Life partner…. Ss… Part 8

Hi… I know you all are bit disappoint right?? Cz in last chappy there was full of ragini… But i think it was needed…. So… I wrote that… Ok for now… Ragini will not abort her child for swara… I am not in human… And there will be no Tashan and all between raglak… Here raglak are very sweet couple… Laksh is very understanding… So he will not leave ragini in her toughest situation also… Ok??? And rahi baat swasan ki toh… Guys have patience… And han after reading this chapter… I want a suggestion… I will tell at the end so kindly read and tell ok… Cz i thought another thing and after reading comments i am in dilemma… So help me… Ok…

So let’s start now….

Sanskar is seen to be walked in empty street… His eyes are swallowed… His eyes and nose are red for continuous crying… Even his face is red… He is wearing white shirt and black jeans… Hands are in pocket… He is walking..(bg music hairani from love shagun…)
Kuch raaste..
Manzilon ko chhoo ke mud jaate hain
(sanskar remember how he make swara sign the paper and marriage)

Mmm.. kuch naate judte judte hi toot jaate hain
(sanskar remember how he left her in mental asylum and told her he is the devil of her fairy tale life)

Hairaani hoti hai
Aankhen jo roti hai
Hairaani hoti hai
Aankhen jo roti hai
(sanskar close his eyes and sits down while crying and cried out loudly)

Tadpati hain teri baatein aur
Yaadein teri rulaati hai
(suddenly he heard a laughing voice and ‘princeee’
… Sanskar Immediately looked up… And he smiles in tears and extend his hand seeing swara… Her whole lips are surrounded by chocolate and her hands also… Swara runs towards him)

Tadpati hain teri baatein aur
Yaadein teri rulaati hai
(swara cross him… He frowns and turns back… He sees another sanskar… Who is twirling swara and swara is laughing… He cries…)

Tadpati hain teri baatein aur
Yaadein teri rulaati hai
Dil rote rote rukta hai
Toh rooh bikhar si jaati hai
(imaginary sanskar wipes the chocolate by his and looks at her with fake anger and also wipes her hands… While swara was giving tight smile… Sanskar also smiles…. Suddenly all vanished and sanskar looks here and there)….

Ab kis se roothe aur kise hum ab manaye
(sanskar remember swara’s fearful yet hatred full eyes… And how she scared whe he tried to touch her)…

Bethe unn yaadon ko mann hi mann mein dohraaye
(sanskar cried out more loudly… Shouting…)

Hairaani hoti hai
Aankhen jo roti hai
Hairaani hoti hai
Aankhen jo roti hai
Hairaani oo…
Sanskar remember what happened after he realized his love…
Flashbacks…
Sanskar happily goes to mental asylum… He stops the car in front of the gate and runs inside happily… Some stuffs looks at him and gives a shocked expression and runs towards head office…
Staff: sir… Wo sanskar maheshwary has came…
The head of the asylum stands up quickly and starts to sweat… At that time sanskar enters…
Sanskar : hallo mr rajvanshi…
Rajvanshi gives a fake smile and tells him to seat…
Sanskar : no no… I want to meat my wife… And make discharge paper i wanna take her with me…
Rajvanshi Immediately stands up and starts stammering..
Rajvanshi : nnnnoooo… Mr… Sanskar… Wo wo… She… She is not well… How… How can you discharge her…
Sanskar gets angry and smells something fishy…
Sanskar (strictly) : i want to see my wife right now…
Rajvanshi signals the staff something which obviously seen by sanskar… The staff was about to but sanskar holds him by his collar and throw him corner of the room still looking at Rajvanshi…
Sanskar : 😑😑tell me where is she… What did you do with her…
Rajvanshi : wo wo…
Sanskar : let me call police…
Rajvanshi : no no… Wo… I… Will take you there…
Rajvanshi and sanskar goes to second floor… He takes him to a dark corner very dirty… Rajvanshi opens a door where he sees 5 girls tied with iron chain sitting on floor… He slowly goes to a girl who is lying may be unconscious… Her face is covered totally by her long hair… Sanskar with shivering hands slide the hair… He steps back seeing his love unconscious…. Blood stain near lip totally tired… Circular small small burn injury on her hand… He looks at the head with blood shot eyes…
Sanskar : what is this… What is this… (he shouts in dangerous voice)..
Sanskar takes swara in his embrace… : shona princess… Open your eyes… (he cries)… Open this…
He Pulls the chain…

