“Was that love at first sight” DEVAKSHI FF- episode 1

Hey guys… I am a silent reader to be honest! AND really like all the ff”s u guys right with your imagination skills egs… I STILL MISS YOU, her dance made me fall for her,ek aur rang, and even like the ff’s and os by rithika,fatarajo,esme luna greenwood,maleeha I guess ….
I m jahanvI u can even call me jigs no worries .. so as to a common sense of our humor we can’t state that the actual reason of our love for our beloved devakshi is why ultimate??? tell me the answer guys in the comment box.. our first target is 5 episodes and the 5th one gonna be large one.. so without any further due let’s get started…

A girl is shown combing her hair and then applying kajal,mascara and then eyeliner,her lips are shown where she is applying pink gloss..
Finally her face is shown.. it’s SONAKSHI
###the scene changes###
A boy is then shown wearing a leather jacket with black t-shirt underneath It.. he goes down so his shoes are shown and then his lips are shown… duhh he is having breakfast that is why his pis are shown.. and then he calls out’@@!

Boy:Maa…. Maaa
(Dude… the boy is dev.. are our dev babu

ma..ma.. ki chai chai yahi to kart hai..)

Ishwari comes….
Ishwari:Haa beta

Dev:Maa I am going to college


Ishwari:koi achieve si,sushi si kana yaani ladki bhi dekhiyo..
DEV.: hehe heh. ..
(HE is OPP. His character in krpkab… in here he is flirty,..)
College is shown… sonakshi enters with veggies on her foot as heels,with black pencil jeans and white suttee and simple jorgeat top..
SHE keeps her bag in the class and runs to the college temple she closes her eyes and.. it’s dev’s entry he in this ff believes in god.. and be too goes there but is mesmerised seeing sonakshi … sonakshi opens her eyes.. and is shocked to see dev who is unknown for her!

Sonakshi:what the he’ll. ..?who are you?
Dev:dev.. dev dixit.. new student in campus 16B
sona:16B.. I m a science student I m also in that campus.. you maybe a comars one. ..
Sonakshi:ohhkkk!!but why we’re you staring me?
Dev:HELLO MAM aapke chehre paid A.T.O nhi likha.. jo main aapke delta rahoo. .
Dev:All Time Open
Sonakshi:woh A.T.M hota hai All Time Money
Dev:A.T.O bhi hota hai
Sonakshi:whatever and she goes. .

DEv:(he meets his bst friend)Rahul > dude she is pretty…

RAhul:she.. she is sonakshi.. my girlfriend’s bst frnd.. diya ki b.f

Dev:SONAKSHI… beautiful as her name…
She reaches the campus and dev too reaches there she goes and sits with diya .. her bst frnd diya..

The teacher.. I.e MRS.malhotravel comes..

MRS . malhota: science students your exam is postponed… or say canceled by the office as it was optional and only 2-3 children were participating. And that is why exam…
Cutting the teacher diya shouted. .
Sinakshi: what are you doing? are you mad?
Mrs.. malhotra laughed and went out

The whole day dev was looking at sonakshi. . and sonakshi also started have some only some feelings for dev..
FINALLY dev went to sonakshi and said can we be friends! ?
Sonakshi :…….!!!!!!.m……….ye…no….ye…n…

What’s. Sonakshi ‘s answer?dekhne ke like pate rahiye…

So guys it was the first epi. I THINK it’s quite okay at length. … of u likes it do comment and silent reader like me wake up!!

UNTIL next time take care… I will see you soon bye…..!!!!


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  1. Awesome episode dear

    1. Taneeshasethi

      Thanks a lot @princess??

  2. Aaru

    D start was really good..but u need to work on your typo errors..lol..sorry

    1. Taneeshasethi

      [email protected] you are right but thanks for liking it …
      actually I wrote it from my phone and it was hanging alot.. so didn’t got to know when I made typing errors.. but thankyou sooo much??

      1. Aaru

        Hope u didn’t mind it..

      2. Taneeshasethi

        No..no.. there was nothing to mind..

  3. Rj12

    good first epi jigs?????

    1. Taneeshasethi

      Ohh…that jigs sounds sooo cute? And thanks alottt for the fan fiction…

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  5. Vinya

    The episode was really good…. Keep writing and keep smiling ☺

    1. Taneeshasethi

      Vinya… thank you sooo much… I ll smile but it’s necessary for u too!…??

  6. Azzuu

    woh the satrt is fab willl be waiting for next one
    post soon dude
    i really like it something different it some what like
    main tera hero but what ever it fab dude

    1. Taneeshasethi

      Thank you very much azzuu?
      And yah right it’s a lil like main Tera hero.. it was a little idea that was stolen by me??

  7. welcome jigs…..??…….and the episode was awesome….nice start and different from serial….?????❤???????…….waiting for the next….???

    1. Taneeshasethi

      THANKYOU sooooooooooo very much maleeha??

  8. Hey Jahanvi (di?)!!!
    First of all, welcome to the wonderful KRPKAB community! Hope you have great fun over here!
    Now, coming to the episode, it was reallt good, especially keeping in mind it was your first try..
    I really loved the unique character shade of the individual characters! Its all so different from the real television series!
    Besides, I write a ff called ME, YOU AND PASSION. Do have a look at it and I hope you like it!
    Well, may I know your age, if you wouldn’t mind?? This way, I’ll be able to see whether I should be calling you di or not…
    Do post soon!! I am really eager to learn more about Dev and Sonakshi’s lives!!
    Loads and tons of love!<3

    1. Taneeshasethi

      I m just 13..
      Thankuuu for your such a lovely feedback?????

      1. Azzuu

        pooh same age …

  9. Manya

    Hey I am ayushi?
    Good start?
    Post soon?
    Love love❤️

    1. Taneeshasethi

      Ty:***** Manya…. I ❤️Your fan fictions
      And thanks for the comment …..
      Will post soon but in a lil parodised form…????

  10. Rockzzzzzz

    Hey jigs,i am Pari…..i have a request,plz from now on comment on ff ….it makes us happy,i know it because i am a ff writer of I STILL MISSS YOU
    glad that u read it but plz do comment
    coming to ur ff,storyline is good….excited to know sona’s answer….plz update soon??

    1. Taneeshasethi

      Thankyou! pari.. but truly saying that i really like your fan fiction and its quite twisty.. i await for the new twist.. until coming to your point.. i ll surely accomdate and reply to all your fan fictions..*note to all*??

  11. Niki645

    Awesome episode…
    Post soon?

    1. Taneeshasethi

      Thankyou!! Niki??

  12. Sami

    it was awesome
    sorry for late comment my wifi was not working and then I didn’t have money for netpack so sorry dear

    1. taneeshasethi

      Thanku? But what is sermishta? There is no one named as such in my fan fiction

    2. Taneeshasethi

      Thankyou!? But who is sermishtha that.. I don’t have anyone named as such in my fan fiction

      1. Sami

        are I have joined 1 week b4 only
        and sermistha is one who is talks sweetly with everyone

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