You are like a dream to me by lover and Aarohi…. Promise day special..(Twinj os)

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Hii guys happy promise day….. Today i will promise that i will try to fulfill the promises that you want. So do tell me what promises you want from me in comments..

And thank you for all your love..

Ok so now enjoy the os..

Dosti keh alaava bhi kuch rishte hote hain. Kuch rishte joh hum samajhte nahin, kuch rishte jo hum samajhna nahin chahte. Kuch rishte jinka koi naam nahin hota, sirf ehsaas hota hai. Kuch rishte jinki koi deewar nahin hoti, sarhad nahin hoti. Aise rishte jo dil ke rishte hote hain, pyar ke rishte hote hain, mohabbat ke rishte hote hain…

Here you all go to my os..
You are like a dream…..

Let’s begin..

I am Twinkle Taneja now Twinkle Kunj Sarna. I married to him. It was arrange marriage but yet love. Both the family choosed both of us for each other. And then we both fell in love. 

But after marriage he went to fulfill his duty towards his duty. He is an army officer. He promised that he will protect the nation without even caring for his life. It had been 1 month since i lastly talked with him.

I got married to him 1 year back and he promised me that we will celebrate our anniversary together. I know he can never break his promise.  From promise i reminisce the vows of our marriage. Yes the most trusty and the holy promises done during marriage.

Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai unhone kaha tha ki chahe jo bhi condition ho. Jaisi bhi pareshani ho. Wo mera saath kabhi nahi chodenge. Hamesha mere saath rahenge kisi na kisi roop mein. Hamesha mujhe pyar karenge. Aur Hamesha mere liye ziyenge. Khud se pehle mere barein mein sonchenge.

{I still remember the way he promised me that he will stay beside me either it up and down. He will never leave me alone and will always stay with me in some or other form. And he will always live for me. He will always think of me before himself. }

Yeh saari baatein mujhe bola tha meri shadi se pehle… Aur aachi tarah apni duties nibhayi bhi hai.

{He told me all this before marriage. And i have to say he fulfill all the duties so well.}

Mujhe yaad hai main hamesha bolti thi ki mera Mr. Perfect aisa ho jo khud se pehle mere bare mein sonche. Khud se jyada mujhe pyar kare. Wo sirf mera ho aur main sirf uski. Uski life mein main hi first and last ho. Wo mujhse apni sari batein share kar sake. Aur main usse apni. Jab duniya mere saath na ho tab bhi uss waqt wo mere saath ho. Hamesha mujhe support. Galtiyon mein mujhe dantein nahi balki pyar se samjhaye. Jo apne mummy papa se bhi Bahut par karein. Jo kabhi yeh na jataye ki Maine ye kiya hai tumhare liya. Jiski baaton ko main bina kahe samajh sakun. Jo mujhse true love karein. Kyunki mera aisa manna tha ki pyar ek baar hota hai. Hum Jyada waqt saath mein jiye na jiye lekin jitna bhi jee payein wo sirf aur sirf hamara ho. Zindagi na bhi jee paye saath mein toh bhi pal mein zindagi jee le. Aur wo pura pefect na ho but aisa ho mujhe complete karein. Jo mujh mein na ho wo usme ho aur jo usme na ho wo mujhme. Aur mere friends bolte hai aisa koi hoga hi nahi duniya mein lekin mujhe pata tha main hun toh tum bhi ho kahin na kahin. Hum ek na ek dinn jarur milenge. Mujhe pata hai par sayad uss waqt hamein iss baat ka pata na chalein.

{I remember I always use to spoke about the qualities of my Mr. Perfect. As i tell i want him who think of me before his, who loves me more than himself. The one who thinks he is just mine and I just his, for whom i will be the first and last in his life, who could share with me all his sayings. And even i can do the same with him. Even when the world is not with me i want him to be with me and to support me always. The one who didn’t excused me for Mistakes , I want him explain the things with love. One who also loves his mummy and daddy , who never told I have done these things for you. The one whom i can understand without words. Who loves me truely. Because I believe that love happens once in whole life. If we weren’t able to spend so much time then its ok but i want all the time we spend to be our own only. If weren’t even living whole life together then its ok but i want us to live life in those moment only. I don’t want him to be perfect i just want him enough to complete the emptiness in me. It is like that the thing which is not in me will be in him and vice versa. And my friends use to Speak that there is no one like that in this world, but I knew I am then you would urge you to be somewhere too. We will definitely meet one day I always knew that. And may be that time we didn’t even that we are made for each other.}

I was so lost in my thoughts that i didn’t even noticed he had already arrived. He smiled at me. I came to him and we together cut the cake. He made me eat the cake and then vanished.

I told he always use to fulfil his promise I said with proud looking at his photo having garland when a drop of tears fell from my eyes.

As soon as it touches ground the cold breeze air touches me. And i smiled and said no I am not crying. Happy Anniversary My love.

THE END…

Duniya mein kitni hai nafratein … phir bhi dilon mein hai chahatein … mar bhi jaaye pyar waale … mitt bhi jaaye yaar waale … zinda rehti unki mohabbatein….

