When my love became MINE forever… (shot 2) by Neptune…

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Helllllllooooooooooooo my dear sweet swasanians…..

How are you all??? Hope you all are fine….

So sorry for being late.. I know I promised this part earlier but couldn’t make it out…

So now without wasting any further time let’s start with today’s update….

THE DAIRY DEN….

Sipping her chocolate milkshake with ice cream and choco chips, swara closed her eyes ravishing it’s taste…

It had always been her one of the favourite desserts and drinking it sitting in the dairy den gave her extreme pleasure…

She tried to maintain her normal, happy expressions as she didn’t want to show Sanskaar or anyone else how much hurt she was…

How much it was burning in her heart, her nerves to see that kavita so close to Sanskaar almost holding his arm though she just resting her hand on his arm, swara knew exactly what she was trying to do…..

She began to feel jealous, she began to envy her seeing her sitting close to her only best friend and the love of her life….

But other then all these superficial feelings the one feeling that was fondling deep inside her…. causing her eyes to become moist everything she sees them so close was HURT….

But then she was SWARA… who could do anything and everything for the happiness of her loved ones…

So she just forced a smile to the person sitting right opposite to her and adjusted her specks properly….

On the other side sanskaar was sitting with a poker , irritated face….

First of all this kavita who was sticking to him so close as if he was a sweet and she was an ant thought he….

‘Okay okay bad example’ he thought in his mind….

But he couldn’t think of any other example either….
As soon as his gaze shifted towards swara who was eating the ice cream milkshake an instant smile spread on his lips….

Arghh how much innocent, cute and naive did she looked…..

He was Starting at her innocent face with a soft smile on his lips when suddenly something hindered his beautiful view and his eyes became red with anger….

He was literally glaring at the person sitting opposite to his shona…

The person was rohan, rohan mehra
Kavita’s so called cousin who came to meet her ….

But since she wanted some privacy with sanskaar so she requested swara to accompany him…

Now since swara was too innocent to understand what plan was cooking up in kavita’s mind she just nodded with a blank questioning gaze…

But sanskaar was looking at both the cousins with a narrowed gaze…

While his eyes literally popped out and he shot a burning glare towards rohan when he literally held swara’s hand and dragged her towards the adjacent table…

Now when both of them were sitting together with swara trying to enjoy her ice cream and that rohan staring her constantly….

Sanskaar immediately fisted his hands seeing it…

He was looking like he was going to burst any second seeing him staring his shona…

But kavita was again and again trying to divert her attention to herself which was irritating him as hell….

He was literally fuming in anger seeing that chipku chipaklal sticking to his swara….

On the other side swara who was aware of rohan’s gaze on her was being highly uncomfortable under his gaze….

She wasn’t liking it at all but decided to stay silent as he still hadn’t done anything about which she should complain….

But rohan’s actions were saying some other things only..

He tried to hold her hand many a times but swara escaped from it smartly….

Having enough of his cheap acts she decided to leave from there immediately…

She stood up from the seat with a jerk…

While rohan looked at her with angry and worried expressions, kavita too had the same expressions on her face..

While Sanskaar was confused….

Swara decided to meet sanskaar once before leaving…

She went to him, she was little scared…

Swara : (in a low voice) Sanskaar.. am going home…

Sanskaar: (concerned) why shona… what happened… are you well… come let me also come with you….

Swara: no.. no.. Sanskaar… you stay here.. I will go…

Sanskaar: but swara….

Kavita : let it be Na Sanskaar…after all she’s not a kid that she can go alone… you should focus on your life too Na.. and even we need to spend a little time together right…

She said this I a straight way looking at swara with narrowed eyes…

Sanskaar was just going g to protest her but now it became too much for. Swara and she ran from there murmuring a bye…..

While sanskaar just stared at her disappearing form with emotional, sorry eyes…..

Few days later …..

Sanskaar and kavita were coming closer to each other….