A nurse came and hurriedly open them… Sanskar lifts her in bridal style and takes her very closely near his chest…
Sanskar : what is this…
Asks Rajvanshi…
Rajvanshi : wo wo sir… She was so stubborn and even bite some stuffs… Thats why she was shouting and…
Sanskar makes swara stand by support of him… Near his chest and gives a tight slap to him…
Sanskar : start to count your times… 😑😑
Sanskar again picks her up and place her on car…
Sanskar (call someone) : hallo… Abhimanyu… Give me details of srirampur mental asylum…
Sanskar looks at unconscious swara with teary eyes… And takes her to his flat which he bought for his personal work…
Sanskar Place her on bed and looks at her body carefully… Deep cut across her neck… He sees the chain and the mangalsutra is missing… He takes her head on her lap… And kiss her forehead and cries…
Sanskar : i am sorry shona… Please forgive me… It’s all because of me… But now i promise i will take care of your… I will never ever leave you… And i will not forgive myself for this…
Suddenly door bell rings…
Doctor and dolly didi comes…
Doctor : look she is very weak… They tortured her so much… I have bandaged her injuries… U just take care…
Sanskar nodes with tears…
Dolly changes her clothes and makes her freshen up… She was still unconscious… Sanskar send the police… When raglak reached…
After that sanskar goes to swara and apply ointment Her injuries… And lay down besides her and takes her in his embrace… He cares his face loving and kiss her cheeks…
He keeps on looking at her… She was sleeping… He can’t even realize 2 hours passed… Slowly slowly sleeps also came to his eyes and he also sleeps taking her in embrace…
His sleeps broke when he fills someone is struggling and sobbing in his embrace… He opens his eyes and sees swara is struggling…
Sanskar Immediately loose his grip and sits… Swara also sits and goes backward buring her face in knees and sits fully shrunken in fear…
Sanskar goes to her and try to hold her arm : shona… What happened…
Swara (cries) : nei… Nei… Leave me… Chale jao…
Still turning her face… And goes more towards the headboard of the bed… Not letting him touch…
Sanskar : shona… It’s me… Sanskar… Look your prince… Come to me…
He tries to go to her…
Swara : nei…nei… Diiii… Devil…
Sanskar takes a back… He himself told her he is devil…
Sanskar forcefully drag swara towards him… And tried to cup her face… While swara struggled crying vigorously….
Sanskar : shona… Look… I am your prince… Forget everything what i told… Please forgive me…
But swara was not listening anything she was just struggling and crying vigorously murmuring ‘leave me… Don’t take me’
Dolly comes there running…
Dolly: sir please leave her…
Sanskar : no… Please… Shona… Look at me…
He tries to cup her face but swara Continuously moving her head…
Dolly : please sir…
Suddenly swara sees dolly and recognized her…
Swara extends her hand towards dolly while crying miserably…
Dolly runs to her… Sanskar sees this with teary eyes… And leaves her… Swara throw herself on dolly hiding herself in her…
Sanskar looks at her with teary eyes and he also cries…
Sanskar last time call her : shona please i am sorry….
But swara hugs dolly more tightly and was not looking at him at all…
Sanskar slowly left the apartment…
It’s late at night… Sanskar in his car…
Sanskar : no… No… She can’t hate me… She is just scared of me… I will make her mine again… I will give her all toys and her favorite things… She will forget everything…
Sanskar goes to mm at about 1 am… And next day he wake up at 5 and goes to his apartment with all her dolls and toys…
He directly goes to her… Swara was sleeping… He smiles and takes her in his embrace… He cares her hair and face and apply ointment on her injuries… Swara wince in pain in sleep… Sanskar blows air and cares her hair…

