Love of life – OS (KKB)

Hiii guys …this is poo again…now coming to story…
It is a beautiful village….A girl is shown , going to temple….she is wearing beautiful white chudi …she prays to god “please keep him safe….I’m not asking anything more…pls take care of him ….he is alone there …..i heard the news , the time is not right there….pls safe my love of life….”the bell rings , and her eyes is shown , she sees the flower falling from god’s statue ….she smiles ….and says “thank you god…..i know you’ll save him….. now her face is shown , yes its our cute pragya…..
someone calls her from back..”pragya …pragya , you received a letter from him…..”pragya replies “coming Bulbul…..”both of them leaves from the temple….pragya asks”where is the letter ??? “Bulbul says “I’ll not give you soon….”pragya says “pls bulbul , i beg you…pls give me the letter …..I’m waiting for this letter , for more than a month….pls I’ll give you whatever , you want….”bulbul smiles and says “okay fine , you don’t want to give me anything , just say your love story……I’m asking you for more than 1 year , but you’ll say “I’ll say you together with him……”I’m your sweet cousin na…say me…I’ll give you ….”pragya says “Are you trying to implement GIVE and TAKE policy……” bulbul says “no , I’m threatening you , if you didn’t say me ..I’ll not give you….tell the story soon…your not having anyother option…..”pragya says “this time you win…I’ll say you…..”
The story begins….
He is my bestie’s brother …..yes , he is brother of tanu …..his name is Abhishek prem Mehra , my love , my soulmate , my life …..i go to tanu’s house many times , but i didn’t even saw him once…., but tanu would often say about her brother ……… he studied in mumbai , by staying in hostel…..
One day , i was going to market , he passed by that way in bike …..its rainy season , road are filled with small small pits filled with water , slippery…..due to high speed , the water in pit splashed over me……i shouted “don’t you have eyes ….you splashed dirty water over me…..”He removed his helmet , came near me…..and said “I’m sorry , i wantedly didn’t do it……”i replied “so you’ll do it wantedly too Mr…..” he said “Hey miss….i did mistake , so I’m talking politely otherwise ……”i said “what ,??? Otherwise….what you’ll do…??? I’m not having time , so I’ll leave now…..I’m about to leave ,but due to mud got slipped , he hold me by my waist …i was shocked ….he saw me into my eyes ….(o allah warian plays….)immediately i moved from there…..he said “say me soon….”i looked at him confused….he said “tell me thank you….” i saved you from slipping and getting dirt from mud……i looked at him angrily and left from there……”
The story is interrupted by bulbul….
Bulbul “you overreacted the scene pragya ….., he is very polite …., he is very gentle and saved you from falling in mud ….but you didn’t even say thanks…..”pragya says “don’t interrupt otherwise I’ll not say you the remaining story…..”bulbul acts like zipping her mouth….pragya smiles…..
the story continues……
I went to my home and thought about the incident …..i felt guilt , because he didn’t do it anything wanted ….i thought to apologize him during our next meet…….i went to tanu’s house…there i saw him talking with tanu ….he said ” tanu ..i met a girl near the lake…she is so cute…tanu you know one thing ,she is very bold ….she scolded me….though i got scolding from her…i enjoyed her cute expressions…i can’table to fight with her…if we fight with each other , definitely I’ll win…but today i lost to a girl…..i lost in her eyes …….tanu says “bhai..today is the first time , I’m hearing from you talking about a girl to me…. I thought “why tanu calling him bhai….which means ,he is tanu’s bhai..did i fight with him.??? Omg this tanu is gling to kill , often she’ll say “i love my brother , he is very caring etc.etc….pls save me god……”tanu continues”did you like her that much…??? Is she that beautiful ???” Abhi said “yes she is more beautiful ..” a smile formed on my face…tanu saw me standing there and said “bhai , this is my bestie…..”Abhi looks at me shocked….i said “hiii I’m pragya….”and forwarded my hand….abhi too forwarded his hand and said I’m abhishek prem mehra….”