Their closeness was hurting swara a lot…
On the other side rohan was mentally and physically torturing her…

His cheap gaze, his attempts to touch her in any way….
Though swara was smart enough to avoid him and to handle his vain efforts but still she was becoming weaker day by day…

It really disgusted her.. neither he would let her stay peacefully at hime, he would keep on messaging cheap things to her….

She desperately wanted to share her worries, her fears her agonies with someone…

She was missing sanskaar.. she was missing her best friend so much…

Sometimes she really wanted to shout, to cry so hard but then she made herself mentally strong and used to gulp her tears….

On the other side…

Sanskaar never did forget swara….
He loved her dearly.. he loved her madly.. he loved her to the core…

Yup.. you guys read it right…. SANSKAAR has always LOVED SWARA..

He deliberately used to spend more time with kavita so that swara feels insecure and jealous seeing them together and would confess her love to him soon…

He always knew that she felt something for him… at least a simple attraction..

But he has always loved her and he knew how to ignite her feelings for him….

What he didn’t knew was how much his love and his best friend needed him..
He decided to carry out his plan for more 2 days so that it would ignite her feelings a little more and then she would confess her love to him..

Thinking this he went to proceed to the college….

College

Swara came to the college all alone as sanskaar said that he was busy and had to pick up kavita too…

This added more to the miseries of poor swara…

She went to the college…

Only to witness kavita holding Sanskaar’s arm and he laughing happily with her….

She ran away to the canteen and sat there keeping a hand on her forehead taking deep breaths to control her tears…

But it was then only when she heard a voice which she really didn’t want to hear .

At least not at this time…

Rohan : hey swara.. actually u wanted to talk something important with you…

He said taking a seat opposite to her…

She looked at him blankly…

Rohan : would you like to join me for a date????

Swara’s eyes widened at first and then she closed her eyes tightly to calm herself down….

But before she could speak something else they heard a shrieking voice….

And it was from none other than kavita…

Kavita : wow…. rohan.. you like swara… that’s fantastic yaar.. isn’t it sanskaar???

She asked Sanskaar who was clearly in no mood ….

He was literally fuming, but still his eyes showed immense pain..

But before he could speak something kavita interrupted him…

Kavita: why don’t we go on for a double date … me and sanskaar swara and you…

She chirped happily….

Colour flew away from sanskaar’s face making him completely pale…
Rohan tilted his face obliquely and gave a wicked smile to swara who was looking at him with a horrified face…

She just closed her eyes and left a deep breath…. opened her eyes and gave rohan a sharp glare…

She looked towards kavita too with a glare for this stupid idea…

Swara : an so sorry kavita.. but I don’t think we can go ahead with this plan.. you see an much busy these days.. besides I wouldn’t like to be an obstacle between you and Sanskaar…

She said looking at sanskaar in the end to look at him with hurt and pain clearly visible in her eyes…

Only she knew how difficult it was to even utter these words…

While sanskaar looked at her with ‘like seriously ‘ look…

He got to know at that very moment that swara was thinking in a wrong way…

He decided to disagree to the proposal and confess to swara now or else it may cost him his love who was also his best friend and he knew how much ever she pretends but she was really very much hurt now and she was quite sensitive too…

But before he could speak something a strong and sharp voice interrupted him..

Swara : OK kavita.. umm am ready then let’s meet at 7 pm at dairy den…

Said she… though she said all this in her usual soft voice…
But sanskaar could sense some kind of determination and sharpness in it…

But still it didn’t help him to reduce his anger….

Rohan : OK then.. I will pick you up at 6:30 pm…

Swara just shivered with the thought of them in the same car…

But now even Sanskaar’s anger was no less….

Sanskaar: (gritting his teeth) no it’s ok Mr rohan.. I live just opposite to her .. I will pick her up…

He said giving him s tight angry smile…

Kavita clearly looked unhappy with his words while swara was looking relaxed and she was happy that after so many days she can spend some time with him…

Kavita : but sanskaar…

Sanskaar: (interrupting her) kavita no more discussions please…

Though kavita was still unhappy but still she decided to stay silent and nodded…

Sanskaar smiled at her thanking her….

