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Hi guys!!
Im writing a new ff.
Hope you guys like it.
The pairs are abhigya,dev-sonakshi,ishveer.
I hope you guys like the pairing.
This ff is about their lives..
These three world , three couples how they meet is the story.
Let’s begin..
At a hospital,
Abhi: miss..
Purab calls abhi
Abhi: I’m treating a patient.
Will call you soon.
Abhi starts treating the woman.
Abhi:nurse take care .
Give her a dose.
Let’s see in the morning.
Abhi leaves..
…..
Meanwhile..
At a temple..
Ranveer and ishani are getting married.
Ranveer: Mrs.ranveer smile please
Ishani’s eyes are filled with tears..
Ishani: please leave me RV.
Ranveer: sweetheart.
Ranveer ties ishani’s hands with a rope.
Ranveer ties mangalsutra.
Ishani cries and soon she faints….

At the same time..
Sonakshi is shifting to a new area.
Sonakshi: haan ma
I will call you soon.
Elena: sonakshi..
Sonakshi:haan Elena
Elena: we made it..
And they hug each other..
How r they going to meet?
I want both positive and negative comments.
Please support me..

40 comments

  1. Riyashri

    |Registered Member

    Wow Ammu Di !! Nice Start ….. Love the pairing !! Keep Writing !!
    And sorry what is the meaning of negative comments ??? I seriously don’t hav any idea abt it !! Ha… Ha… Ha….

  2. Rabul's Girl

    Its amazing but if you don’t mind can you add rabul as well. its just a suggestion and its all your decision to focus on which pair.otherwise its fabulous.

  3. Shabreen

    Interesting..
    May be dev is owners son n he comes to check..
    Or
    He may be the boss if she is working
    Or
    In front of ger new home if he is tapori

  4. VarshaVenkat

    |Registered Member

    Hey ammu…..good to c u back with another story……it is lovely. ……n its diff too…..its cool…..wanna know d reason behind ishveers mrge

  5. Charlena

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  6. Nandana (a big fan of SHAKTI ARORA)

    awesome and add some more ishveer scence if u can
    and the ff is superrrrrr.

  7. Nandana (a big fan of SHAKTI ARORA)

    awesome and add some more ishveer scene if u can
    and the ff is super

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