Lets do some criticism! Part-II

Hi guys, your Suhasini is back with another slot of criticism… So lets begin, and and and, do not forget to comment after reading!!
Happy reading guys!

Ek Tha Raja Ek Thi Rani
-Gayatri is dumbo
-Anyone can tell that Savitri is Gayatri. I have previously seen in many other serials, they try to disguise their actors, we clearly understand who they actually are, but their family members don’t I mean wtf? Bring some reality, get some life!
-I dont know where this serial is leading to. I mean A raja loves his dead wife, he gets married to another girl, he initially hates her, then he falls in love with her, all of a sudden the dead queen returns and asks for her rights, the raja gives her the rights, the 2nd wife stand hopeless, then it gets revealed that she is a beherupiya and gets kicked out. Then this Rageshwari enters, I dont know from where she gets in, His second wife shoots him, he gets married to Rageshwari, and then he hates his second wife The second wife disguises as a nokrani and enteres the palace and then the raja starts to have feelings for the nokrani… Is he characterless?
-If Savitra was some other nokrani with similar attitudes would that mean rana ji would start having feelings for that girl too!!

-Too much dragging, I mean how long will this YV keep tormenting the viewers. Get some life writers, please kick this YV and bring a new villain if you love villains so much
-From where on earth did twinkle’s father and sister pop out? Initially we were shown that twinkle’s mom hated anita and her family because anita’s husband tried to abuse a besahara lachar vidwa. And now we find out she isn’t a widow. What message is the show trying to deliver to us?
-I do not see Tashan in the serial any more.I mean YV has Tashan, but isn’t it supposed to be the lead actor and actress who should give meaning to the title?

Siya ke Ram
-I’m a hindu, still some times I’m forced to think, Ram ji loved his father so much, even King Dashrath loved him. Then why didnt Dashrath go with Ram to Vanvas? That way both could have been happy in their places.
-In the original version of Ramayan Bharat curses Keikei that no father would ever name his daughter keikei as she is the reason for kul vinash. This dialogue hold high significance. But this serial didnt show it.
-Bharat did not throw Keikei out of the palace originally. what was shown then? I dont know. Our religious tells us to respect parents even when they are wrong, you know why? because they did the biggest favour on you by bringing you to this world. If it not had been them, then today you wouldn’t be able to speak your mind. Bharat was also an adarsh son, and though mad at keikei he didnt throw her out. This was really misleading.

Saath Nibhana Sathiya
-How old is Baa? She is going to see her par par pota but I dont see any changes is her apart from that wheel chair. Ssuch people do not exist(I wish people lived that long but this is the rule of nature and the serials are misleading)
-lets consider Baa was 18 years old when she got married. She had Chirag when she was 20 and Parag when she was 22. When Chirag was married(at say 25, Baa was 45 and when Parag got married, Baa was 47. When Ahem was born Baa was 49. When Ahen got married to Gopi, at say age 27, Baa Was 77 Years old. When Meera was born after four years, Baa was 81 years old. When Meera was 2years old and got lost, Baa was 83 years old. When They found back Meera t the age of 12, Baa was 93 years old. Then Meera lived with them for two years, that makes Baa 95 years old. Then they took ten years leap. BAA IS 105 YEARS OLD. After the leap lets assume it’s been two years. even then Baa is 107 years old… Ouch Baa, live live, you will surely make it to the guines world recorrds! Cheers… I really wish people lived that long.

General Comments.
-In every serial till date, the elderly people are seen alive throughout. The main characters may die but the Baa’s the dadi’s the dadaji’s the nani’s never dies… Please recall.
-Nowadays the serials shows elderly figures misleading. Forr a while, your parents love may be selfish because they want you to take care of them when they grow old. But the love of Grandparents is absolutely selfless. They know that maybe they wont be alive till you will be earning but still loves you unconditionally. But what are the elders of this generation’s serial doing? See Shanti devi from Mere Angneme, how can and old lady be so stupid, so idiotic and so weird? what will she win by destroying Riya and Shivam’s life? She stills gets priority, why does she need to be the sole decision maker? Why does she want everyone to hate Riya?I dont think anyone would have minded if she till sat on her Jhula. Never mind! Then coves the Bari Rajmata of ETRETR, She is stupid, selfish and I dont know what more, she wants to kill her own Grandson.. Then cones Suhani Si Ek Ladki, dadi claims to love Yuvraj more than anything else, yet she wouldn’t accept Suhani. That stupid Rags and Menka are really dumbo azzs, still dadi loves them more and not Suhani, Just because she looks bad?I find Suhani more prettier than Menka. Menka looks like a pressurized donkey who would poop anywhere (No offence to the actress, she is doing fabulous job)

No one in this serial world has self respect! everyone would beat them with their sandals yet they would go to them to ask if they want a shoulder message in a good sense.

