My love & His invention – OS


Hi frnds this is Aastha back with a os……

One beautiful living room shown….. a girl sitting in sofa. She continuously staring her phone. Her face is shown. She is swara
She lost her patience. She took a phone and dialed a number.
Swara: hello lax where r u? here I’m waiting for u…..but u….
Lax: hey five mins I’ll be there. He hanged the call.

After half an hour lax came to house.
Swara: is this 5 mins?
Lax: I’m sry dear….. he abt to hold her cheeks.
She jerked his hands. Don’t touch me. I’m waiting for u nearly three hours……. I want to go to check up but u don’t care abt me.
Lax: not like that Swara. I was struck in meeting.
Swara: is meeting is more important than me? enough is enough.

Lax tires to calm her but all goes in vain.
She calls, hello sasu maa…..i cant live with him. I lost my patience. He don’t cares abt me….
Sasu maa: (her face is not shown) : don’t say like that beta……
Swara: no I cant…..

A Flash Back Shown

A girl is waiting for someone in restaurant. Her face is shown as Ragini. She dialled a person, where r u?
A cool voice: sry dear. I have some more work. So…..
Ragini: so..what? u always doing this only…… I fed up on u SANKY…
Sanky: not like that baby….
Ragini: enough….. I done a big mistake by marrying u. u always with me when we loved. But after marriage u r with ur project only. Better u can marry ur project. Get lost.

Another day.
Ragini is arranging dishes on dinning table. She calls Sanky.
Ragini: hello Sanky where r u?
Sanky: I’m on the way dear.

Ragini: I wont belive u….. on our marriage anniversary day too u cant spend time with me……..
Sanky: no really am on…….. some crashing sound…..

Ragini screams SANKY………….. (Sanky met an accident)(he is no more)

Ragini moans vigorously………. She is continuously sobbing. She caresses her wedding photo.
Ragini: Sanky I’m really sry Sanky….. afterwards I wont fight with you. I wont argue with you. Plz…… don’t leave me……..
She felt she lost everything.
Ragini: I wanted to leave you when you r with me. but now I really want you but u leaved me…….. its not fair Sanky……… plz…..come to me……

After one week. Her face is buffed n full red bcos of continuous crying. She is not able to eat or sleep properly……
She felt something different. She vomited. She came out of rest room with pregnancy kit. Stand in front of Sanky’s wall pic. The result is positive. SHE IS PREGNANT.
She cried…… she goes to Dr. doctor says she is three months pregnant
in living room she sat alone…… next to her there was a gift which is hide by Sanky for their wedding day.

Slowly she opened the gift. It was a micro chip. She insert the chip with concern device. With hesitation she switched it.
A voice: hi…… happy anniversary…….
She jerked n turned towards the voice. She is dazed……. Screen goes black n white.

With full shock Ragini: SANKY……. (in robot movie chity can show video by eyes na just like that Sanky is visible to her like screen)

She shouted booth booth….. n switched off the device. Sanky disappeared. she scared a lot…….
She called the chief of Sanky.

The next day he came to her home.

Ragini: Mr.Madhan what is happening? I cant understand anything. He is dead but when I insert the chip in that device he is visible to me. I was really scared…….
Mr.madhan: Ragini now only u r seeing that device? Sanky is dedicated these two years for this device only. It will be very common in twenty, twenty five years.
Ragini: I cant get it.

Mr.madhan: its nothing scary. Its just a device. We can download human emotions. Sanky is 1 step higher than that. With that emotions he added the actions too. Its concrete as well as abstract too. U can see him u can talk to him but u can’t touch him. Bcos it is showing in air if u touch it then ur hand will cross over it. nothing to wry. That device is two years hard work of sanky.

Ragini: ok thnq sir.
After some time…… she goes near that device. With full fear n hesitation she switches it. screen opens in air.
Sanky with broad smile: hi baby…..
Ragini with fear: sa…sa…..Sanky…do..dont talk anything……she stammers in fear. Don’t talk anything just listen what I’m saying…… Sanky nods.

Ragini: Sanky….Sanky… I’m I’m th…. Three months pregnant……. She signs her tummy.
Sanky is full happy no dialogues comes to speak…… really…… I’m happy…… very happy….
Ragini: I’m sry Sanky….afterwards I wont fight with u.
Sanky: y? what happened?

Ragini: bcos of me only u…that da…..that day….. she remains the accident. Bcos of me only u..died …..
Sanky: what am died?
Ragini cries vigorously…….
Sanky: Ragini cool cool don’t wry past is past. Don’t cry. If u cried like this my son will born as coward. My son have to be brave just like u…….

Ragini: Sanky…….
Sanky: I’m with u don’t wry but I cant help u in kitchen or take care of child but I’ll be with u. don’t wry. My son have to brought up with good qualities.
Ragini: yes I’ll.

Days passed. After that regularly she talked with Sanky n shared her each n every feelings. How they enjoyed in the love age just like she felt very happy.

Ragini: Sanky y r u always telling this baby as my son my son? If this child is girl then what will u do?
Sanky: if it is girl then I don’t have any problem. Y don’t u want a son?
Ragini: y not? I want a son as jovial person, extra caring, mischievous… just like u.
Sanky: really…..

Ragini: hey just a minute.
Sanky: what happened?
Ragini: he is kicking…..
Sanky: really with amusement……
Ragini: yes with happy.

Months passed. Ragini got labour pain. Ragini: amma………………………….. she was taken to operation.

Dr: no need to operation. It can be normal delivery.
Ragini: nurse plz……. Insert this chip into this device.
Nurse: no mam we cant allow…. B4 she complete the sentence dr. do what she said. She already informed me abt this. Nurse nod yes.
Ragini: thnq dr. Sanky appeared.

