So a lion fell in love with the lamb (episode 12) FINAL EPISODE




A new day again but with different glaze…now my life is complete
I was disturbed by the sunrays which forcefully made me to wake up from my beautiful dream…no no not dream but the most beautiful reality which completely changed my life…our life
My twinkle is with me now….My life without her is just a nightmare for me
I woke up n saw twinkle beside me…don’t take me wrong but yes the entire night we fitted ourself on this small sofa…either of us didn’t spoke a single word the entire night…but each other’s presence made it the beautiful night ever…twinkle leaned her head on my shoulder n I…giving her support
We slept in same some position the entire night…I m not kidding
The best feeling is to find twinkle next to me…I must say she is the most beautiful thing ever happened to me
I slightly made my way towards the washroom…making twinkle lie on sofa comfortably
Ohh God this cramps…my whole body is paining like hell but nevermind..i can do such thousand stunts when my twinkle is with me
I had a quick shower…but when I came out…twinkle was no where
For a second my heart missed a beat…the fear of loosing twinkle was all over my face
With in no time I made my way towards her room in search of her….as soon as I entered some humming sounds went into my ears…yes it was twinkle taking her shower…I was relieved
I knocked the door to confirm her presence
K : (in low voice) Twinkle??
Suddenly her song stopped n she replies
T : yes kunj its me
K : When did u wake up??
T : Kunj don’t be so possessive…n fear just take it out of ur mind…I wont leave u ever…but please first let me take my shower
Ohh God this girl…she can read my mind…I thought only I have got the sense to read up her mind
I was waiting for her…sitting on her bed

K : Do u need any help?? (he said naughtily)
T : Help?? In shower?? Ohh yes why not…please come in
On hearing this I was like “ Is she mad?”…but anyways she perfectly know how to stop me…smart girl
I rolled my eyes n said “whatever”…I can hear her soft giggle form inside

Soon she entered the room with her wet hairs n her pretty pink crop top n black denims…OMG she looks killer..kunj mind ur language..but why should I mind..she is all mine now
She made her way towards me with her evergreen smile which made me stand…she hugged me n gave a small peck on my cheeks…yes she really did
Its all new for me but I must say its really great to experience….I smiled on her act
She wrapped her hand around my neck n unknowingly I placed mine on her waist..
T : Kunj u r so unromantic …I think I m the man in our relationship…a dominating one
What did she say?? It means that I m the recessive one…come on kunj be a man…she had questioned on u..
I rolled her around n made my grip tight around her waist…I can she a surprised twinkle be4 me due to my sudden response…I leaned towards her shining lips n said
K : now also u think that I m unromantic
T : (giggles) Yes
Is she trying to provoke a wild kunj within me…but for time being she is teasing me…I leaned hardly leaving any distance between us
K : Really
No sooner I said this I felt a soft lips on mine…at first I was not in position to react as it was too quick but then I gave in
It was a passionate kiss…guess what now my wild kunj was out n I rolled her again n lifted her…deepening the kiss
I didn’t measure the time but can say that it was a long one…this much long which made us out of breath…
At last I broke the kiss…n took a look at twinkle
Her eyes were glassy….i cupped her face n within no time she hugged me…a bone crushing hug
T : (whispers) Thank u kunj for coming into my life
Now she was crying….n I was rubbing her back to calm her down….i can feel her happiness
Suddenly she broke he hug…wiped her face n said
T : But anyways I m more dominant n u have to agree that
She giggles n I smiled at her words
T: I have a surprise for u
She gives me an envelop…it had tickets of AMRITSAR
K : (lifting her up) wow twinkle…I really love u…
T : u know I m selfish…its not for u…its for us (smiles)

We r in front of a big villa n I glared 2wards twinkle
T : yes…maa is inside…she is not knowing anything…it’s a surprise
Now I made my way inside…as soon as entered the villa an old lady with pale skin n swollen eyes was sitting…yess she is maa
She saw me entering but didn’t recognize….its not her fault becoz I have completely changed n became handsome , dashing….i know I know I m boasting myself but yeah its true…
I sat near her legs n kept my head on her lap…I can sense that she was completely blogged but twinkle was behind me who as an assuring look to her
She understood….cupping my face she cried….
It was great to feel my lifes 2 most important person together…
She was happy with our relationship…