At about 10…
Swara slowly wakes up… She sits on bed looks the whole room… Her toys are everywhere… But she didn’t take any single and bends her head… Sanskar comes and place her favorite doll on her lap… Swara looks at him and again gets afraid…
Sanskar : shona… We will live like before… Look i brought your toys…
Swara throws everything and jumps from the bed and Sits in the corner of the room… Dolly comes there and goes to swara… Swara hugs her and cries… Sanskar was numb… When swara looks at him… He sees something in her eyes which is not only fear but hatred also…
‘she hates me ‘ sanskar was all numb… Tears comes out…
At 1st when they met there was only fear and some naughtiness some shine in her eyes… Later which change in to pure love fun beliefs… And now hatred…
Sanskar walks back looking at her blenched body… Tears falls from his eyes… He hits the door… And sits on the couch at dining area…
Dolly somehow makes her sleep… And comes out…
Dolly : do you think she will forget everything what you did with her??? She is kid… Her mind and heart is like a 5 yrs old kid’s mind… Which is brutally stabbed by you…
Sanskar said nothing…
Dolly : bring ragini… May be She will make her normal…
Sanskar said nothing and walks out of the apartment…
In car…
Sanskar takes swara’s doll…
Sanskar : how can i bear your hatred swara… Those eyes where i used to see love how can i tolerate hatred there… What have i done… I killed your love trust with my own hand… How will i live now….
Sanskar cries…
He goes to mm…
(rest you know what happened)
Fb ends…
Sanskar comes to the park…
And sees the swing… He remembers how he used to push the swing and swara giggles… Her every smile makes him happy…
Sanskar sits there all numb…
Suddenly he heard a voice…
‘oh so Sanskar maheshwary excepted his defeat?? ‘…
Sanskar looks up and sees himself…
Sanskar looks confused…
Imaginary sanskar : she is your wife… You love her… Gain her trust again… Give her love more than what you gave before… Love has power which replace any hatred…
It’s vanished …
Sanskar wipes his tears and stands up with hope and determination…
Sanskar : i will gain your love again… And this time i will give you this much love that you can’t go anywhere from me… You will love me more than your di… You will remember me whether you are happy or sad…
Sanskar runs to his apartment…
Sanskar opens the door with bang and sees… Swara is in laksh’s arm… Ragini is standing beside him… And dolly is behind them… Sanskar looks at swara and goes towards her… Sanskar takes swara from laksh’s arm… Both takes care her sleep will be not broken… Ragini tries to protest… But sanskar only sees his loves face… Sleeping peacefully…
Sanskar takes her back to the room and place her carefully on the bed… He kisses her forehead… And smiles… Swara turns her face to sanskar in sleep… He cares her hair… Suddenly someone hold his hand and he looks burning eyes of Ragini…
Sanskar gets up and Ragini drags him outside…
Sanskar : bhabi…
Ragini : laksh ask your brother what he wants now…
Sanskar folds his hands… : bhabi… I broke your and bhai’s trust… But believe me bhabi… I am not that sanskar… I love swara with all my Heart… I can’t live without her… Please don’t separate me from her.. Please bhabi… One chance… One chance bhabi… Last chance… Everyone should get a chance to rectify their mistakes… So please bhabi…
Ragini : how could i believe you sanskar… I told you not to break her heart but you did that only… Her injuries her fear… How can i believe you sanskar…
‘ same the way your mother believed you and your father forgave you ‘…
All looks at the direction… A man of late 50 standing there…
Ragini : papa…
Shekhar comes and place his hand on her head…
Ragini hugs him…
Shekhar : everyone in his or her life do mistakes and even did crime… But if he or she rectify his or her dids… Then they should get a second chance…
Ragini looks at him…
Some flashes comes…
A lady holding her big baby bump is running behind a small girl of 10…
Suddenly a car comes in front of the girl… That lady gets shocked… She starts to rum faster… Her facial expressions is showing its paining… Blood is running through her legs… She takes the girl and falls on the road hitting her bump side wise…