{There is so much hatred in the world … but still there is love in the hearts … even if the people you love die, and your friends disappear … their love always remains alive.}

Guys this story is so much related to my heart. Don’t know how i started to write this and when I ended. I just know that all the word of this os is just written by my whole heart.

So guys Hope u liked it? Thanks for lending ur valuable time n reading my OS. Sorry if it bored u. Do drop ur cmt below?
And do tell What is your view about life partner and love do tell?

Love you a lots..
SiyappaQUEEN, Lover, Aarohi..

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49 Comments
  1. Hey survi y u always tell that u bored us nd how anyone can be bored by ur fantastic shyaris jaan…anyway the os is so beautiful marvelous loved it…
    luv u….
    byee..

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      Bcaz I know that my writing are boring. And it always use to bore everyone…
      Thank you so much for commenting yaar.
      Love you…??
      Bye

      1. again u said it..jaa main tere se gussa hun..

    2. SiyappaQUEEN

      Ok ok solly aab toh mann jaa…

      1. chal thk h lekin ajj promise day pr promise kr ki kabhi nhi bolegi ki tera writings se sab bore ho jate h

    3. SiyappaQUEEN

      Ok I will try.. Pakka Plomish.?

  2. SidMin

    Hey … Just Loved it
    It was a bliss reading the OS each word Twinkle said …. was really defining how Kunj is … a perfect Husband just Like the show …
    Love you 🙂 Keep writing 🙂

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      Thank you Mili dear… And your words means a lot to me yaar.
      Love you more…???
      Bye

  3. Sameera

    Wow yaar lover meri Jaan soooooooooooo cute os yaar loved it to the core seriously such a cute n emotional story ??????????

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      Thank you so much Sameera dii. And I have a surprise for you please read it. I will post on 16 February.
      Love you ??

  4. Presha

    Hey lover its awesome dear just loved it to core nd u didn’t boared us but u entertain us nd this was a emotional one just loved it lovely os

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      Thank you Presha….?? Glad that you liked it…
      Love you…

  5. Mia12

    Kya yarr rula dia na tune,,??????pata hai army officer sunte hi mujhe shak hua ki kahi yeh sad ending na ho,,???but ho hi gaya,,???? but wo teri shyeri yarr urfff… hamesha meri dilko chu jati hai,,????????????? It’s sooo heart touching,, I justtt loved it yarr,,????????? mujhe or cahiye jaldhi post karna OK..???? as always ur LOVER is waiting 4 ur new piece of writing,,????…
    And……,,
    .
    ??..HAPPY PROMISE DAY..??
    Today I promise to be with you that we will always remained….
    ??.. FRIEND’S FOREVER ..??
    .
    Love you my shyeri queen..❤❤❤
    Muaaaaahhh,,???

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      My baby I made you to cry. Am solly… Maaf kar de mujhe apni tuti futi shayari queen ko. Waise I am glad that you love me to that extent. Love you more… ????
      You always made me smile and blush yaar. Thank you.
      Bye…?

  6. RUTU.....

    Emotional and fabulous os dear and loved your shayari

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      Thank you dear…??

  7. Hey aaru,
    Tu mujhe yeh promise kar ki tu yeh a/c delete nai karegi aur agar time hoga toh on hogi…yeh vaada pura karde pls…aaru yeh os ne toh dil chodiya mera…must agree u r just amazing…Ur thoughts r just great…Luved it…So cute yaar…Aur meri craziness queen tujhe kisne kaha ki yeh boring tha…yeh toh 0% bhi boring nai tha…Boring he nai tha,superb tha…

    Love is a sweet dream…Love is beautiful…pyaar may log pagal hojate hae yeh bahat sun na hae aur may twinj ke pyaar may pagal bhi hochuki hu…Aur regarding life partner I haven’t thought yet…Love u aaru.

    Loads of love,
    Twinj

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      Are yaar you know na I love you toh chal mann li teri baat. Thank you yaar. But this time I am literally shocked to see your comment. Tussi toh thank you nahi bol skati isiliye I just want to hug you…
      Love you..?

      1. Love u too.Jhor ka jatka kesa laga…Meri dear ko jatka laga…kitne volt ka …just joking.Aaj thodi free thi toh TEI page visit karne ka bahat maan kar raha tha issliye socha ki visit karlu aur first may he tera OS dekh liya aur yesa thodi nahota ki itne ache os pe may cmt nakaru.N thanks meri baat maan ne ke liye.

      2. Aur yeh le ek tight wali pyaar bhari hug meri taraf se parcal kar rahi hu hope tujhe mera parcal mil gaya…mujhe bhool maat jana…Love u

    2. SiyappaQUEEN

      Chal koi nahi that’s great that you commented..??

    3. SiyappaQUEEN

      Tera parcel mil gaya mujhe meri jaan.?? Chal tujhe bhi meri taraf se ek hug.. Mil gaya na☺

  8. Sohi

    It was tooo emotional yaar
    And that last lines after os from mohabbatein film it was awesome
    Do continue

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      Thank you dear…
      Love you?