There were ups n downs in my life
But it ends now…at this moment
The hardships I faced
The loneliness I suffered
The emptiness in my life is like a past for me
The sleepless nights
The broken heart
The scary dreams
Is my past
But now I have love , blessings
And someone to care
Which earlier was like a dream to me
Has became a reality
The reality so my life
N now I can say
. (Have patience..the story is not yet over)
“That was just soo perfect” is the thing I can say
They r the best couple I have ever came across…
But I feel pity becoz they haven’t changed yet…
She throws the same tantrums
He shows the same attitude
She is still the same drama queen
N he is still the arrogant sarna
But but there is a change in their love…yes
They love each other even more they used to…
Ohh sorry sorry u must me wondering who the hell is me
So let me first introduce myself
Yes u guessed right…the one n only son of Sadu Sarna n Drama Queen…I mean Kunj Sarna n Twinkle Sarna…I m just 13 years old….let me warn u that I m not a kid…
Sometimes I wonder on Gods creation…I m just a blend of both
I carry patience but with a ting of madness
I carry maturity but with a ting of drama
I m the problem solver but a siyappa creator too
I know u all might be bored
Its there 15th marriage anniversary
All r busy with their own work
Mommy is busy in romancing with dadda
She is still the dominant one…or can say that the “MAN” of her relationship
N dadda he is still struggling with romance…sometimes I feel that I can romance better than him with my girlfriend…don’t narrow ur gaze yes I do have a girlfriend
See all r disturbing me…Ohh crap they r calling me for cake cutting session…I m really a dumbass
But anyways first I have to keep my dadda’s personal diary at its place…becoz if he comes to know that I read his entire love story n this session is going on since many days then really I m dead
But anyways it was fun reading a love story which is so pure
Love is not just wanting each other or fulfill ur desires …it never makes anyone weak
It’s a feeling which makes a person the strongest ..
Now really I have to sign off……………


Helloo lovely ppl
I know it was a shock for u…an unexpected shock that I m ending
Well it was for me too…
This all happened within an hour in which I have to decide…n yes this was my decision
There r many commitments to be fulfilled
Many expectations n many goals to be achieved
N for that this step was necessary
It was really tough but yes its true
I really don’t know whether in future I will be able to write anything on this page or even I can visit it…
But yess one thing I know is that I will be loving u all…n yes ofcourse will miss u all a lot
I hope u all will support me n my decision…but yes if I get time I will entertain u all through my os
N please don’t think that I m leaving becoz someone is copying my ff n pasting it on other site faking their name…but yes one message to that person…plzzz stop doing this becoz its my hardwork n I m really connected to this ff…its not right to copy paste someones writing on other sites…I hope u got that n yes I will wait for ur 13th episode which will be originally written by u…but anyways I don’t have any grudges as its my last day in tu family..
I promise all that I will do comment in free time…
N plzz don’t forget me…becoz I devoted an important phase of my life on this page…
I must say I got many sisters on this page n I love them all…I wont take any name specially as I feel the same for all…n for silent readers too
Its just that today whole time I will be on tu page…waiting for ur comments..i think for the last time
N plzzz do comment…a small ‘BYE’ will do but plzz comment…a request to all the silent readers


Credit to: Shatakshi


  1. Ritzi

    hey shatakshi,,,,girl r u mad…y the hell u ended it…i m literally crying man….i loved ur ff…pls tell me the reason u ended it soo soon nd ur quitting tu…srsly oh godddd…..wht happened….is everything alright…r u ending it bcus of sid or wht…pls dont quit tu plsssssss

      • Ritzi

        hey shamz…..i hv not ended my ff….i m on break for smtym as well as my internet…oh ghosh…its not working at all nd ri8 now im at a coffee shop where we r getting free wifi…nd jst to read all ffs u wont believe i have drank 6 cups of coffees nd m drinking my 7th cup,,,its not funny….i m serious

