It was love that brought them together…..twinj episode 23


Hey guys seriously i m on cloud nine this is only because of your comments…..sorry yesterday i only answered in few comments but i wanna say a big THANKS to aakansha,fiona,chehak,riya,mitali,calmeprincess3,joshika,panchi,
Aastha,zikra,mannat,sam and roshini…….forgive me if i missed someone!

The episode starts…..
Twinkle drops kunj (as it was twinkle’s car) and twinkle then goes to her house with about 10 big shopping bags.
Its already evening
Twinkle entered taneja mansion where mahi and leela are looking at her with mouth open
L: what is this twinkle! This much shopping u did! But why?
Twinkle gets angry

T think: I thought they must have recalled that its my birthday tomorrow but no….they are asking me why!
There leela and mahi giggles silently
T: maa actually I wanted to shop that’s why
L: but this much! Is there something special tomorrow ummmm I think no!
T: ( in an angry way) don’t worry mom I have only spent 10,000 rs so don’t worry!
She goes towards her room angrily
M: maa did I heard her saying she had spent 10,000 rs ONLY!
l: ( laughing) yes puttar its seriously only for her because till now her minimum spent was 25,000 rs and today she broke her own record wow!
M: accha mom I hope uv have talked to u about late night birthday celebration
L: ya puttar he talked but what’s the need to celebrate her birthday twice I mean u guys wanna celebrate it at 12 o’clock and we have kept a party already for her at tomorrow evening
M: ya maa ur ri8 but actually tomorrow evening there would be everyone na…..our relatives, ur business partners,neighbours and all so we have to behave like a mature college students na! And we wanna do our friends wali masti!
L: OK baba OK! I permit u guys! But mahi just don’t allow twinkle to go from the front door or else ur father will come to know about the late ni8 party and u know na he is against all this
M: OK mom I will look after it now let me go to our beauty queen she must be sad na!
L: ha go
Mahi gives a peck on Leela’s cheeks and leaves

Sarna mansion
Uv has come to meet kunj
Uv: hello usha aunty……namaste!
Usha: namaste puttar!
Uv: aunty where is kunj?
Usha: he is in his room u go there only!
Uv: OK aunty
He runs to kunj’s room where kunj is looking at twinkle’s picture in his mobile and recalling all moments spent with her today
K thinks: she is damn beautiful! I love her more than my life! How was just mad when she accidentally kissed me on my lips……wow yaar! I was lost into her while closing her zip!

Just then uv comes
U: hi kunj!
Kunj doesn’t respond
U: hiiiiiii! Kunj( this time more loudly)
But still no response. Kunj is sitting on a chair
U thinks: what the hell why isn’t he responding……. Idea!
Uv secretly goes and moves the chair backwards on which kunj is sitting without noticing the pic in his mobile. But still kunj didn’t fell down he was in the same position like sitting on a chair but without any support of chair.
U: what! Is he mad!
Uv taps on kunj…..kunj comes into his senses and falls down
K: aaaaa! Wasn’t I sitting on a chair…..uv! When did u come?
U: 15 min back!
K: what?
U: ya u heard it ri8 by the way where were u lost?
Kunj suddenly closes his mobile and stands up
K: no where!
U: OK forget it! Accha I want to tell u something……
Uv tells him about the late ni8 party celebration
K: ya its a cool idea so we are going to meet in twinkle’s back garden at 12 o clock.
U: ya but silently! Mahi called me and told us to beaware of rt uncle
K: ya OK! I will be there!
U: bye! See u at 12
K: ya bye!

Kunj again sits on the chair and starts looking at twinkle’s pic again
Its already 11 o clock and mahi has forcefully made twinkle sleep so that she can get ready for twinkle’s party. Mahi gets ready by 11:55 she was looking awesome her hairs where curled and she was wearing a light yellow coloured one piece. Just then mahi gets uv’s message
Uv’s message: ready? Then come out in the balcony
Mahi runs in the balcony and she saw kunj and uv standing there but as it was dark uv couldn’t see mahi’s dress clearly
U:( whispering) ready!
M: yes
U: then come down
M: from where?
U: can’t u see the CD!
M: what! From here!
K: we don’t have any option
M: OK! But two hold it properly
Mahi Climbs down. Uv is lost to see her
U thinks: wow! She is looking s*xy
Kunj shakes him
K: where r u lost! Now what about twinkle
U: ya kunj u go and wake her up
K: what! Why me
U: a….a…actually I had a very bad experience once I came to met twinkle late ni8 and climbed the same ladder but I fell down thrice on the same day!
Kunj and mahi laugh ….kunj is a bit jealous
U thinks: how to tell u kunj! I want to spent time with mahi that’s why I m not going to wake up twinkle
K: ok then I will go
Kunj climbs the ladder and reaches twinkle’s balcony

To be continued…..

