As long as you love me…SEGMENT #13

As long as you love me
Segment #13

“Thousand times you look at me
N thousand times I do so
This is so less than the love we have
Do u knoe so?”

☆Sarna Mansion

TwiNj reach home. Twinkle went to the room to change. She comes out of the washroom in a black netted saree with fluorescent pink border. She was struggling to zip her blouse. Kunj enters looking into his phone.
Kunj: Twinkle, wo mai keh raha tha ki……..
He looks at her n feels many arrows piercing right through his hearts. She looked Flawless with the Black mascara, the eyeliner and that smoky eye shade. The baby pink lipstick made her look hotter.

Kunj: You look hot!
Twinkle (widens her eyes): What?
Kunj:Sach hi toh Keh raha hu. Ab apni wife ko compliment bhi nii kar sakta.
Twinkle:Thanks. Uh huh! Yeh zip. Help me, Please.
Kunj (Archs his eyebrow): Sure, but ek condition par.
Twinkle:Jaldi bolo, Bebe would be calling.
Kunj: Okay, so I want your lips to taste mine.
Twinkle : What? Are you out of your mind, Kunj?
Tumhe pata h what are you saying? We’re best friends, idiot.
Kunj: I guess, you forgot that we are, now, more than that. We’re husband and wife, Mrs. Twinkle Kunj Sarna.
Bebe (shouting from hall): Twinkle puttar, where are you? Everyone is waiting.
Twinkle (shouts): Jii, Bebe aayi. (Mumbles) Theek h Kunj. Ab bas jaldi karo.
Kunj : It ni bhi kya jaldi Jaaneman. Kar toh raha hu.
Shayad tum bhool gayi mere dono hands m lagi hui h.
Twinkle: Oh, crap! Ab kaise?
Kunj: wait.

Kunj bends down and takes the zip in his mouth. He slowly zips it up. Whereas Twinkle feels on the seventh heaven with his touch. No sooner, when he finishes zipping it up, he moves to her neck n places a love bite there.
Twinkle: Aah….
Senses are regained.
Kunj: M really sorry. I couldn’t just……..I’m sorry.
Twinkle: But, now how will I go down.
Kunj: Cover it with you Pallu.
Twinkle: Yeahh. I hope it doesn’t fall down.
Kunj: It won’t. Put this safety pin.
Twinkle: Yeahh, wait. I’ll do it. Lemme set my hair.

Bebe:Twinkle, you came.
She comes descending from the stairs with Mahi.
She sits on the Chair while Mahi covers her face with the veil. One by one ladies come, lifts the veil and blesses Twinkle with gifts. We could here praises for Twinkle from the ladies.
“She’s so beautiful.”
“Kunj is very lucky.”
“Kisi ki nazar na lage.”
“Stay blessed. Live a long married life.”

Mahi: Twinkle, why are you covering your neck with the Pallu?
Twinkle: Di, fashion. Remember that show in which Sharon wore the Saree the same way.
Bebe: Yeh bhi koi fashion h? Wah. Jo bhi bolo badi soni lag rii h tu, Twinkle puttar.
Twinkle smiles. Suddenly, someone holds Twinkle’s hand. She stands up n the Pallu falls catching everyone’s attention. All were giggling seeing the love mark.
Twinkle shies and turns away.
K: Haa haa. Ab mudd le. I told you to secure the Pallu with safety pin, na?
Twinkle : Kunj, tum. Sorry m bhool gayi thi.
Kunj: Haa, tu toh apne baal set karle.

Mahi: Twinkle, Yeh teri neck par kya hua? Machhar ne kata, haina?
Twinkle slightly nods.
Bebe: Haa, Machhar ne kata. Haina, Kunj. Mera Kunj bhi Machhar ki tarah dikhta h.
Kunj:Nhii, Bebe woh…
Bebe: Haa haa. Woh…kya?
Twinkle: Bebe, wo…….
Mahi:Kya, Twinkle?
Twinkle: Dii, please. (SHE GOES UPSTAIRS)
Kunj: Bebe, ek second ek call aa rhi h. (HE TOO GOES TO THE ROOM).
The guests n the family members giggle.

Precap – Party at Kaanch club. Kunj to win the Kiss.

I hope I reached upto your expectancy.
N guys, I love writing poetry, I would love if you could comment on the lines written on the beginning of the update


  1. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Wow Meeta so cute and the Blouse vala scene was so cute and the Muh dekhai Last part was awesome 🙂 Post soon 🙂 Cant wait 🙂

  2. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Hey meetu
    Ik I missed many of the episodes….but seriously this was worth reading
    I m in love with this twinj….frankly I love their boldness…I mean the way they carry their convo
    N the quote was so beautiful….I would love to read more…
    Love u loads❤❤❤

  3. Ranabulbul

    |Registered Member

    Meetu lobed it
    And saree part was unique yr..
    Tei ki yad aagyi mujhe agli bar thodu sa long ok…
    And loved it post soom and ur poetry writing is amazing as u

  4. Monica

    |Registered Member

    Loved it throughout. Really so well written. Post the next one soon. Moreover, the poems that you write at the beginning of the update is fab. Love you 💕

  5. SidVee

    Amazing epi.. that line “kunj bhi Machar ki tarah dikhta hai” was 😂😂.. each n every scene was 😍😍.. and the poetry was awesome.. would love to read more of them 🙂 do cont soon 💕

  6. Romaisha

    |Registered Member

    Hey dear! ❤
    Loved today’s epi to the core! Just couldn’t stop reading!
    And i love your poetry before starting the episode .. Just so cute 🙂
    Love you 💕

  7. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Yesterday I started to read ur ff…. Meetuu seriously I’m impressed with ur writing skill… I never known ur such awesome writer…. U blasted it…. Outstanding yaar u rocked it…. I loved ur ff a lot… May God bless… Keep writing… Love you baby

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