LOVE BEATS.. episode-11

hllo friends… I read through all of your comments.. I replied to that too.. I knew all are expecting some in expected things from me that why… all of you clearly notice the last line that I wrote on yesterday’s episode… now all of you understood what I am going to do right…. you all think that abhi and pragya are going to be separated… the reason for that is aliya and tanu they must plan something… in every story it happens right… but I don’t like the usual stories…. I want to do something different in the next part … of story… I just wrote that lines to knew your reaction make all you in some little tensed… sorry for that…. my dear sister riya… please don’t beat me… for that… and surbhi… I read through your ff.. and I seen you mentioned me about that… thanks surbhi for that…. I think some of you… thought that now what’s I am going to do… which is something different is it…. so to clear that confusion let’s go to the story…

abhi purab bulbul and pragya are in green room.. when abhi explained about their love story… they are get really surprised
bulbul : pragya… is this you who did this all? I can’t believe still now…
purab : ya pragya it’s true… when you tease abhi on that day… I feel that you are not what we seen on college… but the day and after that I seen that old pragya.. so I am confused… I don’t think you will do this much… actually you are better than this bulbul… if I knew your real character then I should love you…
bulbul :what?
abhi comes… no purab… pragya is my love… she will be with me…. if anything happens
purab: hey pragya… why are be silent…
bulbul : ya dear… I don’t see you talking too much…is this that he mentioned is my pragya
abhi : ya bulbul that’s my real confusion… every time I see her reading books or writing something.. I didn’t see her talking too much.. when she gave me a class on one day I really shocked because of this reason… then she gave me second shock in behaving with me like that… and after all knowing the truth I see fuggi in pragya…
bulbul : fuggi
abhi : ya… in all this talk she is just laughing no reply from her… her silence is not a problem for abhi…
bulbul : pragya stop your silence and spoke to me..

pragya : bulbul…. you want my answer na.. ya bulbul… you are not seeing the pragya which you knew… I knew I usually I don’t talk too much.. it’s not a matter for you… you are already settled with it… but the day I see him first.. hear his music… that’s the reason for my change.. his music his behavior his presence all changed me.. the pragya which is on sleep in my heart came out… I started to change myself in thought behavior attitude all because of him… because of his love… they both look each other.. ( allah warriyan plays on background ) purab and bulbul get teary eyed seeing their love….
purab : abhi and pragya… in my life I don’t see such a love.. even me and bulbul can’t love like you… you both are really made for each other… but abhi if aliya came to knew about it…
abhi : I can manage her..
this time making a shock aliya and tanu came there with a clap…

aliya : wow! Bhai! great! you are loving my enemy… I am shame on you Bhai… you think that I will not knew about it… I told you I will not come for your show… but Bhai… I can’t.. it’s my brother who is in first time in life going to do this show… then how can I neglect it… but… what you did…. all get tensed…
aliya smiles and says.. you gives me lovely bhabhi….
purab : what?
aliya : ya bhabhi… if she is my brothers lover and she is going to be my bhais wife.. she is my bhabhi… tanu also laughs..
purab : but..
aliya : why all of you are still looking tensed… I seen and heard all your conversation… my Bhai can’t get anyone better than she… ya it’s true she is my enemy but if she can do anything for my Bhai… then I can do this much for him… I thought that… you all do such a drama.. so we must..

tanu : yes abhi… I don’t think that… if someone can love like this… love has a power that’s power make us to melt the enmity..that we had for her… so pragya.. for this day on ward’s we are friends… she hugs pragya and bulbul…. abhi hugs aliya and aliya hugs pragya…. all gets happy…
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so what all of thinking now…. is this aliyas and tanus plan to trap her.. if one thought that I must go to change the story like this… if any of you think that it’s not possible… then it’s truly wrong… love has power… to change everything in the world… it can make a man bad or even good… so always find love in every thing that moment you will feel that the world is been changed for you…. so see you… let’s see in next episode… don’t think that I end this ff… I will continue my torture with love beats… ❤❤❤❤❤??????

