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Love in air: their cute proposal RagLak OS

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Hi friends…this time back with an os”Love in air:their cute proposal”…i hope you would like it…sorry haven’t proof read…

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A girl who is cooking something interestingly is shown…”aaj…I will surprise you with your favourite dishes…that too prepared by me”she grinned with full of love in her eyes…
Suddenly she hears a sound…she rushes towards her room…
“Areyy…tum bina..same like your father in disturbing me…”she whispers and lifts the big box that falls on the floor…
She picks up the things that fall over and put it in that box…while she was doing that works a small arms hugged her from behind…”mumma…it’s all happened because of you…you don’t even spend time with me from the morning…is anything special??”a small girl kissed her cheeks…
“oh no…mere paapu…sorry dear…today only me and your paapa got married…it’s been 4 years..”she hugged her and brings the album and make her sit in her lap and shows their happy moments…
She reminisces their each and every moments…

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A girl and a boy goes in a car to somewhere…suddenly that girl says”Laksh stop na…”
“no Ragini…i won’t…”laksh nods negatively…
“laksh plz…u know na if it’s raining i can’t sit simply na…plz Plz plz laksh…my sweetheart na…”Ragini pleads him…
“no Ragini…within 3 days we are getting married…we are having mehndi function tomorrow…if you catch cold means…what i will do…so no means never…”laksh makes angry face…
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Yes RagLak marriage gonna happen within 3days…both RagLak were neighbours and best friends from childhood…

They love each other but haven’t expressed…but they know about each other’s love…laksh is like her shadow…he cares for her,helps her from getting out of troubles when she undergo her so called adventures…
Ragini is a pilot trainee by profession and she is a bold,cute and adventurous girl…meanwhile laksh is an aeronautical engineer and he is inexpressive,handsome and an adorable young man…
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Ragini pouts puppy face…”Ragini…tum bina…ok but just 5 minutes…we don’t have sufficient time..”laksh stops the car…
“Thank you so much darlo..”Ragini hugged him and made a kiss on his cheeks…

Ragini goes out and enjoys the rain and starts dancing to and fro…”pagal ladki…”laksh chuckles…
Ragini sighs Laksh to come out…he nods negatively…she makes a pout…he comes out with an umbrella…
She holds his shoulder and they shared an eyelock…she grinned in between and snatched umbrella from his hands unknowingly…”laksh enjoy it…”ragini shouts and throws the umbrella…
Laksh tries to catch it but it went away…he is fully drowned…Ragini again starts dancing by shaking her head…he holds her wrist and twirls her and make a side move…they shared an eyelock…Ragini lost in his mesmerizing browny eyes…

“laksh within 3 days we are going to get married…but you haven’t proposed me yet…even though we know that we love each other…i want to hear from you…i love you laksh…”Ragini lost in her thoughts…
“oh hello…your 5 minutes quota gets over…chalo…”laksh drags her…
“laksh..laksh…please some more minutes..please”Ragini haven’t move a little…
“okay you won’t listen me…wait and watch..”laksh lifts her in bridal side…
“laksh…this is not fair..”ragini makes sad faces…
Laksh makes her sit inside the car…and starts driving…
“Achchoo”Ragini sneezes…
“see…you caught cold…it’s a result of not listening to me…have it”laksh gives her tissues…
They reached home…laksh makes Ragini go inside through the window of her room…because they went out without other’s knowledge for an dinner…

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Ragini comes back to senses when she hears sanju’s voice…
“mumma…see this big waala balloons…u and paapa na…wow…”sanju points towards RagLak pic who are skydiving…
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On the day of their marriage it’s seems to be 4’o clock in the morning…
Ragini texts Laksh to come and meet outside as promised by him as he lost the bet in mehndi…
Laksh comes to the hard nearby…”Ragini…at this time what are you doing here…if someone sees us together means…what will happen…”laksh drags her…

“chill baaba chill…”she pressed his lips…
“laksh…come with me..”Ragini runs towards his bike and starts it…
“is this the time for your ride…”laksh said angrily…
“no this time…something more you gonna different experience…”Ragini winked…
“oh my god…please save me from this girl…”laksh lost in his thoughts…
“I heard it…”Ragini grinned…
“what..”laksh got confused…

“haan…your mind voice…”ragini gave him a kiss in side mirror…
Ragini stops the bike…”Ragini…why we are here near the heliport…”laksh blinks…
Ragini drags him and they get into the helicopter…Ragini sighs the pilot to take off…
“Ragini…where are we going…today is our marriage…”laksh panics…
“laksh…please don’t spoil my mood..don’t get tensed…we will be back to home within 2 hours…chill na…”Ragini consoles him…
Ragini asks laksh to wear life jacket…”kya”laksh nods negatively…
Ragini drags him and both wears a single jacket and she sighs him to jump…
“Ragini…this is too much…no pull stop for your adventurer skills uh…playing with our lives”laksh gets nervous and his body gets sweating…
Ragini make a pout and holds his hand…she jumps…

“Whohoo…skydiving is one of dream..”Ragini shouts…
“for that you’re making me die alive….”laksh fears…
“chill laksh…i will deploy parachute when we reach the certain level…just hold my hands and feel it…”Ragini holds his hands and enjoys the cloudy effect…
She sees laksh eyes and lost in his eyes…

