YOU LEFT ME AFTER TEACHING ME THE MEANING OF MY LIFE ….! ( HAPPY BIRTHDAY JANEMAN…MMERI AAMU)

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hi guys ….wts up…
today I dedicated my this 6otu sa os to AAMU…my JAANU …JAANEMAN…SWEETIE…CUTIE….N EVERYTHING I LOVE URS …MY SWTHRT ……

I WANT TREAT OK…NO NAKHRE WARNA KATTI…..

sry re …late ho gayi sayed coz TU post naii katha jaldi bt meri kya galti …bt fur v…maafi…plz…meri jaanu

HAPPY BIRTHDAY
HAPPY BIRTHDAY
HAPPY BIRTHDAY

DEAR JAANEMAN

MAY U LIVE 100000000 yrs
n hope ur all dreams cm true
hv a br8 future ahead. ..
πŸŽ€πŸŽ„πŸŽπŸŽ‚πŸŽˆπŸŽ†πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡πŸŽπŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‹πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽπŸŽ€πŸ°πŸ°πŸ°πŸ°πŸ°πŸ°πŸ°πŸ°πŸ°πŸ°

love u re dher saraaa …. πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿβ€πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’žπŸ’Ÿβ€β€

β˜†β˜†β˜† ONE SHOT β˜†β˜†β˜†

a boy was shown in the door of a college campus …
his eyes … his lips r shown

he’s wearing black t’s with blue denims ..πŸ‘–

he’s revealed to be our hottie KUNJ off course πŸ˜‰

# kunj pov..

hi I’m Kunj…Kunj sarna …
from Amritsar ..
lagta toh hu may 1 swt saa bhola saa boy…bt huu mayy 1 hottie n intelligent munda
mere v bohot sare friends hayy jo mere khushi me haste hay … mere gam me mera saath dete hayy …
mere booksπŸ“š … I LOVE MY BOOKSπŸ“šπŸ“˜πŸ“— MORE THAN ANY1 …yess I’m a book worm …
aisa nahi ki mujhe human friends se allergy hay … bt I love books πŸ“– more as my friend …

bt kehte hay naa ki destiny ke game se koi bach nahi pata …

same is in my case …

let’s see wts in my destiny …

oops … are nature tera call tsunami ke saath kya avi ana tha… πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

bt kya karu …
tera call toh attend karna hi padega ….πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

let’s go …

# end of his pov …

ScEnE 2 …

@ gent’s washroom. ..

kunj is shown washing his face … n see himself in mirror. ..

kunj ( self talk ) – omg…tg tsunami hv flown out …
warna kya hota god hi jane … πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

suddenly he sees a girl entering the gent’s washroom in hurry …

her eyebrows r shown … her eyes … her nose … her lips r shown ..

she’s wearing sleeveless white top with denim hot pants …
her white high heels r flattering. ..

she’s revealed to be none other than our cutie n hottie TWINKLE

Twi- ummm … so sry sry … I mistakely entered here… so sry …

kunj turned his face away in embarrassment n turned his face bak wen he thought she left …

bt after 5 min she again came from the toilet. ..

Twi- so sry yrr … actually there’s a long line in the ladies washroom. ..
so I came here … it’s imp to attend nature’s call naa … ok I’m leaving. .. byeee ..

kunj ( self talk ) – n she came like a wind n went back like a storm…
wt a girl she is … her brown eyes πŸ‘€… her pink juicy lips πŸ‘„… her figure n everything is soo perfect. ..

oh gosh ! dude wen u started noticing girls … stop ur chuckling heads …

# end of his pov …

NeXt ScEnE …

@ Classroom

evry1 is doing masti as it’s break tym …
twinkle is shown jumping n dancing on a song ajeeb dastaan hay ye …

n does lots of fun ….

kunj was staring at her sheepishly hidding
in behind his book …

twinkle sees him staring. ..

suddenly he starts reading the book pretending not knowing anything. .

he frequently stares at her like being mesmerised by her beauty n behaviour

one day again in the class twinkle was gossiping n doing masti with her friends. ..

she again sees him staring at her …

kunj again hides behind his book pretending to be reading asap wen he sees her catching his staring. ..

