Love like a mirror nothing can be hidden(vidhaani) part 3

part 3 : start with piya introducing herself to viplav………………………….
piya: hi i am piya…
viplav: hi i am viplav…
piya: nice meeting u viplav…
viplav: same 2 u 2……
dhaani saws viplav talking to piya and say o my god what is viplav saying to piya let me hear what are they talking when dhaani reach there piya was already gone only viplav was there………..dhaani came near viplav and says to viplav what were u talking with piya…..viplav says nothing she was introducing herself to me dhaani: ohhh realy….
viplav: yes…..one minute dhaani why did u ask r u feeling jealous or wat…..
dhaani: u r sooo stupid viplav i dont feel jealousy it is your imagination………………………………………………………………

viplav sitting near the lake thinking & saying what wrong with dhaani why cant she sense that i love her when i come close to her i must tell her the truth that i love her….viplav started to walk to sarla kaki house and saw dhaani with piya he told piya…..one minute i want to talk with dhaani….piya: ok……….

piya went inside the house when dhaani and viplav standing outside…..viplav: today u must listen to me no matter what happen in your past plzzzz dont refuse that i am telling u……
dhaani: what wrong viplav why are u saying like this and what is the problem tell me……
viplav: the problem is u dhaani…..
dhaani: what!!!!!!!! the problem is me no viplav tell me clearly….
viplav: I love u dhaani i truly love u plzzzz dont reject my love dhaani plzzzz…..
dhaani: no no no she run away………………….

viplav start criying heavily starnding with his knees….piya came out and console viplav saying dont worry…when viplav wanted to talk piya says i have heard everything dont worry i will make dhaani realize that her to she loves u…….viplav what shall i do and make dhaani realize her love to me piya:we will do something dont worry viplav i will propose u infront of dhaani and u will except me saying that u love me…..
viplav: no piya i cannot do that…..
piya: dont say that viplav you must do it that dhaani realize her love to you plzzzz except……….
viplav: i except for the sake of dhaani…………………..

i hope u like my story for today my dear friends………

luv u all guyzzz

credit to: Nisha

28 comments

  1. thank u sooooo much sonu for your concern…………

    Brity i am realy happy for your love comment thank u sooooo much………

    thank u sooooo much my dear reZmie
    ……….

  2. Hey Nisha..Good Story….But dhani is such a girl that by looking at their scene ,she will defenetly wish both for their best life and walk off..lol

  3. i truly know shri…… but in my story truly dhaani will feel jealous seeing viplav with piya…………. thanks for commenting!!!!!!

    thanks rajee……….

    thank u sooooo much vini…..

    it’s true akshay….. also me i wish to be true in the show……

  4. nisha

    hey nisha woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow piya is not the theeke mirchi but it is the mirchi which is just looks theekhi but it is sweet.

    If you taste the green thick chilles which are not at all theekhi dear . I meean like this .

    I love each and every bit I love piya in it and love the convo of viplav and dhani

    waiting for next eagerly

    lOve u dear always

    Keeep going

    Always smiling dear

    Once a friend always a friend.

  5. thank uu sooo much nisha i realy like uu and your sweet words……….always loving uuuuu!!!!!!!!

    thank uu sooo much kaviya…….

    Hi 2 u 2 marees…..thanks for commenting…….

    akshay i am 20 years and i am from Egypt……..

  6. never mind……… i will never write songs in my ff……….plzzzz dont ask me many question!!!! dont feel bad with my words….

    • i am realy sorry akshay if i have heart u with my words…….. i tort when u want to help me u Will help me to write an indian song becoz i dont know hindi. and my dear friends want songs in my ff ……….i am sorry……

  7. Tu hi toh jannat meri, Tu hi mera junoon
    Tu hi to mannat meri, Tu hi rooh ka sukoon
    Tu hi aakhion ki thandak, tu hi dil ki hai dastak
    Aur kuch na janu mein, bas itna hi jaanu
    Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
    Did u ever heard this song ,u can use in this your next fiction
    did it help?

  8. Rajee

    Hi Nisha! If u find trouble in writing songs its not at all a big issue.sorry for troubling u…don’t feel any pressure… feel free to express ur imagination… just chill yaar…waiting for next part..have a grt day & keep writing…. lots of love…

  9. nisha

    hey nisha why are you tensed dear for songs offfffffffffffffffffffoooooooooooo I am here dear If i get any song I came with it dear and love u always dear Ur story is so much interesed dear with or without songs I read it because its fab a real masterpiece is a masterpiece it doesn’t need any song dear or if needed I came with it for sure .

    love u always dear and yaa I came for telling u my egypt going uk dear a very Merry christmass dear love u always dear by heart dera

    Keep smiling always may god bless u always dear I give a story and a pray for u all on my page too dear

    http://www.tellyupdates.com/naadan-dil-ki-manmarziyaan-another-story-a-horror-flick-woh-ek-raat/comment-page-2/#comment-732935

    love u always dear If u want u can see the story too. love u by heart dear how can I leave u u are toh me naa I mean my dear sweetheart

    love u always. Keep smiling always.

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