My layered demeanour (Episode 23)

Hello everyone. Here we go.

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(Himanshoo’s pov)

Everything was just flashing in front of my mind like a movie. I was able to listen to every word of theirs, was able to visualize everything but I was just incapable of perceiving anything. I guess I needed sometime. A lot of thoughts were bubbling in my mind. In all this, an innocence soul lost his life. How can anyone be so heartless? That incident ruined a lot of lives. My life was just so perfect but this possessive streak of my sister…my own Sweety changed everything. Everything got entangled due to this political war and that vices in human nature and mind. Maybe I could have got everything in control. Never mind, I decided that this evading or shunning nature of mine was helping no one. Maybe if I remain with her and put in my own efforts then realization would dawn upon her. I know she didn’t want someone to lose their life but I was also sure of the fact she wasn’t repenting this action of hers. Now, I was pretty sure of what I need to do.

As in for Shauraya, I have no doubts regarding the fact that they are friends but he surely isn’t a good friend. Instead of thwarting her actions, he gave her unconditional support. Maybe she forced him and on this basis, I cannot judge him entirely. God only knows what transpires between these two buddies. Whatever it is, now I’m here.

I came out of all these thoughts of mine, when a hand touched me. I looked at her hand on my shoulder. I hugged her as she broke down. Even I was unable to control my emotions. How I was able to have a control on myself all these days!!! Every day I just wanted to meet her, see her crazy side, pamper the child still present in her and what not.

(Surbhi’s pov)

Bhai hugged me!!! Could anyone pull me down to the ground? I was literally flying. I could no longer contain all this and tears flowed down. God, I was so happy. But I feared. What if all this happiness of mine is snatched away? What if someone comes again in my bhai’s life? NO!!! He is mine and will always remain with me. I cannot let bhai go away.

We broke the hug as bhai said, ‘I want to ask a lot of things from you but you need proper rest first. I have made sure that you get discharged.’

‘And everything is done.’ We both looked at Shauraya who had just entered and said this in excitement.

(Surbhi’s pov)

We three entered my one-bedroom apartment. As expected, bhai disliked it. He was just too shocked to see that his Sweety was living here without any basic amenities. To be frank, there were all the necessary things but for bhai, the definition was somewhat different.

‘There is no AC here. How can you just survive on a cooler in this scorching heat? And what about your swimming habit? There is no swimming pool here. I thought dad rented you his farmhouse which is here in the outskirts.’ He uttered everything in a breath after scanning the whole room.

‘Relax bhai,’ I tried calming him down a bit. ‘Dad did offer me but I rejected it.’

‘And do you cook yourself,’ he literally screamed as I closed my ears with both hands. ‘Show me your hands,’ he uttered as he started looking for any burn marks. The previous time I had tried cooking, the oil had splattered on my hands causing burns. I smiled looking at him. No, in fact my heart smiled seeing his concern.

‘I’m fine,’ I uttered and it isn’t me who cook. Its Shauraya.’ I looked at Shauraya and winked. He was really a good chef. You need to have the food by his hands to trust me.

‘Yeah,’ he supported me in my lie. Sometimes, even I used to step foot in the kitchen despite of the fact that I hated all this. But Shauraya being such a good friend would always try to push me out of the kitchen. But I used to resist him sometimes.

‘What were you doing with that Karanvir Bohra?’

That’s it. I’m screwed. Now, what should I answer? I cannot tell him that I’m working in the rival’s company. Until, Vicky was the head this news wasn’t leaked out but things were not in my hands this time. And I have a knack of keeping everything in my control.

Leaving aside everything, I looked at the place where I was standing. Everything was so picture perfect. Bhai, me and Shauraya. I don’t need anyone else. And I also need to solve a lot of things.

Precap: Clearing the misunderstanding between SurVir

First of all, sorry for adding somewhat same precap. I know some of you might not be liking the plot and maybe fed up of this overdose of this brotherly-sisterly story-line. But I guess this chapter of HimSur was equally important. I know that compared to everything, SurVir’s scenes are just 20% of my current story-line. I feel that I’m lacking at that part. You all might be looking forward to read SurVir’s scenes but guess what, I’m disappointing you all. So sorry for that.

And a big hug and thanks to Roma, Sunehri, Zuha, Nusz, Sarah and Mannat for always showering their kind words to me. Thanks to Fatarajo, laura and sam for commenting and to each and every reader of my ff. Thank you guys. My thanks is not enough for the tremendous support you are giving me but still. And keep commenting and motivating me.

I hope that janvi and angel are reading this and will comment one day. Waiting for you both.


Credit to: SSS


  1. Nuszat (T!B!H!) (~Nusz) (SuNusZuRahLima) You need to rock the world!!

    Loved this episode Saya, you’re amazing!!! Always here to support you :)) love you my doll


  2. Sunehri

    Seriously marvellous and I laughed when u mentioned shaurya is gonna cook 😛 but he’s a good chef huh … hmm and interesting. .

    Love u

    Sunehri mehta ( sunuzurahlima besties forever ) ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡

  3. Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

    Loved this awesomely awesome episode… I always wished for a elder brother but unfortunately I don’t have one??But leave it… I really liked the HimSur bonding… And yes if you are not adding some SurVir scenes so no worries… I guess.. maybe for me your adorable writing is enough… so in short I am saying you didn’t at least bore me out??Keep smiling… Keep writing… Love you!!

    • saya

      @Zuha- my thanks is not enough as a reply. Are you on fb? if you don’t mind then can we connect via that as I don’t want to lose out on a special person like you. Even I don’t have anyone like himanshoo. keep smiling and love you too ??

      • Zuha (SuNusZuRahLima)

        Dear I am not using FB but you can connect me on Google+ I am there as “Zuha Fatima” with my picture in scarf☺ hope you connect me there☺

      • Nusz (T!B!H) (~Nusz) (SuNusZuRah) halima's bestie forever and you need to rock the world!!!

        I use skype and fb aha~Nusz

  4. saya

    @zuha- yes surely I’ll try to get in touch with you
    @nusz- if you don’t mind then we can connect on fb. my id is saya yadav. profile pic is of a bird and cover pic of a writing pic. I’ll wait for your message

  5. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous episode, saya my sweeeeeetheart. …I just loved it to the core. …himsur bro sis bonding is very lovelyyyyyy. ….your imagination n narration is outstanding.’s OK survir scene r less but the things going around them r also important to know as that is only way to see their mindset N character….surbhi being possessive for her bro…don’t wanna share his love with someone else…what if she is in love….how will she feel if himanshoo do the same….so I’m loving this story with very unique plot N twist n turns….n your flawless writing skills make it perfectly beautiful. ….keep it up honeyyy. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh 🙂 😉 😀 Bear hug. ..

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