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Why did you leave me (Edkv)- epi 6

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Hah toh kaha the hum, ya ri8 yad a gaya….
Story continues:
de had bf (are boyfriend nahi breakfast kha liya).
After sometime:
Sumo: are, Maro. Tu kaha ja rahi hai?
Marie hits hr: le mar diya, khush (she starts going)

S: ye Marie ki bacchi, y did u hit me
M: u only told me to hit u
S: wen did I say?
M: just a few moment ago, u were saying maro(hit) na
S: stop ur nonsense nd tell me where r u going
M: to pick up my afat ki puriya (something like truck of troublesome)
S: u mean Raunu?!!
M: Suman stop chanting Raunu, I am going to pick d innocent churail.(hairan mat ho, age jake samaj ayega churail kaise innocent hoti hai)
S: ‘little scared’ do u mean by hr? (tera matlab he wo?)
‘Raunak listens to d half convo’

Rau: who could b woh?
Marie goes to a hostle (maine hostle bola hotel nahi!)
there little girl ws sitting on a brench nd watching ‘Dance Plus’ in hr phn
girl: go Raghvu, go!
M: ‘holds ears of d girl’ oye Raghav Juyal ki fan stop cheering dat chikna, ok!
D girl looks at Mar with an angry look
Girl: Maro di, pls dont call him Chikna. He is my Raghvu!
M: u r talking like u r gonna marry him, my Neeto darling (nd yeah dats me!:-P)
N: if I got a chance den I would hve surely married him (dats true:-D). Think na di I would hve joined his dance classes, he would became my bf (is time boyfriend hi hai:-P), we would have married, wat say!
M: just shut up yar, he is 25 nd u r 13, still u think abt marriage
N: di luv dont hve any limit, it just happens!
M: oh u pyar ki devi nw lets go, Suman didi is waiting!
N: woh so we r going to Suman dis home
M:yeah, nw lets go!
De come out. Suddenly sme1 comes infront of dem, M & N get shocked!
M: Raunak, wat r u doing here?
Rau: n..no…nothing. I was ju… Just passing nd saw u so I thought to meet u
M: we stay at d same house, nd u came to meet me!
Rau: nw forget all dis na, Sumo must b waiting fr u

M: ya ya, ok baba. U go, we r coming
N: huh, baba. Nw I am seeing something black. Lets see if here any bag(s) is/r full.
M: wat?
N: nothing, lets go. He must b waiting
M: ya come.
MaNak was seating in front nd Neeti was seating in d back seat. Raunak was driving.
Neeti called Marie frm back, ‘Maro di, I like dis jiju’ Neeti said in a low tone. ‘just shut up, princess’ Marie shouted.
de reached home
Sumo, who ws waiting fr dem looked a bit shocked.
S: Raunak, wat r u doing with dem?
R: I will tell all dat later bt first let me come in na!
S: ya ya cme inside.
De go inside.

S: so choti churail, hw r ur studies going on?
N: it is fine di. Nt too well bcs of bad health.
S: oh no! Wat happened dear?
N: nothing serious di, just fainted few times, have headache, got fever. Thats all!
S: wat, hw did u get fever, hw did u fainted, why is ur head paining?!!!
N: are are di, nt me, my teachers got fever, fainted nd hve headache bcs of me. De couldnt handle me so nw de r admitted in hospital!
S, M, R: wat!
Screen freezes on dere shocked faces nd Neeti’s naughty smile.

Precap:Neeti ki shaytania kahi duba na de is sansar ko. God bless dem.

Ha, I know it ws sooo short, bt I was nt getting any stry nd aftr my exam starts I cant pst any epi so written dis.

Nw dis imazine Raunak as Mohshin Khan nd Maro di if u still dont like him den let me give u few choices:
Shah Rukh Khan
Salman Khan
Ranbir Kapoor
Varun Dhawan
Kapil Sharma
Mohit Sengal
Varun Sobti
Arjun Kapoor
Akshay Kumar
ya apka koi v fav actor (Namik ko chor ke)

sry fr nt being able to rply ur cmnts dis. Hope evry1 really liked it.
Luv u guys, Tc, thanks, sry, Shraman dreams- Neeti, Leeti(late+Neeti), Hapti (Happy+Neeti)

4 Comments
  1. Hey
    .neeti..😊😊😊
    It was nice…
    That’s OK…baby..
    Take time..
    Thank well..
    Thn write..ok..
    We will wait.

  2. wow it was fab
    ur character is so cool and funny
    love it
    post soon bye…………tc

  3. Ariana

    Beautiful!!!! And I don’t mind at all if u take time. It means I can read ur wonderful ff for longer. All the best for ur exams. Keep rocking. Love u honey
    Take care

  4. This was too good.. Loved it. 💕
    That bf thingy was epic xD
    Post soon. Take care.. Love you sweetie 😘

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