Evening 6 :45 pm…

Sanskaar came to swara’s house… sumi welcomed him and they sat there chatting with him…

After 5 mins swara arrived there.. looking at him nervously biting her lips ….

To say that sanskaar was mesmerized would just be an understatement…

He stood up from his place and took a few steps towards her in a complete trance….

She was wearing a light blue coloured floral dress with her hair open and in a side maang..

Her hairs were smoothly curled at the end.. a light pink lip gloss and just an eye liner highlighting her big eyes…

She wore small diamond earrings….

She was looking like a real princess and this scene was heavenly for him…

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(Guys a humble request to imagine our princess in this look and Di tell me how did she appear to you.. she looks soooooooooooo beautiful… not only cute but she is the definition of natural beauty too)

And the thing that attracted sanskaar the most was swara’s eyes….

Yes she wasn’t wearing her specks and she was looking soooooooooooo beautiful to him…

Sanskaar came out of trance when shomi praised swara…

Shomi: shona.. you are looking so beautiful my bacha… (putting a black dot behind her ear) god keep bad eyes away from you…

Even swara saw sanskaar and admired him silently… her cheeks became pink instantly at his sight…

He was looking like a prince in his white T-shirt dark blue jeans and light blue blazer on it…

His hairs were jelled up slightly.. with some of them scattering on his forehead…

They both complimented each other so well..

A handsome prince and his beautiful princess..

PERFECT COUPLE… that’s what they made…

In the car both swasan were sitting in a rather silent way…

Which was really opposite to their nature…

But sanskaar was somewhat angry on swara for agreeing to go on a date with that stupid rohan..

But this was really opposite to her nature… she was a girl who didn’t like these dates n all..

Rather she preferred an arrange marriage more..

Just the thought of seeing her with someone else then him hurt him to the core then what would she have felt seeing him ignoring her for some other person and being so close with her…

He was so so guilty and so angry on himself for playing such a bad game with her feelings but then he knew she loved him and he would make her forgive him soon…

While swara was really nervous thinking about rohan and her plan to expose him…

Yup that was her plan to go on a date with him and then expose his cheap intentions to everyone…

But still she was scared.. she was strong but still any girl would feel nervous if all this happens with her…

They reached the dairy den and sanskaar came out of the car and opened the door of swara’s side..

She came out and gave him a tight smile for helping her..

They were going towards the door of the cafe when suddenly sanskaar remembered that he forgot his wallet in the car only..

So he ran towards the car asking swara to go inside…

As he bent to take his wallet his gaze fell on something..

Oh!!! It was swara’s phone lying on the seat only… he took it and thought chuckling that how they both always knew each other’s phones password and many times checked each other’s phones thinking that the other one was hiding something from them… but it never turned out to be so…

According to his habit.. he opened the lock in her phone and smiling started walking towards the cafe checking her phone…

He opened whatsapp and saw so getting which made him stop right in his tracks…

His smile faded as anger started to take its form in his till now soft eyes…

He clutched the phone tight seeing that jerk’s cheap messages in her phone…

And the thing that hurt him the most was that his bestie l, his love, his swara hided those messages from him…
How could she do so??? He knew she would feel so uncomfortable so nervous… so so much cheap reading such messages ….

He clutched he phone tightly and went in the cafe knowing why she had agreed to come on the date…

‘ this stupid girl… if she doesn’t know how to handle the situation can’t she share it with me… huh!! Always tries to become Jhansi ki rani’

Thinking this he went inside dairy den.. as he entered he saw his love sitting there nervously and silently while kavita and rohan were talking some random things…

But his eyes didn’t fail to notice rohan staring her with his cheap gaze…

Him trying to touch her everytime he got a chance…

He went towards them and sat beside swara gulping his anger down and staring at swara angrily..

While just blinked back at him with innocent eyes…

After some time….

Sanskaar and kavita were talking some random things sitting there while swara went to use washroom and rohan went behind her saying that he has to make an important call..

But what worried sanskaar was swara was taking much more time then usual…

He was becoming restless with each passing second..

