It was all a lie…. Twinj (episode 3)

Hello guys , if u all are not liking my ff then plz tell ill end it within 2 episodes. I dont want to bore u all. I know my ff is not good like urs. So plz tell if ur dnt like it and r bored ill emd it. I dnt want to bore u all.

Everything changed..
Maybe it was a new beginning…
I wasnt sure,
But everything had a different charm,
I didnt wanted to know……
Wat was that…..but i know one thing
She was my beloved,
I love her and will always do……………

Twinkle was driving the car and kunj was just continuously dancing using his hands as dj waale babu was playing in the background. Twinkle was having endless smile looking at his innocence bcz she knew , she had to handle kunj like a kid.
They reached twinkles mansion. Twinkle parked the car and they both went inside.
Suddenly kunj started yelling twinki twinki i want water. Paani pyaassss.
Twinkle made kunj sit on the sofa and went and made him drink water.

Then twinkle took kunj to room and made him sleep by singing a lula baie
Twinkle then went to the cupboard and took out a photo frame. Twinkle was endlessly smiling looking at it. She went it into flashback.

Flashback*
A girl is shown working in the kitchen. Maa come breakfast is ready shouted twinkle.
Ya cming beta said an elderly voice.
Twinkle laid out the table and a lady came and sat on the chair and she is revealed to be leela twinkles mother.
Mom look i made ur favourite alloo ka paratha now toh ull eat properly na , so that u can take ur medicines
Leela pouts then nods her had in a yes.
Twinkle smilled looking at her cute sa pout and she also sat to eat her breakfast.
Twinkle plz dont do this. Plz dont do all this work , i am dere na to work. Said leela
Mom plz i am ur daughter nd i have full right to do all these works and u cant stop me. Thats final said twinkle.

Suddenly a voice is heard and twinkle comes out of her flashback. She looks at her phone and sees Dr jaya message.
Dr jaya had sent twinkle kunjs report. Actually kunj suffered from some problem in his left side of his brain thats wat lead to his arrival in asylum.

Twinkle then kept her phone aside and went to kitchen prepare kunjs favourite food.
Twinkle prepared kunjs favourite alloo ka paratha, chole bhature,gajar ka halwa, and many more things. She just wanted that kunj get proper food and all kind of facilities, so that he can recover.

Suddenly twinkle heard some noises coming from kunjs room. She saw kunj jumping on bed and crying like a small kid.
Kunj. Kunj shouted twinkle.
Kunj looked towards twinkle and quickly went and hugged her.
Twinki twinki coack…… Coakrach on my bed. He started crying again nd blurted out
I haaaaaaaaaaaaaateeeeeeeeeeeee coackrach.

Kunj calm down …. Said twinkle
Dont wrry u come with me to another room , u come with me said twinkle.
Ok twinki said kunj.
I am hungry said kunj.
Twinkle smilled towards him and took him to the dinnimg table.
She started feeding with him , with her hands and kunj was enjoying it bcz in asylum they were given very bad food. So kunj was more than happy.

Precap – lots of masti

Plz do comment and let me know.
😘

51 comments

  1. Shonaa...

    |Registered Member

    it was amazing…. cute episode…. i didn’t read1 or 2 episode but i’ll read it now…. i really like ur ff…. plzz don’t end it…. nd try to make it long…. nd don’t end it plz bcoz i wanna read more…. nd i m not getting ur title “it was all a lie” it is connected wd d story or wht…. urghh i think i have to read 1 or 2 episode may be i’ll find my answer nd if no dn u r here naa… keep writing….
    love u….

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks dear😘😘😘😘 i am glad u r liking it. Dnt wrry i know u r confused but after reading further episodes u wont beπŸ˜‰
      Nd ya shona the story nd title br related to each other

  2. Fan

    |Registered Member

    Awesome epi chiku!!! I loved it..it was not boring at all…n dont u dare end it..coz iam eagerly waiting for the next part..so plz post it soon!

  3. SIDMIN-Daamini

    |Registered Member

    Chiku…… chiku ……chiku…… chiku……Chiku…….πŸ™ƒπŸ™ƒπŸ™ƒπŸ™ƒπŸ™ƒπŸ™ƒ
    Do u know chiku is also my favourite fruit !!!!!!!!!!!πŸ˜‡
    U r also just as sweet as chiku
    Darling it was superb
    Short one but lovely
    Happy to watch a new side of my cute kunj though he is at critocal state which is sad thing but loving this kunj πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™
    Dear keep rocking like this
    Take care πŸ˜˜πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜˜

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks damini😘😘😘😘😘😘
      Chiku is my fav fruit alsoπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      Luv u man

  4. Romaisha

    |Registered Member

    Teri tuh!!! How dare u say such things about my fav ff?? Huh? Its not a bore ok? And dare u end it imma fly to your country and put two slaps in you πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹
    Chiku dii yaar please don’t say its boring .. I really love your ff bcz u have a very interesting story line and i really wamt to keep reading… So dont u dare even think of ending!!! -_-

    Now about today’s episode πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ … It was awesome!!! Its kinda fun jmagining sid acting all childish … So cute nahh 😍😍
    Hmm flashback seems interesting .. Please post ur next epi asap!!