41 comments

  1. rajesh

    Hey luv can change everything it is half true and half fake..because i never seen in my original life…so i never believe this statement is true….this is only my point of view…anyway ur ff is gud…

  2. Smiley

    Thank God now I got some peace haritha ….these days I was flying in ur story like anything …very nice dear

    • HARITHA

      |Author

      actually smiley this is not that episode that I wish to write after reading your comments and tension I changed it like this

  3. ino

    actually i’m not a Indian girl. but i usually read this all episode s.this is my favourite story.please continue it my friend.

  4. Divchan

    |Registered Member

    Hi haritha, episode was really good, like alaiya and tanu behaviour towards their love ,but some where I felt that narration and incident could havebeen little more better, I am sorry , itd not to hurt u, when ever I read these love beats I would feel a Josh , and sizzling chemistry between the scene , which I felt is missing…..its just my thoughts, sorry incase if I hurt u ma… take care and keep rocking

    • HARITHA

      |Author

      thanks divachan for your suggestion it doesn’t hurt me… It actually makes me happy… I will try to make it better as you wish

  5. Krish

    |Registered Member

    Awesomeeee yrr unexpectd twist my lappy has sme prblm yaar tats y i didnt comment in ur prevs epiiiiii really srryyy fr tat ya but i loved it yaar………….egarly waitng fr te nx epiiiiii………dr

  6. nannu

    u r right ……love can change any thing……………………………….& update is superbb yarrr………………………i loved it

  7. Vaishali

    |Registered Member

    awesome haritha dii it was really really nice pragya said few words but it was so touching loved it to the core dii

  8. Riyashri

    |Registered Member

    Yes it is true that your this sis is born naughty and crazy !! Becoming more and more crazier becoz of My Haritha Ji !!
    But how can u tell that i would beat u ???Now tell me Am I that bad ?? If so then Please forgive me na…….I can’t becoz u r My Pyaari Sis / Lovely Frnd na..Ok both mean the same !!
    I love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
    oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Much My Greenie…..So I would call all my Dear Frnds and Sis with a special name ……
    So decided to give u one which I thought long long ago………U r “My Greenie”………..sounds strange na…But I will tell u the reason…as far as I know Haritha means Green…and as u r My Cutie Sweetie Sis …..Green+Cutiesweetie = Greenie !! So how’s it ……………..Hope u like it Greenie !!!Sorry for the late comment ! Mujhe Maarf Kardo Greenie!! I am very bad at hindi just tried a line sorry if there are mistakes!!
    Love u Greenie !!!

    • HARITHA

      |Author

      my dear sister you are just amazing I just mean by beating that torturing you… I like that name my cutiee… actually now you are making me restless dear… in every episode I am waiting for your reply…. you are my sweet pyaari lovely sister… you knew one thing actually I write about a girl who is loving him and they communicate through letters… now I got one in which I am communicating through comments… every day you are giving me surprise… so much love…. if I don’t write The f2f what I really miss is my pyaari sister……. love u so much dear…. may god gives u all happiness in life…

      • Riyashri

        |Registered Member

        Aww…so much love for me !!! Live Happily !! Keep Smiling !! Stay Blessed Forever and Ever ………. Love u too Greenie !!!

  9. VarshaVenkat

    |Registered Member

    I dont think this will b an imp cmnt as I dont think dat im supporting d ff writers nowadays…..I come back frm my school by 4:30pm n I start reading all d ffs n tym goes on….ill study nthg by dat day……Im really sry for not cmntg these days as my spl class started……n todays was an lovely part n a nice twist by making tanu n alu a good characters

  10. Shiya

    |Registered Member

    Noce yaar haritha..!!!
    U always bring some new twist to the story..
    N i like that part it gives us pleasure to read..
    Loved ur ff…?

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