this tym twinkle comes towards kunj n knocks him …

kunj – Wt haan ? πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

twi – tum humesha mujhe ghur te Q rehte ho ???? πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜©

ku- main …. aur tumhe ghur raha hun … tum pagal ho gayi ho kya … ? 😟😟😟
I’m just reading my book … πŸ“šπŸ“–πŸ“š

twi – Oooo..😰😰😰😰😰….Toh tum books padh rahe they …
achha then is ulti book se mujhe 1 passage padh ke batao … πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

kunj sees that his is in wrong position. ..
he corrects the position n feels embarrassed

ku- oh ….sry…galti se mistake ho gaya…πŸ˜©πŸ˜πŸ˜ƒ ho jata hay kavi kavi ….πŸ˜†

twi- laughing πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚… seriously u r crazy ….
waise hii … I’m TWINKLE. .. twinkle taneja …nice too meet u book worm …

ku- hii twinkle. … I’m KUNJ…kunj sarna…
nice to meet u twinkle. .. waise ur name iss too swt …

twi- oh … tq…kunj …
waise from now we’re friends ok …
n tum in books me kya ghuse rehte ho…
plz cm a lil out of these stuffs …
thora chill karo …. thora fun karo…thora masti karo…life ko thora enjoy karo…

life is too short …it’s like a ice cream…enjoy it before it melts …🍨🍧🍦

Khushi ki parchhaiyo ka naam ha zindagi Gamo ki gahhriyo ka naam ha zindagi Ek pyaara sa yaar hai humara Usi ki pyari si hassi ka naam hai zindagi ….

so just enjoy ur life …. it’s too beautiful. …

n I’m nt listening anything u vl meet me in recess n we vl play a game …
treasure hunt …

n as a friend I’m ordering u ….

so byeee kunj … πŸ’Ÿ

# Kunj’s pov …

that day she came like boon … a angel who taught me the importance of life …n I must enjoy it …

she just came like wind n koi ata naa pata…koi jaan naa pehchan baas keh dia ki we’re friends. …

puri ki puri jhalli kudi …
1 siyappa ka dookan…siyappa queen…

kunj wen u started naming ceremony of her

oh gosh…stop ur irritating mind ….

# end of his pov …
@ Recess

kunj went to meet twinkle …as she told him to do so …

ku- hi..i …twinkle. …how r u…u told me to meet u at recess..

twi- yahh kunj … I told u too that today we vl play treasure hunt. ..

so let’s play. … oh yah 1st meet my friends. ..

they r uv , mahi , chinki & rohan …
aur v hay bt they r my best friends

n isse milo … she’s my jaaneman AAMU …
she’s my life ….I LUV HER MORE THAN ANY1……

n uv mahi chinki n rohan meet KUNJ … he’s my new buddy … r8 kunj ?

kunj- haan hii every1 … ok now friends n forwards his hand .. πŸ‘‹

YUHI_ROKI – yahh…friends n all shakes their hands. ..

twi- ohoo…toh new friend mila toh mujhe vul gaye … it’s nt fair …

all shouts – noh …. noh … noh …
we’re all friends ….
n all hugs her ….

twi- ok ok .. stop drama … n let’s play the game …

evry1- yah … let’s go

@ play area. ..

twi- listen yuhi r 1 team … roki r 1 team n me n kunj r not 1 team …

so let’s start …

they r playing crazily. ..

wen twi asks kunj to shoo5 chinki .. fake 1..

bt kunj thinks that the gun πŸ”« is real …
so he was stammering. ..

twinkle sees him stammering ….
then goes towards him n teaches him to shot in a back hugging position. ..

n he shoots chinki … n sum chipku types thing gets attached in chinki’s uniform. ..

chinki- uff shit twi…ye kya siyappa kar dala …may out ho gayi naa … 😟😟😟huh.. tu dost hay ya dusman …

kunj- wo 1 no. ki siyappa queen hay ..πŸ˜…

n all giggles. .. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

twi- hawww…😡😡😡😡… u kunj tum mere team me ho…don’t forget. … u r a khadoos … tum 1 sadu ho … u r sadu sarna…huh…😀😀😀😀😀😀

n all again giggles. .. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

kunj- tumhary toh
n he runs behind him ….

twi too runs bt kunj catches her n tickles her … she giggles. .. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

manmarziyaaan track plays in bg …

they shares a short eye lock …

from that tym twinkle taught kunj how too smile n how to enjoy n hv fun…

n kunj started to depend upon twinkle for everything ….

he has started to fall for her …
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# NARRATOR’S VOICE …

