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LONELY WITHOUT YOU (A SHIVIKA FF) Part 3

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Hey lovely people!!!
I’m really sorry for being late …I hope you all lovely people with most lovely and kind soul will forgive me….

Thank you guys for giving me such an immense love….After reading your comments, I literally do happy wala dance everytime😂😂😂….Keep commenting and keep motivating me guys….

Link for Part 1-part-1

Link for Part 2-part-2

Link for Os (Trust me!!!)-OS here
So without much delay lets get started……
ENJOY….

PART-3

(Annika’s POV)

Betrayal is one of the worst feelings one can suffer from…..In some ways it’s same as seeing your near and dear one dieing in front of your eyes but in this case it’s your heart and soul which is dieing….It’s like all the oxygen ,all the feelings just have been pumped out from your body with the help of some invisible device….And the thing which just left behind is numbness,darkness….no hope…no ray…..

That’s exactly what I felt when he left me…But whatever happened I got the most valuable possession of my life…my daughter….

“Offo mumma you again got lost…Hurry up …we need to move now….” Aru said to me while shaking me hard….

“Oh My Queen Victoria…stop giving me orders….Have your breakfast properly ….There’s still much time left….Amusement park must not have opened till now…”I told her while putting her favourite french toast with cinnamon sauce in her plate….

“We will definitely go na mommy”She again whined while having a bite….

“Yes we will if you stop bugging me…”

“Okay okay …….yeyyyyy….You are the bestest mumma….”

With that she tried to stand up to hug me with glass of juice still in her left hand….and splash…..

NOT AGAIN……………….
This blue eyed girl will be going to drown me someday………..

(POV Ends…)

At the Same time in another part of Mumbai…A beautiful Mansion with words inscribed ‘The Oberois’ on its front was witnessing another “Kumbhkarans Jagao operation” …..

“Om-cha…..Ru-cha…..wake up please…Before dad wakes up please get awake….”A little boy of about 5 years old was trying to wake up his loggerheads uncles….

“Arnav please let me sleep..otherwise I will get dark circles and if I get dark circles all of my girlfriends will leave me….”His Ru-cha replied sleepily…

“Arnav come here and you sleep too…It’s Sunday today…”His Om uncle said while extending an arm towards him….

“I know Omcha today is Sunday but today It’s Mother’s day too….Mom is not here but I want to prepare Dad’s favourite french toast with cinnamon sauce to surprise him….come na help me….”He said while a little sadly….

Seeing this both of his uncle’s sleep just got away….

“Okay come lets go”…With that trio walked towards the door but Arnav face got tensed…as his idea of surprise got busted as his father was standing near the door watching all of them with slight amusement…..

“Now Can I go to sleep somemore…. ???”Ru-cha asked….

(Shivaay’s POV)

I don’t know when my little boy grown so much….that he wanted to give me surprise…..I seriously don’t understand what kind of heartless mother she is that she left such an innocent soul so mercilessly…..

“Arnav come…lets all of us go to the kitchen…”I said to my little boy with ruffling his hair slightly….

“But i wanted to surprise you” my champ told me….

“Don’t worry dear…You can still surprise me…”saying I looked upon Om and Rudra…Both were smiling too..

“Really”

“Yes”

“Yay….. okay…..lets go daddy….”

“Arey waah…Instead of ‘trio’ now ‘frio’are going towards the kitchen for frying thats cool….haha..”dumb singh oberoi suddenly spoke….

“SHUT UP RUDRA/RU-CHA”………

Kitchen time is one of the best times of my day….when we all..’obros’can have serious fun while cooking world class dishes…

I looked upon Arnav…who was mashing the boiled potatoes in a bowl….despite of his small hands he was trying hard while laughing his ass out on stupid and lame jokes of Rudra….

“I won’t let anything or anyone to wipe this smile from his face…Be that person is his mother”I promised to myself…..

“Omcha when will choti mom come?…”Arnav asked to Om…

“Gauri will be here by tomorrow champ!”Om replied….

“Okay so breakfast is ready…I’m going to arrange it…You can all go and sit and call everyone…”I announced….

“I need to bring something from my room…”saying that Arnav just ran away….

After arranging all the dishes on dining table I called upon for everyone….

As mom and badi mom came I wished them Happy Mother’s day….Om and Rudy also wished ….while bade papa and papa wished dadi….everyone was seated but Arnav had still not arrived….I don’t know what he was upto….

“Did you call Ragini….???”mom asked me

“Yes mom I did”I replied to her….

“What have she said???She is coming to pick Arnav na…he is missing her from a very long time now…”mom said…while expressions of all the persons present over the table got strained….

“She denied mom…by saying she has some important meeting to attend…”I replied to her and all….

“I don’t know what kind of heartless mother she is!….I know both of you got divorced but still She is having a child for god’s sake…Can’t she show some love towards him??”badi mom said to me….

“If she had shown some love towards Arnav then divorce wouldn’t have happened….We would have beared her for the sake of Arnav…”Rudra replied to badi mom….