He tried to go a few times but kavita was stopping him constantly…

But now it was enough for sanskaar….
His patience ended and he stood up hastily and went towards the side which had a few rooms…

He went and stopped near a room whose door was closed but not locked..

He went and opened it… and the scene which he saw was much more horrifying then he ever thought in his worst dreams ..

Rohan was forcefully trying to kiss swara…

J e went towards them and punched him hardly right on his nose ..

Rohan fell on the floor with a thud but this wasn’t enough to cool down his anger..

He kicked him again and again while swara who was in shock till now with shivering hands called police..

The police came soon and freed them and took rohan to the police station…

After they went away …

Swara looked at sanskaar with emotional eyes while sanskaar glared at her angrily and grabbed her hand and dragged her away from there…

He took her to an isolated place and left her hand with a jerk…

Sanskaar: (glaring at her) why swara? Why didn’t you tell me that that jerk was troubling you??? He was torturing you physically he was playing with your mind he was torturing you mentally and you didn’t find it necessary to tell me… why why why dammit????

He shouted at last…

Sanskaar: answer me now swara why are silent…. and wgat was your plan ha.. tell me what was your plan, to come with him on a date to go to an isolated place alone knowing that he will follow you and then you will record his words right???

Swara stayed silent at this…

Sanskaar: (shouting) yes or no swara??

Swara just nodded her head slightly …

Sanskaar: (ran his hand into his hairs frustratingly) bl**Dy … (stopping in between.. calming himself down( from these many days he was torturing you.. and you stayed silent why?? Why swara tell me…

And now this was enough for swara .. these many days she had bundled up everything inside her.. her hurt her pain everything.. she couldn’t keep it inside her anymore…

She burst out crying sliding against the wall and hiding her face in her hand…

Swara : (crying vigorously) am sorry.. am sorry… but you.. you.. we.. were bot there with me at anytime… you.. you were busy in your life with kavita.. how could I disturb you sanskaar… I .. I … I don’t know what to speak and what not?? Am wrong….am wrong in everything.. am wrong to love you.. knowing that you will never become mine.. am wrong for being so weak not able to handle myself.. am wrong to not able to control my feelings seeing you with someone else then me.. am sorry.. but am tired sanskaar… am really tired hiding my feelings…. sorry…

By now her voice was a mere wish per and Sanskaar was looking at her with various emotions in his eyes..

Happy listening her confession.. sad for hurting her… emotional hearing her love for him… and what not..

He quickly sat down beside the and engulfed her in a tight hug…

Hugging her as of she is his mist precious thing..

While swara cried more feeling his hug…

She just kept on crying along with him…

While he too kept on caressing her hair to calm her down…

After sometime when he felt her calming down..

He separated himself from her..

While she smiled sadly that he was going to leave her again..

But her eyes literally popped out from its sockets when she felt his lips on hers..

He was closing his eyeskissing her softly.. he took it slow yet passionate tightening hid hold around her waist..

He took her lower lips in between is lips lips and sucjed them slowly…

While she tried to respond to him equally..

They broke the kiss when it was almost impossible for both of them to breath…

He touched his forehead to hers after breaking the kiss panting heavily…

After staring her for 5 mins he softly kissed her forehead and whispered in her ears..

I LOVE YOU…

THE END….

Huff guys.. so here am ending it.. pretty long I guess..

Hope it was worth reading and I didn’t bore you people..

If so then am very sorry..

It was a really long one so I would be happy if you people comment..

Will be back soon with my stories or a new ts ..

Really hope you people like it cause it was my first attempt to write a ts and romance too.. ‘fingers crossed’..

Meet you all in the next part.. till then bubye..

Love you all..
LOVE SWASAN…

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34 Comments
  1. Marvellous

    1. Neptune

      Thanks a lot dear..

  2. Awesome dear

    1. Neptune

      Thanks a lot dear..

  3. Awesome

    1. Neptune

      Thanks a lot dear..

  4. Awesome dr

  5. Tamil

    It’s amazing dear loved it

    1. Neptune

      Thanks a lot Di..

