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Fan Fiction Swaragini

Life partner… SS… Part 2

pikachuBy pikachuDecember 21, 201646 Comments13 Mins Read
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Hi guys… This is pikachu again… Guys less response… ???… Don’t you like my story… Chalo sorry… If u feel bore… And please tell me… I will not waste my time…

Next…
Guys previous part was on sanskar’s pov… His pov continued…

It’s dinner time…
As usual bhabi went to swara’s room after serving us food… Bhai is eating… But he is lost somewhere… I was also upset… I again heard her laughing sound… Oh god… It’s piercing my ears… Ok ok… I know she is innocent… But that not my problem or my brother’s problem… For her my bhai is upset… That’s it…
After dinner bhabi went to swara’s room again…
I thought to talk with bhai… I went to his room… But what i see… I become more upset and my blood boiled in anger… I saw bhai is working sitting in couch… I stand in front of him with blood shot eyes… He looks at me once then again engross in his work…
Laksh : u didn’t sleep??
I: what is this bhai?? ???
Laksh(calmly) : now what sanky??
I : what the hell is this bed doing here?? ??
Laksh (surprised) : i am a human.. And i should sleep in bed right??
I: that’s not the point bhai… It’s a single person’s bed…
Bhai give me a ‘so what’ look…
I : bhai… You are married… Have you forgotten??
Bhai sighs…
I : bhai don’t tell me… U and bhabi sleep in different rooms…
Laksh : after our marriage… Me and rago… Slept in a single room that was your room… Ragini made swara sleep and come in room… But One day Swara woke up at midnight and starts shouting and crying out of fear… From that day Ragini sleeps with swara… Double sized bed… When i turn i find the other side empty it’s increase my pain… So i brought a single sized bed…
A tear drops from his eyes…

I(sit on my knees in front of him) :bhai now also you have time… You can get out of this rela…
Laksh : no sanky… I love ragini… She is my life… Kya hua Agar we don’t sleep on single bed… We don’t do our lunch dinner together… We don’t have enough time or space for talking… But all i know that… After bath she wear vermillion and mangalsutra which are on my name… She is called Ragini laksh maheshwary… Whatever happens but the thing which she can’t change she is mine… My wife… And i can wait for her life long…It’s not like that she don’t love me… She also loves me as much as i do… And think sanskar if swars was not there then we would be living a normal life…
I : exactly bhai… Exactly… Agar swara nei hota toh… You and bhabi would be in maheshwary mansion… If she would not be here then you both would lead a happy and normal marriage life… But no… She is here… In between you both… She is a mad girl… Mentally unstable… She should be in mental asylum… That is her right place… Not here bhai…
Laksh : ho gya??? Bol lia… Now listen to me carefully… Don’t talk like this in front of ragini… Please sanky i am happy with my life… I have no guilt that i Choose ragini… And i am happy here… And sanky if you talk like this further then i have to tell you something which will hurt you… So please go and sleep… Good night sweet dreams…
I look at bhai… Then leave the room without wishing him back…
My super duper stupid bhai… Huh…
Sanskar’s pov end….

Third person’s pov…
Ragini made swara sleep and goes to close the window… There she sees laksh sitting in the garden looking at sky… Ragini looks around… Starting of winter… Dew is falling… Ragini shook her head worriedly and takes out long shawl and went to him…
Laksh feels a soft hand on his shoulder… He turns… A light smile plays on his lips seeing his life standing there… He holds her hand a signals to sit…
Ragini : laksh it quite late and… It’s cold out side… Please go inside…
Laksh pleades through eyes… Ragini sighs and sits… But wraps both with the shawl… Laksh again smiles and slightly pulls ragini in his embrace… No one says nothing for long… But sometimes silence says many things right??? Both just feeling each other presencr near them which they get very less…
After sometime…
Ragini : laksh…
Laksh : hmm…
Ragini : you should give divorce me and remarry…
Laksh jerks hearing this… Ragini looks at him…
Laksh : please no… No ragini… I am happy…
Ragini : i can’t tolerate… Everyday a new person will come and say against my sister… Against our relationship… Accuse me and my sis…

Laksh : but who will matter to you ragini?? Those people or me?? I will die Ragini… (cries)
Ragini (cups his face) : sssshhhh… Please no… Laksh…. U know na i love you… But i love my sis too… I can’t leave her alone laksh… I am sorry… (she cries more)
Laksh tightly hug her..
Laksh : i have no problem… Trust me… Please don’t say like this…
Laksh kiss her hair… Ok now stop… It’s late… Lets go for sleep. .
Both enter in house… Laksh drop her near her room… And cares her hair…
Laksh : good night….
Ragini smiles then hugs him tightly and gives a tight kiss on his cheek… In which laksh wide his eyes… And place his palm on his cheek and looks at her… Where ragini giggles and wish him good night and enter in the room… Laksh smiles widely and goes to sleep…
Next day…

