WHEN LOVE BECOMES OBSESSION….OS

WHEN LOVE BECOMES OBSESSION
Hello friends welcome back to lovely Sidmin’s OS world….
I hope you will enjoy reading story……..
Thank you soooooooooooo much for ur immense love and support till now…but now I’m really busy wid mine studies so unable to write my ff but will start in October so plz stay in tune…. And this story was written a bit earlier but didn’t posted so I’m posting it now hope you guys enjoy…..
So let’s start the Sidmin’s story with a beautiful smile on your cutie cutie face…………
STORY STORY STORY……………..
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A girl is walking on the street with lots of books on her hand….she had done fishbone plaits and wearing pink and white kurti leggings….now the camera shows her from front….she is wearing a big specs and bindi on her forehead….looking like a typical Indian girl….she walks and finally enters the college….now her face is reveal and she is none other than Twinkle Taneja the Chipkoo Taneja….yes this was the name given by her batch mates as she used to put oil on her hair…as soon as she enters the college compound everyone stares her and some were busy laughing and making fun of her…

Twinkle adjusting her spectacles look around where people were laughing like anything….tears were rolling down her cheeks….she wipes off her tears messily and in the process she bumped into someone….she was about to fall but as always hero comes in time to rescue his heroine and yes the person is none other than Kunj….Twinkle was hell afraid so she pressed her eyes tightly…but when she opened her eyes she was mesmerized to see a young good-looking handsome boy had held her by her waist preventing her to fall…..this was the first time when someone caught hold her from falling….she was lost in his brown eyes……Kunj lifts her up but Twinkle is still lost in him….
K (Concerns) – Are you fine????

Twinkle looking down nods her head in affirmation…
K (Forwarding his hand) – Hello myself KUNJ SARNA
T (While shaking her hand) – Myself Twinkle Taneja… (Smiles)
Kunj also smiles back…and he leaves from there while Twinkle keeps on staring him until he blurs from her vision…
T (Thinks) – He is such a nice guy. For the first time in my life a boy didn’t teased me, instead helped me (Smiles)….Kunj…
Twinkle reminisces the moment that happened few minutes back and had a bright smile on her face….she adjust her spectacles and precede towards her classroom when some group of girls and boys stopped her….

G1 – Hello Ms. Chipkoo where are you going???
T (Hell nervous and adjusting her specs) – I’m going to my class….
G2 – Oh hello…don’t you know the rule of this college??
T (Innocently) – Rule??
B1 – Yes rule….you have to complete one task given by us then only you can enter your class room….
T – What task….
Whole gang looks at each other and passes wicked smile to each other……
G3 – It’s very simple (Smirks) you just have to wear…
Girl3 took out bikini and hands over to Twinkle and says…
G3 – You just have to wear this and walk in front of us….
Everyone give hifi to each other and passed wicked smile to each other….
T (Tears rolling down her eyes) – How can I wear this it’s so short….I’ve never ever in my life wear this type of dresses….
G4 – Chillax…don’t worry….in our life we do once for the first time so this is your first time to wear this type of dresses…. (Smiles)
G1 holds Twinkle and drags her to washroom…she was about to take Twinkle inside the washroom when someone holds her hand….G1 looks up to see the person and he was Kunj….
K (Looking angrily to the girl) – Being a girl how could you disrespect other girls….people blame men for disrespecting girls but I think girls are the big enemy of other girls….
He jerks her hand off from Twinkle and holds Twinkle’s hand and make her stand behind himself….
K (Showing finger) – Don’t you dare to tease her again then you’ll see my worst side and I know very well you won’t like to see my worst side so better leave her alone…
G1 – But Ku….

K (Red blood shot eyes) – I said leave….
G1 was all miffed and leaves from there shaking her booty….while Twinkle stood there and tears rushing down her eyes…..
K (Anger) – If you’ll be like this then everyone will try to take advantage of you….at least try to stand up for yourself….many times there will be no one to help you at that time you need to help yourself….
Twinkle was listening to him bowing down her head….then she ran from there crying and wiping off her tears….
K (Confused) – Did I say something which I should not say??? Whatever I said was just for her betterment only….I think the way I said was wrong…I should apologize to her…. (He pats his head)
NEXT SCENE
Twinkle is sitting on the bench on the backyard of the college….the bench is beneath the tree giving shade to the bench…Twinkle is still crying vigorously….her both hand was clutching the bench and her head was bowed down…when someone sat next to her….
V – Ahem…ahem… (Pretending to clear her throats…)
Twinkle looks up and finds Kunj sitting beside her…
T – Tum…

