My life with u … Raglak os Valentine day special

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Hiii guys I am new here and it’s my first raglak os

Laksh’s Pov
10th Grade:-
As I sat there in English class, I stared at the girl next to me. She was my so called ‘best friend’. I stared at her long, silky hair, and wished she was mine. But she didn’t notice me like that, and I knew it. After class, she walked up to me and asked me for the notes she had missed the day before. I handed them to her.

She said ‘thanks’ and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don’t want to be just friends, I love her but I’m just too shy, and I don’t know why.

11th grade:-
The phone rang. On the other end, it was her. She was in tears, mumbling on and on about how her love had broke her heart. She asked me to come over because she didn’t want to be alone, So I did. As I sat next to her on the sofa, I stared at her soft eyes, wishing she was mine. After 2 hours, one Drew Barrymore movie, and three bags of chips, she decided to go home.

She looked at me, said ‘thanks’ and gave me a kiss on the cheek..I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don’t want to be just friends, I love her but I’m just too shy, and I don’t know why.

Senior year:-
One fine day she walked to my locker. “My date is sick” she said, “hes not gonna go” well, I didn’t have a date, and in 7th grade, we made a promise that if neither of us had dates, we would go together just as ‘best friends’.

So we did. That night, after everything was over, I was standing at her front door step. I stared at her as She smiled at me and stared at me with her crystal eyes.

Then she said- “I had the best time, thanks!” and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don’t want to be just friends, I love her but I’m just too shy, and I don’t know why.

Graduation:-
A day passed, then a week, then a month. Before I could blink, it was graduation day. I watched as her perfect body floated like an angel up on stage to get her diploma. I wanted her to be mine-but she didn’t notice me like that, and I knew it.

Before everyone went home, she came to me in her smock and hat, and cried as I hugged her.

Then she lifted her head from my shoulder and said- ‘you’re my best friend, thanks’ and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don’t want to be just friends, I love her but I’m just too shy, and I don’t know why.

Marriage:-
Now I sit in the pews of the church. That girl is getting married now. and drive off to her new life, married to another man. I wanted her to be mine, but she didn’t see me like that, and I knew it. But before she drove away, she came to me and said ‘you came !’.

She said ‘thanks’ and kissed me on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don’t want to be just friends, I love her but I’m just too shy, and I don’t know why.

Death:-
Years passed, I looked down at the coffin of a girl who used to be my ‘best friend’.
At the service, they read a diary entry she had wrote in her high school years.

This is what it read:

‘I stare at him wishing he was mine, but he doesn’t notice me like that, and I know it. I want to tell him, I want him to know that I don’t want to be just friends,
I love him but I’m just too shy, and I don’t know why. I wish he would tell me he loved me !

………’I wish I did too…’
I thought to my self, and I cried. ?
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It is short os
Sorry for that

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49 Comments
  1. Superb & Sad also….

    1. Moulirao07

      Thanks dearie

  2. SRSL

    Awsmmm and emotional…

  3. Oh wow such an emotional os. I feel like crying. Really loved it to the core

  4. hey janeman..it was amazing yar..i wish they confesed there love..plz do write more on raglak yar..loved it

    1. Moulirao07

      Thanks dear so Much

  5. Nyc journey… Bt great thoughts…….. Greatest inspiration…. Thank u

  6. Awsm… Gratest thoughts and greatest inspirations

  7. Nyc journey… Bt great thoughts…….. Greatest inspiration…. Thank u

  8. Akshata

    awesome but emotional too

  9. RSR

    This one is too good. I just loved it. What a concept!! Dear, this story is superb. I was just seeking for an escape from my studies and saw this OS. And after reading it, I couldn’t stop commenting. Awesome. Bless you and take care…

    1. Moulirao07

      Awww but pls don’t escape your studies or else u would blame me that because of her i got less Marks …. thanks???

  10. Fairy

    It’s too emotional dr….so so sooo amaznggg fabulousss…loved it dr soo muchhh!!!well done….keep on writng lyk dis…..keep rockng n stay blessed sweety????????

    1. Moulirao07

      Awwwwwww really u loved it ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
      Thanks for it wishes ….and same 2 u

  11. Kitkat

    awesome one dear…. love it…. but felt sad at the end….. being silent in some situations causes big losses to us n for that we regret our whole life…….?????

    1. Moulirao07

      Awww thanks and yes they lost their love

  12. Asra

    amazing emotional os dear…loved it….keep writing like thz dear….tkcr dear….

    1. Moulirao07

      Thanks dear for the wonderful comment

  13. Nice nd emotional

  14. Kakali

    Hey Mou, just a small doubt..!! well i guess i have read it on SwaSan..!! This is same story same dialogue everything same.!! Are you that writer who wrote it kn MY SwaSan? Don’t get me wrong but Would like if u clear my misconception..!! Thnk u..

    1. Moulirao07

      Swasan ……?????? no my crush is my first ff

      1. Kakali

        Oh..!! That ff is ur 1st work..!! Well then hope u won’t mind asking you a Q. “Did u ask the real author before posting it as RagLak story?i mean it’s kind of copying other’s work na?” coz i have read it in SwaSan version.. try an understand my point..!!, U r new here rit..soo I’m just saying you”If SwaSan lovers got to know u have this kinda act, they will be roaring upon u..”..
        Thnk u..

  15. Fats

    Great OS. It was beautifully written. It’s emotional how their love was never confessed. Thank you for writing this. I had a lovely time reading it ?

    1. Moulirao07

      Thanks dear for liking my work ….

  16. A.xx

    Aww amazing and loved it ,,,,now i know not to make this mistake in life xx

    1. Moulirao07

      Thanks dear and u should not

  17. Wow
    Awesome

    1. Moulirao07

      Thanks…..

  18. IQRA222

    just one word fabulous

    1. Moulirao07

      Thanks dear

  19. Awesome update…keep writing stay blessed…

  20. I read this os on swasan too…!! But the story is still a bit more in that os…!! But the dialogues and matter whatever you have written…is same as that…!! Are you the same writer??!! I hope you had taken her permission in writing this…if you are not the same…!! If not…it comes under plaguerism…!!

  21. Awesome os and plz write more Raglak stories

  22. Jazzy

    awesomeee

  23. Suprrrrbbbbb

  24. soo cutee

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