Close Menu
  • Submit Your Article
  • Featured
  • Activity
  • Members
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
  • Home
  • Contact Us
  • Submit Article
  • Activity
  • Register
  • Login
  • Members
  • Logout, {username}
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
  • Home
  • Featured
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
Home»Fan Fiction Original»LiFe TuRnOutS
Fan Fiction Original

LiFe TuRnOutS

administratorBy administratorMay 16, 201633 Comments2 Mins Read
Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Share
Facebook Twitter LinkedIn Pinterest Email

Heyy frnds it’s Richa again writing after long Hope you like it….
*****

It was a new day again, a day that started with no such strange happenings, everything was normal the day passed peacefully, and it was evening time, and a fight broke out between my cousin and my brother over our puppy. Each claimed it was their and soon it was joined by my little sister and then the matter was passed on to our parents , they interfered but to poor puppy’s luck it had to go to the clumsy, over reacting weird neighbor’s house again , as a punishment for the greedy fighting kiddos but I wonder, who was at punishment the fighting kids or the puppy . Well the argument continued between the kids and frustrated I left for a long evening walk.
HUH!! I let out a long breadth and , looked at the evening sun, and mourned a bit over my luck and set out on my short expedition. Expedition?? Yes, an expedition it was…….

I was happy now and my mind at peace , and as the evening breeze blew it gave me comfort, and I was proud of my decision of the walk, and chuckled thinking about the condition at home. But that happiness was short lived and soon I was gonne regret my decision……………..
I was in a good mood enjoying the evening breeze and the setting evening sun, I went and sat on a bench nearby and closed my eyes and began enjoying the peaceful evening and a some shrill series of voices irked my ears….

**TO BE CONTINUED….

Hozz it??? Pls review its continuation depends on ur response and ideas frnds.. and it’s gonne be a short one …..
-Thank you
Richa out

Share. Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Previous ArticleSwaragini Ek nayi kahani episode 25
Next Article LOVE IS ETERNAL(swasan)…… EPISODE 6

33 Comments

  1. Hima on May 17, 2016 8:26 am

    Nice start..realistic.Please continue richa..

    • richa (titli) on May 17, 2016 10:48 am

      thankuu thanks a lot Hima well it’s based on a real story only just a bit extra drama to spice up 😀 thanx nd keep reading 😀

  2. Mona Swasanholic Varunholic on May 17, 2016 11:37 am

    hi di.. yeah it’s much realistic and different from other..
    Pls continue…

    • richa (titli) on May 17, 2016 12:20 pm

      sacchiii sacchi muchhiii monuu thankkk uuu dr lov u Tc

  3. dia on May 17, 2016 12:42 pm

    Its awsmm….awsmm as always…..

    Nd where are richa mata’s pravachan…..???

    • richa (titli) on May 17, 2016 12:45 pm

      ooo Parvacchann agali baar se shuru honge iss baar vraam
      nd thanxx keep readin 😀

    • richa (titli) on May 17, 2016 12:46 pm

      just a sec shud it be a tragedy orr a full lov story or humour like NAUC suggest plsss

  4. dia on May 17, 2016 1:44 pm

    All threee…..i mean a love story with tragedy and comedy

    • richa (titli) on May 17, 2016 2:20 pm

      meanss at the end hero orr heroine will hav to Die OHHH kkk

  5. nisha on May 17, 2016 3:04 pm

    thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

    richwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

    I am so frightened about the 3rd world war started at sh page

    don’t know what to do

    You saved my life this time or else me too fully dead

    Now I will be here for some time its peace here at least

    tell devga to come too I didn’t find her here

    well you are there or here i came wherevere you decide to stay.

    love u

    devga ====== ooooooooooooooooooooooooh any hot news about sanjeeda sheikh Need it girl

    dia :::::::::::::::::::::::::::: my sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetheart dia aaj ka samachar or life turnouts ke baare mein aapka kyaa vichar haai

    kripyaaaaaaa apne shabdo mein anuwad kare

    dhanyawaad

    richwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa bhainseeyaaa bahut khus hai re

    due baalteee dhud de gayeee

    richwaaaaaaaaaaaa ke is nayee page ki khusee mein

    Jeete raho beetiyaaaa

    tohre 1000 naahe naahe lakh bachee hoo

    ashirwaad det rahe

    luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv u friends

    keep smiling

    • richa (titli) on May 17, 2016 3:18 pm

      oyee mehngaaaiii ka zamana hai itna kharchaa kon uthayega nd hum 2 humaree 2 i follow the slogannn

  6. nisha on May 17, 2016 3:06 pm

    hey wow richwaaaaaaaaaaaa this story seems too real

    and loved it well I want to read more of it

    and also add a luv story waitinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

    keep smiling

    richwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

    richwaa rocks bhainseeyaaaaa shockssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

    luv u re richwaa ben

    • richa (titli) on May 17, 2016 3:15 pm

      hahaaa nyccccc tooooooo c ma pikachuuuuuuuu in farmmm but i thinkk WW3 will continuee for a lonn tym as that mukti called us rubbish ppl so i replied in a polite manner but if she continue i will come to rudeness i just didnt like her attitude nd wayy of speaking dr thats it and i didnt say much she herself dragged devga nd dia into it….
      nywaysss DEVGA ka naam sab galat ku likhte h??