Kunj ignores her question and took out handkerchief from his pocket and passed it to her…Twinkle looks at him with rosy nose and tired eyes….and then took it and wipes her eyes and then…………………………………………………………………………………. blows her nose off…..Kunj just looked at her in shock at her action…and then makes faces….
K (Making faces) – What did you do just now??? (Making puppy face) You just blew off your nose in my favorite handkerchief….. (Acts to cry….)
T (Innocently) – I’m sorry….actually with tears, nosey also comes free….
Twinkle gives his hanky….
K (Moving a bit away) – No…no… now it’s all yours….I don’t want it…you better keep it with you….
(Pause)
K (In one go) – Twinkle I’m sorry…actually I didn’t meant to heart you intentionally…it’s just I was unable to see injustice…and above that you were quite and not fighting back that is why my anger went on peak….
Twinkle eyes him lovingly….
T (Thinks) – He is so gentleman….he respect women also…he is so down to earth also…being most popular guy in this college but still he came to me just to apologize….
Kunj snaps his finger near her eyes giving break to her thoughts….
K – What happen???
Twinkle nods her head in “nothing”….he smiles at her…
K – Since we are friends so let’s hang out….
T – But where???
K – Just come with me…

Kunj holds Twinkle’s hand and pulls her up in a jerk so she lands on him…her hand was resting on his chest while his hand holding her waist….both of them look at each other… (Sajna Ve plays in BG)
After few seconds…Kunj breaks the eyelock and both of them composed themselves and look here and there awkwardly…whereas Twinkle was somewhere happy and smiling silently….
K (Breaking the silence) – Let’s go…
T – Yah….
Both of them left the place…
NEXT SCENE
Twinj walking the path and finally went to parking area….Kunj went to his bike and rode on it and wore his helmet….Twinkle looks at him anxiously…..
K – Sit…
T – I’ve never sat on the bike….I don’t know how to sit…
Kunj looks at her and smiles…

K – Don’t worry….when The Great Kunj is here then why to fear….
He let out faint smile…Twinkle also smiles back….
Kunj get down from his bike and showed her how to sit on it…Twinkle followed his step and rode on the bike….Twinkle was sitting holding back of the bike…Kunj was looking her nervous face through his side mirror and smiles at her innocence….
K (Smiling) – Twinkle, if you’re afraid then you can hold me…
Twinkle looks at his shoulder and then keeps her trembling hand….she closed her eyes and feel his body…Kunj looks at her and smiles….after sometime Kunj stopped his bike near small dhabba (Small shops generally situated on the highway)
K – Twinkle, this is my favorite place…whenever I’m very happy or sad then I always comes here and drink special coffee and refreshed myself… (Smiles)
T – So right now you’re happy or sad???
K – Well I’m very happy but my friend is sad…. (Winks)
Twinkle smiles….
K – You look good when you smile….
Twinkle stops smiling and stares him….
K – Why did you stop laughing???
Twinkle again smiles….
K – Chacha…
Old man – Kunj beta… (Smiles)
K – Chacha do garma-garam coffee…
O.M (Smiling) – Zaroor beta….

After some time he brought two cup of coffee in bhaar (Mud cups)….and both of them took it…
K – Do you know Twinkle the specialty of this coffee is bhaar….it gives different smell to this coffee…. (While sipping coffee)
T (Took a sip) – Yah it’s very tasty…. (Smiles)
K – I told you earlier…. (Smiles)
After drinking coffee they left from there…..Kunj drops Twinkle at her place…..
After that day college went off since third year examination started so basically college was off for 1 month…at that time Twinj used to meet regularly as Twinkle had no other friend except Kunj and Kunj also somewhere liked her company so their daily routine was to meet at park and from there they used to go for a coffee or some other place to chit chat….slowly slowly Twinkle fell in love with him…his closeness and concerned made her feel that Kunj also loved him….

NEXT SCENE
Twinkle is sleeping on her bed and reminiscing all her moments spent with Kunj…
Flashback 1………………
Twinj is sitting in the coffee shop…
Twinj were sipping coffee when Twinkle had froth moustache….Kunj wipes off her froth whereas Twinkle look at him lovingly……After that they went to college hand in hand….
Flashback ends………………..
Twinkle smiles and rolls on her bed….she grabs MIA her teddy bear…..
Flashback 2……………….
Twinkle was sitting on her balcony and reading books when someone comes to her balcony through pipes and he was none other than Kunj….he was holding a big gift packet and a packet also….
K – Happy birthday Twinkle…
T (Smiles) – Thank you…but how do you know that today is my birthday???
K (Smiles) – I’m your best friend and if I don’t know your birthday then I’m not worth to be your friend…achcha leave all this and come with me…
He drags her to her room…he forwards gift to her…she takes it and opened it and find a big pink teddy bear…she was extremely happy and in excitement she hugged him…and then she apart herself and then awkwardness fills the environment….Kunj breaks the silent…
K – I’ve brought cake and woh bhi chocolate cake for you…and you know what I’ve made this by myself….(Smiles)
T (Amazed) – Really????
K – Yup…let’s cut the cake….