    • Shatakshi

      Hey Ritzi…I m so happy that at last u r back on tu…will miss u all
      N plzzz don’t think that it’s becoz of sid or something like that….but now I think its time to think about my career…I will miss u all
      I parents alone daughter n due to
      this they have high expectations on me…
      I have to fulfill all of them…becoz its very difficult to match up their dreams for me…
      So I think this was nessesary…
      I was going to do the same in June but as u know the results r out so early before time …n mine is going to come..
      N from then 8 hours classes studies crack IIT…all I have to do
      So I think this was to be done…
      I m sorry to make u cry
      I will try to read ur ff….I know u will continue… For me ???

  2. Shamz

    Hey Shatakshi Shamz here….I’m sorry I didn’t knew that you also write ff as I used to read Pali’s & Ritzi’s ff….though I didn’t read your previous epi…so I can’t catch up but the last epi is very cute….and I must say we are like so…You must b thinking how??? Actually I also wrote same dress for Twinkle… But anyways all the best for your journey ahead and yah one more thing keep commenting on my ff so that we b in touch with eo…I’m really addicted to all of you…luv u…and one more thing I will read your previous epis…if you think right then plz reply you are from which state..

    • Shatakshi

      Hey Shamz…thanks dear for reading
      N yes I live in Mumbai… Maharashtra but I m originally from UP
      N thanks for commenting… Plzzz share ur views after reading my earlier episodes.
      N thanks a lot for ur wishes??

      • Shamz

        Hey Shatakshi I read your first few epis…it’s mindblowing….and yah I said na we are similar look I read Shreya’s comment and come to know that you get up early just to write and update it on time and I give my whole night to write my ff….hey if you don’t mind be my fb frnd…and I told my real name in my ff….

  3. Riddhi

    Ur ff is too amazing fantastic superb u know wht tumhare ff k baare m words m kuch nhi keh sakte
    n the end of the ff it’s unique n fantabulous
    N u r such a good writer
    N agar phir kabhi mauka mile to nayi atory k sath jarur aana
    We will waut for u n ur ff??

    • Shatakshi

      Hey Riddhi thanks for reading… N yes if I get a chance then I will surely come up with a different concept or some os…??

  4. fiona

    shatakshi u are a wonderful creation of god that writes like shiek spere or i should say better than him
    i loved the concept plot character dialogues ideas thoughts of your ff
    and do not say bye because we say bye to them , who are going far from us but u would always be in my heart by the writer of great ff lion fell love for lamb
    i can assure u that if anyone ask me who was shatakshi in my last days also
    i would remember u because i never u have made a bungalow in my heart a beautiful one
    sorry for a long speech but i usually don’t give a long comment
    but u forced me to give
    i want to talk more but i am lacking of words to praise u
    and i can bet if u write this ff longer it would have broken records of akanshaa and pali too
    and please continue your previous ff as u have promised earlier
    pleseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! lots of love ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
    ☻☻☻☻☻☻ ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺ 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • Shatakshi

      Hey Fiona…
      Thanks a lot for sharing ur amazing views…
      But yes Fiona I wish I had time to continue my previous one…but I really don’t have time to write…
      But if time permits me I will surely write os…
      Love u to the core…

      • fiona

        hey! write when u get time
        i also read ff in 2 -3 days but my vaccations are starting from 28 th may so i can read otherwise all subjects attack on me and u don’t believe that i asked my friends to complete my art homework in school bus and classroom

  5. zikra

    Shatakshiiiiiii …. Y y y m really heartbroken nw bcbcz first thng Sid is replacing n nw ur too stopped d ff or cn say ended ur ff……bcz I ws waiting for ur ff since morning bcz nly thng I do wen I woke up is to visit TU page ur ffs n dis gave me shock sry if I have hurted u by my words n whenever u get tym plz rite an OS dear luv u from d core n n m really sry if I hurted u…….????????????????bt bt bt btw ending ws jus osmmmmmmmm loved it n luv u too Idk we dunno each other bt have sum connection…….. Ok k ok m too much nw plzzzzz come back soon will miss u alot……..???????????????????????????ok m sry bt wid a cute smile cum back soon….???bt nthg jus leave it n sry sry sry n again sry for my emotional speech…….bt m in a shock riht nw…..??????all mixed emotions r wid me nw ok so no more bak bak bieeee see u soon tc luv u loads…??..,….?????????

