulder followed by some feathery touch … those rough fingers massaging my shoulder in a slow motion…As the fingers continued its magic on my shoulder I felt each and every muscles and tissues in my body getting relaxed… I bend my head forward to give more access to my nape … I heard a giggle sound as a response to my action …
I opened my eyes and turned towards my back when I missed the fingers on my shoulders…
But I can’t find anyone… I face palmed myself for day dreaming … oops I looked at around the room its not day anymore its already night stars and moon were already made their presence on the sky…
I shifted my gaze towards the wall clock in the room its half past 8 gosh I have slept for this much time … my stomach started growling for food… I started to move towards the kitchen lazily and stopped there itself noticing the changes in my room…wait…what happened to my room… my whole room looks neat and clean… I was shocked to the core… am I dreaming now or did I dreamed before.. I looked around… my laptop was closed… whole room neat and clean even the coffee spills are cleaned… one sec wait wait … I don’t remember closing my laptop … oh Gosh is there any bhoot in my house …I started shivering and sweating on thinking itself… I pressed my neck in tension… I felt something sticky over my neck… I took my finger and examined only to know dat it is some pain relief balm…
So I dint dream… did bhoot massaged to me?… I gulped in fear … at the same time I heard some noise of rough handling of utensils from kitchen …

God my house is haunted with one maid’s bhoot it does all the cleaning work and now doing something in my kitchen…
I tiptoed towards the kitchen hide myself behind the wall and peeped inside the kitchen….
Aaaa-Choooo… I hide myself behind the wall again … I can sense some movements behind me….
God this sneeze… I got caught by the ghost…. Pls save me from this ghost…. My heart started drumming against my rib… I placed my palm over my heart to pacify it… suddenly I felt some hot breath fanning my left shoulder… my heart stopped beating for a second… All the tiny hairs over my body stood straight in fear… “Thud” literally I fainted on the next fraction of second after I sense a hand touching my shoulder…..
I came back to sense hearing some noise … I looked around When did I came back to my room … I got up and slouched to the headboard of my bed… felt some water droplets in my face I wiped them…
I moved my gaze towards the table near me when I smelled the exotic aroma of omelette….
This bhoot is also known that I like omelette… It cleaned the whole house, gave a massage, and now it prepared dinner too… what a good bhoot… I should thank it and make friendship with it… I decided to talk with it …
Hello…. Bhoot can u hear me… Thank you so much for all the things you have done…
I didn’t get any response….
Can we be friends… come in front of me I will not try to harm u… and in turn u also shud not harm me …let us be friends…. What u say?
I looked around but no response this time also… I waited for few seconds… I hear someone laughing in a distance, is dat bhoot laughing? For each passing second hear the laughing sound more clearly …
Though it’s a friendly bhoot my heart started beating fast thinking about making friendship with a bhoot I gulped thinking about the same… now I can feel some footsteps … its coming towards me…