Kunj takes out the cake and placed some candles on it…Twinkle was about to blow when Kunj stopped her….
K – First wish something then blow the candles….
Twinkle wished and blows the candles. She cut the cake and feeds Kunj…he also feeds back…..
Kunj stood up and went to deck and played song—- “SAB TERA”
He went to Twinkle and forwards his hand…
K – Shall I’ve an honor to dance with birthday girl….?
Twinkle smiles and both of them danced with each other…..
Flashback ends……………..
Flashback 3……………..
Twinkle was crossing road when a truck was coming on her way….but Twinkle didn’t saw it…It was about to strike her but Kunj comes on time and saved her….he pulled her closer…and hugged her tightly….
K – Twinkle, are you fine???
They break the hug…
T – Yes, I’m fine…
Flashback ends…………………
Twinkle was thinking and blushing badly when her father Rajbeer (Imagine Paresh Rawal) comes and sits beside her….
R – Ahem….ahem…
Twinkle comes out of her thoughts and was surprised to see her father sitting beside her….
T – Papa when you came???
R (Smiles) – When my princess was lost in someone’s special thoughts….
T – Papa….
R – Did you confess your feelings???
Twinkle nods in “No”
R – Then for whom you’re waiting for????
T – Papa, I’m a girl and how can I propose him???
R – Twinkle we are living in 21st century and above that you’re Taneja so you can change the trend and be the trendsetter… (Smiles)
Twinkle smiles and hugs him…
T – Papa, I love you…
R (Teasingly) – So who loves Kunj…???
T – Papa…
Both of them smiles….
NEXT DAY
Twinkle calls Kunj…
T – Hello Kunj, can you meet me tonight at Hotel Sidmin…???
K – Yah sure….is there any important thing???
T – Meet me sharp at 8:00pm…
They end the call…Twinkle smiles…..
She get herself ready and went to Hotel Sidmin…she decorated terrace beautifully….and went to change her dress and comes out wearing black boat neck plain gown with silver choker and long gloves and small crown on her hair and specs…she was looking gorgeous….she looks at her watch which shows five minutes are still left for 8:00pm. She waited for him impatiently and finally clock struck 8:00pm….She gets a call….
T – Hello Kunj ask receptionist about Mr. Gupta he will escort you…
K – Ok…
After sometime Kunj enters and was mesmerized by her….Twinkle smiles at him…Kunj comes and everyone left the place…now Twinj were alone over there…Twinkle went near him…and she sat on her knee and forwards rose in front of him….
T – Kunj, I love you….will you accept my love….
Kunj was shocked he didn’t know how to react….
K (Stammers) – Twi…nkle…. I love you but as a friend and I’ve never seen you like that….
Twinkle stands up and her eyes filled with tears….
T (Shocked) – Kunj….but you cared for me…you always treats me as a princess…as a girl friend…
K – Twinkle whatever I did for you was just as a best friend and you misunderstood as love…I have never loved you…in fact I loved someone…..
T (Teary eyes) – Who???
K – Alisha….
Twinkle now could not bear anymore and she ran from there crying bitterly…whereas Kunj stood numb there….

NEXT SCENE
Twinkle reached her house and went to her room and banged her door….Rajbeer understood that what might had happened over there so he gave her some space and next day he went to her room….
R (Shouts) – TWINKLEEEE………………
Twinkle was lying on the floor and her wrist was cut…he immediately called ambulance and took her to hospital….
Days passed by….and gradually 1 month passed by after that incident and Twinkle never went back to that college….Kunj everyday waits for her but he was left disappointed…now his eagerness to meet her raised and he decides to meet her so he finally went to her house….
DING DONG… DING DONG….
Rajbeer opens the door…
K – Uncle, where is Twinkle???
R – Come in…
They went inside…
K – Uncle…Twinkle….
R (Wiping his spectacles) – Beta after you refused her she couldn’t bear it and cut her wrist so I sent her NEW YORK to her aunt’s house so that she could forget you….
Kunj was in guilt as because of him…Twinkle has to leave her dad…as he know how much Twinkle loves her papa…after all after her mom died his father only loved her from her mom side also…..
K – I’m sorry uncle…it happened just because of me….she have to live away from her father….
R (Keeping hand on Kunj’s shoulder) – No beta..It’s not your fault…it’s just that you both don’t feel same for each other….I can understand… (Smiles) Would like to have coffee…
K – No uncle…I think I should leave now… (He folds his hand)
Kunj left from there and walks from there like a lifeless body…somewhere his guilt rose because he knew to live alone and far from his family….Kunj’s mom died and his father married to other women so Kunj left him…and from that day his father just send him money every month…..
Days passed….months passed….years also passed….
AFTER FIVE YEARS………..

