LoVe BiRdS …… Sukor OS

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Hey guyzzz this Liya. I thought of writing an OS about Sukor!! Hope you guyzz like it๐Ÿ’“. Vimli & Sukor have escaped from the clutches of kamal narayan and ragini.bhuvan – maayi and others helped them to escape and asked them to stay away from village for somedays as they are not safe!! Its about eveng and they are still running, they reached a place ,it was very beautiful with greenary all around! Its preety much close to a small forest with trees around and there is a lakhe to..sooraj who is exhausted tells them” ab mujhse nehi hoghaa!!! Mein zindaghi mei kabhi ,itni nehi dhaudi ”

Chakor :itni nehi dhaudi yaa kabhi nehi dhaudi๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’.
Suraj glared at her . Imli: mein bhi thakh ghayi hoon๐Ÿ˜ฅ. Kya hum yahaan kuch samay keliye rukth sakthe hei. Vivaan : haan๐Ÿ˜ƒ. Gundose bhi peecha chudgayi.voo logh nazar nehi arrahaa…thoo hum yahaan rukthe hei.par aghee kyaโ“ Suraj : mera ek dosth hei.uski out house๐Ÿฉ yahan sei kuch door hi hei hum vahi jaate hei vimli find it to be a nice idea๐Ÿ˜„ .But chakor was not happy with it. She was not ready to leave the villagers and bhuvan – maayi to suffer alone. But her parents emotionally ,made her to take promise that she would stay away for few days!! Chakor determines to find some solution to save her family and villagers .She decided to comeback to village with a bang.

Vimli was sitting under the shade of the tree with imlis head placed on vivaans shoulder๐Ÿ’‘. So suraj was getting bored.so he thought to check out chakor๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰.chakor was standing far from vimli ,beside a lakhe.suraj moved near to her.
Chakor was lost in thought when suraj came near to her! He then started staring ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰her with soo much off affection๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜!! He remberd yesturdays incident,how she broken her thumb๐Ÿ‘ ,when he said her!!How she saved him ,when his father was about to๐Ÿ”ซ๐Ÿ”ซ๐Ÿ”ซshoot him.How she consoled him,when he was broken๐Ÿ’” during vimli reunion…..he remembers each and every favour she had done for him!
Then he rembered how he tortured her,how much he insulted her and how he even used her fame to get money๐Ÿ’ต๐Ÿ’ต .he always tried to crush her dreams…but still she saved him every time when he was in danger!!
He then came more closer to her and looked at her deep brown eyes๐Ÿ‘€.he wanted to say sorry to her! He saw her broken thumb ,with a heavy heart ๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”he touched her thumb๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Ahhhhhhhh!!!!! Chakor screamed in pain! Now chakor was fuming in anger and suraj was like ab tho mera murder hogha๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚.
Chakor : tumhara problem kya hei๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆdimagh kaarabh hoghaya hei kyaaโ“
Suraj was saying Sss…Ooo..Rrr…but before he could complete she started ” vaise bhi khaarabh hone keliye ,tumhare pass dimagh kahaan hei๐Ÿ˜œ saari planning tho hamesha mujhe hii karne padthe hei” she said proudly๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž. And he was numb!
Suraj after gaining his sense shot at her “auuy madam tumhe thoo mujhe thankyou karne chahiye๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž
Chakor : Thankyou๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ voo bhi tujhee๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜she was controlling her laughter.
Suraj : mein ne Teri motti behen ko apne upar rakha hei๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž
Chakor : tumne imli ko motti kaha ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ…nehi chodunghi tujee!!
Suraj : ohh meri maa๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™ …rukhh…then suraj came near to her ,he put his arms over her shoulder and was acting like thinking!!!
Chakor : kyaa sochh rahe hauโ“โ“he asked him innocently๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…