Sanky: be brave ……. Do as per dr. advice….. push. With heavy pain she pushes.
With crying sound boy baby born as per Ragsan’s wish. with smiling face Ragini closed her eyes.
Sanky: dr. what happened? Y she fainted?
Dr. its normal…. Leave her in rest.
Sanky: ok dr. lovingly he stares the new born child.

After sometime Ragini opens her eyes.
Sanky: he is cute na……
Ragini: just like u.

Child growing day by day……. Days passed just like jet.

Ragini is cooking in kitchen while Sanky is talking with Ragini. Suddenly Sanky turns n sees baby coming towards them by legs n hands then continues his talking. Later realised what he saw (baby is crawling…..) With full shock he called Ragini.
Ragini: I’m cooking na y r u disturbing me? she saw he is continuously staring at that direction. She too does not less in shock. Ragsan smiled at each other.
Ragini took the baby in her arms.
Ragini: my baby is grown……

Another few days/ months passed.

Another big shock Raagsan’s baby started to walk. By its cute n little foot that baby made Ragsan’s home as heaven.
Ragini: see this is dad….. say hi to him.
Baby: pa….pa….appa…….
Sanky: did u hear…. My child called me as appa…… Ragini nods.

Ragini: mostly babies call amma 1st but ur baby….calling u…..
Sanky: can u smell the burning?
Ragini gives killer look.

Flash back ends with cute face of Ragsan’s son.

Swara’s phone conversation with her sasu maa continues.
Ragini: like this only my son lax grown. (Ragini n child lax photo shown nearby table)
Ragini: which mistake I done now u too doing that. Try to understand him. Y he is earning? For u only na adjust him baby.
Ragini: plz don’t say that he is not CARING N LOVING. Bcos I TAUGHT HIM THAT ONLY.
Ragini: hope afterwards everything will be fine. Bye.
Swara: bye maa.

Swara: she apologies lax by holding her ears with pout face.
Lax: now shall we go to 5th month’s check up?
Swara nods n rests her head on lax’s shoulder.

Screen freezes with back pose of Swalak and Ragini n child lax’s pic.


Hope u liked it….. tell ur pov through cmnts…… by urs loving Aastha.

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  1. My eyes welled up, nice

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo much my dear lovely ?

  2. I read it in TU as abhigya os

    1. Astha

      Ya. I thought give this to swaragini fans too. Anyway thnq soooooo much for the cmnt.

  3. It’s unique os…we don’t value when we have something but when it is not with us we miss them badly…really emotional…

    1. Astha

      Ur each words r true dear we try to understand the value of our surrounding n situation. U r priya15’s frnds ri8? Keep smiling ?

      1. Yes dear..we talk in skr page…

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo much ?

  4. Awesome

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo much saranya ?

  5. Amazing dear

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo much ammy dear ?

  6. Amazing

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo much ashu ?

  7. Awesome.

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo much shrinjal ?

  8. Haya malik

    Wow its awesome…

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo much haya ?

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo much Lisa dear ?

  9. Silent_writer

    U r amzing lovedddddddddd it yr ???

    1. Astha

      thnq soooooooo much fizo di….. 😉

  10. Fagmeetha

    Hi da how r u .os is super it made me cry waiting for another ragsan ff

    1. Astha

      hi dear. i’m physically healthy n mentally depressed by exams dear. oh…. u cried….. i’ll try to write someother dear…. but i cant promise. 🙂

  11. Sherin

    very nice and different…

    1. Astha

      thnq sooooooo much sherin….. 🙂

    1. Astha

      thnq sooooooo much akka.

  12. Akshata

    outstanding, actually out of the box concept. loved it

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo much akshata for a sweet ? cmnt ?

  13. Nice os…

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo much fira chellam. ?

  14. Really fantastic OS Aashu…
    Sooo cute One….
    Really we dont value things which we have in our life….we are unsatisfed….but when its gone….then we understand though it was a small thing but how valuable it was….

    1. Astha

      Ya di u r absolutely right ?. We r not understanding the value of which we have. Thnq soooooo much for a cmnt. Umma. Love u loads di. Keep smiling ?

  15. A.xx

    loved it so much such a cute love story.xx

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo much xx?

  16. awesome…!!

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo much chandu

  17. DC1

    Ok first of all I am sorry for such a late comment… See I am holding my ears. Now coming to the os… Amazing just loved it to the core. It was out of box, very different story and ofcourse your superb writing skills made it even more beautiful. Even death can not separate true love. And also a beautiful message to value things in your life before its lost forever. Amazing OS my Astha, proud of you. Keep writing and pray to God that I somehow manage time to write my ff as well and last but not the least CONCENTRATE ON YOUR STUDIES your exams are on na so all the best. Remember my dialogue study hard love you umma…. Tc

    1. Astha

      Sry… ? I won’t forgive u. Not for late cmnt. Bcoz u didn’t cmnt on ss. U know I really missed ur cmnt there. Any way thnq soooooo much for cmnting here. Sure baby ? I’ll CONCENTRATE ON STUDIES. Thnq soooooo much for the wishes ? 11th epi of ss is published I think you don’t know that’s why u didn’t cmnt. Ok dear take care. Love ❤ u loads ? ? ? ? ? ?

  18. Pavani

    Sorry for the delay I have seen it now only it was awsomee

    1. Astha

      thnq sooooooooo much akka. 🙂

  19. Wow what a story its mind blowing

    1. Astha

      thnq sooooooooo much divya 🙂

  20. Hemalattha

    It’s unique os.awesome.

    1. Astha

      thnq soooooooo much hema. 🙂

  21. Superb…. Unique concept

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo much tani ?

  22. Super os…..ragsan.scenes are nice…

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo akka. ?

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