-Why Does Ragini’s look change so many times? every time she changes her mind or looks life she is changing her ind, she simply chages her getup. First desi anarkali, then ultra modern Swara look, then innocent Marwari bahu, then Ultra modern owner owner look, and finally this new look which I dont know how to explain.
-Shekhar’s anger is absolutely justified. I would never take back a guy who DARED to raise hand on my dad. Ok I know Ragini has no shame no self respect, why doesn’t she think about her father’s self respect?
-When ragini did so many crimes, Shekhar took her back. But when Swara wanted to go to her sasural he cut all ties with her? Why? Oh because he loves rgini more and shows fake sympathy for Swara.
-I like Ragini’s new avatar, lets hope this lasts till the end of the show. I dont know why I’m having a feeling that ragini would conceive, would have a miscarriage and would blame swara for that and want swara’s child in return, trust me guys, this serial’s writer can make Teju that bad!!

Yeh Rishta Kya kehelata hai
-We saw Akshara getting married, we saw Naksh’s birn, now we shall see his marriage.. Akshara doesn’t get old, kaitik doesnt get old. We are getting old and fooled instead! I sometimes feel as if I’m Naksh’s grandmother and not an average 16 year old who didnt even join high school yet.

Ok Guys, enough for today, I should study now!!
Keep Commenting.
Stay tuned!!
Speak your hearts out!!!

Credit to: Suhasini Khanna


    • Eva

      Even i think so…eisa hi kuch khichdi banjayega Swaragini ka..Swara being mahan again and giving her child to Ragini…goshhhhhh…..pakka yahi hoga…

  1. Sanjana

    Dear suhansini don’t forget that Dasharath was a King first
    And about the curse do u think that cursing is good but throwing out is bad
    Whatever he did was in his love for ram and later after meeting ram it is he who leaves the palace
    She was a mother maybe but as a queen she had to be banished was bharats thought. And a mother who had made her sons life a living hell by sending ram
    They may have shown differently but not wrongly
    Devdutt pattanaik is the chief consultant
    And he is more knowledgable than us in these matters


      agree…….. sorry not to hurt u suhasini di……… but its our view……

    • Chandra

      Hi sis,
      My Did my masters in religion. According to that really Keikei wasnt thrown out of the house. She was cursed by bharat and that curse still plays on..

    • Completely agree with sanjana suhasini di I don’t want to hurt but we people are nowhere to criticize the great epic and according to Bharat’s behaviour to kaikeyi I don’t think it’s wrong she deserves that

    • Anisha

      Why should we criticise IKRS! There is nothing to criticise! But if you still want to, then go ahead! You must be having some misconceptions about the show! I will be glad to clear them for you

  2. loved it ur…was laughing like mads………keep writing…especially SNS and swaragini every word is justifies in it..n next time u write plz include that swara has such commom sense which no one alse has..she ties her hair while sleeping,…has any1 in any serial done this?? no!!!

    • Simi

      But ppl do it in real life I too tie mah hair n sleep . wats so great n tat . ur point of criticism doesn’t make sense btw . I don watch d serial but felt ur point as total lame .

  3. Aastha

    d criticism abt baa age was 100% crct … i think d same …. i don’t see serials only tei nd sometimes star plus show … so the criticism regarding that shows i luved bt nt abt tei …each serial require a villain..nd in which u get such a cute villain like uv ….. in each there is saas bahu melodrama atleast tei donot show this melodrama is a relief… i hate uv bt i luv zain imam …. he is just fab i don’t want that serial replace him. twinj one scene can neutralise d whole hatterness of uv in a epi


    • twinj fan-(tamanna)

      ya I agree with u….all shows are same but our tashan e ishq is different……in all shows there will be new villains like we can take jamai raja there will be 2 or 3 entries in the month …..how come there will be so much villain in thier lives….they should have some commen sense…. but ur truly crrt about other daily soups except tashan e ishq….I like it they dont bring new villains every time…..
      n I m so so sorry if I hurt u …. I just told about my opinion….loved it keep writing criticism…..

  4. Sarayu

    Oh my god, I just love your criticism. Please post more. Can’t stop laughing while. reading. Hahahaha.

  5. Shreya

    Oh gosh..!! Now that was amazing and one if it’s kind criticism.. Loved it.. Everything is so true.. I wish the writers could read this n the directors stop showing all the sh*t … N making the viewers fools… N yeah it was too funny.. Had a good time reading this.. Do post more..!! Waiting…


      agree…. i dont understand…. we give so much of criticism but hw they still running it………. wish u could include the trps also…… i want to know all shows trp side by side…..