Ek pahchan hajaro Dost bana deti hain Ek muskaan hajaro gum bhula deti hain Zindagi ke safar me sambhal kar chalna Ek galti hajaro sapne jala kar raakh deti hai …

none knows wts in their destiny …
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1 day twinkle sees kunj sad n goes to him …
n asks him wt happened?

ku- yrr twinkle dekho naa … I’ve got so low marks in biology. .. How vl I show my face … I just wanna die … 😭😭😭😭

twi- kunj meri 1 baat dhyaan se suno…

Zindagi haseen hai zindagi se pyaar karo Ho raat to subah ka intezar karo Wo pal v aayega jis pal ka intezar hai apko Bas rab pe bharosa aur waqt pe aitbar karo.

so from now u won’t talk abt death samjhe agar mujhe dost mante ho toh promise ?

kunj- promise … u r tooo nice twinkle. .. how vl I be able to live without such a friend like who taught me the importance of life ….n side hugs her…

twinkle sits beside him n says ” kunj .. don’t depend on me soo much for everything. .. I’ll nt be there with u always ” …

n see sees sum dr. Anjali is calling her. ..

so she left to attend the call ….

# Kunj’s pov …

from tomorrow our vacation vl start. .. so I’ve to tell her everything that her sadu sarna has fallen for his siyappa queen. ..

I LOVE U TWINKLE BEYOND ANY MEASURES & WORDS…I REALLY DO…

Tujhe bahon me bharne ko dil chahta hai Tujhe tut kr chahne ko dil chahta hain Kash dur ho jaye ye faasle hamare Ki tuje ji bhar kr dekhne ko dil chahta hai

# end of his pov ….

@ NeXt DaY …

all the students were laughing n enjoying as it was the last day of twinj yuhi n roki tooo….

n it was the last class …
n the bell rang …

twinj yuhi n roki were drooled into a group hug saying they will miss eo…

then twinkle n AAMU hugged eo…

AAMU- sun …mujhe vul mat jana ok…
chudail kahi ki …. agar vuli toh mujhse buta koi naii hogaaa…

twi- tujhe vul jau…itni himmat meri ….hayeee….tu v mujhe vul mat janah dayaan….warna tera gala daba dungi n tera khoon chus loongi…

AAMU- oyeee…vampire banne ki koi jarurath nai….Mai mar v jaun fir v tujhe naiii vulungi …samjhiii

twi- patah hai mujhe…ab chal byeee…itna senti mat ho…kuch din bad hi toh tera birthday hay ….. firse mulakat hogy …..

n they again hugged. .. n aamu left. …

the twinj hugged separately …

It was a passionate one …
kunj wasn’t leaving twinkle. ..
n he secretly dropped a letter in her purse …

but twinkle broke the hug…

Ku- Twinkle I’ll miss u…seriously I’ll miss u to the hell…u taught me the meaning of life….u r my bestest friend. …

Twi- kunj evn me too…will misss u more than any1… n these days u bcm my best evr friend. .. after AAMU …u know nah ..none can replace her place. ..

n they again hugged & left for eo residence. ….
β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘ β–‘

@ Next Day …

# Kunj’s pov …

ye twinkle ko kyaa hogaya ……
she hv nt replied till now…

in the letter I clearly told her to call me …
okk let’s call her …

n kunj dials her no. but tring tring …
she doesn’t receives

fir abt 100 tyms he calls but noh response

then he checks her all social media accounts but all r deactivated

he bcms very tensed ….
in this way their vacation ends …..

college starts. …

but @college to she doesn’t comes ….
he asks every 1 of her friends bt evry1 fails to give any information abt her

then he asks aamu finally. ..

Ku- Aamu ….do u know Y twinkle isn’t cmng to college n not answering my calls n msgs ….

AAMU- stammering. …I don’t know kunj …evn she hv nt any contact wid me…

ku- sensing her worries. .. I know AAMU u r lying. … plz for god sake tell me the truth…

AAMU- sry but I don’t know any thing. …don’t charge me plz & left

# Aamu’s pov ….

kunj ab mai tumhe kaise batau ki Twinkle. ……
I can’t say u …
I’ve promised my bestie sooo I can’t break my swear at any cost …
SORRY KUNJ BUT I’M HELPLESS !!!πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”

# end of her pov ….

# kunj’s pov …

I’ve to find out twinkle at any cost …
but how …
ummmm …yess …
that day sum Dr. Anjali called her …
I shld contact her ….