“Ragini…we reached terminal velocity…”laksh said in fear….
“Argghh..how I gonna spend the rest of days with this technical idiot…my friends already said…but what to do I lost in love…”Ragini gave a heavy breath and pulls the small pad attached to the chute…but it doesn’t deployed…
“ragini..what are you doing…pull it out…”laksh sounds nervous…
Ragini sighs him”we’re finished”
“oh my god…our life is gonna end uh”laksh shivers and shakes…
“don’t worry…who have this kind of life…we’re lovers and till the death we are together…hey na…how sweet…”ragini winks…
“but I haven’t expressed yet…this is my last minute..if I delayed means…there is no use…i love u Ragini”laksh hugged her and closed his eyes…
He hears her laughing…”what are doing”laksh then feels like floating…

Yes they were floating….parachute gets deployed…Ragini winks…
She just made a prank…because she want to hear from him…laksh blinks and understands later…
“I love you too laksh…”Ragini shouts like a kid…
He hugged her tight like breaking her bones…
“finally you confessed..”Ragini grinned…
Laksh makes a pout…
They safely landed in the drop zone near the beach…it’s sunrising time…they feel their love for each other…
Ragini’s friend gave her their picture of confession…
“dekho laksh…how cute na…”Ragini smiles and shows him the pics..
Laksh smiles seeing it…

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They get married happily and it’s been four years and as a gift of their love…sanju borns…she is the angel to them…laksh loves his beautiful queen and his little princess the most in this world…
Ragini hears the doorbell…

“paapa aagaye…”ragini makes sanju sits in sofa and went towards the door…she sees through the camera outside…it’s laksh…he is back from London after a week…
She slowly opens the door and hides…
Laksh pushed the door it gets opened…”Ragini…”laksh eyes searches her…
All lights are off…he switched on the lights…rose petals thrown over him…
“happy anniversary”Ragini hugged from behind…

“happy anniversary sweety..this and all I have to do…but it’s reverse in my life…am sorry”laksh kisses her forehead…
“I know laksh…i love you…don’t feel…”Ragini buries her head on his chest…
“Congo mumma and paapa”sanju wishes them…he lifts her in his arm and kissed her…
“paapa paapa…i want that big balloon…took me also…”sanju says in her sweet voice…laksh sees ragini…
Ragini laughs…

“like mother…like daughter…am finished”laksh panics…
She feed them both with the dishes she herself prepared…
“wow…awesome…you’re developing”Mrs.Maheshwari…”laksh congratulates her…
Ragini sighs to leave her hand..he gifted her a gold chain with heart shaped pendant within that”RL”is written…
She kissed his cheeks…”mumma for me..”sanju shows her cheeks…ragini lifts her and kissed her…
Happy family •••

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So how was the OS??do you like it??I know it’s too short…but just wanna share this idea that comes out…
Drop your views in comment box…
~Darshu

46 Comments
  1. Asw

    Nice keep going

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much Asw…am glad u liked it…

  2. awesome awesome lovely proposal plzz next part soon

    1. Darshini

      Thnks Nikki…glad u liked it…

  3. awesome nice mind blowing superb outstanding u r such awesome writer and u people are writing for raglak and thank u thank u thank u so much all raglak ff ts ss os and yaa plzzzz keep on writing and keep raglak alive and yaa I must say raglak ff ts as is getting decreasing but u people keep them and prove that Temish fan love them so much what so ever the situation and I hope that most of raglak ff reach till 50 plzz guys the writer update regularly don’t be late update daily or alternate day but plzzzz don’t stop or leave in middle as I saw. many raglak ff doesn’t have end thank u once again for ur precious time

    1. Darshini

      Thnks Nikki…

  4. cute os of our cute couple

    1. Darshini

      Tq gayu…glad u liked it…

  5. It’s fabulous dear

    1. Darshini

      Tq mintu dear…glad u liked it..

  6. loved it

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much Lisa…glad u liked it..

  7. MI_MAHI

    Super cute…

    1. Darshini

      Tq mahi…am glad u liked it…

  8. Superb…..

    1. Darshini

      Tq teito kun…glad u liked it..

  9. Sindhura

    Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq Sindhu 😊 am glad u liked it…

  10. superb os

    1. Darshini

      Tq malu…am glad u liked it..

  11. Cute os

    1. Darshini

      Tq lovely 😊 am glad u liked it

  12. So cute os dear and loved it a lot. Please write more Raglak stories

    1. Darshini

      Thnk u so much dear…am glad that u lovd it…

  13. Raglakholic

    Wow Akka…
    I totally loved loved loved it
    D way laksh said Ragini his feelings are totally hilarious
    Nd I liked the dialogue
    Like mother like daughter I’m finished
    I totally loved dis dialogue
    It’s too cute os
    Come back with new work on raglak akka
    Love you so much

    1. Darshini

      Thnks a lot da…it means a lot dear….
      Am glad that u liked it…
      Love u too dear…

  14. Astra

    fantastic… awesome,,

    1. Darshini

      Tq Astra…am glad u liked it…

  15. Dharani

    awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dharani….glad u liked it…

  16. Asra

    fabulous dear….lovely os….sanju and ragini r crazy…laksh dialogue semma…tkcr dear…

    1. Darshini

      Tq asra dear…am glad u liked it…tke cre too da..

  17. IQRA222

    awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq IQRA 😊 am glad that you liked it…

  18. loved it

    1. Darshini

      Tq Saranya 😊 glad u liked it..

    1. Darshini

      Tq teju 😊 glad u liked it..

  19. A.xx

    AMazing love them xx

    1. Darshini

      Thnks dear…glad you lovd it…

  20. Beautiful
    Outstanding
    Really cute concept

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much tani…glad you liked it..

  21. fabulous

    1. Darshini

      Thnks dear…glad u liked it..

    1. Darshini

      Thnk u latha dear…glad you liked it…

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