Laxmila – the love story (Part 1)

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Hello everyone! First of all I would like to thank everyone who support me and help me in my all fanfiction. I am here with a totally new fan fiction. And I wish that all of you will help me in this too.

It is based on siya ke ram more specific laxmila ( I am a diehard fan of them and I know, many of you too) but with a very special twist. This story’s plot is in Ayodhya and some part in mithila. The story starts.

Ram and Sita are happily married. Yes through the swayamvar in mithila. They are now back in Ayodhya.

But the twist is

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Laxman and Urmila are NOT married.

Laxman is in Ayodhya and Urmila in Mithila. During the marriage of Siam they share the same bubbly relationship but they got separate. After some time Urmila is coming to Ayodhya to meet Sita and her family (which will become her family in near future). Urmila will again meet Laxman here and their sweet sour relationship will again blossoms. This story will tell you how they get to know their feelings, their love story, and of course the arguments.

One more thing  Laxman will actually propose Urmila in very filmy style.

NOTE: It is totally a fiction and never means to hurt anyone’s feelings
The couples bharat-mandavi and shatrughn-shrutkirti are not present.

Kaikeyi is not present so no vanvaas but yes some trouble may come.

Some villain will came because a love story is never complete without some trouble.

So let’s begin
Sita: Swami! Urmila will be here any moment. Please complete your work fast.

Ram: I didn’t see you this much excited earlier. It is because you sisters ‘love. Don’t worry I am also waiting for Urmila eagerly. I will complete you soon.

Sita: I am leaving for the kitchen to make lunch. (She start leaving)

Ram: I think you don’t need to. Just take a look of kitchen.

Sita: what happen to kitchen?

Ram: just watch it.

Sita rushes to kitchen and see kaushlaya and sumitra cooking.

Sita: Mata! What are you doing?

Sumitra: what are you doing here Sita? We will make the food according to mithila with the help your dasis . You go and welcome your sister.

Kaushlaya: first time someone is coming from Mithila and that also Urmila. I am so excited to meet her.

Sita: I am blessed Mata that I get such a beautiful family who are more excited to meet my sister than me.

Dasi: Maharani! Mithila doli has entered Ayodhya.

Everyone get glad.

Urmila reach the palace. She was beautifully dressed in her yellow and pink lehnga she touched the feet of Dashrath.

Dashrath: stay blessed daughter. Where is rajrishi janak? He didn’t come.

Urmila: (in her lovely tone) he has sent his greetings to you and ask for sorry for not coming. But he said that he will definitely come when I will depart.

Urmila touched the feet of Kaushlaya and sumitra.

Sumitra: you don’t know how much we were excited to meet you.

Urmila: really!

Kaushlaya: ram, Sita and Laxman told us about you. Sita you will not meet Urmila.

Urmila get teary eyes seeing her sister who was already filled with tears. She hugs her. Urmila face was showing that she want to do something. But Sita knowing her intentions signs her to control. Dashrath realized it.

Dashrath: I know when two sisters meet after many days how they can react. So don’t hesitate. Express all your feelings

Urmila scream Sita didi and hold Sita and revolve with her then hug her.

Sita: Urmila! What if you fall down?

Urmila: you will hold me. Didi you don’t know how much I have to tell you about happenings in Mithila.

Sita: ok ok first calm down.

Ram: you will not meet me Urmila?

Urmila: jijasri! (She greets him) you yourself don’t want to meet me.

Ram: well I think you are angry with me for taking your sister.

Urmila: you are right jijasri I am angry but since my didi is happy I am controlling my anger otherwise I shall be here with whole army.

Everyone laugh.

I hope you all like it. Please please do comment and let me know your views and suggestions. They are really worthy for me. And please tell me should I continue with this twist. Thank you for reading.
P.S. hey I want to make it interesting so please suggest something. I shall be highly oblige.

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14 Comments
  1. Aman

    awesome ff, plz continue and pragyashree sis plz read my ff http://www.tellyupdates.com/sita-sisters-incarnations/ and answer my doubts

    1. Pragyashree

      thank you bhai

    2. Pragyashree

      sure bhai. I send a message to devdutt pattnaik but no reply came till now but I am trying to ask these ques on other forum

    3. Jayani

      Nyc dp bhaiya?

  2. Arnasharma26

    yeah didu ….u r back with another one…..loved it…cute cute

    1. Pragyashree

      Thank you Arna

  3. Padmaja

    Lovely plot..amazing one.. and mila- ram talk was lovely. … and even sita-mila talk was emotional… awesome… loved it to the core…. keep rocking.

    1. Pragyashree

      Thank you Padmaja

    2. Pragyashree

      how your vacations are going? Studies or enjoying?

      1. Padmaja

        Both are there… but now I am enjoying…. in my house it self…. he he..

  4. Jayani

    I loved d new ff di… Wasn’t able 2 comment earlier… I saw it around 2:32 in india timing i.e. 1:02 in dxb timing in d early morning… I took my phone coz I didn’t get sleep nd it was boring… Den I found ur ff… So I luv d new theme… Waiting for d next epi of both ur ff di…

    Jai Siya Ram

  5. Pragyashree

    Thank you!! jayani!! I am really happy that you like it. well what dxb means?

    1. Pragyashree

      I already updated part- 2 you can read it.

    2. Jayani

      Dxb means dubai… I hav 2 read d next part… Pls do read a new ff dat I hav uploaded

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