# end of his pov …
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@ Dr. Anjali’s cabin …

dr.- sit Mr. Sarna …say how can I help u ..

Ku- Dr.. Plz give me the address of Twinkle Taneja …

dr.- Wt r u saying. …I can’t disclose any information abt my patient

after a lot pleading. ….she agreed..

dr.- U know wich disease specialist. . I’m. ..
n u know Miss Twinkle Taneja ….is suffering from BRAIN CANCER …N SHE’S IN HER LAST STAGE ….
n her last appointment was a month ago …n That tym only I said she has 1 mnth left only …

okkk go n met her … this is her address…

Kunj became aghast. .. earth slipped behind his feet …

he stood numb ….

n at once rushes grabbing his car keys ….

all along his way tears gushes out of his eyes ….

Tum mere ho iss pal mere ho
Kal shayad ye alam naa rahe

# kunj’s pov …

Q …Akhir Q babaji …
apne aisa Q kia mere saath …
aj toh ap mujhe bata hi do …

Q ap saari dunia ko pyaar ka dushman bana deta ho

babaji- tum v toh apne pyaar ko dunia aur rab manke mujhe vula dete ho …

mere twinkle ko agar ku6 hua nah toh mai apko kavi maaf nahi karunga ..

# end of his pov ..

Kuch aisa ho tum tum naa raho
Kuch aisa ho hum hum naa rahe
Yeh raaste alag ho jaaye
Chalte chalte hum kho jaaye

kunj reaches her home n at obce rushes inside ….

the situation. .. the scenario cmpltly makes him numb …

he falls down on his knees n cries

Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga (x2)
Is chahat mein marr jaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga…..

in front of him was twinkle’s pic along with garland. ….
n ppl in white clothes r mourning. ..
it’s the day … her last rites finished …

every1 n priest r praying for her soul’s peace ….

n AAMU is too present there ….
she’s crying more than any1…

suddenly she turns around n to her amzmnt she found kunj sitting there n crying

kunj eyes were telling how much he’s bearing. ..

Meri jaan mein har khamoshi hain
Tere pyaar ke nagme gaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Is chahat mein mar jaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
aamu comes towards him n makes him stand properly ….

AAMU- kunj…U here …

Kunj-sobbing … aamu Q…tumne naii bataya ki twinkle is in her last stage of her cancer. ..At least I would be able to see her alive if u told me….
now I lost everything. …
I love her…damn I love her …I can’t leave without her ….
n breaks into tears

Aise zaroori ho mujhko tum
Jaise hawa ye saanson ko

AAMU- I can’t kunj…I hv promised her … n how can I break her promise ….
I can’t …. n breaks down. …

Aise talashun main tumko
Jaise ke pair zameeno ko

aamu- N she too loves u unconditionally n deeply …

kunj- Wt r u saying. ..!!!

read this n u will know everything. …
n she gives him twinkle’s diary…

—–DIARY—–

dear diary,

he gave me the letter n confessed his love …..
But wt vl i do now ….
how will I say that the girl he loves can’t be his life partner …

she’s dying. …

yesss I’m suffering from cancer & I’ve hardly a month left Even I will not be celebrate AAMU’S birthday. …

N I love him tooo much …

for him only the last days I lived like a free bird …
forgetting all my pain n sadness …

I can’t. .. that’s Y I broke all the ways by wich he can contact me

evn aamu has given me the promise not to tell him anything

my last wish is to celebrate Aamu’s birthday which is on 3rd NOV …but I know rab ne utne din ki mohlat naii di mujhe..

Tumhe Chahta Hai Kyun Itna Yeh Dil Ke Ab Dil pe Bas Na Chale Bahut Din se Is Dil ki Zidd Hai Sanam Tumhe Hum Laga Le Gale Tumse Milneki Ab To Chahat Hai Tum Kya Jano Dil ki Kya Halat Hai

KUNJ I LOVE U … I LOVE U BEYOND ANY MEASURES N WORDS … I LOVE U DEEPLY …MADLY N UNCONDITIONALLY

but kunj i can’t Confesss it to u … Kis kadar anjaan hai yeh silsila-e-ishq bhi Muhabbat to kayam rehti hai magar Insan toot jate hain……..

kuch bateein unkahi reh gayi ….