Unknowingly I pulled my comforter and hide my face behind it… I felt someone entering inside my room my heart goes dhak dhak… suddenly no movement… I pulled down the comforter from my face very slowly only to find someone standing in front of me…I can see the feet as I was looking downwards… I gulped hard and raised my gaze upwards only to find my Arjun standing with ear to ear smile in his face and juice glass in his hands…
I was dumbstruck for minute
He placed the juice glass on the nearby table and looked at me raising his right eyebrows. So u thought that a friendly bhoot cleaned the whole house, gave a massage to u and now prepared ur favourite omelette and orange juice. He laughed at me as I saw him without blinking… he shook his hand before my eyes which brought me to reality…
I jumped over the bed and hugged him tight… he hugged me back…
What happed to u radhu? I know dat u will miss me but here u became sick and u didn’t inform me about that… do u think my business meeting is important than ur health? He enquired without breaking the hug
I missed u Arjun I wept wetting his shoulders… he broke the hug and wiped my tears
Ok now iam here na no more missing… he kissed my forehead…
But how u came early u were supposed to come here after two weeks right I questioned him leaning on his shoulder
Yes, my plan was that but Iam unable to hold me back wen I got to know that my wife is missing me so much that she is hallucinating about a friendly ghost doing all the household chores, If I take some more time to reach her she will became so crazy to make friendship with that ghost… he laughed at me pinching my nose
Arjun y r u pulling my legs now I pouted at him… he pecked my lip and smiled at me
Are u going to tell the real reason or not I looked at him with fake anger…
Nandu told dat u r unwell so now iam here at ur service he bows down like a servant…
I slapped him playfully… and sat on the bed… he handed me the plate and signed me to eat I took the plate from his hands and started eating like a obedient kid
Arjun so u did all the work I asked him munching the omelette … he nodded positively
When u landed in Mumbai? 7 he replied
God Arjun u must be tired after a long journey, why u did all the work? Did u eat something?
I pinched one piece of omelette and extended my hand to feed him… he nodded negatively
When I reached here I saw u sleeping siting in the chair, the whole house was a mess, I pressed my palm on ur forehead to check the temperature, u were having a medium temperature, u also yelped in pain holding your shoulder as u find some disturbance in sleep so I massaged u and I found dat ur are enjoying it as u stooped ur head to give me access to ur nape,
U giggled right I caught u… I intervened him
See u caught me dats why I say my wife is brilliant… he smiled at me and continued…

After seeing u sleep I got refreshed and cleaned the whole house and checked with our doctor abt ur health and about ur diet , after dat I started preparing the dinner, dats wen I caught u sneezing and u fainted thinking me as ghost … I brought u to the room and sprinkled water over ur face but u didn’t come to conscious, dat time Nandu was calling me to check with ur health … and u were proposing friendship with the ghost… he took a deep breath and finished
I have never ever dreamed of getting a crazy wife like you he complained laughing at me
I gulped the tablets he gave and pouted at his comment
You look beautiful wen u Pout…
I pushed him when he came near me with a mischievous smile…
Ouch radhu why are pushing me now ?
Don’t come near me arjun…
What the…. He exclaimed
Aaaa-Chooo……. I sneezed again he passed me the tissue pack
U will also get fever.. U know this is very contagious…
U scared me Radu…
He jumped over the bed pinning me down on the bed…
Arjun what are you doing… listen to me
He came closer without taking my warning…. I closed my eyes as he covers the each and every inch of distance between us
My eyes shot open when I feel he pressed his forehead over my forehead…
I love you… he whispered over my lips after giving a quick peck
Love you too… I whispered into his ears…
This is cheating radhu… I came here flying just to see you but u..
But me… I asked him raising my eyebrows…
He got up and sat beside me… I deserve more… but considering ur illness I will adjust with a kiss… deal
Arjun is dis any business deal… I snapped at him
No I demand a kiss now…. He looked at me with a fake anger
Arjun u r becoming so demanding nowadays….
Whatever deal or no deal….
Arjun already my whole body is painning don’t make me laugh then I will end up having stomach pain also…. I giggled at him
He stared me with out any reaction in his face…
Arjun stop playing with me…. I look dirty from top to bottom u r demanding a kiss after seeing me in this much horrible state… I sighed lying down
U look beautiful even now… he joined me in the bed covering the comforter over us
In which angle I look beautiful ….I looked at him in question….
Beauty comes from soul not from face…. He wrapped his left arm over my body pulling me closer to him… gave me a chaste kiss on my forehead wishing me good night and switched off the light
Arjun I said na u will also be infected… I tried to come out of his hold…
It’s ok we can spend time together on bed if I too get sick…. He replied in a sleepy voice pulling me closer
My eyes too started drooping because of the effects of the medicine I took…
I snuggled closer to him and started sleeping hugging him….
Ooops sry my introduction session in still pending….
Ya as I already said iam radhika… Radhika Arjun Mehra… This is my husband Arjun Mehra…and we have a chotu Maya Arjun Mehra a little bundle of joy who gonna turn into one in next month Nandu di is taking care of her because of my illness ….. And Nandu is Nandhini Khanna arjun’s sister, let me stop here iam feeling sleepy will introduce other important characters in my life as and when they come

