Hi guys..Thank a lot for all your valuable comments..I am so overwhelmed by the response.
I’ll try to live up to your expectations by my storyline.
I would address Durga Prasad Maheswari as DP and Annapurna Maheswari as AP. So please understand the shortcuts 😛
In London:
A young man(dressed in white shirt black blazer and black pant) comes and greets everyone goodmorning.
DP: Son you woke up so early? You came home late yesterday..You should have taken rest!
Boy: Dad I have a meeting in the morning and you know Laksh Maheswari never gets late.
(Yes the guy is our Laksh <3)
AP: We know about your punctuality and dedication but don’t take too much of stress..Think about your personal life also.
Laksh : If that’s the matter mom, tell your younger son to join office from tomorrow.
A boy(dressed in casual outfit) is seen descending the steps
Boy: Mom said personal life bhai..which means girlfriend or wife..where does a brother count in personal life and why are you always behind my happiness(saying this he gives a childish pout expression)
(Yes he is Sanskar)
Laksh: Girls either fall for a rich businessman or will date son of a rich businessman..I fulfil the criteria for first statement and I don’t want you to be apt for second statement (and chuckles).
Sanskaar: Mom see what bhai is saying about you(and winks)
(Looking towards laksh) Do you mean mom married dad because he is successful and could u say that bhai (chuckles)
Laksh: Mom don’t fall into his words..anyways I am leaving for office
AP: Laksh listen! Okay atleast have breakfast ?
Laksh: (while walking towards entrance) I’ll have my breakfast in office and I’ll listen to you in the evening.

Scene 2:
In India:
—Gadodia house:—
A beautiful girl( in green anarkali with cream border) is trying to wake up someone
Girl: Diii..wake up..I said wake up..
The one who is sleeping says: Let me sleep Ragini..With great difficulty I get quality time to sleep (Yes..the girl is our Ragini and guess what?? Sleeping beauty is our Swara)
Ragini: Diii..Quality time for sleeping is at night but now it is..(before she continues Swara cuts her words)
Swara: You better go to college..It is a week off for me but you have class today(covers her face with blanket)
Ragini: My dear dii…It is 12 o’clock..I have attended my class and came back too but your still sleeping.
Swara: Whatever let me sleep…
Ragini: okay dii you sleep..I’ll have all rasgulle alone (and she keeps walking towards the door)
Swara: Rasgulle!! Ragini stop..I am coming!!
Ragini: Dii..i’ll wait but first you freshen up (winks)

On dining table in Gadodia house:
Swara and Ragini are eating rasgulle as if someone will steal their food.
Janki: Eat slowly I have made them for both of you..
Ragini: But mom swara di challenged me that I can’t eat more rasgulle compared to her. So I must prove her wrong.
Janki: Why do you do such childish acts swara..
Swara: Mom you made with so much of love and affection..if I eat more rasgulle I will get more share of your love..How can I let Ragini have less love(winks)
Seeing this Janki’s eyes are welled up
Ragini: Mom one minute..I’ll bring a bucket so you can fill it with your tears(chuckles)
Suddenly they hear a voice-I never got such a great idea..
(The voice is of Shekar gadodia)
Shekar: If I got to know about this idea then I would have solved our colony’s water problem through your mom(winks at Ragini)
Swara: Enough!! Now no one will tease my mom..
Shekar and Ragini at a time say- okay..momma’s doll!!
Swara: Yes I am momma’s doll and you are dad’s girl(looking at Ragini)
All laugh(a little family union)

Precap: Marriage proposal and little fun

Credits to: Ishajain

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  1. Pavani

    Ha ha ha funny siblings nice one dear

    1. Saanvi

      Thank you akka 🙂

  2. Divyanshri

    nice matured laksh….. n call dude sanskar….. awsome episode

    1. Saanvi

      Thank you Divya 😀

  3. Megha123

    Awsm part loved swaragini & sanlak intro
    I hope that U’ll try to give equal importance to both the pairs

    1. Saanvi

      Thanks Megha 🙂 yes I will give equal importance to both pairs!!

  4. Nice

    1. Saanvi

      Thank u 🙂

  5. Akshata

    superb, sanskar is so funny.

    1. Saanvi

      haha thank u akshata 🙂

    1. Saanvi

      Thanks 🙂

  6. Cutiie

    Reveal pairs

    1. Saanvi

      SwaLak and RagSan

  7. Pairs are swasan or swalak plz make it swasan plz

    1. Saanvi

      Pairs are SwaLak and Ragsan

  8. amazing ff
    love rags

    1. Saanvi

      You would love her more in next episode 😉 thanks for the comment 😀

  9. SPP

    Awesome Superb
    Waiting for the next one……..

    1. Saanvi

      Thank you so much 🙂

  10. nice!!

    1. Saanvi

      Thank you 🙂

  11. Soujanya


    1. Saanvi

      Thanks a lot Soujanya 🙂

  12. nice rags is amazing but make it raglak next part soon

    1. Saanvi

      Nikky i can’t change the pairing now..but for fans like you i have written a one short Marriage-Love-Trust pairing Raglak..I think you will like it..please check out for that OS 🙂

    1. Saanvi

      thank u 🙂

  13. IshaJain3006

    thanks a lot saanu dii 🙂 n the update was awesome 😉

    1. Saanvi

      Pleasure is mine dear..and thanks for the comment 🙂

  14. Deeksha

    Nice… Sorry dear I’m late…

    1. Saanvi

      It’s ok Deeksha…I am glad you read it 🙂

  15. Awesomeeee

    1. Saanvi

      Thank u 🙂

  16. Vyshu10


    1. Saanvi

      Thank u Vyshu 🙂

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