Sanskar’s pov…
I came from jog and looks at drawing area where bhai and bhabi is sitting and sipping coffee from same mug and doing little romance… I smile widely and think not to disturb them… So went to garden area… Seems like cry baby (swara) has not woke up yet… Chalo thoda toh time mila inhe… But my thoughts broke on familiar laughing sound… I look at the direction i see… Oh god… Is she an angel?? …
Swara… She was wearing half sleeve below knee length white color floral frock… Her long curly hair is open fully but tied slightly with a small flower like clip… A flowe crown on her head… She is playing jumping clapping… And 3 small White small puppies roaming around her… And licking her feet… Their mother is sitting with no tension in quite far… A male dog also sitting with her… I saw dolly didi also there giving water to plants… But the sight is seems like a cute fairy is playing there… I just forget everything… Everything that she is the reason for my bhai’s sad life… She is the reason for breaking my family… I just watch her leaning against the wall… And unknowingly a smile appears on my face… An unknown desire to play with her… touch her… Laughing with her…comes in my heart… But suddenly she slips in mud… She was about to fall…. My legs automatically runs to her to save her… And i succed… She falls in my arm.. I just admire her… She is like a small frighten kitten… She slowly open her big big eyes and looks at me… She gets scared… And again close her eyes tightly and makes a crying face… And in next second she starts crying ?????
I : oh god… Yeh toh meri bhai k romance ka band baja degi…
I make her stand…
I : hey… Sssh… Sssshhh… Stop stop crying… Cry baby…
She starts to cry more… Hearing this… And hiccup started… Dolly didi comes there running and swara hugs her tightly… And cries more…
Seeing her crying those puppies starts barking at me… And as expected ragini bhabi comes there running followed by bhai… I let out a big sigh… And curse my self for saving her… Idiot stupid girl…As soon as ragini bhabi comes She leaves dolly didi and hugs her…
Ragini : stop shona… Baby what happ…
She stops looking at me…
Ragini : shona baby don’t cry… Are you afraid of him?? (pointing at me)… He is good baby… Stop crying… Say hallo to him… (but cry baby didn’t leave her and hugs more tightly… Huh) shona… Baby… She is like your jiju only…
This time bhai comes forward and cares her hair… She looks at him..
Bhai : doll… He is my brother… He is good… (says with smile)
She stops crying… Dolly didi came with glass of water… Bhai makes her drink water where bhabi was holding her… Wait wait what bhai call her?? Doll?? Huh?? Seriously… I know she is cute and sachi mein she is like a doll only… But she is devil… Cry baby… Devil of my bhai’s life .. What need to pamper her so much stupid girl…
Ragini : shona… Baby… Say him hallo…
She looks at me peeping from the embrace of ragini bhabi and slowly says… ‘hallo’…
Then again hide her face… I laugh at her behavior even everyone smiles…

After sometime…
I : bhai bhabi…
I comes down… I see bhai bhabi amd cry baby is sitting in hall… Cry baby is playing with kids utensils and dolls… I roll my eyes… Bhabi was chopping vegetable and bhai was doing work sitting beside her in his lappy… To day is Sunday…
I : bhai bhabi…
Swara looks at me and slowly goes to bhabi and sits very close to her…
I : wo papa has arranged a party for our new tender… Won’t you both join.
Bhai Looks at bhabi… And then both looks at swara… Who is busy in playing with bhabi’s dupatta…
Bhai : ummm… No sanky… I will come… But ragini won’t…
I : but bhai… Papa told it is bhabi’s reception party also…
Bhabi’s face turns pale…
Ragini : sanskar g… I am so sorry… But dolly di will not stay at night… So i can’t go…
Laksh : and i am going na…
I : but bhai… Why can’t you both understand…
Laksh : sanky… Try to understand yaar…
I : ok then… Swara ko bhi le chaliye…
Raglak : what??? Are you mad??
I steps back…
Laksh : can’t you see… She is afraid of you… With a single person… How will she behave in that much… Just think once…
I : toh… Do one thing… Keep her in one room of our house… And make her sleep…
Ragini : she can’t sleep loud noise…
I : my room is sound proof… So don’t worry bhabi… She can stay there… Please bhabi…
Aftet lots of arguments bhai bhabi agrees to go… And as per planning… At about 5:30 pm.. We all get ready to go…
Me and bhai was sitting in drawing area for them… Bhabi comes with swara… I was awestruck to see her… She is wearing long gown… Cinderella gown… She is looking just like Princess… Bhabi has wear a gorgeous sari… She also looking beautiful… Bhai praise cry baby… She laughs and claps her hand… I smiles… To tease her
I comes in front of her and she hides behind bhabi… And starts peeping like kids do… I laugh…
We starts… I already Told my family no to misbehave… So they welcome us coldly and bhabi takes swara to my room…
Sanskar’s pov end…