——diary——-

Hasna yaa rona ho mujhe
Paagal sa dhoondhun main tumhe
Kal mujhse mohabbat ho naa ho
Kal mujhko ijazat ho naa ho

kunj reads all this with crying eyes. …
his condition is vulnerable. ..
but Aamu’s condition is not less ….
she was too crying vulnerably as she knows how each moment her bestie has passed ..

.
Tutte dil ke tukde lekar
Tere darr pe hi reh jaaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga

kunj- Her last wish was to celebrate ur birthday aamu … N I’ll fulfil this at any cost ….n today’s only 3rd NOV

n he orders a cake ….

cake comes …..

in the cake was written “Happy Birthday my lifeline bestie AAMU
….from …. ur swthrt TWINKLE ”

kunj- Aamu blow the candles & cut the cake. …

Aamu- I can’t kunj …..

ku- but u hv to…rmmbr it’s ur bestie’s last wish n u hv to fulfill it

Tum yoon mile ho jabse mujhe
Aur sunehri mein lagti hoon

aamu blows the candles n cut the cake …

ku- sobbing. … Ha..pp…y biii…r.r.thday…aamu n cries clapping. .

aamu too cries … 😭😭😭😭😭😭

n she puts a piece of cake 🍰 in front of twinkle’s pic n feeds 2 to kunj …

then they again cries to their hearts content. ….

Sirf labon se nahi ab toh
Poore badan se hasti hoon
Mere din raat salone se
Sab hai tere hi hone se…..

# kunj’s pov ….

see twinkle I’ve fulfilled ur last wish at any cost ..

now ur soul must rest in peace in heaven. ..

but wt will happen to my soul …. it will suffer hell naaa ….

Q kia …. mujhe at least bol toh sakti thi…
ab kya hoga mera …..
u taught me the meaning of life & u left my life …

# end of pov…

he cries more vulnerably. …

Yeh saath hamesha hoga nahi
Tum aur kahi mein aur kahi
Lekin jab yaad karoge tum
Main ban ke hawa aa jaunga oh…

he holds twinkle’s pic ckose to his heart n let the stream of tears flow out of his eyes….

Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Iss chahat mein mar jaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga (x2)
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1 year later ….

kunj is shown sleeping holding twinkle’s pic n his eyes were red due to crying but her lips had a smile. ….

suddenly sum1 shakes him…
ku- kya yrrr twinkle. … sone v doo nah …
I’m sleepy …

twi- utho kunj…vul gaye aj 2nd Nov hay
aj meri death anniversary hay naa …
u will not do preparations

kunj- waking up…How can I forgot the most painful day of my life ….
wen I lost u ….
patha hay twinkle ppl thinks me mad as I talks to u … but they can’t see u …
but let them think … they don’t know that my love is too strong that aftr death u cm too met me ….
but twinkle Y u left me…
mai adhoora ji raha hu…
har pal ye keh raha hu …
mujhe teri zaroorat hai….
plz cm bk

twinkle – hold on …
kunj sumtimes we’ve to bow down before destiny…
I too love u kunj…. but hamare kismat me yehi tha
me n u … twinkle n kunj can nvr be TWINJ…
but dat doesn’t mean that u shld stop leaving. .. u shld move on…

kunj- I hate u twinkle. …
I hate u…

twinkle – but I love u kunj n I’ll always. ..
alvida kunj jane ka samay ho gaya hay …
alvida ….

kunj- twinkle plz…don’t go …plz

twinkle moves backwards n dissappears in the air smiling

kunj- twinkleeeeeeeee n he wakes up…
n again starts crying holding her pic close to his heart saying I LOVE U TWINKLE N I’LL ALWAYS DO … I’LL SPEND THIS LIFE WITH UR MEMORIES. …

^& again cries vulnerably … 😭😭😭😭😭

Hasna yaa rona ho mujhe😭😭😭😭
Paagal sa dhoondhun main tumhe
Kal mujhse mohabbat ho naa ho
Kal mujhko ijazat ho naa ho
Tutte dil ke tukde lekar😭😭😭😭
Tere darr pe hi reh jaaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga… 😭😭😭
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sooooo peeps after a long time. …
missed u ….to the helll….

n how’s this os … vulgar I know …
n worstest toooo ….

but wt can I do …

I’ve reconsider my descion of leaving due to my pyaari sissos …..

HAPPY? ??

I think sad nah …..
dont worry …..

