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Life vs Love … A Raglak OS by Zuha!

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So it is Zuha here with a OS for Raglak… I was bored writing FFs so I decided to write a OS on Raglak… It maybe long so please bear with it and me…..

The journey begins…..

It was a dark, rainy night… The night which changed our lives… The nature was drowning in darkness and so were our lives… With each drop of rain our life was decreasing… And we were unaware of it!
I packed my stuff and tip-toed from my room.. I was eloping today with my boyfriend, Laksh… We are dating since our college and yesterday we decided that we will unfold our relation in front of my families… he was an orphan and lived in an apartment… I was all prepared to tell my family that I loved him and all was going well but it all changed when my mother told me that they have ficed my alliance with someone called Sanskaar and he was mad after me but I also know one thing that my sister, Swara loves him a lot…I was all shattered and locked myself in the room and cried… I called Laksh and told him everything and we were left with any other option than to elope… It was 12 of night and everyone was fast asleep and I quietly tip-toed out my room I called Laksh, “I have packed my things, now tell me where I have to reach?”
Laksh replied, “Ragini, come on the railway station, I have booked a train for Amritsar, we will reach there and marry there!”
I said, “Laksh I am afraid, My family!”
Laksh replied, “Don’t worry let the marriage happen then we will convince them as well as!”
I said, “Laksh my family is very dangerous they may kill us!”
Laksh said jokingly, “If we have to die then we will die together!”

The words which he said jokingly will turn as our life’s biggest truth, we didn’t know that!!

I hushed him and said, “Don’t talk about dying!”
Laksh said, “Now disconnect reach the station hurry up!”

I disconnected the call and tip-toed down the stairs but I was unaware of the presence of my cousin-sister Uttara in the kitchen, she noticed me and saw me holding the bags and shouted, “Ragu where are you leaving at midnight! ”

I was in utter shock but I can’t lie to her and I shouted back, “Look Uttara I am eloping with my boyfriend, please don’t tell it to anyone!”

She listened it in shock and nod her head in “No! ”

She shouted, “Ma, Chacha ji, Papa! Ragini is eloping!”

*Gayi bhens pani mein*

In a minute or two the whole house was lightened, I ran out as fast as I could!! I noticed my father and uncle sitting in the jeep, I found a cab and sat in it, my family was unaware of the fact that I am in the cab…

I safely reached the station, I handed money to the cab driver and thanked God! Now I thought I was safe and sound and my family won’t reach here!

Now I was waiting for Laksh and continuously eyeing the watch⌚⌚

I was unaware of the fact that my family has reached the railway station! I was sitting on the bench peacefully when I found myself surrounded with guns! I was left shocked to find my father, uncle and brothers (step)! My uncle held a gun and loaded it I was Damon shocked!!

He pointed the gun towards me.. I was in utter shock!

He said, “Come back home, silently and marry Sanskaar or else I will kill you!”

I nodded in “No!” this fumed my family!

I with a lot of courage said, “No! I will not come back; I love Laksh and I will Live with him, you may kill me but our love is pure it will never die!”

Uncle shouted as he pulled the trigger, “Oooeeeyyyy!!”

And the bullet hit my chest crossing my heart! I fell on the ground… I saw Laksh coming out of a cab… I smiled looking at him… maybe this is the last time I am seeing him… I was just praying that my family don’t do anything with him… My family.. not family, my murderers left from there leaving me dying, I was smiling looking at him…as he stepped a wire fell down on him (due to rain) and he shouted and I was also left shocked as tears roll down my eyes… He writhled in pain as current pass flow him…We both eye each other… We shared an intense eyelock as our soul was out of our body… we left this world smiling!

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So here it ends, I think I bored you all??I am sorry if I did! And please do tell me how was it via comments ☺☺

Keep smiling!

Credit to: Zuha

51 Comments
  1. OMG it’s soo emotional loved it..

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Thanks dear, I am happy you loved it!

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Thanks Venni!

  2. That was fab dear zuha u are always very good writer my sis .. love u

    Sunehri mehta ( sunuzurahlima besties forever ) ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Thank you so much dear sissy for appreciating my writing skills and Love you 2!! Keep smiling…

  3. Awesome 🙂

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Thanks dear!

  4. Awsm os zuha….loved it……superb lovestory of raglak……

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      I am happy anjali (kriya) that you enjoyed this OS ☺

  5. Priya tripathi

    Awesome so emoitional

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      I am happy you liked it and yes it was indeed an emotional one☺

  6. Wow awesome one shot Zuha I don’t read Swaragini FFs much but I do read the one shots n this is awesome hehe

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Thanks dear Fatarajo, I am happy you read it and liked it as well as… Keep smiling…

  7. Wow so emotional episode ☺

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      I am happy you enjoyed and yes it was indeed an emotional one… Keep smiling!

  8. OMG very sad os

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Yeah indeed a sad one… Thanks for commenting ☺

  9. It was indeed nice and lovely hope to see you with more OS

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      I am so honoured that my skills are appreciated by a wonderful writer… Dear I love your FF, Rahul:Papa… Lavanya:Mama (Raglak), it is just fab! Thanks and will come up with more soon☺

  10. V nice…..

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Thanks dear!!

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Thanks dear!!

  11. SUPERB. HONOUR KILLING IS SUCH A SHAMEFUL ACT!

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Thanks dear… And yes indeed it’s a shameful act!!

  12. nice story…..

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Thanks dear!

  13. Too Emotional dear…

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Indeed an emotional one… Thanks for commenting!

  14. Very emotional os dr

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Indeed an emotional one… Thanks dear!

  15. Halima (SuNusZuRahLima❤️??) A.M

    Awesome… It was also emotional and how an you say you bored us? I was amazing… Love you, keep smiling and stay blessed, Ramadan Kareem??

    1. Halima (SuNusZuRahLima❤️??) A.M

      Sorry,
      *can
      *it was amazing

      1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

        Hey that’s ok… No worries??

    2. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Thank you so much Api… I am so happy that you enjoyed it and I didn’t bore you out? And yeah it was an emotional one… Happy Ramadan ☺ Keep smiling…Love you too❤

  16. Nusz (T!B!H) (~Nusz) (SuNusZuRahLima) forever and you need to rock the world!!!

    This was really sad :((( you made this rock so much, love you lots and yes I posted my thahaan ff aha~Nusz

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Thankless Nuszzzz… you always make me smile by your comments ?☺☺ No seriously!! I am happy u enjoyed and keep enjoying? And I will definitely read it ASAP… but quite busy due to Ramadan☺
      Keep smiling… Love you too my dear❤

  17. Hey zuha. Really a sad ending. But I liked the story. Keep writing and you didn’t bore us.

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Thanks dear and I am happy that you enjoyed and didn’t get bore ☺

  18. Superb dear

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Thanks Ammu☺

  19. So bad u killed raglak…lol…nice OS ..emotional one

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Indeed an emotional one… Thanks for commenting and yeah killing Raglak was indeed sad….

  20. Fab dear nd too emotional…

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Thanks dear and yeah emotional one…

  21. very emotional……………..plzzzzzzzz write another OS…………

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Thanks Aastha… And I have posted a new 2S for Raglan as “Karvachauth – A disaster and a new beginning” hope you’ll read☺

  22. Very emotional plzz write another raglak os with a happy ending

    1. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

      Indeed an emotional one… I have posted a new 2S for Raglak as “Karvachauth – A disaster and a new beginning” hope you’ll read it.

  23. Shocking end
    Awesome ff

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