My layered demeanour (Episode 5)

Recap: bonding between Himanshoo and Surbhi

Link to the previous epi:
[Surbhi’s pov]

I reached college a little early and straightaway headed to his classroom. As expected, I found him standing near the door waiting for me. I walked up to him. My every step in his direction was making him step back. Eventually, he stumbled due to the bench present at his back. He fell on the bench as he moved slightly to make himself comfortable. I lifted my right leg as I placed it on the bench, beside him. I leaned slightly and placed my hand over my thigh. I smirked as I looked at him and finally uttered, ‘Vicky…Vicky Khurana. I hope no one knows about the incident that happened yesterday.’

‘No one knows about it. I have handled everything.’

‘That’s like a good boy.’ I placed my leg back on the floor as I warned him, ‘If anyone gets to know then you know what I’m capable of doing.’

‘When should I meet you?’ he looked hopefully at me as he asked this question.

‘Today only. I’ll message you the address & timing.’

I turned back and started leaving when I heard him say, ‘But today is my bhai’s birthday and there is a party.’

I again went near him as I patted on his cheeks. ‘I don’t give a damn. It is you who have to make a choice.’ Saying this I left the place.

[KVB’s pov]

My classes were starting late today so I didn’t come along with my brother. But I had reached a little early before the scheduled time. I straightaway went to basketball court where everyone started wishing me. I moved out of there along with some of my friends and met her on my way. She was chatting there along with her friends. I was a little far away from her and I decided to irritate her. ‘Hi Surbhi baby,’ I shouted making it clear that my words reach her. I saw her expressions changing as I smiled at the success of my small plan. I reached her as I saw her gritting her teeth and saying, ‘Why the hell do you call me this?’

‘I know you are a devil but I love the word baby and don’t you know how much I love you,’ I quipped.

‘Oh please!! Just shut up and keep your nonsense stuff with yourself.’ I must accept that she is quick when it comes to answering back.

There was a complete silence between every one of us for a few seconds when I heard her friends wishing me but she was doing the stuff she is famous for… passing cold glares at me. Maybe after seeing her friends wishing me, she had the bare minimum courtesy to wish me. ‘Happy birthday.’ I could feel the coldness in her voice.

‘I don’t take wishes which are not from heart. Oops sorry baby!! I forgot that you don’t have a heart. So, I accept your wishes.’ I sneered at her.

I saw her fuming face as she turned towards her left and entered the lobby, going towards our class. I looked at my friends as I said, ‘So boys, do you all want to have some fun in today’s party?’

‘But she doesn’t attend parties,’ I heard one of my friends saying.

‘But this time she’ll and get ready for some fun.’ I smirked as my mind was flooded with various evil ideas.

Thanks a lot guys for commenting and all those who are out there reading my story. I know that I’m irregular and I’m really sorry about it. Pls bear this and don’t get angry over my irregularity. Thanks for showering your love. I don’t know whether I deserve this much appreciation or not but I feel really blessed. Love you all.

@janvi- I’m also really happy that I came in contact with you and I hope that we never lose contact even after this ff gets over.Can we be friends?
@Roma- Thanks dear. I thought that you had stopped reading this ff. But I’m happy that I was thinking wrong. I would also like to remain in contact with you even after this ff gets over. Even though you always address mme as your friend, but still I’m asking- Can we be friends? Are you also a student?


Credit to: saya


  1. Sunehri

    U r marvellous saya. … fantastic episode. .. r u writing any other fan fictions? ? I love ur ff…. waiting for the next episode

  2. sakshi

    It’s not nice. Stop writing it. why do you write like this? I know there would be people who think the same.

  3. angel

    Sakshi I am not being bad or rude but if u don’t like it than don’t read or comment but me and all other silent readers do really enjoy saya ff keep it up saya love u lots

    • saya

      Hi Angel. I know dear I’m irregular but still thanks for saying that in your first comment. Thanks for your support too. Love you too.

    • Sunehri

      I agree with you angel. … plz sakshi if u don’t like plz don’t comment or read it…. We are all fans of our friend saya ….. she good. … Her ff is good and we enjoy it …. don’t degrade … Sry if I hv hurt u. …. anyway we all love ur fan fiction my friend saya 🙂

  4. shreyA

    hy saya dear hii i m ur new fan nd ur story is really very good i had read all d chps today nd really found them interesting but i m quite curious to knw in earlier chp i thought his crush is surbhii but hw can she be as she is with him then about whm ws he talking really confused plzz reveal d other two persons soon byee love u tc

  5. of course we r friends dear… jussst love u… n luvd d way kvb was irritating surbhi… i was litrely giggling while reading this part… n v will surely be in contact even after dis ff ends…

    • Saya

      Happy to read your comment and more happy to know that it brought a smile on your face. Thanks for your support too. Love you.

  6. nd fr u sakshi plzz stop writing those awful comments cuz there r lots of silent readers out there who wait fr each n every episode… n plzz if u dont like it thn stop reading it…. i am really sorry if i hurted anyone…. but sakshi is completely wrong…

  7. i think that if u three r not liking d plot then its well n fine n u can switch on to other ff… n iam really happy sunehri as you agreed wid me my dear frnd..

  8. Sasha

    N a small note to sakshi, if u dnt like it doesnt mean tht she should stop writing, its her wish to write. N to the other two if u dnt like n jst stfu. N dont comment. If u cant encourage atleast stop discouraging.

  9. its my pleasure saya… although there no need of thank you cuz we r frnds dear sis…. n ofcourse sunehri…. we can be frnds….. i am so happy to meet u guys….

  10. Roma

    Hi Saya dear, yes my sweeeeeet friend, we’re friends my dear, I just loved your comment. …thx honeyyy for writing this ff….I’m loving it sooo muchhhhhh. …survir face to face …was really awesome scene…loved the dialogues n narration. ..keep it up my sweeeeeet friend. ..I’m married, but yes student as I’m pursuing my masters in electrical n computer engineering. …along with work…very busy life with kids n family….only find peace here reading these amazing stories. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very tight hug

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