Why did you left me (Edkv) intro and promo

hello guys I’m writing a ff finally and the os will take time bcs I’m still fixing it😜
guys piliz intro me de nai sakti mujhe boht nind a rahi he….so all characters are the same
and yeah plss note it IT IS BASED ON A REAL STORY ( are don’t get me wrng it’s real story bt nt mine, I red a short letter which described a lot about the story and the short letter ws published on newspaper….)

promo:(Shravan’s Pov) even today I want to walk on ur path…you know why bcs you lived in my evry thought. Even now… it ws u who taught me to walk on the path of love..even that day wen u heard about me being sick u cried whole night, then why did u left me today being egoistic, by hurting me. Pls come back to me….
guys I just translated the letter so plss forgive me if there is any mistake and if it is fimilar to anybody’s story or if anyone didn’t like it plsss let me know, I will not continue
os will come after repairingπŸ˜‚πŸ˜œ…
if new character cms then I’ll introduced them later..

sry if there is an typing mistake….
I’m very sleepy, oh no it’s too late, I’ve school tmr
bye bye guys, sweet dreams…oh wat am I saying it will post at the day, good by
luv u all so much that can’t be expressed – Neeti

22 comments

  1. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Meri pyaari neeti..
    You’re here yay !!
    The promo was amazing !!
    Koi nai.. Jaake soja..
    And do post soon..
    Will wait for this ff and the os..
    Chalo love you loads..
    Take care,
    Your’s Nikki di <33

    • Neeti

      |Author

      ha di me a gayi
      thank u baise ye to bas wo letter tha jo paper me publish hua tha, baki jo likhungi uspe tarif karna kiuki bakika mera idea hoga
      ab kiu soungi ab parhane aye ga teacher
      jaldi pst karne ki koshia karungi
      plsss di os mat kaho kiuki me use ts bhi bana sakti hu, decide nahi kar payi ab tak
      luv u too, u also take care- Neeti

  2. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Yo neeti tu pgal wagal hogai hai kya πŸ˜€ mujhe LAGA acha khaas intro hoga but nai kuch let’s Bol kar sone gai….. Wah Wah jawaab nai bheee Tera taliyaan taliyaan !!
    Hahaha I telly like the letters or aisa ho Sakta hai ke mujhe pasand nai aai it’s great my love…!
    Yr ye kya hai?!! OS kyun nai post kar rahi abhi Bhi fix…?? Hadd hai!! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ mar do…!! Mar hi dalo mujhe…..!! Meri post pr toh aake khoob bolti hai ke mardala !! Suspense bardasht nai hota or khud to Tampa tadpa kar mardia bhee jaldi post karde behen !!! Plz plz plz both ff n OS hahah well a very very great news hamari neeti ff Bhi likh rai hai chalo beta ab jaldi jaldi post karo…..
    Now ziada lamba cmmnt hogya or tareeef Bhi hahahah
    So good afternoon it’s 2:37 haha n take care
    By by
    Love u tumse Bhi ziada muahhhh

    • Neeti

      |Author

      kya karu ap logo se sikha he na suspense rakhna😜
      glad ap ko pasand aya
      use os mat boliye plssss kiuki decide kar rahi hu ki os likhu ki ts😜
      mujh par itna bara iljam…mujh par apne meri di ko marne ka iljam lagaya😭
      ha jaldi pst karungi kiuki mujhe apne upar lage iljam ko hatana he
      nai ye zyada nai tha aur bara likhiye….
      aur me apse zyzda pyarr karti hu
      luv u sabse zyzda- Neeti

  3. pretty preeti

    Hey my sweety
    Nets ur new name with ur ff
    It was amazing
    An tk toh uth gyi
    Lovely POV
    Interesting
    Same story
    Let’s read it
    Post next epi soon dear
    Byde
    Its me only
    Love u
    Ya waiting for os

    • Neeti

      |Author

      hello di, ye mera naya nam, thank you
      ye letter paper me chapa tha isliye me credit nai lungi, baki sab banake likhungi tab amazing bolna
      interesting mujhe bhi laga is liye me likh rai hu
      I’ll try pst soon
      thank u di fr the lovely cmnt
      apka ff kaha gaya, jaldi pst kariye plssss
      pls use os mat kaho cs I can make it ts
      luv u too di- Neeti