“Mom will not come today also to meet me ???”

I looked upon the source of voice and my boy was standing there with tear stricken eyes…my heart broke….

“Arnav! Bccha Arnav please listen….”mom tried to console him….

“No dadi…I just hate my mom…I just hate her a lot….She don’t love me….”With that he just threw some papers on the floor and literally ran towards the way of his room….

“Arnav….beta please listen…”I tried to come towards him but he was already gone….

I moved towards the papers he had thrown…..They were not exactly papers….they were cards….for his mom, his gauri mom, his grandmother, his badi grandmother,his great grand mother and for me too……I opened up the card supposed to be for me….Words written on it tore my heart further…..

“Happy Mother’s day daddy…….I know i should wish you on father’s day only…..but I love you more than mumma so I want to wish you on more days………I love you a lot……”………I got tears ….

I handed the rest of cards to the mom and moved towards Arnav’s room….

When I reached there he was sitting on his bed with his head bended on his knees….

“Arnav look towards me… “I said to him while placing my hand over his head….He looked upon me….with tear welled eyes….

“Beta ! So what if your mom is busy we both will enjoy today….Do want to go to an amusement park???”I asked him

“Really? Just you and me?”he asked……I nodded in reply…..With that a smile broke out on his face…..

“Yey…..I’m gonna go to get ready….”

“Yes but firstly go and have your breakfast everyone is waiting for you in the dining area….”

“Dad! Mom really loves me???”he asked innocently….

“Yes she do”I replied to him…maybe lied…….With that he just went away…..And I lost in my train of thoughts…..in my Annika……

Today When i saw his helpless face I don’t know why I remembered Annika….though I never forgot her…
She must have also got married by now….Having children of her own…I never met her again after that day….I don’t know where she has been now…But wherever she’s been I pray to god that she must be fine….With that I called upon to Khanna to arrange 2 tickets for a newly opened amusement park……

Precap-Shivaay and Arnav meeting Aarya and Annika………

So guys done with the third episode…….How’s it???

I hope you all are liking this series too……
Guys please comment…..Silent readers please give your comments because it’s only dosage for motivation for a writer……All positive and negative comments are welcomed but just comment….

Take care
With lots of love……
Ashlyn

26 Comments
  1. AMkideewani

    Amazing di😍😍😍😍

    1. Ashlyn.G

      Hey AMkideewani!!!
      I’m really glad you liked ot dear…take care always…

    2. Ashlyn.G

      I liked your new name crazy girl….cool …..👍😀

      1. AMkideewani

        Thanks di😍

  2. Niriha

    Awesome

    1. Ashlyn.G

      thanks a lot Niriha….😊😊😊

  3. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dear… I don’t know why MMKAD link is not showing… His link is attached on the bottom of love, trust, family FF.. But not seen on FF page… Please read http://www.tellyupdates.com/mukammal-mohabbat-ki-adhuri-dastaan-mmkad-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-15/

    1. Ashlyn.G

      Thanks a lot Nikita_jai😊😊😊

  4. nice and emotional loved it Ashlyn…

    1. Ashlyn.G

      Thanks Anshi dear….

  5. Alekhika20

    Amazing update

    1. Ashlyn.G

      Thanks a lot Alekhika dear…😊😊😊

  6. Aashi9

    awesome
    really excited for the coming episodes
    waiting foe ShivIka meet
    update soon

    1. Ashlyn.G

      Thanks a lot Aashi….😊

  7. Awesome epi dr

    1. Ashlyn.G

      Thanks Banita😊

  8. Jerry_36

    Hey Ashlyn !!
    Its just amazing sista ! Loved every bit of it, thou you posted a bit late, but its okay. Keep writing, love this story of yours.
    Take care, love yaa❤

    1. Ashlyn.G

      Hey Jerry….Thanks for your lovely comment cutie… I’m glad you liked it…

    2. Ashlyn.G

      Nd Srry dear for posting it late…everytime I wanted to write I got stuck up in some unexpected offc wrk or studies…Pls forgive ur sista…I will try to update next one soon….take care always…love u😘😘😘

  9. VHM

    awesome one Ashlyn…incredibly written …full of emotions…eagerly waiting for the next…whenever you post could you please let me know…thanks in advance…and once again this made me emotional

    1. Ashlyn.G

      Thanks a lot Harika di….Your comment always meant a lot to me….I am really glad you liked it….and I’m Srry for making you emotional…I just wanted to depict Shivaay as caring and loving father…I hope I did justice to that…
      Here’s the link for another of my wrk-http://www.tellyupdates.com/journey-deceiver-lover-ff-ashlyn-episode-3/
      Yesterday I sent you wrong link by mistake and I don’t know why link is not working sometimes….
      Take care always di….love u….

  10. Fffan1234

    Super awesome story. Loved it

    1. Ashlyn.G

      Thanks a lot Fffan1234😊😊😊

  11. Ankita27

    Amazing update… loved it…

    1. Ashlyn.G

      Thanks a lot Ankita 😊😊😊

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