Next Day Morning:
I was wriggling on the bed to find a comfortable position to sleep as the morning sun rays fell over my face disturbing my sleep… suddenly I can’t feel the sun rays any more I smiled and buried me inside the comforter again…
I opened my sleepy eyes wen the sweet smell of musky cologne hit my nostrils… I got up slightly and leaned on the head board of my bed rubbing my sleepy eyes…
Arjun was standing in front of the dressing table fully dressed in business attire adjusting his tie… he winked at me as soon I my eyes came in contact with his reflection…
Good Morning… I wished in half sleepy tone…
Good Morning sweet heart he wished me with the flying kiss without breaking eye contact with my reflection
“How are you feeling? Any better…” he asked
“Yep better …” I nodded at him smiling
“Super… go refresh yourself” he pushed me inside the washroom handing me a towel
I came out after having a quick shower wearing the cloths he already placed in the dresser…
He was running around the room picking some files…
Why this much early I questioned him seeing him hurry
“Early… its 11 sleepyhead” he chuckled at me
What 11 !!! y didn’t u wake up me earlier Arjun… I searched for my mobile to check for any missed calls… but I can’t find it anywhere… Arjun where my mobile is? did u see I asked him searching in the drawers… suddenly I found someone lifting me from the ground… ya u r right not someone its Arjun
“Chup… stop wriggling…”he ordered me…
He placed me over the bed covering my lower torso with comforter…
Listen to me u are not allowed to get out of the bed, no phone, no laptop, no Tv, no internet, only sleeping… are u hearing me…
I sat there with wide open mouth…
He snapped his fingers in front of me bringing me to reality
“Arjun are u house arresting me … “I glared at him
“Yes baby” he grinned…
Ur breakfast is already on the side table… eat ,take your medicines and sleep Iam stepping out for an hour we can have our lunch together after I come… Nandu will send lunch so no need for u to cook
He continued ordering moving around the room picking some files…
“Any questions…” he asked stopping in front of me…
Arjun my phone… I want to inform to sam about my leave… I looked at him
I have already informed her and also to ur boss… I allowed u to work only because of ur stubbornness and sam’s assurance but nothing gonna work if u keep on stressing yourself he replied with a straight face…
I looked at him with puppy dog face….
U can’t fool me with this face radhu… u r taking rest that’s it…
Khadoos… I muttered under my breath
I heard it clearly… his reply made me gasp
Don’t try to search for ur mobile or laptop everything is safely locked inside my locker … he came near me and placed the plate over my hand and signed me to eat
My lips widen lightly hearing him….
“I have changed the passcode…” he whispered roughly into my ears before bidding me good bye…
I smiled at his disappearing form … over protective… I love you khadoos words came out of my mouth unknowingly… as I took the juice glass…
“I know…” I raised my gaze upwards hearing his voice … “u love me I know dat” he spoke looking the confusion in my face…
How? how he got to know? I swear that’s not even audible to me… den how come he? … I looked at him dumbstruck
Byeee baby … take care… don’t dare to step out of bed… he said the last word as a warning
I nodded at him like a kg kid as he moved out looking at me….
I emptied the juice glass and dozed off like an obedient kid… Who wants to get scolding from that khadoos moreover he is right iam stressing myself more my body needs some break….
I woke up from sleep as I heard him calling…
He was standing near the closet slipping into his t shirt… hope u didn’t get down from bed? He enquired and I nodded in positive