Someone is walking and her bare leg is shown…camera moves up and shows that a girl is wearing micro mini skirt….she walks crossing her legs…camera moves a bit upward and it shows that the girl is wearing crop top….and now her lips is shown…then her eyes and finally her face is shown………and she is none other than Twinkle Taneja….yes there was a full transformation in Twinkle…the girl who was called CHIPKKOO TANEJA is now beauty queen…she is wearing glares instead of spectacles…she is looking more beautiful from before…or HOT would describe her better….boys are just following her….some are holding her shopping bags….some are holding juices and chocolates and flowers for her….she turns to him and passed flying kiss….everyone pretend to faint keeping their hand on their heart….Twinkle smiles looking at him….she sits in her Ferrari…and boys kept everything for her and she rode back…she stops near the mansion….she went inside….
A girl wearing red and black off shoulder dress comes to her and twirls….
G – Di….di…di…. your wish came true…. (Smiles)
T – Mahi…Relax and tell me properly…
M – Di….finally you are posted to India…
T (Excited) – What???
M – Yes di….Sarna Group of Industries had appointed you as an assistant manager….isn’t it cool…
T (Smiles) – Of course…Thank you…
M (Smiles) – Your welcome…so you flying to Mumbai tomorrow…
They hug each other….
NEXT SCENE
A man is shown wearing black suit…and golden TITAN RAGA watch….he is walks inside the office…everyone looks at him and greets him….he went to his cabin…
A girl enters his cabin and tells him whole day schedule…while the person is sitting facing back of seat to her…the girl leaves and the person rotates his chair and his face is shown and he is none other than Kunj Sarna….He smiles and takes out a frame from his drawer and look at it….
K (Smiles) – Finally my Siyappa Queen will be here soon…I missed you Twinkle…I know 4years back I did my life’s big mistake….after you left me then I realized that how much important you were in my life….he kissed her picture and keeps her picture back into drawer…
NEXT SCENE…
Airplane lands in Mumbai….Twinkle comes out of the plane…she is wearing light blue mini skirt and white top and above that light brown jacket…her hair is messily done…and UCB Glares on her eyes….and looking stunning….she is wearing black high boot till her knees….she elegantly walks down and went out the airport….she waves her hand to his dad…she went to him and hugged tightly….
T – I missed you papa….
R – I missed you too beta…
They left from there…
NEXT SCENE
Rajbeer and Twinkle enters lavish bungalow….
R – Twinkle I bought it for you…since you’re going to stay over her only….
T – Papa you won’t stay with me….
R (Sadly) – Sorry beta…but my whole business is in Amritsar but I’ll regularly come here…I promise (Smiles)
T – One weak you have to spend with me every month deal….
R (Smiles) – Deal….Achcha leave all this and you refreshed yourself and I’ll ask cook to make your favorite dish…
T – Thank you papa…. (Gives a peck on his cheeks)
NEXT SCENE
SARNA’S OFFICE
Twinkle pulls her car near Sarna’ office….and she comes out…she is wearing yellow pencil cut skirt till her thigh and white shirt leaving her first two buttons unbutton and yellow tipped high heels shoes and yellow hand bag….she is wearing pearl necklace and diamond earring….she left her curly hair open and kept it on one side and looking jaw-dropping gorgeous stunning and hot….she enters office…everyone gets up and stares at her….she looks at them and winks and blows flying kiss….here also everyone pretends to faint while girls gives disgusting look to her…she enters managers desk and Kunj was facing his back of chair…
T – Good morning sir…myself Twinkle Taneja. I’m appointed as new assistant manager….
Kunj turns his chair…and was mesmerized at Twinkle….she was completely changed what he saw 4 years back….Twinkle was shocked and tears welled up in her eyes….she was shocked and Kunj smiled at her…she turns and leave the place….she ran from there leaving everyone shocked in the office….she went to parking lot and cried hard….
NEXT SCENE
Kunj was smiling with his teary eyes after all he saw her lady love after 4 yrs….
K (Thinks) – Finally after 4 years I managed to find you…you don’t know Twinkle after you left me…how much I tried to find you but your father never told me more than New York….Twinkle four years I longed for you….now finally I got back you….you are completely changed Twinkle…but you changed for better…today you are looking smart, confident and hot…(Smiled) I hope you didn’t forget me…if you forget me for 1% also then also I’ll bring back my Siyappa queen…
NEXT SCENE
Twinkle is wipes off her tears and comes back to her attitude and went back to Kunj’s cabin….
T – Hello Mr. Kunj…
K – Hello Ms. Taneja…please have a seat…
Twinkle sits whereas Kunj also sat down…
K – Ms. Twinkle since your cabin is being renovated so for few months you’ll be sharing cabin with me…
He calls Shalini…his P.A…
K (smiles) – Come in Shalini…
He went to Shalini and hugs her…..while he saw Twinkle from his side-eye….he could see Twinkle smiling but somewhere she is hell jealous….
K (Smiles) – Ms. Twinkle…Shalini will help you…..
K (Looking towards Shalini) – Shalini you’ll help Ms. Twinkle nah…
S – Of course Kunj….. (Shalini)