  7. dia on May 17, 2016 3:11 pm

    No no no……not that……but like

    they got seperated due ro a tragedy and then get back together

    or

    they both face some tragedy in their life and then meet

    • richa (titli) on May 17, 2016 3:16 pm

      arreyyy reporter madammmm Tragety m meet nahi hote they alwayss separate

  8. richa (titli) on May 17, 2016 3:25 pm

    http://www.focusandleap.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/03/whatsapp-dp-fpr-friends.jpg

  9. Emz fasa on May 17, 2016 3:31 pm

    Superb 🙂 pls continue dr

    • richa (titli) on May 17, 2016 7:32 pm

      Thanxx Emz i’ll continue soon as couldnt type today nd keeppp readingg

  10. nisha on May 17, 2016 3:33 pm

    hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

    richwaaa me tooo phas gayee re

    kya karuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

    I so luv devga a lot

    and I know she is fully right by her own side

    the main culprint is timing

    u see the time taken a comment to posted

    that is the main culprint

    we think different we wrote different

    and when the comment posted

    that we see

    Ramayan is finish and

    we ask who is ram

    the matter is like this

    what to do kya kare eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

  11. nisha on May 17, 2016 3:54 pm

    I saw natyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

    guyzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

    she said to devga that devu u forget me

    the dp is same too

    she is natyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy richwaaaaaaaaaaaaa

  12. richa (titli) on May 17, 2016 7:31 pm

    oo nish frgt i think she is usin mental games like AAryan indirect targetting 😛 well i knw hw too answer in her language butt dont wanne dragg fight to nextt page u knw i wanted to bcm a psycaterist but that those bookss chakkar aa gya ndpsycologists r psychos LOL

  13. richa (titli) on May 17, 2016 7:35 pm

    nywayss nishh i wud b getting busy with fic typing wrk soo may not cmmnt muchh but u all can chat nd plss call devu here kkkkkkkkk just 4 u all i did it nd welll ladaiii khatammm as SH pe commenting kaa tym hi nii 😉 chahe buzzdil samjhe but valid reason iss ficc b typee krnii hhhhh,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

  14. dia on May 17, 2016 8:53 pm

    Richu di……tragedy like

    heroine returns home from the expedition…..she finds her family murdered with only that puppy left…..she goes to find the murderer along with puppy…..

    • richa (titli) on May 17, 2016 10:10 pm

      arrey it would be like that one i wrote that short story FF but i’ll seeee nd update by thu GN SD TC

  15. dia on May 18, 2016 5:09 am

    NEWS

    namaskaar….m reporter dia aaj uss kaaran ke saath vapas aayi hu jisne bachchon ki summer breaks ki khushiyo m break lgva di h……vah kaaran jisne students ka jeena haram kia h….vahi jiske naam se students darte h…..vahi jiske naam se bachcho. par zulm hota h….uska naam h, homework……issi cheez n bechare masoom bachchon ka bachpan keval kitabo ke dher tak simit rakha hai…..mamle ki jaanch m jut chuki h inspector sahiba devga ji…..aage ki khabro ke liye bane rahiye hamare sath…..cameraman comment box ke sath m reporter dia apse ijazat leti hu….

  16. pragna on May 18, 2016 3:14 pm

    its awesome Richu dr..good start…plzz continue dr

    • richa (titli) on May 18, 2016 3:38 pm

      MYY LOVELYYY MASIIIIII G THANXX A LOT DEAR LOL MISSD U TCCCCCC MUAAAAHHHHHHHH

  17. Devga on May 18, 2016 6:26 pm

    Wwwwoowwwww thannnnkkkkkk uuuuuuuu uuuuuuuu is small but still i was literally relieved to get a page of my own….. Omg i was very much tensed because of wat hapnd wen i returned to meet u guys….

    • richa (titli) on May 18, 2016 8:00 pm

      arrey chill!! u know agar woh mukti ne jo aaj kha ki i called her egoistis etc if she asnt she wouldnt hav dragged the fact on nextt page nd popularisedit if i spread the word na she’ll regret nd u knw i always got full marks in debate , nd speech m a good fighter indeed

    • richa (titli) on May 18, 2016 8:02 pm

      that calmness here is just to respect social platform and ……………….. show that we INDIANS ARE good nd calm tooo alsioooooo nishaa missing 🙁 and i posted nextt parttt

    • Devga on May 19, 2016 1:40 am

      I knw dear leave it….. And any the story is awwwwwwwsome…. Looks like another acls v r going to travel with…. All the BEST….. Letz c wen it is posted

  18. Roma on May 20, 2016 8:26 am

    Awesome wowwww richaaaaa, welcome back my sweeeeeetuuuuuu. …..missed u a lotttttttttt. …the story is very good ….lovely start…plzzz continue dear. …all the best. …will wait for the next episode, love you loads. ….muaaaaahhhhhh. …

    Hi nisha, dia, devga, pragna, hima, mona, emz….how r uuuuuuuuuuu allll???… love you loads. ..take care deariiiiiiieeess. …byeeee

    • richa (titli) on May 20, 2016 8:49 pm

      ROMAA i was justt waiting forr ur cmmnt thanxx a lot lov ya tc 🙂

Sponsor
Latest Posts

Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance

November 29, 2025

Manpasand Ki Shaadi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Arohi Receives Love While Kanika Grows Jealous

November 29, 2025

Advocate Anjali Awasthi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Anjali Accused of Theft While Padma Goes Missing

November 29, 2025

Shiv Shakti (Colors) 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mahadev Stops Ravan and Declares His Second Test Failed

November 29, 2025

Advocate Anjali Awasthi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Kavya Misuses Mehek’s Jewelry

November 29, 2025
Sponsor
Latest Comments
  • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
  • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
  • Anon on Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance
  • Anonymous on Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Intrigues and Secrets in Virani Family Wedding Plans
  • Yoni on Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai 22nd November 2025 Written Episode Update: Broken Circles
  • Enam on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
  • Enam on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
  • Enam on Anupama 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Pari Defends Anupama and Video Evidence Released
© 2025 TellyUpdates - All Rights Reserved. Privacy Policy | Terms

Type above and press Enter to search. Press Esc to cancel.