LOVE LIFE!!! A SWASAN AND RAGLAK FF (CHARACTER SKETCH)

hi guyz…this is hemanshi….i know half of you know me well while half don’t…..i am thinking to start an ff on both swasan and raglak…. ””””love life……a swasan and raglak ff””’ guyz first of all tell me is the title suitable??? or you want me to change
and the charactter sketch of this ff is here::::

sanskar maheshwari:: a 24 years old college going boy doing industry management…..loves his brother a lot and can do anything for him…..his parents live in usa…..he and his brother,, laksh are alone in mumbai……he can even give away his life for his younger brother…..sweet and humble and also a caring guy with a good nature…..and is very handsome

laksh maheshwari:: the most hot and s*xy boy……21 years…….doing accounts specialisation to help his elder brother,, sanskar maheshwari……..loves and respects his elder brother a lot….can never say no to him….very joking…sweet…..humble and a kind hearted girl….loves his pet dog buddy a lot…..thinks swara as his elder sister and is very friendly to her family also but hasn’t met her sister ever……he is very friendly and makes everyone friend in first meeting itself

annapurna maheshwari and dp maheshwari are their parents…this is their family

abhimanyu gadodia:: ragini and swara’s elder brother…..loves his both sisters a lott…….helps his father in bussiness……kind hearted…..can even give away life for his mother and both the sisters……hates people who misuse girls

swara gadodia:: a sweet,,, kind hearted,, bubbly,, joking 24 years old girl…doing fashion designing……loves her sister a lott……and has deep respect for her elder brother,, abhimanyu gadodia….takes each and every advice from him….tells everything to her sister,, ragini and brother abhimanyu……she is the right hand of her mother and princess of father

ragini gadodia:: a sweet,, cute,, 20 years……doing interior designing……wants to take their family’s name to greater heghts,, loves her sblings a lot……and feels as if her brother is having lot of rules for safety and so loves him the most….

shekhar gadodia and janki gadodia are their parents….this is their family

guys it’s a story on a college life of swasan and raglak……you all want me to continue or not….guyz will you all be able to support me or not……if yes then only i will continue…..plz say guyz

love u all a lott…..and yes i will give swasan and raglak scenes equally so don’t worry about that….

90 comments

  1. Fairy

    Fairy

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    hey dr!!
    loved rags charecter sketch…shez reallly sweeet 😀 …it wl b xcietng to see clg love life of raglak n swasan 😀 ….plz start it soon dr 🙂 ..n title is really nyc …no need to change :D…
    as u r jabra fan of helly….m also bht badi vali jabra fan of teja 😉 :D…waitng for d 1st part…keeep rockng n stay blessed sweety 😉 😀
    & advance happy new year 😀 have a blissful lyf ahead 😀

    • Hemanshi

      Hemanshi

      |Author

      Hiiii fairryyyy….. I know u earlier also….mmm u r kaku’s frnd na…..n i love ur bonding with her…love reading ur comments and her replies😁😁😁😀😀
      And glad that u loved her character😘😘
      I will continue if i get a good response…and yes i know that just as i am jabra of helly but i like teju too just like that u are jabra of teju but like hellu too….haina???

    • Kakali

      Kakali

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      Fairyyyyyyy my badi judwa behen? how r u? missed u a lot.. waa we didn’t get much time to talk na.. but my moron inbox is not working soo m not being able to reply u…😶…*huggg…
      wish u a very Happy New Year dear… always stay blessed… ;-*

      • Fairy

        Fairy

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        oye hoye….meri pyaari patar patar…after a long tym 😀 ..ahh!!! kaise hai dearrrrrr???? oho prob. in ur msg box..shit yr 🙁 🙁 …
        haaappppppppy vala new year …meri choti judwa behan 😀 …hehe 😀 have a blissfull lyf ahead sweeety..keep rockng n stay blessed pikachu ki deewani 😀

      • Fairy

        Fairy

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        k dr no worries….we”ll talk in diyaa’s ff hehe ..hope she dsnt mind 😀 ….happyyyyyyy vala new yr kaku hehe 😀 😉 😉 😀

  2. nikky

    yaa nice but first people say I give equal space than the ff become partial it becomes Swasan and actually I love tejesswi so much so I can’t bear partiality