I don’t care at alll…..

coz I don’t give a shit to u who don’t like it …..

n dislikers stay away from my article. ..
get ur eyes out of here …
u blo*dy ppl…
before I say more ill words n cross my limits leave …

n AAMU …JAANEMAN. …hope u like it…don’t know how’s it. ..πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘…

but once again A VERY HAPPIEST BIRTHDAY. …jaanu
hope all ur dreams cm true…

W8ng for the birthday treat wich u hv to give darling

chup chap de dena warna ….KATTI … saath me gala dabana n khun chusna free…πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’….

hope it get posted before 12:00 am… but these TU ppl….just …hell…😀😀😀

okk ppl do cmnt if u like … n if u wish…

I’m not gonna beg any more …

n byeeeee for now…

nxt article upon demand n response. …

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20 Comments
  1. Roshini125

    Omg!!😒😒😒😒 such a sad one…!!!

  2. Senti episode.. N u hav written it nicely

  3. Aashiya

    Aayuuuu what was this. ….ommmggg….like wth…..kya likha tune…I’m touched to the core. ……what should I say ……I love you yrr………….
    πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  4. Kiya1234

    Sad but I loved it πŸ’‹πŸ’‹β£οΈπŸ˜πŸ˜you describe we’ll all emotional and the song with you potray wellπŸ˜‚

  5. Presha

    Awesome
    Loved it

  6. Aamu

    Awww…..thank u sooo much ayeshaaa😍😍😍😍😍…
    It was amazing..
    Though sad and heart touving but loved it…
    Awww…it was really amazing😍 ..
    My character was also there😍😍…really awesome..
    Loved it..

    And yeah..taking my thank u back warna daategi firπŸ˜›

    Tata..
    Love u

    1. huh….. 😀😀😀😀😀😀
      tq….bolegi toh kya kar sakty hu…
      tujhe achhe se patha hay ….😀😀😀😀
      love u tooo babes. … ❀❀❀β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯

  7. 😭😭😭😭😭😰😰😰😰yrrr rula diya my chotu sis.
    Awesome amazing fantastic fabulous marvelous mindblowing superb & emotional os dear

    plzzzz apne ff post kr de na plzzz
    luv u dear soo much

  8. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😰😰yrrr rula diya meri chotu sis.
    Awesome amazing fantastic fabulous marvelous mindblowing &emotional os dear
    plzzz apne ff bhi post kr de na plzzz
    luv u soo much

  9. Anusha

    Amazing episode dear
    Its emotional😭😭
    Loved it
    Love u

  10. Cheena2001Cp

    Aayi toh emotional kar diya ree!!!
    Mouli πŸ˜˜πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ Fabulously written…..Baaki apni ffs to Puri Kar !!!

  11. Twinj2000

    THAT was just awesome 😘😘
    So emotional 😭😭
    I was crying so much 😒😒
    Felt bad for twinj 😭
    But it was amazing
    Loved it ❀️❀️
    Keep posting

  12. it was superb! it was not at all vulgar smjhi
    infact it was amazing!
    keep writing
    keep smiling
    luv u

  13. SidMin23

    You Make me cry reading this story and sad ending happy birthday amu

  14. Yeh hai aashiqui ryt i guess hv seen it seriously u nailed it u were osm d changes n emotional I got
    Loved it
    Keep smiling

  15. It was really emotional…
    it made me cry too
    but it was very well written
    loved it

  16. Ramya

    Hate you idiot
    Itna emotional koi likhta kya
    See I’m crying
    Itni sad ending
    Not fair yaar
    But it was amazing so awesome superb
    Emotional
    Filled with sad version
    But agli baar mujhe happy wali chahiye
    Dekhle warna mai baat
    Nahi nahi
    Mai kuch na kuch karungi
    Love you idiot

  17. Ananya_DSK

    Ayeshu… Aate hi rulad diya yaar aapne to..
    It was so amazing!! I never thought there could be this version to true love too…
    Absolutely loved it!!! I was missing you yaar! Really happy to see you back..
    Hope you’ll continue writing more amazing stuff for us..
    Love you!

  18. Baby

    god rula rula ke behaal krdia vulgar kaha se tha yeh bilkul bhi nhi tha vulgar
    loved it β™₯
    sooooooooo emotional sooo cute wid ur own twists β™₯
    love u sooooooo much β™₯

  19. Marrie

    Omg so nice os
    Emotional too
    Btw love it very much 😘

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