As Long As A Bunny Has A Tail, My Love For You Will Never Fail……..twinj ss part 15

hii guys late hu but kya karu busy thi reason bataungi but agle episode mei as abhi bhi busy hu ……
One more thing guys I love you all guys from the core of my heart.
Thank you guys for your support towards me…

Likhna ho to Ghazal likh du,
Tune jo kiya Uske liye Alfaz kam hai,
Ahemiyat Teri kaise bataye..!
Khud hi Jhankle,
Humse na kaha jayega..
Thank you guys…

Recap: sorrow in the air as pain is necessary in love..

Few days later after the puja, Twinkle came out from the kitchen with breakfast and saw Yuvraj was sitting at the table. Her heart lurched in anticipation of leaving that house once again.

“Hi.”

UV asked huskily while Twinkle was only able to bob her head. Smile as if completely vanished from her face.

“How are you? Ummm.. Is everything alright here?” She could only shake her head in affirmation while her head had already begun to spin.

“Umm…Actually…Kunj called me yesterday. He wants to meet me. I…I have no idea. Do you?”

Again she remained mum and shook her head in negative.

“Ohh!… Okay. I will meet you later.” Sighing loudly he approached to closed door of Kunj’s room.

Anxiety was killing her like hell. For few minutes, she stood at her place. Then gathering all her courage within her thudding heart, without thinking further, like a zombie her legs automatically moved towards his room.

It was almost a week after Mahi’s death, she had seen him last.

She saw his back faced towards her, his stance defeated, shattered. He was looking at their full family picture where everyone was smiling including his diseased father Manohar & Mahi.

His rigid back was the evident that he was still in search of solace for everyone rather himself. UV was sitting on chair behind him and his back was too faced towards Twinkle. Twinkle’s head was spinning heavily while any moment her heart could also be burst inside her rib cage.

Suddenly she heard him to say,

“UV , if I asked your forgiveness will you give me now?

{
Naina nu pata hai
Naina di khata hai
Saanu kis gal di phir
Mildi sazaa hai
Neend ud jaave, chain chhad jaave
Ishq di faqeeri jad lag jaave
Neend ud jaave, chain chhad jaave
Ishq di faqeeri jad lag jaave
}

“What?……Kunj, what are you telling. It is past now. We should forget the past & move on. You were manipulated then. I….”

Yuvraj answered humbly. But he was cut short by an impatient Kunj who added firmly,

{
Ae mann karda ae thagi thoriya
Ae mann karda ae seena zoriyan
Aine sikh laiyan dil diyan choriyan
Ae mann diyan ne kamzoriyan

Ae mann karda ae thagi thoriya
Ae mann karda ae seena zoriyan
Aine sikh laiyan dil diyan choriyan
Ae mann diyan ne kamzoriyan
}

“Please, UV I…I don’t want to remember those days. I am too sick of thinking about those. Now I will find peace only if I achieve your & ….Ummm…Twinkle’s forgiveness. You were my best friend still I snatched away your happiness. While she’s the best girl I ever met. She is pure & innocent. Yet I ruined her life, ruined her dreams. This time I made amend. I…I am going to make you happy once again; both of you. It will be my absolution. If you people become happy and together again, it will be your leniency towards me. Please Yuvraj marry her and give her to the world of happiness which she always deserves…”

{
Aa…

Mann mann ki sunta jaaye

Sunta nahin mann waalon ki

Mann hi mann mein banaye

Duniya ek khayaalon ki..

Paas koi aave, door koi jaave

Hota hai kyun ye, koi samjhaave

Neend ud jaave, chain chhad jaave

Ishq di faqeeri jad lag jaave

Ae mann karda ae thagi thoriya

Ae mann karda ae seena zoriyan

Aine sikh laiyan dil diyan choriyan

Ae mann diyan ne kamzoriyan

}

“What?” Yuvi exclaimed with well suppressed joy. He couldn’t believe his ears.

{
Ae mann karda ae thagi thoriya
Ae mann karda ae seena zoriyan
Aine sikh laiyan dil diyan choriyan
Ae mann diyan ne kamzoriyan
}

But Twinkle’s mind went blank within a whisk of second. Her legs melted as those were made of jelly.

She had to hold the wall beside her for her support.

{
Naina nu pata hai

Naina di khata hai

Saanu kis gal di phir
mildi sazaa hai

Neend ud jaave, chain chhad jaave

Ishq di faqeeri jad lag jaave

}

Completely unknown to Twinkle’s dismay, Kunj continued,

“I want to give her divorce and make her free forever. She always deserves love and she loves you. This time I can’t stay between your and her happiness. She’s the purest soul and I am damn sure your love will add wings into her dreams.”

{
Ae mann karda ae thagi thoriya

Ae mann karda ae seena zoriyan

Aine sikh laiyan dil diyan choriyan

Ae mann diyan ne kamzoriyan

}

Then lowering his voice at almost inaudible level he drew the conclusion,

“She is as pure as she was before our marriage. She’s still untouched. We never….”