T (Thinks and fumes from inside) – Is she her P.A or wife…look at her how she is being close to him…is this a way to talk to her boss…
K – Ms. Twinkle now you may leave as I want to spent some private time with Shalini…
T (Fakes smile) – Yah sure…
Twinkle leaves from there….
K – Thank you so much Mrs. Shalini for help….
S – Anything for you sir…after what you did for my husband this is nothing in front of that… (Smiles)
Shalini leaves…
K (Smiles) – Twinkle still loves me……
NEXT SCENE
LUNCH BREAK
Kunj comes out of his cabin and his eyes were continuously searching for someone special….finally his eyes stopped at someone….he saw Twinkle flirting with his office staff and they were too closed….Twinkle was about to kiss him…Kunj eyes became red and he went from there…Twinkle was about to kiss that person but Shalini came and stopped their moment…Twinkle gave her disgusted look and left the place….Twinkle enters Twinj’s cabin….did their work and left the place….
NEXT DAY
OFFICE
Kunj comes there but Twinkle was already sitting there…Kunj calls Shalini but she didn’t received so he called Jenny…
J – May I come in Sir…??
K – Jenny you live near Shalini’s complex so do you know why she didn’t come today???
J – Sir, actually yesterday while returning home after office she met with an accident….and still she is unconscious…
K (Worried) – What??? Achcha she is in which hospital???
J – Sir, City Hospital…
K – Ok. Thank you. Now you may leave….
K (Thinks) – I should meet her…
He calls and ordered flowers and fruits…and he left the cabin….
Twinkle smirks….
FLASHBACK
Shalini was crossing road when Twinkle speeds her car and hit her and went from there….she stopped her car a bit far and took out her head from her car window….
T (like a psycho) – How dare you touched mine Kunj haan….and how dare he hug you….I can’t hurt him but I can hurt you na…. (She laughs like a mad….)
FLASHBACK ENDS…
T (Playing with her hairs) – How can she touch him….and now again he went to her…I think she didn’t learnt her lesson…I’ve to take her class again….4 years Kunj…4 years Kunj I waited just for you and you’ll move on so fast hah…no way…this time I’ll not leave you my Baby… (She smiles…)
NEXT DAY…
OFFICE
Twinj are sitting in their cabin when Alisha comes in and hugged Kunj tightly…..Twinkle looks at them and fumes silently but Kunj could feel her anger…jealousy so he thought to add some more fuels….he kissed Alisha on her forehead….
K (Smirks) – Hey Twinkle, meet my fiancée Alisha Kapoor soon to be Alisha Sarna…
T (Smiles and with stone hearted) – Congratulation Alisha…nice to meet you…
A – Baby let’s go for a lunch today…what say???
K (Kissed her cheeks) – Amazing idea….Twinkle will you like to join us???
T (Faked smile) – No…how can I come between you two…after all she want to spent some quality time with you…
K – Alisha, Will you have any problem if Twinkle join us???
A (Smiles) – No…not at all…in fact I would love if Twinkle join us after she left college she never contacted us so now we can refresh our college life…
K – Since, Alisha has no problem so its final Twinkle is also coming with us…
LUNCH BREAK…
Twinj and Alisha left for lunch to nearby café….they had lunch and some past incident were refreshed….they came out of the café and was about to crossed when some person riding bikes and their face was covered with handkerchief threw some liquid on Alisha’s face….
A (Cups her face) – AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH…..
She felt down in pain…Twinj was shocked…they quickly took Alisha and crossed the road…Kunj took out his car while Twinkle and Alisha sat in the back seat…and they rushed to hospital….Alisha was in stretcher and she was taken to OT…
After sometime doctor came out…
Dr. – I’m so sorry Mr. Sarna…her 95% of her face is burnt…and we can’t make her face normal…the acid was very hard….
Doctor leaves from there and Kunj breaks down….Twinkle consoles him…
T – Kunj, I think we should leave…her parent had already come and we can’t stay over here….
Kunj nods and they left from there….
NEXT SCENE
Twinkle is standing near a projector where Kunj’s photos are displaying…she touched his lips…
T (Madly) – Kunj, today you did very bad…look your one wrong action and what happened to Alisha…how can she come near you…and above that you kissed her forehead…now look no one will ever be able to kiss her on her forehead….now no one will kiss her face only….baby you should not have done this….only I can touch…feel you…kiss you and hug you…
Twinkle leans towards Kunj’s pic and kissed his lips….and smiles looking at him….
NEXT SCENE
OFFICE
Kunj comes out of his cabin and addressed to everyone….
K – Attention everyone here….congratulation to everyone…today we became top 1 industry in India and soon we’ll be no 1 in the world also… (Smiles) So guys it’s time to celebrate so tonight we’re going MYX to celebrate…
Everyone claps and congratulate Kunj for success….
NEXT SCENE
MYX DISC AND BAR
Twinkle enters disc wearing black backless short dress till her thigh….she had put red hot lipstick and big ring on her earring and wore palm ring…she was looking stunning….she straight went to bar and gulp two shots and went to dance floor and dance with all the colleague….