    • zikra

      Bt nly wanna kno one thng is dat y did u ended it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo soon I ws literally crying bt waiting for u n ur ffff..

      • Shatakshi

        Hey zikra…I m really sorry to hurt u
        It was a sudden decision…I m also not willing to leave this ff as I have made many friends…sisters becoz of this ff only…
        N now I will ask sorry in ur style
        Zikra can u plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz forgive me
        I m sooooooooooooo soooorry to make u cry…..??

  6. Mitali


    • Shatakshi

      Hey Mitali I will surely try to visit tu page…
      N thanks for reading
      N yes I will be back with an os.
      Love u ??

  7. Misha

    Hey Shatakshi. First thing , this is what you meant???
    Oh my god! But I’m here to support you! Always and forever.
    You are the most supportive and a really great writer I have come across.
    My wishes are with you always and always.
    I’m so speechless at the ending. This was indeed a lovely ending dear.
    Wow! Amazing!
    I pity on that person who copied your story. I’m so sorry for that dear.
    Can you please tell me on which site because maybe someone had copied more stories so I can check that?
    And I would be really glad to see you again!
    Love you so much and I’m happy to get a sister like you?????????????????

    • Shatakshi

      Hey Misha
      See I told u that u will understand my words once u read the episode
      N thanks a lot supporting n understanding my point..
      Thanks for reading
      N yes the website is Indian forum…there u have to go in tei section
      I was also not knowing this earlier but zkira informed me in my previous episode
      Its completely cope paste…n the ff name is also changed to luv has just began… Or something like that…
      But anyways luv u n ur ff a lot??

  8. Mitali


  9. Ria

    Lovely.. so all this time Arnav Kunj Sarna was narrating the story! Too good.. it was brilliant in fact.. by the way I’ll miss your ff and you.. hope to see some OS! Bye!

  10. Dheemahee

    u made me cry dear I am a silent reader of your ff I will miss u a lot and if.possible please post os when.u r free miss u a lot and love u and your ff by have a great life ahead may god bless u by

  11. chandra

    oooo . ur ff was outstanding . but if it is for ur good and its ur descision , then its okay . may u shine in life .

  12. Shreya

    Di …what 2 say …I will really miss u alottttt…and I promise that if I get to know who that cheater I would really bash that dickmind who is copying ur ffs but I know that my di’s hard work, brain ,intelligence,imagination,skills and creativity can’t b copied even 0.0000001 % bcoz u r original…………don’t b sad but remember people like 2 follow only the best, di u r d best and that idiot is trying 2 copy u but she/he should know that she/he will live with a tag of cheater in his/her inner conscious…… Yaar di u r making me cry… Kaun so di apni behen KO rulati hai????????…its my request di plz come back on tu….plz plz….

    • Shatakshi

      Hey Shreya… Don’t be a fool to cry
      U r one of the sweetest sister of mine…
      N thanks for reading…
      Love u??

  13. Romaisah

    yaar obviously i angry at u!!!! U end it all of a sudden but yea i read y
    .. U loved the ending n can u come back soon pplzzz..!?
    Bye u n ur ff will 4ever be missed

    • Shatakshi

      Hey Romaisah
      Firstly i m really sorry for this sudden shock
      N thanks for reading??

  14. Sattu yaar uh gave me a shock m jst nw very much hurt that u r ending bt plssss be back wid a new ff plsss will miss uh n yeah r uh on fb or insta gram if yes plsss give me ur account I will give a request to uh n I will love to chat wid uh

    • Shatakshi

      Hey Krystal
      Thanks for reading
      N sorry for this sudden shock
      Aur yaar I deleated all my accounts
      But u can contact me on
      Love u??

