A love confesSion shraman & devkashi one shot ( ek duje ke vaaste)

hy guyssss me! maria wid 1 shot of a love confession :
so here it is :
a beautiful palace:
there is an engagment funtion happening…… πŸ™‚
but it is sumo and dev’s engagment πŸ™
(evry one is happy except sumo dev sona n shr was nt present at the vanue)
(dev was about to make sumo wear ring but suddenly stops)
dev: no i….i cant do dis dis… is wrong ( he luks at sumo who is silently crying) how can i be so stupied?? u love some1 else……. i love some one else……(he luks at sone who is also crying) n….. n she loves me tooo (sona luks at him a tear falls down from dev eye) πŸ™ (sona runs frm deir crying)
all r shocked
ishwari: dev……
dev: i….. i am… so sorry mom mai ek acha beta banne mai fail ho gaya sorry…. lekin mai apne bhai ke sath dhoka nai….. kar skta shr loves sumo…..
(ishwari is all shocked)
dev starts crying….. πŸ™ i ……m… so sorry mom i cant…
ishwari : nai mera baccha….. rote nai hain meri ghalti thi… i never listened u i should hav listened u….. mai tum dono ki zindagi nai nai tum chaaro ki zindagi bar baad karne ja rai thi… mera bacche tune mujhe bacha lia… thank u ( luks at sumo) mujhe nai pata tha sumo dat u luv shr n dev n sona luv eachothr….. sorry meri bacchi
sumo: no…no plzzz aunty dont apologize plzzzz
ish: dono jao or apne shaathion ko manao jao……
dev : maaa… thank u so much (he hugs her)
sumo: aunty… thnk u so much ( she also hugs her)
(sumo n dev both runs in opposite directions )
shraman part:
(shr is on the tarrace crying )
khaash…. khaash mai tumhe pehle… bata deta sumo i am sooryyyy.. πŸ™
(he luks at the sky n say)
bhagwaan ji plzz mujhe ek muka de do….. sirf ek….
(sumo comes from behind)
sumo: kis liay……..
(shr didnt realize she is standing beside him)
bs ye kehne ke liay…..that…..
sumo: that…..
shr: dat I LOVE HER..!!! I LOVE HER MORE THEN ANYTHING ELSE…..!
(he starts to cry louder)
sumo: ( haappily) πŸ˜€ really….!!!!!??????
(shr suddenly stops crying n luks behind n shocked to see her)
shr: sumo………. he says in happiness
sumo: bhagwaan ne tumhari sun li… u have a chance to say…..
(shr runs to her n tightly hug her)
shr: i will not waste it…. i… i… love u i love u so much sumo…..!!!! πŸ˜€
sumo is dam happy to hear this
sumo : i love u toooo more that anything in d whole universe!!!!!! ( he kisses on her forehead)
devkashi part:
(here sona is crying)
(dev comes to her)
dev : sona……i want to say something…..i…I
sona: go away i dont wanna talk to u (she starts to go but he holds her hand n pulls her closer)
dev: nai…… ab mai tumhe kahin nai jane dooooon ga ( he cups her face) tum meri….ho.. sirf meri understand ??? ( sona nods)
sona: (slowly) do….. u … really love…. me…?
dev laughs : oo my god nai mai toh yahan adhi adhoori engagment chor kar film dekne aaya ho na ( he says naughtily)
sona: (hits him play fully) btao naa???
dev again cups her face
dev : more dan anythng els !!
sona: i love u dev …!!!!!! πŸ™‚
dev : i luv u tooooooo my jaan!! both share a hug…..!
so guyssss how was d storyyyy plzzz comment plzzz plzz plzzz
n all chappals tomatoes are allaowed…. πŸ˜€

Credit to: maria

25 comments

  1. LovelyLady

    |Registered Member

    ooyyeee maria… soo good imaginatn yaar…… fuul trained wrtr….. nyc yaar….. i m also thinkng to wrt one shot story….. i wll wrt it once i create that my story in mind….. i hope it wll be happy ending of my last epi…… thnx fr inspiring me…
    love u bucket bhar k…. no no tanker bhr k….
    πŸ˜‰

  2. maria

    hahahahaha πŸ˜€ thankxxx alot lovely di 4 lovin me tanker bhar le i also love u veryyyyy much….. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ n yeah plzzz write one shot i knw it will be fab..!!!!! πŸ˜€

  3. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    its really.. sweet maria … especially Shravan’s confession was amazing… ❀❀

  4. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    First of all…..sry sry sry Maria…..I know m late….but u r just amazing yr….it was so cute yr…..mujhe khush kar diya tune….kya baat hai….ur imagination is really nice and han abhi show mein thoda tashan chal rha hai but u made up for that with ur OS. ..amazing keep it up dear

    • maria

      awww khushi no prob yr!!! chalta hai yrrr!! :p
      tera comment hamesha mujhe khush kardeta hai thank u soooooo much !! πŸ™‚
      i ammmm really glad dat u like it!!! πŸ˜€

  5. Bhoomi

    |Registered Member

    Wow??????….. So sweet…. Devakshi confession … so cute….. i m falling in love with devakshi again and again….. supeeerrrrrbbb …. luv u lots ??

  6. Shalini

    Wow Maria you are generous how can you think such story’s its very difficult for me if I were in your place. Keep it up. I really loved it.

    • maria

      awww thank u soo much fr sch a lovly commnt shalini!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      i m really glad u like it !!

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