Here Kunj enters wearing black zipped shirt and black jeans and as always looking dashing…he looks at Twinkle who was dancing with all the boys which made him jealous and he went to bar and ordered drink for himself….he gulped 1,2,3,4….8 shots….and went to dance floor…he went to Twinkle and pulled her closer and danced with her sensually…they danced for hours….Kunj again went to bar and had some shots….waiter smirks and gave him shots….Kunj drank and went back to Twinkle and danced for a while and pulled her and went out from there…he took her to his car…and he drove off…he stopped his car in the middle of the road…he opened his driving belt and leaned toward Twinkle and pulled her closer and kissed her….finally his lips met her lips…Twinkle also gave in…both of them passionately kissed each other…Kunj pulled her and she sit on his lap widening her leg…..his hand was measuring her soft waist while Twinkle’s hand was busy in caressing his hairs….after sometime they pulled out…and smiles at each other….again Kunj pulled her and start kissing her lips and from one hand sliding down her dress down…as soon as she left his lips…he went down and started to kiss her soft neck and shoulder and perfectly placing his love bite making her moan his name….after sometime they pulled back and she composed herself and Kunj started to drive…both of them were blushing and smiling….finally they reached Kunj’s mansion….Both of them comes out of the car….Kunj went to Twinkle and picked her up in his arms and took her to his room….Kunj threw her on the bed and come upon her….and the screen blurred….
NEXT SCENE
The room was shown which was fully messed up…dresses were scattered all around….now the bed is shown where a girl is sleeping showing her bare back to ceiling and a boy is also sleeping showing his bare chest and his hand is kept on girl’s bare waist….the camera shows her face and she is Twinkle who is sleeping with a smile on her face and the boy is Kunj who also had smile on his face….Twinkle open her eyes and smiles but her smiles fades away when she saw herself nude…she turns and looks Kunj was sleeping beside her and his hand on her waist…Twinkle jerk off his hand making him awake and she covered herself with blanket….Kunj also wakes up and look at himself and couldn’t remember anything that happened last night…..he looked at Twinkle who was crying….he keeps his hand on her bare shoulder….but she again jerks his hand off…
K – I’m so sorry Twinkle….I didn’t know how all these happened…trust me I never wanted to do all these like this…
T (Crying) – What do you mean Kunj Sarna hah!!!
She gets up from there and took her dress and went inside bathroom….after sometime she comes out wearing her dress till then Kunj also wear his dress….Twinkle was still crying….
K – Twinkle…I’m sorry…
T – What sorry hah??? Whatever happened yesterday can you change haan?? No then what will I do with your sorry….you ruined my life….and now who will marry a girl who had slept with other men…. (Cries bitterly)
Kunj comes to her and hold her hand tightly and dragged her out of the room and took her to the corner of his house where Idol was placed…he went near it and took vermillion from there and put on her forehead making Twinkle shock….she stand still….
K (Shouts) – I’ll marry you….now no one will point finger on you…and we didn’t do anything wrong….I know you still love me…and so do I….after you left me I realized my love for you….four year damn it…four year I longed for you…what do you think your becoming an A.M at my office is co-incident no…I purposely appointed you so that I can make you mine…and you think I’ll leave so easily…no….never….
Kunj hugged shocked Twinkle….
T – Then Alisha and Shalini….
K (Smiles) – So you noticed…both of them are already married to other person and even had children…
Twinkle was shocked and somewhere guilt arises….
K – They just acted in front of you to make you jealous but you’re so stubborn that you didn’t let out your feelings for me…though I could see your anger in your eyes but you gracefully hid it through your faked smile….
T (While breaking the hug) – So it means you knew that I still love you….
K (Smiles) – Of course…my sweet heart…
Kunj gives peck on her lips while Twinkle blushes….
K – Get ready we’re going mandir to marry….
T – But papa…
K – Don’t worry. We’ll marry in front of him once again…do you have any problem marrying me twice….
Twinkle blushes and nods in “No”
K (Smiles) – Achcha you get ready…
T – But I don’t have any Indian dress…
Kunj thinks for a while holding his chin….
K – IDEA….first we’ll go for a shopping and then we’ll go mandir…
T (Smiles) – Fine…
Twinkle leaves from there but Kunj calls someone and prepare everything needed for marriage….
NEXT SCENE
BATHROOM
Twinkle is taking shower but her eyes shows guilt, pain clearly….but his filmic stunt brought big smile on her face…she shooed off all negative thoughts and comes out in Kunj’s bathrobe which was bigger than her size….bathrobe was slipping off her shoulder continuously….she was staring herself in his mirror when Kunj came from back and hugged her tightly….he kissed her wet neck…she smiles and relish his each touch….his hand went to her rope of bathrobe….he was about to open when Twinkle stops him and nods in “NO”….she freed herself from his clutch and went to another room and wear her dress….she comes out from the room while Kunj was waiting for her….both of them went to shop for their marriage…after searching they bought their dress…and from there they went to jewelry shop and bought mangalsutra and some jewelry and rings….there only Kunj made her wear ring and they exchange ring…after that they went to parlor where Twinj changed their dress and she did her bridal makeup and was looking gorgeous….they head to mandir…
