My love… episode 1

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Hello guys this is my first ff of my favorite show:
PIYA ALBELA.
Its actually a beautiful love story…Idk why ppl didn’t start an ff till now…never mind…I’m happy to be the first….
Guys ppz do read n comment on my ff..I am open for all appreciation and criticism……
If u find my ff boring then I’ll stop it….
PLEASE DO COMMENT AND SHARE YOUR THOUGHTS…….

OK…MY FF STARTS WITH CURRENT TRACK OF POOJA LEAVING VYAS MANSION JOB…ENTRY OF EVIL GURUJI…AND NAREN DECIDING TO GO TO MUTT WITH GURUJI….

MY FF……
In the morning pooja searches the whole house for naren when they say that GURUJI has left for the mutt.
She remembered the flashback of Karen, then neelima- Rahul- GURUJI evil plan..harish’s approval….etc…….
She starts to panic. ( something happens n she gets happy…to be revealed later……)
…she along with her brother leaves vyas
mansion to find naren…..

They find narens car and stops it ….she opens narens car door n pilulls him out…naren gets shocked so as GURUJI ……
Pooja tells naren if I left the job not necessary u should let me everyoneshe says if I was in ur place I wouldn’t have let u go
Naren replies saying if I was in ur place I wouldn’t be stubborn in leaving….
She asks if he still has job vacancy….. He hugs her n holds her tight for sometime n cries.
GURUJI is shocked……
She says if u will just hug me n cry….raanggalli school won’t finish…let’s start our job…to everyone’s shock naren breaks the embrace and kisses pooja on her forehead….. He holds her hand…n takes her in his car….

Precap…
Pooja confronts GURUJI……naren pooja budding romance…

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15 Comments
  1. Nice one …its good any of us starts something new…it is really appreciable….but you have to write more dear. I hope everyone like this…
    With lots of love keep it up

  2. Great one

  3. Try to make a bit long it’s too shorts otherwise I have no complain

  4. Nce dr…keep going on like this…

  5. Super dear plss continue

  6. Nice beginning….. keep going……loved it??. ?. ?. ……..

  7. I was waiting for someone like u to start n ff like this. I am happy that atlast somebody came to fulfill my wish for me. Sorry guys I m a little selfish in this matter. Anywayd thnk u soo much for writing.

  8. Nice start. Make it long

  9. Fireflies

    Sure thank you all for your encouraging words and anaita di u are not selfish….ur words are really motivating thanku so much

  10. Awwww… Amazing start dear… Will always support you… A request that if you can then pls makes it little longer.. Otherwise chapter is brillent… Waiting for next part… Atleast with your ff we will not miss our favourite couple on weekends.. Thanks

  11. thanks dear, even I was eagerly waiting for a ff …and the start was really good

  12. Roumya

    Isn’t this today’s episode?

  13. Thank you..it’s really wonderful

  14. Lizaa

    sry plz try something new…lts look like copy of original show..

  15. Angel_writer

    loved it dear…
    now i m going to read the next part…

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