Sorry guys a little more wait for her birthday

Credit to: Ritzi

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  1. Hey prapti sorry i forgot to mention your name…..thanks a lot for commenting in my 22nd epi

    1. I hv tried to write a longer one on your requests!

      1. U don’t say sorry to me dear..this epi was long & still I told to make d next long also cz I can’t get enough of ur ff as it’s mesmerizing… Write as much as u r comfortable with & don’t bother abt m just greedy abt ur story??

  2. Aaahh..why Ritz…we can’t wait!!! But it’s OK..take ur time & make d next one longggg…luv u?

    1. Thanks prapti but u’ll want a more longer epi! Ok i promise a longer epi on every sundays but i cant promise on all the days as i hv to study na

      1. That’s so sweet of u..I m sorry yaar..write as much as u want only..I just got well

  3. we can wait but 1 request please make that episode special and much longer that our hand start paining by scrolling
    about today episode it was like always superb and love u

    1. Yr request will be granted tomorrow fiona…..thanks for the suggestion

  4. Superb.. . Sorry wasnt able to cmmnt on yr prvious epi…

    1. Np anaita and tysm

  5. Its amazing Ritzi!! Sorry could not comment for a long coz was busy!!! But loved it…

    1. No problem yaar aarti……ty for yr comments

  6. Hey ritzi
    M unable to wait for next epi
    Plz write it early

    1. Ya mannat i will try to write it asap……thanks

  7. Nice one we will wait for it but make it longer one

    1. Sure and tysm dheemahee

  8. Hey Ritzi ahhh osm epi dear loved it so so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much m still lost I ur ff dear loved it n plz plz plzzzzz do cont soon plzzzzz luv u till thn tc … cont soon

    1. Awwwwwww zikra its sho sho sho shweet of you!

  9. ur ff is as always awesome waiting for twinkles birthday plss make d next episode special n longer with more twinj scenes .

    1. Ya riya that the reason i m keeping u all wait for twinkle’s birthday actually i m thinking for 2 days that by what way i can make it special

  10. UFFFFFF I srsly cant wait for the next epi yaar….and about this 1 it was amazing as usual !!

    1. Aakansha dear! u always turn my face red yaar! But where is our dear tara no sign of her and her ff till now she told that she was going out for a week but its more than a week i hope she is ok

      1. ummm I guess she is fine….I mean she sometimes is active on the tei messenger group but my messenger got uninstalled so Idk much

  11. Ritiz u r making me mad with the curiocity…
    Plz update it asap..
    I m just keeping on thinking what may happen next..
    N u r literally testing me..
    N I m ready for the test..
    But plz yarrr jaldi upload kar…
    Can’t wait more now

    1. Ya crazy thanks a lot dear…..wait karo wait! Sabra ka phal meetha hota hai

  12. Awesome seriously so nice loved it eagerly waiting for the next episode

    1. Thanks from the core yaar sam!

  13. Ritzi can’t wait for nxt epi…
    And this epi was awsum dear… 🙂

    1. Thank u so much ruchi darling

  14. Sooooo sry that I couldn’t comment yesterday as my Internet package got emptied
    Well coming to the episode it was mwaah♥♥♥♥

    1. Its not at all a problem yaar sanam dare u say sorry once again! by the way thanks a lot……loads of love to u

  15. I just love your ff. Awesome. Plzz do cont soon

    1. Mitali u love my ff and i love u……stay blessed dear

  16. Nyc epii… plzz make ur nxt epi soon..luv u

    1. Ya rupam i will try to update it soon…..thanks for appreciation dear

  17. Callmeprincess3

    Seriously Ritzi u write so good just can’t wait 4 d next nd make dat a little bit long ❤

    1. Aww my calmeprincess3 thanks for your special comment ya i will make the nxt epi long…dont worry abt it

  18. awesome. loved it

    1. Tysm sonali

  19. awesome epi …… eagerly wtng fr d nxt epi yaar ….. pls post it asap pls…..

    1. Panchi thanks from the bottom of my heart

  20. it was super amazing as ususal ritzi…..fab fab fab as u…..???

    1. O my loveleen u dont know how much overwhelmed i m to read ur comment…..honestly guys i m in tears on reading all your comments

  21. forever fan of twinj

    At last I can’t control myself from commenting
    D epi was really engrossing like Kunj my mom called me thrice but I was so much engrossed in reading dat I came in2 senses when she shouted at my ears .
    Seriously its fabulous 🙂 🙂

    1. Hahaa forever twinj fan i m laughung like anything……..thanks for making me feel so special yaar!

  22. It was so nice dear ritzi

    1. Tysm dear aarti

  23. Ritzi ritzi ritzi can’t wait for the next one! I know and understand that writing a long episode is not easy and that too regularly. So take your time as whenever you are free, do it. Love loads.

    1. Ty ty ty joshika for understanding me and tysm for loving me and my ff this much

  24. I am again late …sry i was sleeling…u can’t imagine how my day gone ….it waz exhausting….bt when i wake… i first read ur ff is most awaited bday for me….

    1. Oh aastha thanks a lot yaar i m soooo glad u liked it

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