MANDIR
Twinj took seven vows and then Kunj filled her forehead with vermillion and then finally mangalsutra….then they took blessings from pundit ji and left for Kunj’s Mansion….
KUNJ’S MANSION
Twinkle was sitting on the center of the bed…covering her face with veil…Kunj comes in and looks at her lovingly…he removes her veil and then screen blurred……
Months passed by and everything goes well…..they had a happy moment….Kunj hone’s ring…
K – Hello…Ok I’m coming….
NEXT SCENE
Kunj went to police station…
P – Mr. Sarna we found the person who threw acid on your friend….
K – Thank you sir….can I meet him???
P – Yes of course…
Police escorts Kunj to the culprit…
K (To the culprit) – Why did you throw acid on her??? What enmity you’ve with her….???
C – I won’t say anything…whatever you want to do you can do but I’ll not say anything…. (Evil smile)
K (To police) – Sir, if you don’t have any problem then can I handle him in my way???
P – Of course you can…
K – Thank you sir…
Kunj black mailed the person….
C – Twinkle Taneja told me do all this….
Kunj was hell shocked and tears were flowing from his eyes….he was confused as to why Twinkle did all this??? Many questions were revolving in his mind….and all the answer was with Twinkle only….he gets up from there and asked the police to leave him….
NEXT SCENE
Twinkle was sitting in the hall room when her phone rings….
T – Hello…
V – Madam me…Vicky here…
T – Yes Vicky what happen??? Why are you so tensed???
V – Madam Kunj bhaiya got know everything what you did with Alisha Ma’am…
T (Tensed and Angry) – How come he get to know???
V – I told him…he black mailed me that if I won’t tell him the truth then he would killed my family and no one listen my cry…so in tension I told him the truth….
T – What nonsense….now just go to hell…
She cuts the phone in anger and walks left right….she was thinking what to do…now Kunj will hate her and she couldn’t be able to bear his hatred….
NEXT SCENE
Kunj is driving car…and continuously the words of Vicky was revolving and he couldn’t bear it….he stopped the car in the jerk and cried out loudly….he felt a bit relieved…he went back to car and finally reach Kunj Mansion…
He enters the house and…
K (Screams) – TWINKLE…. TWINKLE….. TWINKLE….
While shouting he reached their room…
K (In slow and shocked voice) – TWIN..KLE….
He runs inside the room where Twinkle was laying on the floor and her wrist was slit…Kunj went near her and put her head on his lap….He keep on patting on her face while taking her name “TWINKLE”…..After sometime Twinkle opens her eyes a bit and with great difficulties…
T – Kunj….
K (Tears gushing out) – Twinkle…..what have you done….???
T – I’m sorry Kunj…I was unable to see you with someone else….I’m sorry….please tell Alisha and Shalini sorry from my behalf….
Kunj was just crying….tears had no bound…it was flowing like a new river with full force….
T (Teary eyes) – Kunj…do you hate me???
K – No Twinkle…I can’t hate you…I was just angry with you that’s it…nothing will happen to you….
Kunj was about to take her in his arms when Twinkle stops him….
T – No Kunj my time is over…no one can treat me…I’ve cut my hand with poisoned knife and till now it had spread in my whole body….but I’m glad that I’ll sleep in peace forever because my love is not miffed with me….and I’m the world’s most fortunate girl who will in her love’s arm….Kunj please kiss me….
Kunj was crying but still he leaned towards her and kissed her….she also gave in….but after sometime she didn’t respond…Kunj apart his lips from her….she was still….she was no more…she had left him forever….Kunj tears were flowing….the whole room witnessed their love for each other…their last kiss…..Kunj kept on crying and screaming her name….his scream…his pain…was heard by everyone….his pain melts cloud also and the clouds also cried for him………..
NEXT SCENE
OFFICE
Kunj is now having beard….he looks more aggressive rather than chocolate boy….he was walking when a girl carrying lots file bumped into him….she was about to fall but hold her on time….the girl face is shown and what is this??? She looks like Twinkle….Kunj was lost in her….after sometime he lifts her up….
K (Shocked) – Twinkle…
G – Sorry sir….My name is Jasmin Bhasin…new assistant manager of Sarna’s industries…..
Kunj left from there in shock….Jasmin enters his cabin but her leg entangled with door mat and was about to fall again but again Kunj comes in time and rescued her….Jasmin was in his arms and their eyes meet…………..
THE END……………………
I would like to dedicate this story to one of mine dear friend…..I would be obliged if they read………….
MORAL
Loving someone is good but being obsessive is harmful………..
True love never ever can be separated….If separated also because of any reason then also one day they will be together….if not here, then in another world……..
FRIENDS In this story Twinkle loves Kunj but her obsession towards him led to nothing and she had to leave her life….but Kunj who truly and purely loves Twinkle get her lady love in Jasmin…..yes your true love will bring your love back but if you choose wrong path just to get her/him then your love is not true because you don’t have faith in your love…..