Scene end…
Ragini stumbles remembering this… Laksh holds her…
Ragini looks at Shekhar… Shekhar signs her to give him a chance… Ragini looks at sanskar… And goes to him…
Ragini : i hope you will not break my trust…
Sanskar gets happy and hugs her… : thank you bhabi…
Sanskar departs…
Sanskar : bhabi please don’t go from mm and Please take her also please…
Ragini looks at laksh… Laksh nodes his head…
Shekhar sees swara… And cares her hair… Some tears fall…
Shekhar : i am leaving…
Ragini : when you came papa…
Shekhar : just now… I saw sanskar… What you think i don’t know anything what’s happening in your lifes… May be i didn’t fulfill the responsibility of a father… But i always keep a eye on you both… I will leave tomorrow…
Ragini : papa… Once come to meet shona…
Shekhar : she doesn’t even know that i am her papa… And now her condition is not good… So i will come later…
Ragini nodes…
Shekhar : sanskar laksh… Take care of my daughters… And han sanskar i hope i didn’t take wrong decisions…
Sanskar nodes and takes blessings…
Shekhar left… Sanlak comes to the room… And sees Ragini lost in somewhere….
Laksh hugs her side wise… Ragini looks at him…
Laksh : chalein… You know na your condition… My wife and my baby also need some rest now…
Ragini place her hand on her tummy and nodes with happy tears… Sanskar takes swara in arm… 4 headed towards mm… Dolly says she will come next day at about 9… She wants to go home… All nodes…
Sanskar places swara on back seat… Ragini was about to enter from other side…
Sanskar : bhabi… I can’t be near her when she wakes up at least let me with her when she is sleeping…
Ragini sighs and nodes… Sanskar sits with swara taking her in his embrace… He place her head on his Chest… And laksh drives back to mm…
At about 4 in the morning all entered in the house… They amused to see everyone is awake… Laksh ignores Everyone… Laksh was carrying sleeping Ragini … Sujata gritted her teeth and fumes in anger seeing swara in sanskar’s arm… Sujata was about to say something…
Sanskar march towards his room with swara and laksh with Ragini…
Sanskar place swara carefully on bed and lay down beside her taking her in embrace…

Next day…
Our princess slowly open her eyes and sits… She rubs her eyes… And looks around… She frowns and looks so many bubbles flying in room… She blinks her big eyes… A bubble came and bloomed on her nose… She backed her head a little and ups her hand to touch another… She get down from the bed and looks everywhere… She looks at the wall full of her photos… Happy faced photo with her didi and one big photo of swasan… Sanskar is wrapping her from back… Both are laughing… Swara’s face is near sanskars neck and sanskar is looking forward… Swara immediately hide her face in palm…
Sanskar who was smiling looking her playing with bubbles… Gets sad… Swara turns her face…
Still hiding in palm…

End…

Precap : what about music compitition…

Ok guys now tell me…

Do you all want swara to become a perfect normal girl??
As i thought not to make her normal… But if you all want…
I know… In real… None will accept a mentally disabled wife for whole life… It will be quite unreal… So i am dilema… So please help me by saying what you want…

Hmm… Now next will be up to your decision… So please… And sanskar’s punishment?? Is not it enough that he is bearing the hatred of his own love… Do you want anything more??

Thank you so much for comments… Thanks for reading… I know it’s getting boring… Sorry to make you bore…

52 comments

  1. Yogholick

    Hey its awesome n last chappy was also awesome so what if raglak scenes were more but that was needed na n I loved it try to post soon dear

  2. Sus

    Yaar its common, now sanku is repenting by giving extra love to her thats enough

    Its correct nobody keep mental person whether he/she is so lovable

    But I think slowly sanku ragini should teach her everything by this they can ehnace her mentality level
    I think this will be better according to storyline or reality becoz here ragini laksh and sanku love swara too much

  3. Yogholick

    No I think this is enough punishment for sanskar n ya I also want swara to be perfect but swara should continue the hatred for sometime n ya I would love to see swara in a competition as a mental unstable person n post soon pikachu

  4. Aashuu

    Its. awesome………….wanna to be norml…..bt only when all accept her …how she is………..may v aftr winning competition………..its upon uuuu…..fr pnishmnts …..i cn get it…….

