As long as you love me…..Segment #12


As long as you love me
Segment #12

“ Hundred times would I fall
Till you’re there to hold me
Hundred times I could stand up
Till you’re here to heal me. ”

⭐Sarna mansion

Terrible descends the stairs looking like an angel from heaven wearing red-floor length Anarkali with silver heels having marriage bangles (Chura), along with henna (mehandi), vermilion filled hairline and mangalsutra.

Bebe: Ae lo, Twinkle puttar came.
Twinkle gets everyone.

Usha: Beta, aaj tumhari muh dikhai ku rasam h shaam ko. Toh no College.

Kunj comes and hearts what Usha said.
Kunj: Ma, we’re not going to college. Actually today’s Rhea’s birthday, so we’re going to her place.
Bebe: Wish her on call.
Twinkle: Bebe, actually gift bhi toh Dena hota hai Na.
Bebe: Achha, chalo jaao, par Come home soon.
TwiNj: Sure, bebe.
They leave.

TwiNj reach court n see YuHi n Robin there.
Robin: you’re an hour late.
Twinkle: Oh, Mr. despo! I am late because of you. You made me sit on the Mandap for marriage and now, I have to follow all After-marriage rituals.
{Robin: Oh, really. You didn’t wanted to get married to Kunj.
TwiNj coughs together.
Twinkle: Umm….Umm..Uh…G..Guys, yes. Guys, may we start the plan. }(Parts in {} are specially added for some fun. Yeh bahot boring ho gaya tha. Actually I wrote it in school n now m typing).
Kunj: Ye..Yes. She’s right. Well, you all have to come tonight at our home.
{Robin(whispers):Yeh log meri raat kharab karenge.
Yuvi: You said something.
Robin: Nope.
YuNj(together): Bachu, abhi bhi time h, bhaag jaa, ek baar shaadi ho gayi toh will repent.
Ahh, leave are ears yaar. We were joking.
TwiHi: Better}
Mahi: Achha, let’s leave all this. May we start. Robin seems desperate.
Robin: Of course. It’s my marriage to my lady love.
TwiNj: Whatever! Xhalo, let’s start.

On call(Speaker)….
Mahi: Hello Rhea!
Rhea: Heyy, Mahi.!
Mahi(worriedly): Rh…Rhe…Rhea. Robin had a robbery. So, he’s near the court. Please reach there soon. We are leaving too.[I wrote it was an accident but then thought to change something because of lines below] Rhea(panicks): Oh, no. Mahi. I’m near the court only. I reach there in 5.
Mahi: Yeah Yeah. Sure.

Rhea reached and sees Robin. She goes to him and hugs him asking what had been stolen and was it really expensive.
Robin: Yeah, it was really very expensive. Actually someone came and stole my heart away. Now, she has my heart. I just wanna ask her if she would share her heart with mine, too.(Bends on a knee)Will you marry me Rhea?
Rhea(blushes): Ofc! Robin, I love you. After the court marriage, we’ll have church wedding, too.
Twinkle: Haa Haa. Kar Lena. But, we have to reach home by 6. Tumne jaha phasaya h, uska result h. My After- marriage rituals.

All giggles.
RheObin get married.
Robin: Well, to be honest, I’ll miss my bachelor’s life.
Rhea widens her eyes.
Twinkle: I’ll miss it too. Kunj toh kahi bahar hi nhii le jaata.
Kunj: Oh, Mrs. Kunj Sarna! Shaadi ko sirf ek hi din hua hai. OK, tumhe bahar jaana h Na, toh we’ll meet at Kaanch club. Call Naman, Misha, Alisha, too.
Robin: OK, we’ll meet but it’s my first night. Rhea aur m jaldi chale jaaenge. Also, I’ll pay the bill as it’s my wifey’s birthday.
Rhea: You remember.?
All: Happy birthday Rhea.
Rhea: you all remember. Thank you guys.

They take Rhea to her home, where she finds 22 gifts.
Rhea: Oh my f**king God! These are 22 gifts. Why? And when u did all this?
Robin: You turn 22 today, Love. Also, you forgot, yesterday night you stayed at Samode Palace n from there you directly went to Shopping n I, here.
Rhea: Thank-you, husband.
Robin: Aise hii kaam nii, chalega.

Rhea turns n captures his lips into a short kiss.
Robin: I didn’t mean this. I said that pack you bags and let’s leave to OUR home.
Rhea(shies): Oops, Sorry.

TwiNj n YuHi giggles.

Precap: Twinkle’s muh dikhayi.


I guess that this was there longest I wrote.
N you guys know what.
I got such bad marks in all subjects except English. Thanks to you guys. My story was the most different one. Because of y’all.
I was given GOOD ATTEMPT in the story writing. Thank you all again.
Romaisha.. Romaisha, your comment made me feel heaven.
Thanks all for showering you presence here.
Jisha dii returned.
Love y’all.

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  1. Kritika14

    Loved it! Wished the segment never ended! Anyway, write the next one soon! Love you?

  2. Hey meeta
    Awesome episode dear
    Loved it
    Plsss asap
    Bt dnt feel bad u will cover in next exams trust me
    Just thoda sa concentrate kar

  3. Ayeshakhanum11

    really amazing

  4. SidMin

    Meet Loved it it was so sweet Twinkle’s much dikhayi Post soon and don’t worry Marks do not define you 🙂 and this wasn’t the last test you are giving So Try next time and congrats for getting good marks in English 🙂

  5. Simiyy

    It was amazing …i loved each bit…. continue soon and cpuld we please have more twinj scenes please

  6. Ayu

    Meeta!!! Awesome yaar! It was simply amazing???
    All the scenes were fab…its difficult to choose the best one cuz…all of them are my best!!!! Loved it!!! N that last wala kiss scene???

    Keep witing amazing things??

  7. Shreya098

    Amazing meeta…
    Enjoyed it..

  8. Yashasvi

    awwwwwwwww it was really very cute ………………
    loved it………. bt nt more than u dear……………..
    and same oinch mee too got the highest in english……………..

    LOVE u !!!!!!!!!!!!! ?????
    Your Yashu !!!!!!!!!!????????????????????

  9. Awesome amazing ….

  10. Hey meeta
    nice one

  11. Amazing epi.. loved it.. do cont soon ?

  12. Rashiverma2199

    Lovely episode…..

  13. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous cute funny epi

  14. Ritzi

    Hey meeta it was awesome…. But u knw if u really intend me as a frnd then pls pls dont use bad words along with the name of god na….I mean I really really don’t intend to hurt u my girl I knw its by mistake but take care from the next time….I m so much attracted towards yr ff yaar can’t tell u

    1. Meeta

      Sorry, Ritzi.
      If by any means, I hurted you.
      Next time, I’ll take care

  15. Ranabulbul

    Oh my god
    It was damn freaking awesome man
    Dude u nailed it
    Keep writing

  16. Partner!!!
    Come on the grp soon!
    I so miss u girl!
    Amazing part!
    Post soon darlo!
    Love uh?

  17. Romaisha

    Awww dii!! ???
    Thanks yaar .. I feel special ??
    Anyway… Yeh episode nah was just drop dead sweet! Toooooo amazing!? I just loved it! And next epi seems to be very exciting.. #Precap:)
    Love you yaar ❤❤?

  18. Baby

    Meeta di fabulous episode haha bechare twinj luvd it
    Mu dikhayi wow wts gonna hpn nxt cnt w8 luvd it…….hahaha d rherobin kiss wala scene n drn heeee fabulous. ..

    1. Meeta

      I guess u r late.
      I have already posted the next
      Well, thanks for such a lovely comment.?

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