  15. Shreya

    U know di today I asked my best frnd (the only 1 who knows that I write ffs..but she is not a tei fan as she has never seen it coz of her filmy di)to read my ff and when she asked to tell any other ff as she already know my whole story (till twinj’s marriage… Hahahaha)…I in no time suggested her to read ur ff as 4 me its d best…and I request u 2 plz atleast read my ffs and Oss so that I may feel blessed with ur presence as u r my only didi…though u have many sissies.. And I am not going to say Bye but SEE U SOON DI…….????
    u know what I really don’t want to stop commenting as I am not going to see d passionate writer like u soon who wakes up at 4:30 just to write and post on time……

    • Shatakshi

      Hey Shreya
      Firstly I read all ur ff n os..n comment on it too…but if I missed some plzzz forgive me
      N thanks a lot for showing ur love ??

  16. loveleen

    hey shatakshi ur ff ws a damn awsm bt i didnt undrstnd y u took such a sudden step to end it infact to leave TU is much mr shockng…i hope d fact of ur ff being copied didnt make u take such a step….u shudnt b affectd by tht cz we trust u…though we havnt met evr bt ur writing has exprssd ur emotions….if u r taking dis step to conc in ur studies den no probs…u hav a grt future ahead….nw no mr bak bak…jus i wud request u to keep visiting tu wen u r free n plz keep presenting us ur lovely writings..i wl miss u badly…

    • Shatakshi

      Hey Loveleen
      Thanks for understanding dear
      N yes its not for that incident
      N thanks a lot for reading??

  17. Sayeeda

    Hey yrr yesterday u gave me my tei family back and made me felt so special …..but suddenly u r snatching my sis from me that’s u. ….why what happened suddenly ….let me tell u if u taking such decision coz of some person copying ur ff nd u think that we think that u r copycat them I’m sorry I won’t be thinking our relation is based on trust nd love …though we never met but still the bond we share is not definable… we all trust u but if there’s some other reason for such decision then plzzz let me know …u know right now I’m in office but after reading this I’m not able to concentrate on my work as I wish that u plz change ur mind …if u want to end its ok but plz dont leave tu ….
    If u don’t have prblm then give me u email I’d so that I can be in touch wid u ..

    • Shatakshi

      Hey Sayeeda
      Love u dear
      N plzzz don’t sacrifice ur work with this…n u didn’t say anything about my episode???
      N its nothing like that…don’t think that I m doing all this becoz of that reason…
      N sure my e mail I’d is
      Love u??

    • Ritzi

      yes sayeeda ur absolutely correct but pls can i ask u what they showed in sbs segment today…..pls i m dying to knw tht

  18. dreamer

    Shatakshi di pls don’t do this.
    U know what , when I started my first ff every1 motivated me but I don’t know why u r words gave me different happiness and this ff was one of my most favourite one.u r a superb writer.but 4 whatever reason u r leaving be successful…..all the best….And if possible sumtime post u r writings….I will miss u and ur writing terribly. Luv u di….

  19. Anushka

    Plz shatakshi di tell the reason y did u ended ur ff. I think its a trend, so many writers like pali, Sanam di, akku di, avantika di have taken a big break. Akku di for studies while sanam di for cousin’s wedding. Rushi has ended her fan fiction. Plz tell na…. ??? ? ???? ???? ???????? ???? ??? ????????? ? ????? ?? ?? If it is a trend then tell me.. I will also stop writing my one slots.
    Di u r truly amazing. U r a great writer. U r
    one of a kind. Ur parents must be so proud of u. U r my inspiration di. I love u a lot. U r like my elder sissy. U r mind blowing, marvelous, amazing, awesome, fabulous, fantastic and much more. Ur fan fiction was one of my favorite ff. I’ll definitely miss it. But tell me one thing y r u leaving Telly updates? I wanted to talk more but I m not getting words to praise u. So I think I should end it. It is my longest comment on tu. Love u di to the square of infinity?❤❤❤ ???? ??? ?? ??