Radu I went to Nandu’s house to see my princess but unfortunately she was sleeping…
I got two sleepy heads in my house he sighed
How is Maya arjun…. I missed her
Doctor asked to keep her away to avoid her getting infected so Nandu di took Maya with her…
She is fine radhu… Nandu is there na don’t worry…. And Nandu have packed ur favorite pulav… He continued
I extended my arms towards him inviting for a hug leaning on the headboard…
He came and sat beside me side hugging me … I leaned on his shoulders and closed my eyes… we sat like this for few mins as both of us didn’t want to talk anything just live the moment… After he started his own business we are not getting enough time to spend together both of us missed others company but we can do nothing about it…
So u don’t want to have lunch? He was the one to break the silence first….
Arjun can’t we spend some time like this I replied without opening my eyes
Like what? He asked mischievously…
I can see his facial expression with my closed eyes…
Like this… here… hugging each other… I whispered slowly
Oh…I… See … he withdrew his shoulders which is supporting my head making me fall on his lap
U were telling something yesterday… wait let me think… yes … Arjun arjun don’t come near me u will also get infected… he mimicked like me making me laugh hard…
U only said dat we can spend time together if u too get sick I shot back laughing…
Oh so u were planning to make me sick… he rolled me and came on my top making me blush
See u r blushing… I caught ur intension so let’s get into action no more talking… he started showering me with feathery kisses …. I started moaning his name when he nuzzled over crook of my neck …
I nodded at him to go ahead as he raised his head and saw my face, his eyes scanned my face and stopped over my lips… wen I rolled my tongue over them unconsciously… he chuckled and moved closer without shifting his gaze
Both of us jerked from our position hearing his phone ringing…. He face palmed himself…
Trust me … gonna kill dat caller for sure… he muttered some curses getting up from the bed moving towards the side table
I got up adjusting my dress smiling at his displeased face… although deep inside me I too cursed the caller…
He picked the phone and looked at me with a defeated face…
Your sister…he passed his mobile to me and fell on his stomach beside me pressing his face on the pillow making me laugh… he raised his face and saw me annoyingly ….
I spelled a sorry silently… put in speaker mode he said placing his head on my lap… looking at my face
I attended the call and switched to speaker mode….
Hey mamu y rads number is off? Y u took this much time to attend my call? Don’t say me dat u r busy with a meeting… I will come there taking flight to beat u… iam already angry on u for making my sister sick… say me one thing how are u able to stay there after knowing that she is sick? Now her number is switched off …I can’t even check with her…what the hell is happening? Ok tell me where are u? What are u doing? When did u talked to rads lastly? Is she fine?
She paused for a moment for reply… she continued as she didn’t get any reply….
Hello mamu… are u there? Can u hear me? Arghhhhhhh don’t make me mad… hellooo …Please tell me how to contact rads, I need to talk to her immediately… pls pls…pretty pls…
U dumbo call to landline number I spoke hiding my laughter…
Ok thanks the line went dead next second…

I looked at the mobile in shock with wide open mouth… while arjun laughed at my expression
The mobile ringed again flashing her name “Nivi” with two devil emojis
Arjun grabbed the mobile from my hand and attended the call…
Hey you… who is dat? Why are u having my mamu’s mobile? Where is he? Hey can u hear me? are u going to answer me or I have my ways to make u speak… she goes on threatening …
Arjun closed my mouth with his palm wen I opened my mouth to answer her….
Hey nivi… this is me arjun… he replied with a calm voice
Mamu who is dat girl? She asked in dangerous tone
Which girl? He replied controlling his laughter
Mamu don’t try to fool me… are u going to tell me the truth or not…. Don’t test my patience… I will kill u for sure if I come to know something negative…. How dare you? Are u cheating radhu? I have not even dreamed of u like this… the one who always boasts about his love on his wife is cheating her….she goes on cursing him
Hello hello take a deep breath before cursing me further he laughed holding his stomach
Nivi its me radhu… cant u identify my voice… I asked her
One sec … radhu is dat u or anyone else is speaking in your voice… she asked in doubt…
Loosu nan dan (its me) I replied to clarify her doubt
Ok iam trusting u its my sister…. But… how…u…mamu’s …phone…
Nivi stop straining ur little brain I reached here yesterday… how can I stay back after knowing radhu is sick… arjun said holding the phone
Oh ok but…. she continued….
Wait wait let me answer all ur questions…he stopped her from asking questions further
Ur sister’s mobile is switched off because i switched off and locked that in my locker so dat she will take some rest…
Den what else u asked…where I am? What iam doing? Why I took long time to attend the call right…
Iam in my bedroom, romancing with my wife, u called in between disturbing us, so it took long time to attend the call…. Do u want any other explanation…. Arjun finished in a single line shocking me
Arjun are you mad…. Wat are you saying to her….. Give me the phone…. I grabbed the phone from his hands
Sry Radu wrong timing….
Very much wrong timing arjun mocked her
Sry mammu… she apologized again…. How can I know dat u guys will get naughty in day time that too wen Radhu is sick she giggled!!
Nivi… took her name in a warning tone
Leave that tell me y u called me now…. I came to the matter straightly diverting her
Gosh I forgot….. Radhu iam getting married she announced like a mere info
What…. Was my and arjun’s reaction…
Yes iam getting married next week in our home town I want u guys to be here 3 days before….
Y this much hurry is everything right arjun asked in concerning tone
Yes mamu everything is going well….. Only thing I want now is ur presence
Are u kidding nivi how can I….
U r coming dats it she cut me before I could finish my sentence
But nivi y this much earlier… are they forcing u… tell me openly I will try to help you. . He asked her to confirm his doubts.
Nothing like dat mamu… it’s because of me I want to get married soon we didn’t get any other time so we got fixed in next week itself she explained the situation