  6. Awesome..loved it..

    1. Neptune

      Thanks a lot kumu dear…

  7. Can I get previous link of this

    1. Neptune

      Well I think you read the last part right?? Cause I saw your comment on it..

      Well let me try cause I don’t know how to give link using phone

    2. Mars

      http://googleweblight.com/i?u=http://www.tellytvupdate.club/when-my-love-became-mine-forever-part-1-by-neptune/&grqid=zSu8PnSF&hl=en-IN

      Here is first shot vidhuu sorry nepuuu tujhse bina puche post kardiya but mujhe pata hai tum Kaunsa gussa hone vali hai😁😁😁😁😘😘😘😘

      1. Neptune

        Ha ha ne to gusse se ho rahi hu… 😀😀😀😀😀😑😑😑😑😑😠😠😠😠

    3. Mars

      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜› nepuu

  8. Mind blowing….loved it.

    1. Neptune

      Thanks a lot dear…

  9. Super i like y story very much is not at all borning .

    1. Neptune

      Thanks a lot dear… thanks a lot for the appreciation dear…

  10. Mars

    Omggggg nepuuy it was beautiful…. The way you described swara’s pain just beyond words I literally got tears in my feeling her pain😳😳
    You are best in expressing emotionsπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ you nailed it baby.
    SwaSan look you had shown was Amazing.
    But sanskar should have cleared to Swara that he was acting and then got angry for sharing her pain but the way he was behaving and ignoring that’s why she was hesitant but the best part was he also love her tooooo goodπŸ‘Œ
    And at the end their Passionate kissπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯
    Such a beautiful lovely ts waiting for your next ts.
    Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz the dream I ever dreamed post karde I’m dying to read itπŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™
    Waiting for your other stories continue soon.
    Love you😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Take careπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

    1. Neptune

      Marsuuuuuuuuu thank you so so much for your sweet comment dear.. am glad you liked it…

      Am so sorry for being so late with the dream I ever dreamed…. will try to post it ASAP..

      So sorry for making you wait till this long…

  11. Samaira_khan

    Nepuuuuuuuu this was something beyond my imagination..loved each and single part of this.. U mailed it!! Seriously loved it and Swara Sanskar both were looking really hot and cute as I imagined… Both r perfect just perfect!! Huhh Kavita and Rohan go to hell hate them.. Swara ‘s pain seriously hunted me a lot.. Last confession was beyond amazing Sanskar ‘s love swara ‘s love.. Uff I have read more than 5 times ND I’m commenting after tht so sorry.. Loved it do come with such stories ur an amazing writer.. Plzz post ur other stories also.. I’m missing it.. Love u tc..

    1. Neptune

      Thanks a lot samu dear… am so so glad that you loved it thus much.. your words really encouraged me a lot…
      Will post my other stories soon too… lots of love to you😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘

  12. Bush1122

    Hi di….. no words to say how it was….😍😍😍😍
    It was such a mind blowing one…. the way u expressed Swara’s pain n all… was superb…. the way u portaryed swara’s pain… extraordinary….πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
    Eventhough Sanskar ignored Swara his care towards her… superb di… u just nailed it…..πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
    Sanskar scolding Swara for not sharing her pain shows his utmost care….πŸ˜€
    And how he understood her plan was cute and lovely….
    All together u just rocked it…😊😊😊😊
    Now waiting for ur ff if u r mine ur dreams are also mine…… IMPATIENTLY….πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™
    Plzzzz post it sooooooon

    1. Neptune

      Hey dear.. thank you so so soooooooooooo much for such sweet words..
      Am glad you liked it…

      Will try to post wurmudram ASAP… so sorry for being so late and making you people wait for these long…

  13. Rachna

    Awsm Dr….

  14. Awesome

  15. AnuAnn

    Nepuu… It was lovely ..my swasan😘😘😘😍😍..waiting for other ffs

  16. Awesome dear

  17. Soujanya

    Awesome..

  18. Awesome dear…….

  19. Gayathri.visu

    Mind blowing Neptuuuuuu…….Excellent! Loved the way u described Swasan’s feelings!!!

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