    • Neeti

      |Author

      are di ap bhul gayi ki os nai ts he
      thank u bt stry meri nai asli ki he aur asli koi person nai he asli matlab asli
      or nind ki waza se galt likh diya leave ki jagha left likh diya maine title me, sry
      luv u byby – Neeti

  4. Niharika

    could u tell me one thing??is there any grammatical rule its said that why did u left me??it should be leave…hain naa??sorry if i m wrong…

    • Neeti

      |Author

      nai u r right actually I wrote that by mistake, thanks di fr d correction I didn’t notice it I’ll fix it next time, sry fr the trouble di and thanks fr cmnting

      • Niharika

        no no…it happens,neeti.u neednt to be sorry…silly me….
        and u plot seems promising…keep it up…☺
        (btw,how come u got to know i m elder than u…may be notπŸ˜‰)

  5. Rukhsar

    |Registered Member

    Wow neeti it seems really interesting post it soon waiting for the first epi and yeah u said that u r the youngest here right ????so whats ur age my younger oops youngest sister?????

    • Neeti

      |Author

      thank you di…
      I’m 13 years old di even Nikita di is 13 bt I’m few months younger than her I think maybe 1 years younger so I’m the youngest
      I’m sry nind me galti se galat nam likh diya it should be leave bt I wrote left, sry
      luv u di- Neeti

    • Neeti

      |Author

      thanks Pari di (apne notice kia me apko kabhi Angel di toh kabhi Pari di bulati hu)
      itna exited mat ho warna disbelieve ke waja se mujhe heart attack a jaye ga….😜
      sayad aj bhi nind me likhu me kiuki aj ap sabke ff parne ke bad unpe cmnts dene ke bad me pst karungi…😜
      pata nai kon sach kehta he mere fnds kehte he me pakao hu and hamesha bakwas karti hu aur ap log kehre ho cute, whom to trust…😞 (agar emo galt a gaya then sry me confused dikha na chahti thi
      I’m nt at all cute I’m bandaria churail, Maro di se puchlo she saw my photo…
      byby (love u uper pst pe likh diya so kotha khatam😜)

  6. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Hello neeti !!!!
    Hahahaha kitni cute baaten krti ho πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ …
    Nd promo was awwwwesome .. nd ohhhhhh based on real story then m double excited 😁😁 ..
    Post soon ..
    Take care ..

    • Neeti

      |Author

      thanks Fatima api (ap ko kya laga sirf aplog api janto ho nai hamarr idhat bhi api apu a sab kaha jata he, par agar apko bura nai laga toh me apko api bulaungi) sayad me ajhi pehla epi pst karungi bt pehle sare ffs parngi unme cmnt karungi and then I’ll pst the epi agar time mila toh…..
      main cute bate karti hu sirf aplogo ko e lagta he warna mere frnds ko a bakwas lagta he….
      thank u again
      ap bhi apna khayal rakkhiye
      by by – Neeti ( luv u is post me likh diya😜)

      • Fatimagulesarfraz

        |Registered Member

        Yeah !!! U can call me api .. that’s ok .. nd hahahaha behn sirf ye apky saath nae hota sbky frndzz ko hi lgta hy k hm bakwas kr rae hn πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

  7. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Real story? Sounds awesome from the very beginning. I’m super excited. Post the epis real quick. Don’t keep me waiting. Lots of love….nd kisses….muuuuaaaahhhhhh

    • Neeti

      |Author

      yes di, thank u fr the wonderful cmnt…
      wo ap ka excitement dekh kar me mar jaungi
      maybe I’ll pst today… I’ll nt keep u waiting…
      woh sare luvsss and kissesss mujhe dekhkar bhag gaye, dikhne me churail jo hu…πŸ˜œπŸ˜†πŸ˜‚
      pr I’m sure mere luvsss and kisses ap tak jaroor pohchengeπŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ ye lo….
      luv u ka kotha uper pst me pura kr diya ab aplogo k ffs parne aur unme cmnt karne jana he, so bye di – Neeti

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