It was love that brought them together…..twinj episode 28

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The epi starts…..
Leela is in hall she has talked to Anita and usha just then twihi and uv comes down….. All three r worried. Leela is sad…. All three notices it
M: twinkle I something is wrong
U: hmm! Oh god yaar
T: maa what happened? Tell fast now
L: umm actually umm voh
M: maa say fast
L: there is one good and one bad news….what should I say first
U: aunty what’s the good news
L: the good news is that your mom, I mean Anita ji is ready to accept mahi as her bahu….she is very happy on yr choice.
Twihi and uv gets very much happy…..mahi hugs twinkle
T: oh my god…congrats yaar
M: thank u
They break the hug…..then mahi and uv take leela’s blessings
L: be happy always
T: maa tell the bad news now!
Leela’s smile fades away…
M: maa what’s the bad news….pls tell
L: ummm the bad news is usha ji is not ready to make twinkle as her bahu
All gets a big shock…..twinkle’s vision has become blurry due to tears
M: what!
L: ya usha ji told she will not make twinkle as her bahu but she will make her daughter after marriage.
All realises what she just said
T: what ma! Say it again pls pls say it again
Leela laughs
L: ha baba ha she is very much happy on kunj’s choice but she will great u like a daughter not as bahu after marriage.
T: wow maa waw I m soooooooo happy…this is the best bday gift ever ever!
Twinkle too hits mahi
M: congrats to u too yaar….
T: thank u!
They break hug then twinkle hugs uv
U: ooihoi twinkle…..congrats yaar
T: Same to u
Then twinkle takes Leela’s blessings
L: sada sukhi raho.
T: accha maa what did the aunties told about the plan? Are they ready?
L: ya ya Anita ji and leela ji both are OK with the plan as they both know that u and uv are best friends
T thinks: I should not tell maa that uv was my bf ri8 now I will tell her when the time would be perfect.
U: so twinkle ready for the plan?
T: yup…..I m so excited yaar!
U: accha I should go now…..bye mahi
Be4 mahi could say bye
T and leela: byeee uv
Uv realises that he only said bye to mahi only
U: OK OK sorry…..bye beautiful ladies
L: chal hat badmash
Uv smiles and leaves.
L: okay but sorry mahi and twinkle u both have to wear the long dresses that I gave u
Twihi: maa!
L: try to understand yaar…..many businessmen are coming I dont want them to think that my daughters are spoilt.
Twihi:ok mom
Its evening……
The guests have arrived and mahi and leela are greeting them, our beauty queen is still getting ready. Just then the luthras arrive
Mahi and leela goes towards them…yuhi touches the Anita’s feet
A: mahi I m soo happy yaar…..uv I must say….nice choice
Mahi blushes
L: I m soo sorry anita ji but we have to hide yuhi’s relationship for few day……for twinkle
A: arre ya ya np……afterall twinkle is like my daughter I at least do this for her.
Just then sarnas arrive…..kunj is wearing white shirt black suit and black pant(the same the he wore on twinj’s first meet in tei and I don’t think I hv a need to tell hv he is lookin…..ofcouse s*xy) his eyes are searching for her secret lady love.
U: kunj whom are u searching for?
K: n..no one maa
Leela,Anita and yuhi goes towards sarnas.
L: u r most welcome.
Kunj touches her feet
L: sukhi raho
Us:(in a whisper) where is my would be bahu…..o sorry sorry my would be daughter
L:(in a whisper) yr would be daughter is still getting ready
They both giggle silently….kunj notices it but ignores. Just then leela sees twinkle coming downstairs.
L: look the bday girl is here.
Everyone looks towards the stairs….so does kunj….twinkle is looking terribly s*xy. She is wearing a tranperant blue colour keptop. Her belling is visible due to tranpirancy of her dress. ( sorry guys I forgot to mention that mahi is also wearing a keptop but its of light pink colour and uv is wearing almost same suit as kunj….u know na boys cloths are somewhat same only) kunj is about to faint due to twinkle’s look….
K thinks: shit man shit…..I can’t stop now….I want to tell twinkle…she is not less than a barbie for me…. I want to shout ri8 now and tell her how much I love her …..but I m afraid, what if she denies….what if our friendship also breaks…no no I can’t even imagine my life without her.
Twinkle comes down….everyone present there greets her
Lady: happy birthday beta…..ur soo beautiful ……I want u to get marry to my son….what say leela ji
Leela gives a puzzled look.
L think: oh god now what to tell her.
Kunj was about to go to her but be4 he could go uv goes there. He holds twinkle’s hand
Uv: umm sorry aunty…..she is my gf
L: (smiles a bit) ya ya twiraj told us about their relationship and we r very happy with it
For kunj its like the earth has slipped away from his feet. He just can’t believe his ears.
K thinks: what!!!! Is that a dream
K: mahi pls pinch me
M: okay
She pinches him
K: aaa (slowly)
M: but why did u asked me to do that
Mahi is laughing in her heart.
Lady: so sorry beta!
L: ya ya now pls enjoy yr party.
To be continued…..