…. tanu said “bhai , he is very silent girl ….”abhi kept his hand in mouth….i can’table to control my laughter seeing his expression…..tanu went inside to get coffee….we both are alone…i asked ” am i looking that much beautiful ??? ” abhi smiled and said “no , your very very beautiful….”i smiled ..okay bye , nice meeting you mr.abhishek…..abhi “that’s it…” i smiled and said “sorry for fighting with you and thank you for saving from tanu…. …..”abhi smiled…..days passed abhi and i became good frnds…..tanu , abhi and i would often chat together near the lake…….he care for me a lot…..he would do anything for me …..though i didn’t have feeling for him at first , slowly i liked to enjoy his company , my day would be incomplete without seeing him or not talking with him…..i started to develop feeling for him….
Its my birthday…
He is the one who wished me first , he gave me the most memorable gift…..he gave me a ring , yes .he proposed me in a romantic way…..He gave a bouquet of red roses , and said “Happy bday to my love of life …..i was lost in your eyes when i saw you first , till now I’m lost in it…….whenever i see you , my heart melts…..whenever i see you beautiful smile….my words stammer….whenever i see your eyes , i see. My world gets happier……I LOVE YOU…..I WISH TO MARRY YOU…..i was really surprised by his romantic proposal…i was in happy tears…Abhi “I REALLY LOVE YOU……I WANT YOU AS MY LIFE PARTNER…..he opened the box and took the ring from it , made me wear it…..Abhi hugged me tight …..(bolna plays…..)
After few days
Abhi’s behavior changed….he started to avoid me….he ignored my eye contact …..he didn’t even see me…..i was broken….i went to his home , no one is there , everyone left to temple , expect him….without wasting the time i went to his room….i asked him “why he is not talking with me properly….”he replied ” sorry pragya …pls give the ring back….I’m not suitable for you…..i can’t marry you….”i was very shocked hearing his words” why your saying like this abhishek ..pls tell the problem , we can solve it…..”abhi said “no pragya , i can’t marry you…i got job in army….my life is at risk…anything may happen there ..pls forget me……and marry someone……”i said “how dare you ..? I’ll wait for you till the end of my life ……i would die rather than marry some one….my heart belongs to you….my heart beats only for you……how can you say these words abhishek…..pls don’t say it again……I’ll wait for you …..abhi with tears said “sorry pragya ….i won’t repeat it again….pls forgive me… “he hugged me ,and after sometime he hold my face lifted it , he came closer to me .i closed my eyes ….he kissed me in my lips (tum hi ho plays……)he left to army after few days….its been 2 years…i didn’t see him…i receive only his letters…
the fb ends..
Bulbul asks “I’m having a doubt …..is tanu aware of your love story ??? Pragya nods….she knows …..Pragya “okay now give me the letter…..”bulbul says ” which letter ?? I don’t have any letter…..”pragya says “then , did you fool me ….”bulbul nods and runs from there….while running says “pragya your love story is superb…..i wish i too have a caring partner like abhi…. ….pragya chases her near the same lake….A voice is heard “Always fighting with someone near the lake…..”she turns , her eyes are filled with tears …..its abhi…..she runs towards him , hugged him tight and said “i missed you….”abhi kissed her forehead and said me too…

The end…..
I think this os will be boring…..sorry for any grammatical mistake….sorry ,if you felt i wasted your time….both positive and negative comments welcomed……have a good day…..

17 comments

  1. Minu

    This story of yours is also amazing!!!! Loved all the fb scenes at last abhi’s arrival is superb. keep rocking with your writings

  2. Monesha

    Monesha

    |Registered Member

    How dare you say this OS is boring…. I really loved it to the coreeeeeeeeeeeee……. Thank you so much for your lovable ff. Keep writing and keep rocking…..

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