Ragini’s pov…
I am scared… No no… Not because i am a new bride and bla bla… But for my baby… My shona… Don’t know why as soon as guests starts to appear my heart starts beating fast…. Relax Relax.. Everything will be fine… Please god… Just finish this party fast… I wanna take my shona from here…
Though i made her understand about party and all… And she was sleeping but i am afraid what if she gets afraid… In every half an hour me or laksh was going to check her…
But from last one hour… No one of us could go… As laksh is surrounded by his clients and all and me??? Oh god mummy ji is showing me to her every friend like i am a taj mahal… And this stupid ladies are gossiping about me and my shona… Never mind… I am used to it… I was running towards upstairs when mummy ji again call me… I let out a sigh and goes to her… Before going i dashed with sanskar ji…
Sanskar : careful bhabi…
I : oh sanskar ji… Please check swara for once… What she is doing…
He makes a irritated face but i am helpless…
I: please…
Sanskar : ok fine…
I let out a sigh seeing him going upstairs… I went to mummy ji…

After some minutes…
I was going to laksh to tell him to go home back but my fee froze as soon as i see my shona is running down from stairs…. Most probably she is crying and chanting my name…And sanskar Is following her to stop her… She dashed with a waiter… And his juice fill trey falls making huge sound… All looks at her… Shona gets more scared hearing huge sound and sits there holding ears closing eyes and shouts ‘diiii’ cries…
I runs to her…
I : shona baby stop crying… I am here only bachcha…
She is crying miserably… One side she is crying and other side all people starts gossiping… I looks at my in-laws… They glaring us…
1 lady : annu… Is she the girl for whom your son left you all…
Sujata: what can we say bahan ji… Mari futi kismat… Jo ye pagal hamari chhode ki gale padh gyi…
I close my fist to control my self…
Laksh : chachi please…
2nd lady : this type of girl is a trouble for all…
3rd lady : she is curse also… After giving birth her mother left this world…
1st lady: now she is breaking families… Good for nothing… Huh…
‘enough ‘i can’t control and shouts loudly…
I : what you say… She is good for nothing… She is curse??? Right?? Ok toh… I am promising you one day will come you all will want to see her for once… Will feel proud as you know her personally…
1st lady : hahaha annu ji… Your bahu is also mad…
All laughs..
I : really?? Then let me show you a demo…
Ragini’s pov end here…

Third persons pov…
Ragini goes to swara and wipes her tears and tells her something slowly… Swara nodes in no vigorously… But ragini insist her and she agrees… Ragini takes a mike… And comes
Near swara…
Swara close eyes… And the thing happens next second… Every person in the hall become shocked amused…
Swara starts singing… Her voice is very sweet… Like a good singer… She is singing like normal people but her acts were showing she is kid… She was jumping around ragini while singing and moving like pendulum…
She was singing ‘mera in raho se hai rishta koi…. Meri kahani’…

End…

Precap : dhamaka…

Please say if you don’t like it… I will stop…

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    46 Comments

    1. Yummy on December 21, 2016 12:35 am

      Hiii
      I know you don’t know me because I’m a silent reader but I like your story a lot it’s different concept compared to others so please don’t think it as time waste
      I really like your story

    2. Febi on December 21, 2016 1:34 am

      Speechless dear……. Please update soon.

    3. Fairy on December 21, 2016 1:34 am

      its sooooooooo amazngggggg update dr….rags is such an awesome sister….loved raglak scene…hehehhe sanky callng swara devil is so funny 😛 …rags supportng swara is soooo emotionalll….n last part is really shock for everyone…waitng eagerly for dhamaka…keeep rockng n srat blessed dr 😉 😉 post nxt part soon 😀

    4. rabia on December 21, 2016 1:46 am

      Awesomee epii dearr ???

      • rabia on December 21, 2016 3:47 pm

        And dear u yourself demanding comments but here many writers comment on your stories but u never commented on their stories i think u should also comment with demanding comments ?

    5. shinchan1205 on December 21, 2016 2:41 am

      This was so cute n I know sansKar will fall for this cute angelic kiddo only….loved it
      Post soon

    6. saheli on December 21, 2016 2:43 am

      plz continue… update soon.. nice episode.. loved it…

    7. Ria on December 21, 2016 3:17 am

      Loved it dear so much don’t get disheartened it’s beautifull

    8. nikky on December 21, 2016 3:32 am

      plzzzz stop favoring swara without reason and raglak is suffering so much even I don’t like swara know want lakshya to talk or angry on ragini or sanky try to separate them to make their brother happy

      • AnuAnn on December 21, 2016 11:16 am

        What is your actual prlm with swara.. In every ff hatred comments for her.. There r many ffs where ragini is single lead.. Go and read that if have prlm with swara .. Here writer is protraying a good character of ragini but u want alone her not Swara..

