Why did you leave me (Edkv) epi 1

hey guys, Leeti (late+Neeti) or ur pakao chutku behen is here with epi 1…I wrote my first epi fr Maro di bcs today is hr Bday taliyaπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘…dis maybe today’s epi will be short cs I have to write it 2 to 3 times (galti meri hi thi😜)…Maro di plss read dis epi it’s especially fr u…and I posted a release date and correction that is nt uploaded yet…bt I will be uploaded anyways…
so let’s start…

Suman’s Pov: kehte he ki agar dosti me biswas aur respect ye do chiz nai he toh wo khokla hota he (it is said if friendship don’t have trust and respect then it is a lie) bohot log ise sunkr unsuna kar dete he (many people just hear it and forget it) I hve also met somebody like dis who dont value friendship.. who just think about himself.. who think friendship as a game…who just…..why I’m even thinking about him…I hate him, I will never forgive you Mr…
pov end by a jerk…

Suman, Suman, kaha kho gayi tu (where are u lost)
Sumo: Nothing, Maria (di apke Bday pr ye chota sa gift)..me bas kuch soch rai thi…( I was just thinking about something
Maria: abhi chal taxi mil gayi…( nw let’s go, we got a taxi)

Sumo: ok lets go (they were at Delhi airport)…
Suman’s Pov : me ghoom phir ke usi jagha a gayi jaha me kabhi nai ana chahti thi (After roaming I again came to d place where I didn’t wanted to come), yo jagha jisne mujhe har wakt dard diya, wo jagha jaha mera smman chin liya gaya, wo jagha zaha mera bharosa toota (d place which always gave me pain, d place where my self respect was snatched, d place where my trust was broken…
she takes out a diary frm her bag and took a pic frm the diary, pov: y did u broke my trust why..
again a jerk breaks the pov…
Maria : Suman chal jaldi…

Sumo quickly puts the photo and d diary on hr bag and says, lets go…
de came to a beautiful house….a duplex house
de enter d house, d furnitures were covered with white cloths…d went upstairs and enters a room, full pink colour walls, d floor was covered with light sky ble tiles..d wall covered with a small girls photo…
Sumo gets lost….

after few minutes Maria asked Sumo: is it ur room Sumo…( ap toh samajh gaye honge ye Sumo ka gahr he aur phts bhi Sumo kahi ne)
Sumo was still lost, Maria moves her hands infront of Sumo’s eyes…Suman Suman..
Sumo gets to her senses,
Maria: maine pucha kya ye tera kamra he (I asked, is it ur room
Sumo: nai mere bandar ka kamra he, of course ye mera kamra he (no it’s my monkey’s room, of course it’s my room)
Maria: pr tujhe to Pink and Sky Blue colour se sakt nafrat he (bt u just hate Pink and Sky Blue colour)
Sumo :I was a child that time so couldn’t understand the difference btwn good and bad…
Maria: ok then lets start cleaning the home.

de clean the house and made it chakachak…de ordered food frm outside cs de don’t have kitchen stuffs…de ate dinner and slept

Ab me bhi sone jati hu kiuki aha abhi… oh no pure 1:50 am bj gaye, I have schl tmrw…
mere liye bht bara ho gaya, ap logo ka ap decide karo ye epi short tha ya long…till den good night ya good by,..are sry precap dena bhool gayi

Precap: Introducing….. abhi nai surprise rakti hu…

kaun kar sakta he sahi guess wat do u think who is d person, whom I’m going to introduce
Maria Api sry, pure epi me maine apke nam ke bad api, apu ya di likhnai sakti, isliya and happy BdayπŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽπŸŽπŸŽπŸŽπŸ‰πŸ‰πŸ‰πŸŸπŸŸπŸŸπŸ’‹πŸ’‹β˜•β˜•πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸŒπŸ“±πŸŽΆπŸŽ»πŸŽ·πŸŽΈ….✈and is plane ko pakad kar chali yao ap idhar…😜…
plss guys do cmnt, good or bad just cmnt plsss
sry if any typing mistake, I’m very sleepy, so again by by- Neeti

27 comments

  1. Sriya

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    neeti meri behena yeh toh kamaal dhamaal jhakas fabulous episode thi…!! love u meri behena mujhe nahi pata ki meri chot si behen itni acha likhi thi hai???….!! post asap post asap plzzzzzzzz behhena jaldi post kar aur mujhe laga tha hai ke shravan ko introduce karni wali ho….!! just a guess sorry if i guess wrong…!! tumhara age kya hai??? meri behena jaldi bata mujhe jana hai aur ha mein teri jese hi edkv or shraman ko love karti hu or especially shravan ko…!! love you behena your cute sweet sissy…!! aur ha bahot mistakes hui lekin koi bata nahi teri didi mujhe maaf kar rahi akhir tum meri cute beautiful sissy……!! jo ho….!! chalo bye take care next part posted that is 10th episode 11th episode also i had wrote now i writing 12th one….!! i will post them also soon…!! take care…!!