Nivi tell me one thing…. Wat happened between u and akash … y this sudden decision… don’t try to hide anything from me have u guys broke up or what… trust me I will help u guys to solve the issue… getting married is not the option… I asked her in a calm voice
Hello Radu wat you thought of ur sister iam getting married to that stupid only she literally yelled at me
What?. .. Both me and arjun gasped in shock
Shock ah Kora shock ah Kora (don’t get shocked) she giggled sensing our reaction
I can’t explain everything in phone… iam waiting for u guys, will explain everything wen u reach here I have lots and lots of work, so iam closing the call now.. Will catch up with you afterwards…
Once again sry for being a bone now you can continue your romance…. Bye Radhu take care….. Bye mamu take care of my Radu… iam eagerly waiting to meet you guys she disconnected the call without waiting for our reply leaving us to gasp
“Arjun how can we….” I looked at him with a worried face
“Let’s think abt it afterwards before dat it’s time for your medicines I will grab something to eat for you…” he went out leaving me to worry alone
Nivi is getting married… if I was old radhika I must have started packing for going home but now iam in dilemma… whether to go or not…. It’s the most important day of my sister’s life I must be with her as her moral support but….. No one will welcome me of course nivi will be rejoiced if we go there…. But what about others….. I can tolerate if they ill treat me but arjun… I can’t take any words against him… if anyone ill-treat him…. I know very well about arjun he will not allow me to go alone…. My mind was full of confusions…
“Lunch ready…” I moved my gaze to his side hearing his voice
He handed me a plate of pulav and sat beside me taking another plate for him…
I looked at him in awe…. How can one love like this… this man in front of me made me realize the real meaning of love…. How is dis even possible for him…. To fall in love with a girl who is not a match for him in every aspect…. How he fell head on heels for me…. Iam not that much beautiful also…..a mediocre girl, from different culture, different state, different language…. Still Iam doubting on myself…. Am I good for him…
Yes iam radika iyer before becoming radika arjun, a girl from a conservative family of Deep South, I came to Mumbai after getting a job… that too with lots and lots of struggles, my parents allowed me to move half-heartedly because of my stubbornness…. Mumbai gave me everything I wanted in my life… more than anything it gave me arjun as my life… we were working for same MNC as usual we started as friends… den fell in love with each other… I readily accepted his proposal when he proposed me on my birthday since I fell for him in first sight itself…. When I took this matter to my parents they made a big problem, I know they will not accept someone out of our caste as groom, but they are not even ready to meet arjun once, lots of drama happened they even house arrested me….tried to get me married to my aunts son sarath…but for me everything, my parents, family, everything felt nothing in front of my love towards this man… on one fine day I escaped from their and came back to Mumbai leaving all of them behind…. They too disowned me… I and arjun got married with his families support and started living happily but in these 3 years none of my relatives had contact with me other than nivi though she is my cousin we always shared a good bond… she is my soul sister…. She too felt the same… Arjun and nivi also developed a brotherly relationship when she came here for internship… Arjun being arjun he cares for everyone and they clicked well in the first meeting itself.
I was pulled to the reality when arjun patted my cheeks…
“What day dreaming about your sister’s wedding …”he chuckled munching the food
“No, Arjun iam not going…” I told him with trembling voice
Arjun looked at me in confusion….
“I have decided we are not going I will handle nivi afterwards…” I started playing with the spoon in my hand without having interest to eat
“Eat” he said in a calm voice
I started eating without looking at him….
There was only silence after dat….
Both of us finished our lunch… he passed me the tablets I gulped them and adjusted myself on the bed to take a nap… though I wish to have a sleep my inner state didn’t allow me to drift soon
He came back after sometime and joined me on the bed…
I rolled and hugged him burying my face in his chest as soon as I felt his warmth near me… a lone tear escaped from my left eye…
“ U are going… “He said hugging me back
I looked at him in confusion…
“U are attending nivi’s marriage” he declared
I whispered a thanks… he kissed my head
We drifted into sleep in no time………

