if i had listened to u….. part 1 by forver fan of twinj urf nacheez

Hellooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo doston ,yaaron aur mujhe pehachanne walon…
Khayalon mein hu ya nahi…..
Yaad krte ho bhi ki bhoola diya mujhe..
Sach batana.because I hate lies…::-P πŸ˜›
Ab batao…
Gussa toh nahi ho na ??
Mai bhi kitni stupid hun,acche log kya kabhi kisise gussa hote hai bhala….
Nahi na….
But I know meri bhi galti hai…promise Jo pura nhi kiya …
Par I promise aaj k baad no more delay….
Pakka promise…..
Ab maaf bhi kar do doston…
I know mujhse tum log naraz reh hi nhi sakte….
Toh chalo ab smile bhi kr do….
So ab bhot ho gayi baatein ….
Ab janhit mein jaari suchna
Dis story which I m writing was initially a two shot but now the number of episodes is not fixed.okay?
Bus khatam ho gayi suchna …
Ab episode pe aane se pehle ur hater tere lie ek message niche hai.agar tu is episode ko padh raha /rahi hai to please zaroor comment krna …okay…

And baaki saare readers please comment krna
Varna mai rooth jaungi….:'( :'(
Ab chalo let’s get back to my story…
If I had listened to u….

Year 2016
Court room.
A court room is shown,with many people sitting….
Journalists have surrounded the whole court.with reporters saying
” aaj hai ks urf Kunj sarna ki saza ka faisla.dekhte hai judge sahaab ka kya faisla hota hai ”
All the news channels are just talking about this news….
Inside d court room..
Everybody is impatiently waiting for the verdict…while the judge is writing it…
After writing the verdict and breaking the nib of the pen.the judge speaks…
Judge:- saare sabooton aur gawahon ko mad-de-nazar rakhte hue,ye adalat.KS urf kunj sarna ko ipc ki dhara k tehet umr kaid ki saza sunati hai .saying this the judge wants off.
Now the camera focuses on d katghara(I don’t know its English word ) where a person wearing d dress which prisoner’s wear is show having teary eyes .He starts crying…
The police comes and takes him towards the police bus.
On the way many reporters are trying to ask questions from him.but due to police they were unable to ask.suddenly a journalist asks “KS tumne acchi tarah se use kiya us ladki ko.kya naam tha uska….haan twinkle..
Hearing this Kunj gets hell angry and frees himself from the clutches of police and goes towards the journalist and starts beating him..
K:- kya bol raha tha tu…use kiya Maine ..vo bhi twiinkle ko…
Tu jaanta hi kya hai …mai batata hun .I loved her…mai usse bhot pyaar karta tha…apni Jaan se bhi zyada…
Saying all this he was beating the journalist to blue -black..the reporter was even bleeding..
The police comes and takes away Kunj…
K:-(self talk) sorry twinkle…aaj meri wajah se…and he breaks down…
He was taken to the police bus from where he was taken to jail…

At jail…
Police 1:- ( to the police inspector who was with Kunj…)
The court has ordered us to keep him in a special cell so that he doesn’t harm other prisoners…
Inspector:- yes sir…
And he takes Kunj to a cell and locks him up.
Here Kunj goes towards the wall and sits down and starts crying…..
He remembers wat all the reporters said and shouted.
‘I m sorry twinkle’.I m sorry….
To be continued…
Kaisa laga….
Agar accha laga toh acche comments se nawaze
Aur agar bakwas laga toh Jo Mann kre vo phek k maar do…
I won’t mind.bus thoda dheere se maarna…
Chalo ab ek pyaari si smile k saath
Alvida…
I will b back next will
With my next part..
Till den haste raho…
πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
Keep smiling..
Love u all…
And is nacheez ko yaad krte rehna…
Phir milenge…
Byee…….

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And ye hai summary ka link…if summary nhi padhi ho to…
Now final byeee.

12 comments

  1. Sameera

    |Registered Member

    Story was marvelous but we r hell angry wid u aur iski maafi tab hi milegi jab this story +twinj tale k new epi tum post karoge ok
    Aur waise y so late???
    Chalo koi nai der aaye durst aaye
    Ab bas jaldi se post kardo yaar
    Aur intezar nai hota ????

  2. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Thanks Allah….for making her to post her OS..I was waiting so long for ur OS nd ur ff….now do post ur ff soon …smjhi wrna kal wali daant yaad hogi na tumhe agar phir se sunna chathi ho toh batao ….agar nai toh jaldi se post krna…

    well coming to ur OS …what a story dear….amazing…so emotinal …
    I never thought that u can write nd portray sad emotions so well….
    PlzzZ post next soon…wrna hitler se keh kr tujhe daant padhwaungi..
    Love u …my Amrish Puri urf nachezz….urf fraudini…bye

  3. bulbul

    Nahi nahi bilkul nahi main to tujhe nahi maaf karne wali nahi mere ff pe comment karta hai or na hi apna ff or is post jarti itni bhi kaya narazgi hain bata deti yr itna emotional kar diya bhagwan ji ne thodi akkal de di tujhe or tune post kar diya per kuch bhi ho Teri story mashallah!!!!!!?????jayada UDD mat

    Or bete an late hui or mere ff pe comment ni kiya na to ye nacheez is kaneez se naaraz ho jayegi

    Bas Bas bahut ho gya bye

  4. Bhavika

    |Registered Member

    bhagwaan ka lakh lakh shukra hai jo apne kuch toh post kiya it was
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    bas bohot hai baki baad me baat karenge aur please I BEG YOU ff post kardo na ff ki ek toh jhalak dikhado
    PLEASE AAAA

  5. Lover

    |Registered Member

    hllo nacheez I know I am not late chal aab jyada jor maat daal apne chotu se dimaag pe pehle mujhe pura complete to krne de haa to kaha thi mei(dekh mujhe bhulwa diya naa )haa yaad aaya mei bol rhi thi ki I am not late but hell late…….chal chod sorry nhi bolti kyuki bolte hai ki “dair aaye par durust aaye “right ?sunn aab pehle apne ff ki tareef phir teri tareef ok……
    N:nice
    A:amazing
    C:cutteee (like u jyada khush maat ho ok)
    H:hilarious
    E:excellent
    E:extra makkhan ke saath
    Z:zazzy
    chal bahut hua aab bye.mere is pe bhi ek comment de dena bybyeeee aur tu ajnabee hai kya Jo waisa behave krti hai?

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