love don’t need introduction OS

hey guyz i’m ireena here is my os ppz comment

it’z evening 5’O clock, I standing on the bridge waiting for my friend who planned for amovie.Its was very pleasant and lovely climate which made my heart lite. I started roaming on the bridge and thinking about my friend is he come or not. Suddenly I surprised a girl crossed my sight, I turn aroundand watched her she was very beautiful,charming and cute.She stand a few meters far away from me and looking into the water below the bridge andmy eyes saw her face which face bright as the moon in full moon day and my heart beat raised, I supposed that she was waiting for some one.I decided to try my luck,immediately I took my phone out and send msg “Howmuch time?” and I got a reply “nearly half n hour “, thank god it will be a great time for me…What should I do now,my heartbeat raised my heart says “Go and talk with her” can I?No I cannot… it again says “don’t miss her , nothing happen when u go and have a small talk”Its ok I decided to talk with her I myself “All is Well’
I: Hi…(no reply
I: Hello….She: Hello…(thank go
I: Hi this is sanskar
She: Swara
I: With myself (Swara what a nice name,sanky loves swara great!)if u dont mind can u say what uwaiting for…
She: what?(she enlarged her eyes)
I: nothing what u r waiting for?
She: I am waiting for my father to pick up me……
I: ho…(I looked into her eyes quite near they were clear and innocence..)can i say u something?
She: What?
I: your voice is so sweet as ur face… and…
she:and…
I:nothing…(she walked away form me…)I silently followed her
She: what
I: can we have a cup of coffee?
She: no
I: tea…
She: no
I: at least pani puri…
She: u r too crazy… (she smiledand by seeing that i forget myself it looks like a heaven)I: please,please,please…
She: Its ok…
I: Thank u,thank u very much…(when i am walking beside her for the first time my heart beat raised a lot and it saying she isthe one i looked her, her face, her cheeks,and her hair it was long and seems to be touching ground how beautiful is she looking like an angel i never found before)
I: hey can i say u something?
She: what?(she again enlarged her eyes)
I: (i felt afraid) nothing
I: what u r father…She: doctor..
I: (thank god not a police…)(suddenly a poor boy came in front of her and he stretched his arm…)(I know she was so kind also…
She : (she looked up me) and said u said u want to say something…
I: that I… I…
She: ha U…(i kept silent for some seconds…)
I: let’s go?
She: what?are u joking?
I: no its going to happen something… (run)…(I pick her hand and started running away from the bridge…)Its happen what i supposed a great killer wave struck the bridge and the people,shops,vehicles and all drown into the water..
She: thank u…
I: its my duty…
She: what?(i watched a simile on her face its cool and calm)then rescue operation team and ambulance reached and started their operations to helpthe people we both stand awaya few meters far away from that…
I: hey u stay here i will go and help some…
She: I will also come with u…
I: no,
she: why?
I: if something happens to u i cannot…
She: u cannot…hey listen i am also human being let me give my helping hand..
I: (smile on my face)ok but becarefulll…
She: thank u (she again smiled i know her heart..)then we both busy in our work in helping the victims it was a great disaster she was a little far away from me no fear in hereyes she was helping and i watched her..I did not believe this , tears coming from eyes i started running swara…(unexpectedly a huge truck hit her hard she fell down)
I: swara, open your eyes…
Se: sanky u said u want to say something… (her eyes was closing)
I: ho, swara please don’t close ur eyes look at me…
she: say it now…
I: ha….swara “I LOVE YOU, PLZ DONT LEAVE ME
She: “IF I LIVE I WILL BE WITH U FOREVER

(her eyes closed suddenly one man came there and she picked up her I asked who r u?her father… no words from my mouth he took her away I stand quite…)how fool am I? I don’t know anything about her except her name how can i find her…

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Credit to: IREENA(1223)

7 comments

  1. shani

    Woow.

    Nice story dr .
    Thank u for this os…ireena…so emotional story….
    I loved it…keep writing…god bless u..

  2. Piya

    hey dear , that was superb but please complete it , i want a happy ending please dear……………its my request please……………be happy …………….

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