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33 Comments
  1. really nice dear…happy valentines day..take care

    1. Sangee

      Thank u sooo much for the wishes maddy

  2. Sushie

    Its awesome yaar… I loved it eagerly waiting fr nxt update seeeeeekram update pannunga plsss……. Awwww… Arjun hw sweet he s he came leaving all his wrks fr his dear wife n I liked nivi too bone in between their romance???

    1. Sangee

      Thank u soooooo much for the encouraging words sushie…. tamil ah neega super…. i will try to next update soon

  3. Sangeeeeeee, what a surprise!!!!!!! Super Dooper darling……… Love uuuuuuuuuu sooooooo much sweet heart….. first half thriller, sec half full of surprise!!!!!!, radhu was expecting friendly bhoot … lovely arjuu take care of radhu ……. they also have a little princess……WOW!!!! u wrote abt me…….. u made me as radhu sister thats fine i loved to be …. but how dare to make arjuu as my brother????? but i have a doubt how come mamu can play brother role….. y my marriage sooo soon…….. aahhhhhhhhhh noooooooo…….. who is this aakash ???????? u should atleast have little curse on me to show his pics to me ….. ahhhhhhh … i am lost in my thoughts …… how is he? where is he? how? when? eagerly waiting to know what happen in my life………… Loads of love ……… happy valentine day darling………. i want to be with u till my last breath …….. loveeeeeee uuuuuuuuuu sooooooooo much chellaaaa kutty………

    1. Sangee

      iam glad that u loved girl… i know u wanted a brother like arjun so i made 😛 ur marrige so soon because i can shop like a freak 😀 😀 aakash? that u shud say girl… lost in thoughts ha ha ha ha day dream for some days 😛 😛 love u tooo darl kisses and hugs …. hope akash dont mind wink wink… 😛 😛 😛

  4. It was a good ff loved it but there is one thing i wanna say that why there are these less ffs on manmarziyan … Guys i am a silent reader but just love your work pls dont reduce the no. Of ffs they are really very good and keeping our fav couples nesam and ardhika alive ??❤️❤️Love you all guys pls write more there are many silent readers also who read your ffs …. Manmarziyan was a great show and greater are the ffs love u ???

    1. Sangee

      Thanks for the words mahek.. and u are no more silent reader 🙂 so try to comment in all works u read,single word also worth many for us… pls do comment 🙂 🙂

  5. Brin

    Outstanding episode, love it to the core, Arjun is so sweet, the way he takes care of his wife is awesome, eagerly waiting for the next update, Sangee you nail it, well done. 🙂

    1. Sangee

      thank u so sooo much brin d ur words mean so much to me …. 🙂 🙂

  6. Gauri

    Sangee….after this one I am in love with your bugs….if those bugs can make you write this god bless you with many more of them…please get me one Arjun too….he is so cute ??????????????????…as I said….it was ballaistic update ….loved it stay blessed

    1. Sangee

      hi gauri di… love with my bugs 😛 god no di pity on me:( no more bugs already iam running behind them 🙂 🙂 thank u sooooo much for the words di hugs and kisses for u …love u