  6. Aakanksha

    All ur criticism was awesome….except the 1 for tashan e ishq….I don’t consider it to be dragging…..I too hate uv from the core of my heart but u cant keep changing the villains and I don’t think any1 cud do so much justice to a negative role…..I am a die heart fan of sid and the show too….sry if u felt bad….I realy enjoyed reading ur criticism especially the sns wala but incase of tei I thought it was not 100% correct as all serials hav ups and downs and without that it wud be boring !! Once again im really sry if I hurt u dear

  7. Salma

    Speechless yaaar thnx for pouring my heart out I agree with you in all the shows but I don’t want uv to leave tei I really like his madness and obsession

  8. Clara

    I’m not Indian yet I try to watch these serials, but after two months or so the serial starts to get worse and worse. Amazing suhasini

  9. Shine like a star *

    This was really a treat to us all. I really enjoyed reading it! still cant stop laughing!

  10. Divine Beauty!

    Hi, this was beautiful, such amazing combo of sarcasm … You have an outstanding sense of humour..

  11. Divine Beauty!

    If you do please tell me the name, I’ll read it… The person who can write such amazing critics can surely write a marvelous ff!!

  12. Anisha

    And Another thing Suhasini..
    You don’t watch ETRETR, that much I have understood from your criticism! You have no idea of that is happenning. Your criticism about the disguise of Gayatri is 100% right. I agree with it too. But all the other confusing stuff you have written isint true. And btw Ranaji isint characterless. I think you don’t know why he did all this. He had to get married to Rags as he is a King and he had given a promise. And he DOES NOT LOVE RAGS. ITS ALL GAYATRI’s plan! Saath Nibhana Saathiya and all the other criticisms are perfectly correct and I agree with the hem too. But talking about TEI, I don’t think you will find any show which completely abides by its name. TEI also had Tashan. It all began with Tashan. And the tag line is also Pyaar door jaane na de, Nafrat paas aane na de. So by that I think it is partly abiding by what its supposed to do! Everything else you said is perfectly right and I agree. If any of you don’t agree with nether please question back. I will be glad to explain my feelings. If you have any personal questions, then please ask me on Twitter @Anisha_Tellybug. Please mention that you have see. Me from here or it gets very difficult to dig out the core of the question. Thank you…

  13. Simi

    I liked ur criticism thing on all d other serial’s but obviously as I watch tei I wouldn’t say its correct. UV is d main thing , some ppl watch d serial coz o him . n there’s no saas bhu drama . acha I would still consider any other point of urs but dragging in tei seriously dragging in tei can’t believe ur saying tat I m dam sure u don watch it . d show always ends any of its story in 2 or 3 weeks bad usse aage ni jate vo log . toh m sry but m not wid point . u forgot d biggest criticism serial . I mean according to ur saas bhu wala point meri saasu maa is d biggest MATLAB d biggest n appropriate example. Actually vo serial toh naam se kaam se had cheez se vahi hai . see tei is kinda youth types show tats wat dis shows viewers lyk n they do not drag d story tat wat also we lyk . n major thing they have shown is that how d main lead actress learnt from her mistakes. Soo many points in tei favor I can write already mah comments so dam long . NYC one but not in favor of d points of tei . ?

    • Sanskari Girl

      I love UV and I don’t want him to remain a villain. UV should now becomes positive.
      Agree with suhu love ❤

      • Anisha

        I too love Zain! He should really become positive now as Mahi and Yuvi(Mavi) look really cute! I m also a HUGE TEI fan❤️❤️

  14. Nigam

    Stop u r bakwas….I think u had no heart…idiot…don’t comment and baa’s did u know when she is married….how can u like that someone should die….r u maintaining her…then just keep u r mouth shut….

    I think u r mentally ill…u r finding wrong in every aspect…
    U r judging ragini’s bad doings…why can’t u judge her positive ..I think u r a great of Swara…I won’t be afraid of u…u and u r dirty analysis..u don’t know how to take good in a person and how to leave bad from that person…idiot….worst analysis

    • Sanskari Girl

      Dude, criticism is all about bad things. You need real talent for that. You don’t have that that’s why you hate our Suhu. You are a b*t*h ?

