Love, betray and Devakshi (Episode 1)

Our story revolves around how Dev and Sonakshi got separated after two years of their happy married life by Ishwari and Radha Rani’s conspiracy. Dev and Sona were about to their family about her pregnancy but before telling that Dev throws Sonakshi out of the Dixit Mansion (will be revealed later)…Main thing is that Bose family also did not supported her…..
After 8 months, when Sonakshi was crossing the road, a car was about to hit her……but misses… Her labour pain starts and the owner of the car takes her to the hospital where Dev and Sonakshi’s daughter is born… After some hours, Sonakshi gains conciousness… She takes her daughter in her arms..she starts crying…
Sonakshi(looking at her daughter)(still crying):DEVAKSHI…

And seeing her crying the owner of the car consoles her…

Man:Hi! I am Rohan Raichand…Aapki beti bahut cute hai but aap ro kyun rahi hai (giving her his phone) aap apni family ko inform kar dijiye…
[ROHAN’S character here is played by RITWIK DHANJANI]
Sona(with confidence):Meri koi family nahi hai…
Rohan:But aapke husband toh honge na (looking at her vermillon)
Sona(with anger): Maine kaha na meri koi family nahi hai…
Rohan leaves the room…but stands at the entrance with the door partially opened…
Sona(looking at Devakshi): Jis family ne mujhe support nahi kiya, mujhe ghar se nikal kar raaste par laakar khada kar diya…..uss parivar se mera koi rishta nahi…ab nere liye sirf meri beti hai aur mujhe bas iske liye hi jeena hai aur Dev se ab mera koi rishta nahi hai,….

Rohan hears this and feels bad for Sona and thinks to take her to his home…

(INTRO: Sona is in Mumbai with Rohan and Devakshi and Dev is in Delhi with his family)
Sona: Rohan inn 10 saalon mein tumne meri aur meri beti ki bahut help kari hai…aur hume kisi bhi cheez ki kami nahi hone di…uske liye thanks…
Rohan: Oh ho Sona! Tum bhi na ek dum pagal ho! Hum dost hai wo bhi bestest toh phir yeh thanks kaisa…aur phir tum jis mukam par ho wo tumhe tumhari apni mehnat ki wajah se mila hai aur yeh mukam tumse koi nahi cheen sakta..
Rohan: Achcha yeh sab chodo parso hamari princess ka birthday hai kuch dhamakedar karte hai…

Sona: Ha! Parso DEvakshi poore 10 years ki ho jayegi…
(Rohan gets a callfrom his Personal Assistant who tellsa him that tomorrow he has a meeting in Delhi with Ishwari Communications…)
Rohan: Sona , mujhe kal urgently ek important meeting ke liye DElhio jana hoga….but main apni meeting jaldi finish karke waapas aa jaunga…
(Devakshi hears this……)
[DEVAKSHI’S character here is played by ROSHNI WALIA]
Devakshi: Nahi! It will take too much of time for you to come on time in my birthday party….Mujhe bhi Delhi jana hai….Iss baar ka birthday main wahi manaungi….
Rohan: Wow! What a great idea!!!!
(They give hi-fi to each other )
Sona: In Delhi???? No way… hum hamesha tumhara birthday yahi manate hai toh iss baar bhi yahi manayegein…
Devakshi: Mumma, pls iss baar hum mera birthday Delhi mein celebrate karenge… aap mere itna bhi nahi kar sakte…Maine aapse aaj tak kuch maanga hai….
(Sona eyes her)
Devakshi: Matlab aaj subah se kuch maanga hai….
(Sona smiles)
Sona: Tum bilkul Nikki ki tarah baat karti ho…

Devakshi: Mumma, Nikki kaun hai???
Sona (after thinking a momet)Arrey! Wo meri friend hai…
Devakshi: Mumma abhi mere summer vacations hai….isse meri vaccation trip hi maan lo…
Sona: Theek bhai! (With a lot of hesitation)par yeh ek choti si trip hogi only for a day…
Devakshi: Ha-ha! Ok mumma chalega..

Devakshi(in mind): Don’t worry mumma.. waha hum ek din ke liye nahi par ek month ke liye jayenge…
Rohan: Wow! That’s great! Thanks Sona….Ok princess we’ll enjoy ourselves thoroughly there! I’ll book the tickets….
(Rohan goes from there…)
Sona(in mind): Mujhe kuch bhi karna hoga taaki Dev mujhe nahi dekh paaye…I’ll call Riya and inform her that main sirf aur sirf ek din ke Delhi aa rahi hoon….
(Devakshi goes for packing)

Sona:Main ek din ke liye Delhi aa rahi hoon!!!



  1. Yashfeen

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    Nyc yr…thou unki shaadi ko ek hafta hi hua hai…bt ur start ws kamaal..I lyked it alot…bt have a doubt..y she informing riya???.. plzzz post nxt epi soon…vl b waiting

  2. Erina

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    Hey what a concept dear 👏👏👍👌👌seriously i was looking for this for many days on tu but today u gave me this awesome concept vala ff. Its truely commendable, amazing, mind blowing, awesome nd i’m qurious to know what is stored in ur ff so post soon Egarlyyy waitingggg. With love 💕💕💕Erina

  3. Maria

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    Wow different concept! Loved it very much!! But I didn’t get it why did she call Riya when she does not want to keep relations with anyone? Please do reply me.
    With lots of love😘

  4. Latha

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    It’s awesome and different one. I am very curious to know what is going to happen next. Loved it very much and waiting for next one…… post soon.

  5. Aaru

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    Awesome start..Mujhe to aisa lagta h ki main time machine se sab fast forward kr k poori story ek hi din mein padh lu..main itni eager hu

  6. Maleeha

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    Superb…….and amazing….😘😘👍🏻👍🏻💋😘😍😘☺️😘💋😘😍☺️😁……really…it was superb….a very different and great concept…..💋💋😘😍👍🏻☺️😍💋…..eagerly waiting for the next…..and Devakshi is so smart… Hum aik din….nhi aik month ke liye 😂😂😜

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