  7. Sulbi

    Wow… such a amazing one… loved it to the core…so caring husband… every girl wishes this kind of a husband… and Nivi and Radhu relation was too good… u rocked it dear… anticipating for next one… pls post soon dear… tc 🙂

    1. Sangee

      Thanks for the encouraging words sulbi… will post the next soon tc 😀

  8. Dipika

    Goddddd geetu m falling hard for thos story.. You just gave me good laughter attrack.. Ahhhhjj choooooo.. Lol.. Her sicknesd.. N considering her hubby as friendly ghost lol.. It wss hell hillrious..i do loved this. You penned it so naturally n beautifully… Arjun is one caring understanding hubby.. I want his address to marry him.. Lol.. Pls update soon.. M eager for nexy.. Love u lots ? ?

    1. Sangee

      Hey deepu 😀 😀 laughter attack …iam so happy girl …. aachooo me too sneezing 😀 😀
      yes he is…u want his address lol den give me trainer’s address deal…rofl… thanks for the beautiful words and encouragement dear… love u loads …. hugs and kisses love u girl

  9. arti viswanathan

    Sangee darling sorry I am posting my comments the next day… and about tye episode superb, excellent, marvelous, outstanding, nice, awesome episode………. I loved it to the core……. i liked all the scenes. ?… I liked all the way radhika thinks how arjun proposed her…… tc loads of love to u from me and b teddy hug to u…… I liked all the writers…..

    1. Sangee

      Thanks for the comment arti… teddy hug to u too…

  10. Sangee loved it…. Waiting for next… And ur other ff….. Pls update next soon….

    1. Sangee

      thanks saran..sure next one soon

  11. Roma

    Wowwww Sangeeee…it’s superbbbbb n awesoooooome. …very lovely pair of ardhika. ..I loved it to the coreeeee. Mind blowing narration n beautiful dialogues. …keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hugssss. ..n Happy Valentine’s Day my sweeeeeet darling sissyyyy ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ 😉

    1. Sangee

      roma di iam very much happy seeing ur comment i know u r very busy and between that u took time to comment thank u so sooo much di… bear hugs di love you …. happy valentines day to u tooo…sry for the late wishes 🙂 🙂

  12. It’s really fantastic BTW I am new here

    1. Sangee

      hi kiranmayee… welcome to Manmarziyan family… thanks for the comment also take care 🙂

  13. Superbbbbbbbbb akka….what a romance…..???……very caring couples…..I love it….

    1. Sangee

      Here comes the most awaited comment 😀 ha ha ha thank u so soooo much sangavi … keep reading girl…. iam very happy dat u liked it … abt romance… lets deal with it personally ha ha ha ha ha 😀 😀

  14. Hi I am also Tamil. Superra eruduchu ma. Loved it . Where u r staying in tamilnadu. Whatt doing

    1. Sangee

      Thanks for the comment swetha… Iam not from Tamil Nadu iam from Pondicherry ☺️
      Where are you from ❓

  15. Sreee

    Wooow akka just beautiful… Wat a love…. A very simple and beautiful one… Arjun was sooo a simple and lovely guy.. Truely any girl’s dream… U depicted it beautifully akka… That phone cknvo was awesome???…..muahhhhh… Loved it soon much ..post soon..love u …bear hugs???

    1. Sangee

      Thank u so much for the words pyari ? ? ?

  16. Sammy

    Awesome geet …haha nivi ….??????arjun ghost …first deepu make radz bhootni ..now u …all will take revenge from ardhika for making us mad????love it to thrle core

    1. Sangee

      Thank u Sammy ? arjun ghost he he yep ? but he is not ghost here ?. Iam very glad that u loved…. ???

  17. Sathya

    Sangeee….ennama ipdi pannitiyee maa….lol..i am laughing reading this while sitting in a conference room. Just imaging my situation. You are making me crazy infront of my team. BTW, I appreciate your bug…i just loved the whole part…its amazingly written. Semma thrilling start and laughter end…namma group la paatha crazy moves and dialogues i remember while reading this…totally i loved it dear 🙂 Next part is on the d way and many sorry for reading late

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