  3. Nagamanasa

    Nagamanasa

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    Diiii don’t scold me for being late to comment…chollyyyy *Holding my ears
    And ha intro is awesome di…waiting to read the story…Love u dii😘😘😘

  4. Anurta

    Anurta

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    Amazing…….
    U know what just like u I’m also a huge….huge….huge fan of helly
    I’m also a fan of swasan love them alot and now I’m missing them alot😢😢😢😢😢
    So I’m waiting eagerly for ur story
    Post the 1st part soon

  5. Shibil

    Shibil

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    Nice … ur writing is gud …am impressed in character sketch itself …keep doing throughout the ff …All the best…Advance happy new year

    • Hemanshi

      Hemanshi

      |Author

      Thanks a lottt jazzyy😘😘😘😘
      I am pleased to know that u liked my concept!!!
      Will try to make u happy in further episodes
      And a very happy bew year to you too!!!

  6. Babydoll

    Babydoll

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    Oyeeeeee oyeeeeeeee jaldi seh next ep update karoh…. Sisyyyyyyy !! It’s very interesting….. I love it. Oyeeee you are kaku friend. Waasahhh didn’t know…. And yeah wishing you a very happy new year in advance….!! Your writing skill is superbbb…. Keep writing!! Cant wait for next update…. Love you sister…… Keep smiling and stay blessed!!!

    • Hemanshi

      Hemanshi

      |Author

      Wowwww i got a newww sister todayyy
      Whoohooo
      Thanks a lot 😘😘😘😘😘
      Glad that u liked it….have written next episode will post it on 2nd jan
      Love u tooooo😘😘😘😘
      Meet u again for first epi😘😘😘😘😘

  7. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Yapiee,a new ff*jumping on bed…But di it will give you stress na*innocent face..Be careful while writing,okki??About storyline,it’s really interesting di.. Plz continue..Yes,name is perfect for story…

    HAPPY NEW YEAR IN ADVANCE💐💐
    TAKE CARE
    KEEP SMILING😀

    • Hemanshi

      Hemanshi

      |Author

      Hii uma….i am hemanshi di’s sister….this ff will be written by me….and posted from her id rarely when i am not free she will write on my behalf…..and thanks a lott 😘😘😘

  8. Silent_writer

    Silent_writer

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    Yuppiee one more ff interesting concept dear plzzz post sooon n yuppp title is suitableeee update soooon n yeah a vry happy happy newwww year in adv to u as well may this brings lots lots of happiness

  9. Kakali

    Kakali

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    Hiloooooo Diyaaa.. remember me?*hug…
    loved d intro dear.. continue soon.. i would love to read ur further parts….&
    *ready with popcorn…
    wish u a very Happy New Year…stay blessed…
    Thnk u… ;-*

    • Hemanshi

      Hemanshi

      |Author

      Kakuuu diiiiii😘😘😘 i was waiting for your comments 😘😘😘😘
      Love u sooo muchhh 😘😘😘
      We will enjoy a lot together 😘😘😘😘
      I got one more diii😊😊😊
      And wish u too a very happy new year😘

  10. Vidhi

    Same pinch… Me too a big jabra fan of helly… 😍😘❤❤❤..n the plot is awesome dear… No need to change the title… Update soon… N a happy New Year…

    • Kakali

      Kakali

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      Hilooooo Yazzzzzz… !!! wish u a very Happy New Year to u tooo my sis.. miss u tooo… ! waa sorry i couldn’t reply coz my moron inbox is not working…*huggg..
      have a prosperous year dear..stay blessed.;-*

      • SNY

        SNY

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        No need to say sry sis…
        *hug …kakuuuu sis I wish this year bring happiness and blessed in ur life*. I rly miz u sis 😂😂😂😂&&& luv uuuuuu😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙 Tc of urself..keep smilling …

  11. Shifa96

    Shifa96

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    Di..it’s me who used to comment as afra..
    I have changed my user I’d..
    It’s awesome di…take care and happy new year.

      • Shifa96

        Shifa96

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        Di I was too busy last week so i was hardly able to read or comment in TU and still I haven’t read your other ff which was posted and will read it later..
        Di, I hope u and baby r fine..take care.

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