  15. aastha

    hey suhasini…….plz dont b offended but ur critisism of rags is not good……………..plzz dont make rags so stupid creature……its true that she did wrong by seperating 2 people who loved each other just for her selfish deeds n ten by acting as if lost her memory she did some crazy thigs to swara too n ten she humiliated hr i laws……..but she payed for her deeds when she was cheated by laksh……..there is no greater pain than being cheated by your husband and to remain a silent spectator to your husbands 2nd marriage wewn he ws all amiable n loving to u just a few hrs ago………by releasing swara from jail and uniting her with sanskar she did penance for the bad things she did to swara……n moreover she regreted her deeds…..i feel regretting one’s mistakes is a great deal…….eventhough laksh hurted her deeply she did not curse him and waited for him to see sense…..if she was so stupid as you potrayed her she would gladly have commited to another person……moreover she fighted for laksh with that kavya……even whe she was hit o the stomach with a knife she did her best to pull off those bricks and while laying p his lap she told him ” i told u na everythig ll b all ri8…..”…….this is a special gift…..ca u be like that??? biting your pain consolig te other perso that he wud b all ri8???? well i cant…..n hats off to her…..though she loved laksh she did nt say it coz she loves her father n dadi too……though her dadi is ot that good though she forced her to remarry she still loves her coz we shud love n respect our elders……….. by taking the knife instead for swara she again proved her selfless character n her love for sis……by this act if any crime wich she did to swara remained it vanished…..ragini should be called brave for taking the kife for swara……….it is very difficult to hate loved ones and we wud always have no matter what happens the same affection we hd 4 tem previously……its the nature of love…its very difficult to forget our wounds….tats y she din say ” yes ” to laksh…… i want laksh to try harder to get her love…… abt change in attire….i believe our clothes reflect our emotions……suppose some1 close to us hs passed away……wud we wear colourful n shiny dress???? i dont think so………. the svs hs always potraited ragini badly…..but i dont think there ll b a go back to the revnge full ragini…….its my wish………..no father can show partiality to hs children………..shekher loves swaragini equally………….he is just furious with the maheshwari family 4 what happened to ragini …..he was emotionally stressed up wich is why he cuts all ties with her….bt he also misses swara equally though he di express it……n dadi just added oil to the burning fire…if he loved ragini only he wud nt b glad tat swara is all ri8……he says ragini is in this condition coz of laksh not swara…………i cud nt accept that shekhar loves ragini only n not swara…..heres another poof to it…..it ws dasi who asked swara whether she is speaking as maheshwari’s dil..or as gogodias daughter…….i will agree that dadi loves ragini only not swara…….she even is not that fond of sumi……..

    i totally agree to ur views regarding sadhiya , yeh rishta……, , mere angne mein ,……..i feel mere angne mei s the worst serial…..i have tried watching it….but i cud nt eve tolerate the bakvas it is presenting……..seriously elderly people shud b presented as role models nt selfish and stupid like this………….

    plzz do tell ur opinion of kasam……..

    • Akanksha

      Hi astha di (I’m 13 years old)
      I don’t like ragini. Please ask your mom if she would save your dad being injured. She would say yes. Rags ne itna sabb kiya, iske lite toh ek chaku kuch bhi nahi. She deserves a lot worse. Yes I know its painful to find your husband cheating on you. But jaise Ko taisa. She filed fake molestation case on sanskar and now you people are fighting because laksh killed her dignity? Wow Wai she killed it herself… If she can be a b*t*h why not Kavya. At least Kavya wanted to avenge laksh and she didn’t have any relations with him. But rags was Swara’s sister. How could she try to kill her? Oh because she was a psychopath.. Lol

  16. Hey you dear if don’t like tashan e ishq and any other serial please stop watching it don’t complain to us about this idiot .How you dare to tell anything about my favorite serials ????
    Stop watching it and sorry if u are hurt but I said all this because I can’t hear anything about my favorite serials…..

    • Siddhi

      Come out of your fictional world. Just because you like the serial doesn’t mean that it does not have any flaws.. Every serial has flaws and we are here only to discuss them. If you don’t like this then don’t read it. I liked whatever suhadini said. If you don’t then shut your mouth and stop your fingers and leave from the analysis…

  17. Esmeralda

    This comment thread is too funny. Can’t believe how worked up and upset people are getting because someone criticize their favourite Serials/characters. These are just entertainment shows, not real life.
    Let’s be honest – everyone of these soaps (don’t know about SKR) have some really far-fetched story line that we, as viewers, are supposed to believe. The majority of these Soaps have similar story lines. I only watch ETRETR and love it, but that doesn’t mean to say I don’t see the flaws and the idiotic story line as well. Here also we have a superwoman granny who will give Superman a run for his money.
    Suhasini is only pointing out what most of us know already, so don’t understand why some people are taking it personally. I had a good laugh!

  18. Meera

    suhasini i dont think etretr is correct because they did not have much difference between savitri and gaytri so we could recognise her
    and ranaji is not chacterless because he feels a connectin with savitri
    i dont watch this serial but ii think it is not that bad

  19. manisyha malaysia

    ya, i agree the comment about ek thi raja ….hopefully writter and producer take in to concideration….

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