Hey guys I just hope ur liking this track I know ull r sad in seeing kunj sad but after all its my ff I will try to make it funny but anywhere if u feel its not good then pls comment it don’t hesitate. And ya u guys know a story is nothing without a villian so just suggest me a name for handsome villian and don’t worry the villain will always loose but pls suggest name of a man villian and not lady

Credit to: Ritzi

41 comments

  1. Osm as always amazing epi dear loved it so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much………do cont soon plzzzzz luv u n abt villian Idk much dear sry………

  2. fiona

    it was awesome
    brilliant writer one request please post next part soon
    and ritzi why you don’t reply for my comments in previous episode i am very …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
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    i was sad but your awesome skill make very happy!
    and i was just playing a prank sorry if you are hearted
    be happy like this 🙂 😮

    • Ritzi

      Ooooooo my Fiona I m so so so so so so so so sorry darling but srsly I was too busy and I think u must hv commented a bit late so I didn’t came through yr comment…..really sorry if ur hurt…..and thanks fr ur comment

      • fiona

        ritzi please don’t say sorry it was my fault that i comment late
        and earlier also i told that this is prank
        don’t be upset
        dear waiting for next one 🙂

  3. hey ritzi..how are u?? hope u remember me….i went through ur ffs today..nd trust me u have enlightened my mood…u have grown in every episode..ur writing skills have evolved..nd u stand amid others as bright a sun…!! keep it up dear..

    • Ritzi

      Hiiiiiiii Tara hiiiii u don’t know I m sooooooooooooo happy to read ur comment yaar……after a long tym uh! Missed u like hell and ya I hv also sent a frnd rqst in fb my name is Ritti…..thanks for the appreciation dear

  4. Anushka

    It’s simply mindblowing. I have become ur fan. keep it up dear.
    I would suggest u- dishank arora( pandit trilok in kyy)
    – Yuvraj thakur( mmadhyam of kyy)
    – Ajay chaudhary (Vishnu in uttraran)
    I mean they r my suggestions if u want u can even change them. And secondly It’s a ff so we can imagine who so ever we want.

    • Ritzi

      Ya anushka ur ri8 we can imagine whosoever we want but if a tell u the name then u can go through the picture more well….but thanks for yr comment and suggestions

  5. Awesome. .let the villan be a cute looking boy nd den later he would cm up with his true intentions..lets be rajveer singhania…just a suggestion

  6. Riya

    sorry for being late to comment n s episode is nice villans I would suggest nirbhay from MATSH
    romi from yhm
    rajveer from Jr
    luv u

  7. baby

    Ritzi its amazing episode bt i can’t w8 fr Nxt episode pls post it asap infact now only i jst can’t w8 fr luv confession n den romance omg bt yr i m toh getting wrid bout real tei gng on by d producer n director or watever d story yr y r dey showing prblms only now dey r showing dat r kunj is hving any disease shet yr

    • Ritzi

      Ty ty ty so much baby….ya I too m very disappointed with the upcoming track of tei….its all shit

  8. callmenazu

    Te epi was just awsm ritzi u nailed it just cant wait 4 d next one and 4 d villain i would suggest rohit reddy {Rajveer from jamai raja}…he would do good

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