    Here is my email I-D [email protected]
    Now we can be in touch?

      • Shatakshi

        Hey Anushka
        Thanks for reading
        N its not a treand but I feel that its becoz of studies…its a high time now so all r engaged in it
        N plzzz u have time so do continue ur os as they r lovely
        N u may see my e email id in comments…
        Love u ???

  20. dreamer

    Sorry guys if I hurted somebody….everyone’s comments r special but I just wanted 2 write my feelings 4 her as she always motivated me.sorry guys if I hurted sumone..I didn’t intended it…but di I m surely gonna cry…hope 2 see u soon…all the best…try 2 visit tu sumtime di…luv u loads…if possible pls reply…..missu di…see u soon

    • Shatakshi

      Hey dreamer plzzzz don’t cry
      N yeah don’t make me guilty for the decision…n if I get time.. I will surely come on tu just to read ur stories…
      Love u??

  21. I was a silent reader. I really loved your ff. And something made me to comment. God bless u with alll the happiness… May all your wishes come true…?

  22. Sidmin(twinj)

    Hey shatakshi I dint expect dis frm u…frm mrng I ws visiting TU pg jst to c if u hv posted it r nt…finally wen I saw ur ff I ws happy bt happiness turned to sadness wen I saw last episode…ur ff s one of my fav ff u shldnt hv ended so soon…plz cum back soon with another ff of twinj wenevr ur free…all the best fr ur future n s u shld reach to the expectations of ur parents as ur der oly daughter…all the very best fr everything u do in ur life dear…gonna miss u n ur ff soooooooo much…n ty fr updating ur ffs regularly…u were the oly one who ws posting ff daily bt nw u als ended it…

  23. Sayeeda

    Ur episode is can’t be defined in words but still i m trying hard to find words to praise u…
    Great; stupendous; unbelievable work ; remarkable;phenomenal; stunning ; radical ; spectacular;incomparable; best masterpiece ….
    U have out done urself ; u r really a shining star leaving a glittering smile on everyone’s face u r really a great examples for others . It was a pleasure to read ur ff …u know if u were present In front of me I would surely gave a bone crushing hug…. love u nd All d verrryyy best for u future life nd I will be contacting wid u soon..

  24. Krystal

    hey will uh plss name the site in which ur ff is being copied plsss i too want to read the epi 13 wrrittn by her plsssss give the site plsssss

    • Shatakshi

      Hey Krystal n Tara it was just an assertion… I mean to say to that person to write their ff by their own instead of copying….n as I ended up my ff in 12 episodes so unjust mean her to write the further episode if she can….aab samajh me aaya??

  25. jasmin

    Hey satakshu plzz…don end this…i know its ur personal life…but plzz…n btw the epi was awsome…n plzz if u r ending fhis ff its really heartbreaking but…plzz dont leave this tu pagw….plzz yar….btw lovedthe ending….will miss u…hope u come baxk with a bang…..plzz write os in middle….

  26. Sayeeda

    Ritzi exactly I can’t tell u coz my friend told me about that.
    She told me that Sid will be replaced by new one ….they r conducting auditions for the role of Kunj …they showed 2 name one is Rafi malik last seen in tere sheher mein nd the next one was karan verma..

  27. tara

    noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo….HOW CAN U DO THIS….I DONT BLVE..U R LYING RIGHT?? plzz tell me u r lying…. 🙁 🙁 i was waiting for ur ff not to see final episode y shatakshi?? u knw m crying now…
    i never expected this… plzz do keep in touch through os…plzzz its a request.. u r a phenomenal write..nd we dont wanna lose u… 🙁 🙁
    love u loads…miss u..
    take care.. 🙂 🙂

  28. Liya

    Hai shatakshi i am a silent reader it is a big shock that your ending the ff………Thankyou soo much for entertaining me with your fab writing …….plzz try to write another one and i think next when you write plzz post on all the main sites your hard work should not goo wastee….God bless you dear

  29. crazy

    U r such a danboo mean crap Han?
    U made me cry..
    How dare u ..
    Now I ll complain to my Lil sis abt it
    Shrutiiii scold her beat her do what ever
    C she made me sad again..
    U know with grt difficulty she made me happy but u made me cry again…
    But this ff was loved one n ll b loved one…
    Lots f love ..
    N yeah I got a new frnd here n NY she read ur ff
    She Aldo sent lots f love to u

    • Shatakshi

      Hey crazy u have full permission to scold me kick me n even rip me for what I have done…but plzzzz don’t be sad…
      N yes thanks for liking it to u n ur new friend…??