  5. Alsha

    |Registered Member

    I do want swara 2 b normal..nd she herself should punish sanskar and others r their behaviour.it will b more nice.
    And awesome update. .. update next soon plzz

  6. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Its amazing…. Yup i can understand that ragini’s scene is needed for the story…. In real none can accept a mentally stable girl is right…. And i don’t want her to be normal…. But it won’t be nice also…. U can make her normal during her delivery…. Bcoz i saw in movies and all that a mad girl will become normal in their delivary time….. But its ur wish…. I am ok with both

  7. Simi

    |Registered Member

    Sanskar is feeling guilty n rectifying his mistakes.. I think thats enough..
    Yeah make swara normal.. Singing competition too if Swara is able to perform 😊

  8. Yamuna

    How dare you call it bore it’s one of my favorite story and about swara you know very well about it so waiting for your next part eagerly

    • Nagamanasa

      |Registered Member

      Nikky if u think that she is wasting ur time then stop reading this…no one forced u to read..If u want raglak then write ff on raglak or read raglak ff…But pls don’t discourage her writings…each and every writer spends so much time for writing these ff’s inspite of their busy schedule…if u dont like then dont read the ff but pls dont talk in such a way it hurts others feelings..Hope u understand

    • Shivangi

      Nikky how can you discorage anyone like that…………….if you don’t like it then read only raglak ff,os and ss…….but neber discourage anybody……case it hurts

  9. Swarna01

    |Registered Member

    No no u did ri8. M happy. Vry nyc epi. N i think dat big bump lady was shomi n due to dat accident shomi lost her lyf n swara became a mentally unstable person. Bt kuch v bolo now a days it was one of my fav ff.

  10. Tejasswi

    if you knw that then why are reading and what did you said she is wasting her time?? Nikky if you want raglak ff u try to write one or read only raglak ff don’t her even am a raglak fan but i love her story. till nw i was a silent reader now only am commenting. you are always discouraging the writer so just stop it

  11. Tejasswi

    dear i was a silent reader of ur ff 1st time commenting on your ff. ur all chapters of this ss was very good update next part and thanks for including raglak scenes in ur previous chap eagerly waiting for next chapter and ya make swara normal love u dear all the best for ur further chapters

  12. a

    awesome..i love swara and ragini ‘s bond in ur ff..it is needed for d story..more than a sibling ragini is like a mother to her..that is why their r so attached to each other..
    i want swara to be normal..ur ff is not boring..and im loving it..continue soon..tc..

  13. Romaisa

    Wow loved it make swara real but she should forgive him and then olz i want some scenes with mental swara and sanskar (like funny scenes) and then you can make her normal

  14. Rabia0032

    |Registered Member

    Awesome dear n yeah sanskar punishmant is enough N yeah if sanskar love is true so there is no Problem with swara being mad but dear try to make swara normal with sanskar love n care…
    I want only swsan

  15. Mica

    |Registered Member

    well… i don’t want Swara to be normal since it will be somehow illogical as Swara born with down syndrome….
    in this world, down syndrome won’t be normal, what we can do only teach them about the basic thing of life..
    regarding Sanskar’s feeling for her, let it be, love feeling is unique and secret, we can’t choose to fall in love to particular person..
    if only Sanskar can accept down syndrome girl as wife, who are we to judge ?

  16. Nagamanasa

    |Registered Member

    Awesome dear…make swara normal plss…coming to sanskar’s punishment swara’s hatred is enough for him..it is the biggest punishment..post next part soon

  17. Sasmita

    Very nice.this is my 1st comment to ur ss. But I am a big fan of urs. I read all ur stories( drunkard husband, ur ts brahmachari).now this one is outstanding.plz give another chapter I am waiting .

  18. Rashi

    Hii pikachu..I was the silent reader of your SS till now..but this update forced me to break my silence..it was an outstanding update.. Post next one ASAP

  19. Mumpi

    |Registered Member

    its a superb epi nd i understand ur point k no one accept an abnormal girl for life long. so swara should become normal wid sanskaar’s effort. nd its enough punishment to bear her hatred.

  20. Tania

    plz make her normal again and as for Sanskar he is repenting because he can’t face his true love’s hate towards him. By the by it is amazing your fan fiction.

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