Love You Forever by Sonai : Episode 2

Hi guys this is Sonai, with next part. I’ve changed the story to a few shots from FF bcuz I really don’t get so much time to write. Anyways let’s start !!

It’s Morning
Shravan is driving to Tiwari Killa. While driving the only thing he can think of is Sumo. He’ll be meeting him after 10 yrs. Ten years of distance had made them fall for each other, realize the inner feelings for each other.
Shravan was thinking how Sumo will look like..after all he hasn’t seen her for so many yrs..however he had seen her in her facebook account. But still there’s far off difference of seeing someone in front and seeing them in picture.
At last he reaches Tiwari Killa. The same gate, the same, house, the same memories. But the time is different. He enters the hose and sees that everything is same. As it was ten yrs back. He enters the drawing room but founds no one there.
Suddenly he hears a voice….
“Mamiji I’m leaving for PCT”
It’s Suman, tall, slim and beautiful. What appearance she had in childhood had changed totally.
Shravan looks at her, mesmerized in thoughts, maybe realizing that this is her childhood love Sumo.

At first Sumo didn’t notice Shravan but when she noticed , she was left the same…just looking into his eyes.
Shravan called in a whispering voice, ”Sumo”.
This made Sumo come out of her thoughts and remember how much angry she was on Shravan. She walked pass him , not even looking at him and went straight out of the door. Shravan was confused. Why she behaved like that ? And then remembered what Pushkar told him last night.
“I see ! So Suman Madam is so much angry on me.”
He went outside the house and saw Sumo opening the door of her ambassador.
“Sumo wait !!”, called out Shravan.
But she didn’t pay any heed and was going to enter her car, just then Mamaji appeared. Suman’s Mama Sameer came there.
“Suman beta , where r u going ?”
“PCT”,replied Sumo.

Then he saw Shravan and told Suman, ”Who is this ?”
“I don’t know “ replied Sumo.
“What do u mean by u don’t know. Obviously u know me Sumo. Don’t act ok “
Shravan was hurt and obviously felt bad.
“Who r u , beta ? “
“I’m Shravan Mamaji, I hope u remember me, or u have also forgotten me like her “
“Shravan, u , after so many years. U have grown so tall my boy. Couldn’t recognize u at all. Come , come inside”
“At least u remember me Mamaji, thank u “ Saying so Shravan bent and touched his feet.
“Ramnath Bhaisab was telling that u r coming, I remember, and how will we forget u , u r a family member after all. “
Sumo was just watching these things until Mamaji called him inside. Unwillingly Sumo went inside.
Mamaji called everyone and told Sumo to make tea. Sumo was heading towards kitchen while Shravan told that he didn’t have time and only came here to meet Nanaji.
“Oh so he came to meet Nanu and not me. Khadoos kahika !! “ said Sumo in her mind.
Shravan went in Nanu’s room to meet him while everyone returned to their work. Sumo was so sure that Shravan came to meet her and deliberately told that she didn’t know him. She waited for some minutes and then went out of the house towards her car, and just then Shravan called out.

Sumo looked behind. Shravan came and stood in front of her with his sweet smiling face. They looked at each other for some time.
“So , u don’t know me right ? “
“No I don’t know u “ saying so she turned away making an adorable angry face.
“Aww..u still look so cute being angry as u used to look in childhood.”
Sumo looked at Shravan angrily, who was still in his usual smile.
“Where r u going “
“Where ever I go , it’s my business . “
“No I was just thinking to drop u , if u don’t mind. Shall I ?“
Sumo looked at his face in an angrier look. Shravan was still smiling.

Precap : Sumo sits in his car. She realizes that Shravan is taking her to some where else…not PCT !

So guys this is all for today . The next part maybe after Thursday as my exams r starting from tomorrow. So best of luck to me.
Share all ur views about this. My flaws and all mistakes. Criticism open !!

With lots of love to all !!!

19 comments

  1. Prettypreeti

    |Registered Member

    Sonuu my Sissy it was fab tooo interesting I just loved it shravooo and sumooo both cutee just toooo goooddd ahhhh loved it u r fab one.
    Okay Thursday I will wait .
    All the best ……
    Love u

  2. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Diya… I’m loving these fast updates..
    ShraMan were so damn adorablee!!
    I had imagined this well-ly in my head.. Pleasee post soon, as I can’t wait for ShraMan’s surprise!! Love,
    Nikita!

  3. Anushika

    Hi didi, Sorry for not commenting on the previous part ..Actually read both of then in one go..I loved the concept of Sumo being angry on Shravan rather than he being angry on her..
    It was amazing..
    Loved it ..
    Pls post soon
    Love,
    Anu

  4. Beas

    |Registered Member

    No words………….dead🙏
    Don’t know what I’ll do tomorrow in exams. Civics 0….didn’t read till now. Anyway all the best 😜

  5. Khushi

    Ohh jaan this is superb
    I totally loved it dear what an amazing part
    I read the previous one also but as u posted this so thought to comment here
    Lovely jaan really lovely u r so so talented man
    Kitna Kuch kar lete ho beas Aur tum
    Very very nice jaan
    Damn the precap god Kahan leke jaa rha hai shravan sumo KO
    Can’t wait yr plz try to post ASAP dear
    Lots of love
    Ur khushi di

  6. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Sonaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii sweeeetttttttttttoooooooo!!!
    Sorrrryyyyyy for not commenting on the previous epi. I did read it trust me. Today, finally after long, I managed to get time nd decided to comment but saw ur 2nd epi up so just thought of writing all together
    it’s going brilliant!!! Love how u flipped the story. Perfectly awesome!
    The precap is waaaaayyyyy killing me. When’ll b the nxt epi up?
    Pls pls pls post ASAP!!
    love u
    take care

Your comment will now be reviewed first before it's published. Read more here..

Your comment will now be reviewed first before it's published. Read more here..