      • crazy

        Jaaaaooo mafff kiya
        I completely understand this matter
        N vase b all left to Shruti now hehehege

  30. srija

    again an amazing update ??????
    but will miss you???
    i respect your decision but seriously i’m feeling very bad ???
    you know that from your very first episode have you always entertained us with ur wonderful & amazing writing skill
    so i became a big fan of yours from your very first episode ??
    i will really miss you or better to say we all will miss ur ff very badly ???? and u very much
    well ur ff was my favourite ff and it will remain my favourite one ????
    well best of luck for your future ??????
    and fulfill your parents dream
    if possible do come with an os or a ff

  31. Aliza

    U r damb gooooooooooooooooooooooddddddd!!!!!!! Bt y the hell did u stop writing yaar… u know this is jus the 2nd episode of urs on which m commenting n plzzzzz yaaar… m really upset with u…

    • Aliza

      Hey shatakshi dear m really sorry bt i cldnt control my emotions bt m extremely sorry to hurt u.. i understand wat it wld feel wen smeone else copies ur piece of hardwork… bt plzzz do forgive me n yesss as i had said earlier m always awaiting ur comment on my ff… coz the comment of urs giving me a degree actually phd in twistology… had really made my day n i was literally blushing… so plzz m requesting u i know m selfish bt plzz comment… n yess guys i wont be able to post my ff for the nxt days.. bt i will try to comment on ur ffs….

      • Shatakshi

        Hey Aliza…u know what I m literally smiling now…I know its weird but yes…I really had no idea that it was u…its nothing like that…. n the most important thing is that u accepted it… N at the end if the day this is what matters the most….
        I know I was hurt…n.I.accept it
        I one of the comments when someone asked u about the ff being common to the tu page….u replied it by saying that u post the ff on tu also….that made me hurt…
        I was really upset….but never mind becoz now.I don’t have any grudges with u….
        N thanks a lot for saying…
        U really made my day
        Love u for the guts u have to speak the truth…??

  32. Rashi

    Shatakshi u said that u will at least write 20 episode…..yaar my favorite episode ended today… was Sid’s last day on shoot….I’m really crying?????
    But ya really enjoyed ur ff….
    U are a brilliant writer…..
    Hope u get a good college and score good marks in JEE 2018 ….all the best….luv u….?????

  33. panchi

    Awesome one yaar …… i jst love ur ff dear …… bt y did u stop writing ???? i will miss u and ur ff vry vry much …… i m rly upst wd u …..

  34. Cutie pie

    I ll miss u suprb ff yaar i wish dat dis ff doesnt end soon bt its already sone u sounded lyk bunny nyc ff lov u lots n miss u

  35. forever fan of twinj

    Sahtakshi di kya yaar aapne meri puri mehnat pe pani pher diya.pata hai Maine kitne pappad bele the crazy di ko manane k liye par aap vo pappad kha gayi .very bad haan.
    Now crazy di aap batao mar diya jaye ya chod diya jaye.bolo meri di ink saath kya kiya jaye:-) 🙂 🙂
    And shatakshi di aap bhi na ye kya kya.end kr diya vo bhi itni jaldi.not fair.par koi Baat nahi jao maaf kiya after all carrer bhi toh zaroori hota hai jaise har ek frnd zaroori hota hai.
    N btw I m from UP Frnds???

  36. twinjfan-(tamanna)

    shatakshi…gonna miss u yaar…it was really a very good fan….not only good I can say the best ff….love u n ur ff…

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