Hey friend,
1. Did you like this OS????
2. Was I able to show the obsessive lover in Twinkle’s character????
3. Is this OS different from my previous OS’es????
4. DID you like the end of this story??? Is that appropriate???
5. And my thought about obsession and true love is right or wrong???
6. Did you like Twinkle death scene where Kunj and Twinkle’s pain was shown….love….?????
I know I’ve asked many question to you all but please do try to answer it as I’ll be obliged to read your opinion on this story…….
Thank you so much for reading and investing so much of your time in it……..
BE HAPPY AND KEEP SMILING
LOVE YOU ALLLLLLL………………..

24 comments

  1. Sara28

    |Registered Member

    ÙOh my god shamz is that you? That’s why I was reading it and thinking who else can write this exceptionally? Wow this was sooooo good from funny to suspenseful to the many unseen twists u really nailed it. Like I can’t explain it anymore. Sham u came back with a bang and what a bang it was indeed!

  2. Meeta

    |Registered Member

    I knew it was you Shamz.
    Yesterday only I was thinking about u n saby.
    Wow.
    That was bliss.
    Sajna ve after so long.💞
    Write more please

  3. Sujina

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    shamz…i missed u…n thnks 4 dis os…
    os was superb…
    u fully did justice 2 tw as obsessive girl…
    surely u showed true love is worth than obsessiveness…like in real tei
    end was nice as at last kunj found tw in jasmine…n u showed true love can never loose…its immortal…
    tw death n their pain made me emotional…
    love u n ur writtings n plz don quit tu…coz i loce u

  4. TwinjSidMin

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    Shamz I missed you and your writing soooooo much…as usual again you nailed it girl…fantastic OS…Shamz I’m eagerly waiting for your ff TashanEDewangi plzzzzzz dear try to post it soon…

  5. Ayu

    |Registered Member

    That was awesome!!! Shamz really glad ur back!!!! Yaar u showed it soo well…everything was beautifully depicted…i could feel the love..the obsession!! Muaah😘😘

  6. SIDMIN-Daamini

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    Omg shamz 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱 kahaan se aate hain aise ideas…….I don’t have words to describe n really it made me cry when in last part of twinj when twinki cut her wrist …….yaar tum jaisa koi ni …………..tum mahaan ho ……..Plzz aise hi itne achhe….oho main bhi kya kehri hun achhe …….aise amazing os likhti raho …tum mere par bohot mehrbani karogi ….thnx for such an amazing os ….everything was described perfectly …love u 😘😘😘

  7. SidVee

    Wow mind blowing os.. really loved it.. you’re a fantastic writer.. n abt ur qns:
    1. Liked? I loved this os
    2. Yup twinkles obsession was shown brilliantly
    3. This os was very much diff from other os’s
    4. Loved the ending where kunj got tw back in form of jasmin
    5. Ur thought is absolutely correct
    6. Yup love was definitely there

  8. Romaisha

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    Your intro always makes it clear to me that yes, this is the wonder maker Shamz!!! ❤😂
    Di Haa your os was different! And entirely blissful to read! It was just super cute and amazing! 😊
    Loved it to the core… The way u portrayed his feelings and everything was perfect! 👌
    Eagerly waiting for u to post ur ff 🙂

    Bye
    Loads of Love from Romaisha 🙂

  9. Fan

    |Registered Member

    Awesome os shamzz!!!..u know after reading the first line of this article i was sure that this os was written by u..very unique os..i loved it..

  10. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hey Shamz,
    Sorry for commenting this late. The OS was superb. I loved it.
    About your questions,
    1) I loved it.
    2) Yep, Twinkle’s obsessive character was portrayed very nicely.
    3) This OS was completely different from all your previous ones.
    4) The end was just perfect.
    5) Your thought about obsession and true love is completely correct.
    6) The last scene of pain and love was appropriately portrayed.

  11. Saby

    Shamzuuu….
    Uh knw I always say…this
    Bt again here I go…
    A very unique piece of writing….
    Obsession a emotion hard to portray…
    Bt seriously uh uh did it shamzuu…
    Nice and uniqueness ki height yaar seriously… Loved it… Atlast wen Jasmin came it brought a smile on my face that its not a sad ending bt a to b continued type ending…
    Lovely
    Amazing
    Wonderful
    Incredible
    Unique
    And keep giving such amazing ones….
    I m not at all active this days on tu.. Just like uh… Thanks for sending me such a brilliant work and I m again gonna say… I love it very much😘😘😘 and love uh too shamzuuu😻😻😻

  12. Shakti

    This story made me so emotional that I feel tears trying to jump out….whenever I renenbrrcyhis story…
    Superb…Painfully beauty story

  13. Baby

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    oh my god shamz di i m speechless
    itne questions abhi toh i ant answer bt fir kbhi
    it was amazing fabulous n yah diff as well n
    m missing u sooooooo mch cant w8 for october n ur ff
    di post nxt asap w8ing n it was beautiful yeah twinkles charachter u were able to portray it very nycly luvd d death wala scene n bhot rona bhi aaya wow……………..luv u di n missing u alot……….

  14. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Hey shamz I know I am very late but kya karoon tym hi nahi milla padhne ke liye……nd I am so damn sorry for commenting this late

    The Os was just superb…..just like every writing piece of urs
    Nd d way u showed d obssesion part was phenominal
    Loved d Os

    Post ur ff sooon

  15. Sanjanaagrawal

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    Awesome ….
    1.yup of course ….
    2. Yes but u can show it more better …
    3. I had not read ur previous ones …
    4.yes it can be more better ..
    5. Yes ….
    6.yes ….

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