After that painful verdict,
Twinkle ran towards balcony and she is feeling lifeless. She is feeling so low and all the words were going in her ears till now.

{
Ae mann karda ae thagi thoriya
Ae mann karda ae seena zoriyan
Aine sikh laiyan dil diyan choriyan
Ae mann diyan ne kamzoriyan
}

Suddenly Twinkle couldn’t able to breathe and her surroundings went dark immediately.
She fainted and fell on the ground.

Precap: Pyar hamko bhee hai pyar tumko bhee hai toh yeh kya silsile ho gaye Bewafa ham nahee bewafa tum nahee toh kyon itne gile ho gaye……Guys a last one in the past…..

And if I don’t get answers to my questions then I will not post next one soon. Choice is yours as I have already written it too😎😜😉….
So here is questions….

Tell me are you able to feel Twinkle’s pain? Do you like the song as I don’t know whether it suits here or not? And what you want to know about me?(as many of you have mentioned in comment)..

25 comments

  1. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Lover Loved the episode it was so emotional could really feel Twinkle’s pain
    Loved it to the core could feel Kunj’s pain to while he was telling UV that he wanted(Kunj) UV and Twinkle to get married Loved it waiting for the next episode and to know more about you 🙂

  2. Priya_

    |Registered Member

    Wonderful… Very beautiful..
    Well penned..how do you write so well
    Twinkle’s emotions are well potrayed
    Excited for the next episode..
    Plz post soon..

  3. Sameera

    |Registered Member

    Amazingggggggg…..loved it yar
    So emotional epi twinkle pain
    What will happen next post soon na
    Plshh love u
    😘😘😘😘😘😘

  4. Fan

    |Registered Member

    Awesome epi lover..feeling bad for twinkle nobody wants to know her opinion..waiting for the next part.plz post soon

  5. Shreya098

    |Registered Member

    It was amazing..
    I could feel their pain…. His pain while he was asking UV to marry her….and her pain while listening this….
    Very emotional epi….looved it

    I looove ur ff….. I eagerly wait for it….plz next time don’t make us wait for soo long…. Continue soon….

  6. Monica

    |Registered Member

    Just loved it! i could completely feel twinkle’s pain and why wouldn’t i? after all you describe and portray her feelings so well. The song was just the best and very well suited the situation. Overall, this part was fab! Continue soon as i always wait for this. Love you x

  7. SidVee

    Superb epi.. really loved it.. I could feel both twinj’s pain.. and sorry I haven’t heard the song before.. do cont soon 💕 🙂

  8. SIDMIN-Daamini

    |Registered Member

    Loverrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Very smart huh!!!😎 already written the next one n blackmailing us for that
    Not bad 😘
    Twinkle’s pain !!!!!!!!can feel it to the core of the heart babes what to answer………. u write so well 😊
    N song was perfect for the situation
    N I’m not gonna say write next one soon or keep writing
    So it will be better post ur written one soon
    😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
    😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😘

  9. Baby

    |Registered Member

    hey lover of course i feel twinkles pain
    yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai
    i feel lyk i m dere wid twinj
    yr amazing n post nxt asap
    nhi toh phir hm bhi gussa ho jyaenge aapse
    bolo manzoor hai
    hhehehehehee
    yr luv u dear koi queries nhi hai bas jldii post krdo

  10. sujina

    pyaar mujko bhi hai tumhari iss ff se…
    chalte chalte tym milne ki baad jaldi post kar dena…tw…lifeless…made me cry n kunj realization…bt felt bad 4 kunj…post asap

  11. Aksa(SidMin's and the ff writers die hard fan...)

    It was an amazing epi..rlly can feel twinkles pain..overall the epi was awesome…luved it..post nxt one ASAP…

  12. Paavu

    |Registered Member

    Heart touching epi and u know what I always in all ffs just imagine my sidmin and I feel them so ys I feel her pain and ya I wsnna know that from where are u thats it and ya most imp I wanna know ur reak name dear locer pls ur real name and one more thing I am very angry as I missed you and you didn’t cane for msny days but don’t worry give us heart touching epis lije this and we ll be happy what say guys????

    • Lover

      |Author

      Dii I am sorry actually busy thi congratulations for your upcoming baby so sorry pehle wish nhi kar payi. May god bless you and your child . I know doctor prescribes a lot of precautions in this case so please take care of yourself. Love you and Solly I hope maaf kar diya ho apni chotii sissy ko. Bye school Jana hai.

  13. Sonali05

    |Registered Member

    Amazing epi…
    Seriously, I can able to feel her pain
    But sorry I never heard that song…
    But I can say that u r fabulous writer..
    Post d next one soon

  14. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    So so so so so sorrrrry for d late comment
    I am so busy these days that i am not finding time for myself

    Anyways loved the epi…..emotional one feeling bad for twinkle

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