    Im waiting impatiently!! 😊

    Love you dear πŸ˜‚β€β€β€β€

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Romuuuuuuuuuuuuu…β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹
      End nahi kar rahi. Woh upset thien mien less comments dekh ke.
      😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
      Todha rahem yaar bachi par. Mere cheeks sensitive hai. Pain hogaπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜πŸ˜‚

  5. Monica

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    Chiku, want slaps from me? I swear i will if you think of ending it. How irresponsible. How can you led down those who love reading your work. Never talk such rubbish about your ff cuz its just amazing. We are the ones reading it so we can value it better than you can and honestly, you just write so well, not less than the rest of the writers in tu so shsshshhs your mouth and continue writing theek hai? Sorry for being a lil rude but can’t help it cuz you make me say all this so next time don’t. Well, coming to your episode, it was so good. I seriously am loving your plot so much. Its just so unique. Continue soon and love you πŸ’•

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Monica darling πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      Acha baba nahi bolungi ki end kar rahi hun kyunki kisi ko pasand nahi aa raha. ❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️
      Maaf karde

      Nd slaps mat marna mere gaal bohoot sensitive hai pain hogaπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜

  6. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Amazing episode Chiku….. Awesome yrr….
    Nd u don’t dare to end ur ff warna 😠😠😠….. Wrna main kya karungi that I will tell u personally… πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚….

    Plz yr don’t think of ending ur ff as this ff is so different with a different plot……

    Love u 😍😘

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Di mujhe kushi hai ki aapko samajh aarah hai. Luv u. 😘😘❀️
      Mera mood upset thain kam comments dekh ke isliye socha end kar deti hun. Kissi ko pasand nahi aaraha aisa laga ❀️

  7. Lover

    |Registered Member

    dear I am sorry for not commenting but you know naa I am busy so busy please chehak maaf kar de…
    Kiya naa?? Nice episode and always remember one thing I read your ff but sorry can’t able to comment daily due to reason I have already mentioned ..sorry sorry sorry bache ki love jaan kya sorry sorry sorry pakdu dono jaan kya..

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    Aab to maaf kar de…
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    Bye plz reply maaf kiya ya nhi.
    Wait..
    Tere ff ke bare mei to bola hi nhi ..
    It is just like you amazing.
    I hope tu meri problem samajh rahi hai chal bye I have to study.

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Loverrrrrrrrrrrr❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️
      Mere liye itna kaafi hai ki tu pafh rahi haiiiiiiiiiiiiii.
      Nd I understand ur problem completely toh apni padhayi kar. Padhayi jyaada important hai.
      Luv u jaan😘

  8. Sana(sanu)

    Lovely chiku…. And yes who told u that u r not a good writer… U r very gud writer … And do not think of ending ur ff plse it’s amazing yrr… Continue writing and post nxt part soon…. i m waiting… :*:*:*:*:*:*:*

  9. Jisha

    |Registered Member

    Such a cute episode… loved it… sorry I am late..guest the ghar pe… don’t think of ending…it is awesome…

  10. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Chiku It was the cutest episode Loved it Kunj dancing , jumping and enjoying like a kid Loved it
    want to know the past
    post soon πŸ™‚

  11. Thanmy

    |Registered Member

    Chikuuu yaar its soo good
    It has a different plot
    And I’m enjoying the story plot
    No need to end ur ff plsss
    Cont soon

  12. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Chiku darling this was something so amazing ❀❀❀ Loads of love for it ❀❀❀ U are really good of a writer 😊 Please don’t state a wonderful piece of creativity boring that also written by my sweet friend πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹ Understood 😑😑 Well u will find me idiot at times so please don’t mind πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹ Very well and soooooo sweet πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ And don’t ever think of ending this wonderful piece of creativity😊

    Keep smiling πŸ™‚ Always πŸ™‚ Chiku πŸ™‚

    Love ya dear friend πŸ™‚

    -Zuha

    • Chiku

      |Author

      Thanks zuha. I am glad that u r liking bit😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  13. SidVee

    So cute epi.. loved it.. and don’t think urself as a bad writer.. U r a very good writer πŸ™‚ .. do cont soon πŸ’•

  14. shikha

    amazing one
    its really very very interesting
    now a days there are so many similar sweetie sweetie episodes but this one is really different and interesting with lots of mystery
    please don’t think to end it
    I was busy that’s why didn’t comment
    But now I’ll comment on every episode that’s my promise but don’t end it please

  15. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hey Chiku,
    See, I finally read itπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Busy meπŸ˜ͺπŸ˜ͺ
    Anyways, the episodes were superb. Aww..I can imagine Kunj being childish..he would be so cute.. God! When will TU upload the next one. I’m really excited.
    Loads of love.πŸ’ž

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