Suraj looking at her from top to bottom and then looking at imli who is with vivaans from top to bottom said “sorry yaar๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™ mujhe bohot baadii ghalthi hoghayi๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Tumhe teekse dekhne me baad mujhe lagtha hei ki ,imli thoo slim beauty hei๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜”
Chakor : haan merit been SLI….chakor then realized what he meant and then stared @suraj and yelled SURAJ….๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

suraj smirked @her and was laughing holding his stomach๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Chakor then picked a stick from ground seeing this suraj ran for his life๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰and chakor was chasing him!!
Suraj who was running yelled ” bhagwan ki laakh laakh shukhar hei ki tum merit uppar nehi aayi bechara vivaans๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚uski halath tho dekhoo๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰.
Chakor : Tumne mujhe motti kaha๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ an thoo tum zinda nehi bachoghee!!
Suraj : meine kab kaha ๐Ÿ˜œ abhi toh tum kah rahe thee tum motti hau๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
Suraj said this while running just then he got a hit on his back๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
Now suraj was running and chakor was just behind him,lazy lad suraj who got tiers stopped running and immediately turned back and suddenly …….THUD!!!!!! Both was on the ground! Chakor on top of suraj…they share a beautiful but cute eyelock๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ‘€.They were lost in each other๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜.This was their moment.Even the sun ๐ŸŒž๐ŸŒžwas blushing seeing their closeness,so decided to get ready for his set! The wind ๐ŸŒ€๐ŸŒ€was blowing heavily showing its happiness ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰but ,due to him some of chakors hair strands coverd her face ,so suraj was not able to see chakor face properly.So he gently moved her hair ,just then his hard hand touched her soft face.Chakor was shivering and butterflies๐Ÿ๐Ÿ were flying from her stomach but suraj was in Electric shockโšกโšก.
They then realized their position…..
Suraj : abhi toh meine bhagwan jii she thankyou kaha tumhe mere upar na rakhne keliye ,shayyadh voo nehi sunni๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚.
Chakor then showed him a pout face and playfully hit him!!
Both of them got up and then started laughing together๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡.
Birds were flying in the sky going back to their nest,soo our Sukor also moved their way to out house….but wait where is vimliโ“โ“they are busy in romancing ๐Ÿ’‘.so Sukor catch hold of the love birds and all the four birds ..continued their journey…that they have just started!!!!
—————————————————————————–I hope all of you like the OS .This is my first attempt so sorry for mistakes and typooss๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…plzz soo give suggestions to improve!

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25 Comments
  1. Please write in English I love sukor pair I don’t know Hindi

    1. Liya

      Hai mala๐Ÿ˜ ! I will surely write in English ,when I write again๐Ÿ˜Š.

    1. Liya

      Thankyou sri๐Ÿ˜

  2. Write in English please

    1. Liya

      Thank you for your suggestion๐Ÿ˜ ya I will write in English next time๐Ÿ˜Š

  3. yes liya write in english,its awsowe,actualy i am waiting for this type of sceens like sukor in forest in serial,you wrote exactly what i want thank u dear

    1. Liya

      Hai ramyasri๐Ÿ˜Š.Thanks for commenting๐Ÿ˜ I am also waiting for some fabulous Sukor scenes๐Ÿ˜‰ just love their cute njok-jhok ๐Ÿ˜
      Ya I will write in English !

  4. ShinyGeorge

    Fabulous please write. In english

    1. Liya

      Thankyou shiny George๐Ÿ˜

  5. A very good one.please translate in English.its nice someone did a good thing ,I was hoping for a sukor FC.keep going๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    1. Liya

      Ami yaar thankyou soo much ๐Ÿ˜ I will write in eng from next time lol๐Ÿ˜

  6. Nice make more like that

    1. Liya

      Thankyou ankhur๐Ÿ˜ …I will try my best to write a good one next time.

  7. Vinlora

    Fabulous os. …a much needed one….thank u so much ๐Ÿ˜Š

    1. Liya

      Thankyou Vinlora๐Ÿ˜ I am glad that you liked the OS๐Ÿ˜Š

  8. Its nice but i dont know hindi so cant be read it completely.write in english

    1. Liya

      Sorry nisha dear๐Ÿ˜ I will write in English from now on ! Thankyou for commenting suggestion๐Ÿ˜

  9. I can’t understand Hindi… can someone pls translate this to me in English

    1. Liya

      Vivvii I will write it in English next week,I having exams till Monday! Thankyou for commenting๐Ÿ˜

  10. Loved it liya , waiting for your next os love sukor

    1. Liya

      Thankyou sia๐Ÿ˜

  11. ShinyGeorge

    Hi Liya ,i am waiting 4 ur next OS . Please update soon.

    1. Liya

      Hai shiny George๐Ÿ˜ My next Os is only at its initial stage.lack of time lol…I will try to post fast

  12. ShinyGeorge

    K No probs

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