  9. Kruti

    i legit loved this…..though a sad end…..but very beautifully written…..Amazing

    Love u?

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      Thank you meri jaan. I love you to the core..???

  10. Purvi128

    Yarrr survi rula diya na … tu ne ????????????? Mujhe bhi army officer padhny ke bad laga ki yeh sad ending hogi but then when i read .. i was so lost in my thoughts that i didn’t even noticed he had already arrived.. i thought ki nhi this is no sad ending .. or fir when i read he vanished .. my heart ached.., and when i read looking at the photo having garland… literally yrrr mera phone mere hath ss gir gaya … wo toh shukar hai i was sitting on my bed or else mera mob to toot foot jata ..! Or phir mein kisi ke bhi os ffs nahi padh pati .. but thnak god… seriously mere hath se fon choot gaya tha .. or tears started flowing from my eyes. ..
    I was so engrossed in this os .., that even my mom asked ki why are you crying??
    Pagal lag rahi hungi mein .. but its true ..! It really touched my heart…! ?????????
    Or haan i promise you that we will remain friends forever .. till i die.., i promise you survi my darling❤❤???
    And i want u to promise that u will never ever say that ur writings are boring nd u will always remain by my side ..!?

    Love u loads❤❤?????

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      Solly maaf kar de tujhe rolane ke liye…
      And I am thankful ki Mobile nhi tuta warna mujhe itni sweet sa comment kaise milta…
      Really you made me feel glad that you liked my os. Love you and do post your ff. I am waiting…???
      Ok Plomish i will that i won’t call it boring but you’ll get bored ye mujhe pata hai…

      Chal bye
      Love you…??

      1. Purvi128

        I have posted it and an os too .., os is published do give it a read…
        Or ye bat tu apnydimag mein bitha ly teri writings mujhy kabhi bore nhi kary gi samjhiiii …!
        Love you more

      2. SiyappaQUEEN

        ???
        Haan gayi dear
        But I love u more

  11. superb n toooooo emotional

  12. Simiyy

    Hey Aarohi
    It was really emotional

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      Thank you dear….??

  13. Amaya Bhardwaj

    Hey lover aswm fabulous os…… Emotional Kr Diya tune to yrr…..Silly I couldn’t cmmt on ur previous os by I read it and it was mind blowing….Orrr Teri sayari ka Kya kyu…..Uffff wo to maar hi dalti h……Tune kha we itni acchi sayri laati h……
    I love ur all sayari……. Promise day h aaj to promise Kr de apni iss frnd se ki tune hmesa khus or muskurati rahegi…..I hope ki we can be frnds……………
    Loveee uuuuuu 1 2 3 4 5 ……………
    Take care
    Keep smiling

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      Oye don’t call my friend silly baby doll. And I thought we are already friends yaar. Agar tu nhi samajhti toh its ok…☺
      I am ready to become your friend.
      Tum sab ke pyar se yeh shayari likhti hun. Toh aise barish karti reh pyar ki. I love you to infinity. And Plomish hamesha khush rahungi…??
      Bye

      1. Amaya Bhardwaj

        ??????????oye tune saachi kaha m tujhe frnd ni smjhti balki Mai to tujhe bestest friend apni bff smjhti hoon jaaneeman……
        And if u love me titt infinity then who will love my jiju…..
        Oye tune sabse unke life partner or love k bare m to views pucch liya…..Apne ni bategi …..I m eager to know abt it…….
        Btatana jrur… Loveee uuuuuu
        Loss of kisses and hugs to you…..,,????????

    2. SiyappaQUEEN

      Oye hoye bahut jaldi hai tujhe mere bare main janna hai toh twinkle ne bola? Wo toh mera hi view tha na. About my life partner. Tu bata apna view..

  14. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous….heart touching os…

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      Thank you dear…?

  15. Shalini15

    It was too emotional and heart touching os. Rula diya mujhe???????? well Loved it sooooooo much.? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

    By the way pehle apne life partner ke bare mein bata then I’ll tell but can’t promise ?????????????????

    Love you ? ? ? ? ? ? ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      Thank you dear..
      By the way itna toh bol diya aur kya janna hai? Aab toh tum batao.
      Love you.
      Bye??

  16. Baby

    yaar tu naa……….humesha ek hi chez khegi boring boring boring……….huh….bat nhi krungi ab mein tujhse…………..
    yaar itni emotional or pyaari luv stry……….srsly ro ro ro ke bura bura bura hal ho gya hai…….
    luvd it portrayed kunj’s role sooo nicely and soo beautifully……….PERFECT………..

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      Thank you dear…??
      Ok I am Solly maaf kar de apni priyu ko… Kar degi na?
      Love you…..☺

      1. Baby

        sochun gi maaf krun ki nahi….hehe

  17. Ramya

    Hey queen
    U made me cry I mean I having tears
    Dear at start der was a smile on my face
    But end was so emotional
    So lovely amazingly superb
    Love u keep smiling

    1. SiyappaQUEEN

      Awww… Solly to made you cry. I am glad that you liked it…
      Love you too…?

  18. Aanya_pandey

    That was soo good dear!!!

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