      • pikachu on December 21, 2016 11:40 am

        Hey hey… Stop fighting… No fighting ok… Actually Nikky.. . Look i am very straight forward ok… Well this is my story and i have my own plans… And if you want this type of story then sorry i could say u should stop reading… Cz my story will not be like what you want ok.. . And moreover i love swasan…. So… Stop your hatred towards swara and read further peacefully if you want…. Thanks for comments…

    9. Kittu on December 21, 2016 4:40 am

      Superb update..waiting fr nxt post soon

    10. mariyajap on December 21, 2016 6:32 am

      Amazing waiting for the next

    11. ARs on December 21, 2016 6:49 am

      It’s awesome dear…post next part asap….

    12. Sindhura on December 21, 2016 7:03 am

      Nice

    13. Simin on December 21, 2016 7:10 am

      Superb

    14. arohi on December 21, 2016 7:26 am

      Its outstanding update
      Loved little raglak moments

    15. arohi on December 21, 2016 7:29 am

      R u going to give both couples equal importance ????

    16. Anu Rathore on December 21, 2016 7:39 am

      Awesome……nd swara is really a cry babyy nd cute….

    17. KrsytleS on December 21, 2016 8:11 am

      Awsm

    18. Soujanya on December 21, 2016 8:20 am

      Awesome

    19. Adi on December 21, 2016 8:23 am

      Heyy it was amazing pls comtinue and post next part asap

    20. Tamil on December 21, 2016 8:47 am

      Awesome dear

    21. Raglakholic on December 21, 2016 9:19 am

      Amazing update
      Little raglak moment’s are adorable
      Please do continue soon
      Eagerly waiting to read more

    22. Simi on December 21, 2016 9:21 am

      Awesome epi dear..
      Missed first chapter

    23. Kaur Daljeet on December 21, 2016 9:38 am

      Amazing

    24. SHAN on December 21, 2016 9:47 am

      nice….

    25. Stg on December 21, 2016 10:16 am

      Awesome ?

    26. anu on December 21, 2016 10:20 am

      awesome

    27. AnuAnn on December 21, 2016 11:10 am

      Awesome dear.. Plzzz do continue

    28. Arshaanya on December 21, 2016 12:39 pm

      Loved it pikachu ?
      Dhamaka dat means swasanz marriage in nxt chappy ????

    29. SNY on December 21, 2016 1:46 pm

      Awesome dr….!!
      Nxt one soon..!!

    30. Abdul hafiz(Uma) on December 21, 2016 2:11 pm

      Superrrr..loved it.. Aww,shona looks so cute.. Damaka*widen eyes… Keep going dear.. Waiting for nxt..
      Take care
      Keep smiling?

    31. vyshu10 on December 21, 2016 3:03 pm

      nice…upload soon

    32. Mahjabeen on December 21, 2016 3:36 pm

      Its amazing…loved it pikachu…waiting egrly fr nxtt

    33. asra on December 21, 2016 3:42 pm

      awesome dear….raglak caring towards swara superbbb…Sanky plz try to understand ur bro….tkcr dear…

    34. Navi on December 21, 2016 3:55 pm

      Awesome

    35. Kumu on December 21, 2016 4:06 pm

      Awesome..plz don’t stop ur writing..
      Its going grt..
      continue soon..tc A.S

    36. mumpi on December 21, 2016 5:02 pm

      wow!!!

    37. IQRA222 on December 21, 2016 7:09 pm

      that was an amazing story

    38. sneha on December 21, 2016 9:49 pm

      awesome

    39. Afra96 on December 22, 2016 10:56 am

      Nice

    40. Donkey on December 22, 2016 12:13 pm

      Hey!! Awesome yaar. But y u always ask for comments. Really in ur ff u get maximum comments but still u ask for comments . Really I hate it. U r asking to comment on stories but I never saw u commenting on other ffs. Yesterday I saw a comment on one os of urs. Leave that. But u never comment on other ffs. Remember one thing if u don’t comment on other ffs donr ask other to comment on urs.

    41. Sushmi on December 22, 2016 11:12 pm

      Amazing a different concept. Plz post next part soon.

    42. Swarna01 on December 23, 2016 11:38 pm

      Na na na dnt stop it. So amazing, beautiful story.

    43. Shagun on December 24, 2016 4:47 am

      I seriously loved ur ff
      I actually love the characters of swaragini
      I love the relation between both sisters
      U reminded me of my elder sis?
      ?????
      Don’t dare to say that ur ff is not good..?
      Update next episode asap

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