    • Sriya

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      i wrote 12th episode also…!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but 13th episode tomorrow when 10th will be posted i will post 11th when it will be posted i will post 12th one too…..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      • Neeti

        |Author

        aur sry kiu bol rahi he ap bt guess karte raho me ab nahi bataungi wo bad me pata chalega….😜sry…
        me 13 saal ki choti bacchi hu…😜
        bas 10 saal ke bacche ki class me parti hu😜
        yeah apne mujhe maf kar diya thank u
        say Shraman rocks
        luv u tooo much- Neeti

  2. Ariana

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    What a starting! Maria will have a heart attack. Nd as for the epi….OSHADHARON! I’m super duper excited for the next part. I really wanna knw wht actually happened. Ufff the mystery is killing me from inside. Post next epi really soon. This time don’t be late. If u r, I’ll ensure when I visit Bangladesh for a trip, I punch u. Huuummph! My warning… *evil smile* MUHAHAHA…so better make this Mocambo happy. But then again, I love u na…? so for this Aru, post soon. :p
    Trucks bhorti bhalobasha
    -Ariana

    • Neeti

      |Author

      nai nai Maria Apur heart attack asle ai gift er ki hobe…
      are apnar ta amar chaiteo lakh gun oshdharon…
      ar fb will come soon so I will be revealed soon
      where are u nw di…?????u said that wen u will visit…???? mane apne akhane thaken na….
      no no…, no ghisi latthi thappor plsss I’ll always keep u happy sotti
      I will pst soon Aru apu
      hai hai truck driver amake dekhe bhoye truck soho ulte porlo…tai ap nake oi truck e amar bhalobasha diye pathai dilam😜
      luv u more than that- Neeti

      • Sharmansangel

        |Registered Member

        Aisa bola na thapad marungi chota iss liye tha kyun ki Mujhe tumhare ff ki taareef ke liye words nai mil rahe the aur Mujhe vo os padjna hai kab post karogi please jaldi karo Varna meri jaan nikal jayegi intezaar ke maare

      • Neeti

        |Author

        😭 di ap mujhe thappar marenge😭
        me to bas majak kar rahi thi😭
        phir se os bola apne ts boliye plsss😜

  3. Nikita

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    Meri pyaari neeti ..
    Amazing episode babu !!
    Marie di ke liye bohot epic surprise hai !!
    Amazingly awesome…
    I really wanna know kya hua tha?
    Entry.. Umm.. Maybe Shravan or Pushkar.. Jo bhi hoga, meri pyaari shi neeti accha hi likhegi.. Haina??
    Post sooon !!
    Loads of Love,
    Nikki di..

    • Neeti

      |Author

      apko Bengali ati he…I mean babu..bt Hindi me bhi babu hota he..I think
      epic nai tha bt jitna de sakti thi utna de diya maine..hehehehe
      ya entry acche ke liye hi hoga jo bhi he….
      will pst soon
      luv to u too- Neeti

    • Neeti

      |Author

      hey Fatima Api
      really ye awsome tha kya…
      hahahaha, makhan chori kar ke lekar aye kya mujhe lagane ke liye..hahahaha hehehehπŸ˜‚
      will pst soon…
      u also take care
      luv u- Neeti

  4. Prettypreeti

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    My nets lovely
    Maro di happy birthday to u
    Nets ty yaar it was cool
    Nice
    Shraman good
    U r thief don’t take to ur heart joking
    Loved it
    Post soon

    • Neeti

      |Author

      thank u thank u thank u Preeti di
      and u can call me anything thief, chudail, dayan, bhutni bt I will nt mind cs I’m besarram😜
      will pst soon
      luv u- Neeti

  5. Marie

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    Hey darling…..!!!
    OMG OMG OMG….!!! I m speechless…!! The biggest n greatest surprise fr me…!!!
    Thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u soooo much uncountable….!! Yr u made my day special…!! It was a fantastic ep….!! Thanks u so much mujhe itna pyaar dene ke liay yr…!! U r a sweet heart….!! Neeto neeto mera dil Bhi yahi chah raha hai abhi plane pakado n WAHAN aajao…!! N tumhe tight hug doon…..!! Y r u so sweet…..!! Thank u so much yr…!
    Love u sab se ziada…!! Bht bht bht….!!!
    I m getting a heart attack Ariana ne sai kaha…!!
    N epic surprise fr me…..!! Nikko ne sai kaha….!!
    Mai tumhe jitna thank u karoon kam hai yr……!
    A lot of kisses tight hugs frm me…..!!!
    Love u sab se ziada…..!!
    Take care sweeto…….!!!

    • Neeti

      |Author

      nai ye sabse bara surprise nai he I’m sure apke frnds ne aur family ne isse bhi bara surprise diya he apko…aur Sriya di toh apke liye surprises ki dukan kholdi he hahahaha
      and y r u thanking me I couldn’t even give a gift to u, I’m so sry
      di u always made me feel so special warna mujhe galiyo ke siwa kisi ne kuch kaha hi nai
      are ajao no prob bas passport and visa le ana warna Bajrangi Bhaijan ki tarha ap bhi phas jao gi😜
      nai I luv u sabse zyada
      plss don’t get heart attack warna mera kya hogaπŸ˜œπŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ
      u also take care di- Neeti

  6. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    Loved it neetiiiii
    it was really nyc
    u wrote well!!!!!!

    And sorry han i cant cmnt long bt tht dosent mean i didnt like it….

    I love it…,,

    • Neeti

      |Author

      tq di, jhooti hi sahi kisi ne tarif toh kiya😜
      are maine bura nai mana or Riya di ko maine bas chirhayaπŸ˜‚
      I luv u di- Neeti

  7. Ruchi

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    Hey Neeti dear..
    Sorry yr late ho gyi..
    kesi ho tum??
    Amazing epi..
    post next epi asap ..
    take care..
    Lots of love..
    Ruchi.. πŸ™‚

    • Neeti

      |Author

      I’m fine Ruchi di, ap kaisi ho..????
      thank u, is bar me late ho gayi cs I’m Leeti (Late+Neeti)
      will pst soon
      u also take care di
      luv u loads- Leeti

  8. MAYA444

    |Registered Member

    wow last time u asked me to read ur ff …. its really good
    if any of u guys haven’t read it is ek duje ke vaste ff
    ” i love you” i have made 7 ff

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