Lakshmilla !!!!!!


hey sisters i thought i will write a fan fiction about lakshman and urmilla.Comments and criticism is allowed.sorry if i made any mistake while writing since it is my first time.

Lakshman is back from the exile. He goes in search of urmilla. Urmilla sees lakshman and runs towards his direction.They both see each other.Urmilla hugs him.

Urmilla-“you came back”
Lakshman-“during this exile i missed you so much .i couldnt live without my urmu”
Urmilla-“i missed you even more”
They smile

Urmilla goes to her sisters.

Mandavi-“yaay!!! sita didi is back .Peace and happiness has returned back in ayodhya
Sita enters the scene
All the sisters hug sita

Shruthakirti-“We all missed you a lot didi.
Urmilla-” we wanted u and jija to come back to ayodhya
Sita-” I missed mu 3 younger sisters so much.
Mandavi-“Now there is only one thing left”
Sita -What?
Urmilla-“when u and jija become the king and queen of ayodhya”

Sita smiles

Precap-Urmilla is sleeping.Lakshman enters their room and sees urmilla

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  1. Padmaja

    Wow preethi chellam it is superb… i loved it..

    1. thank you akka

  2. wow super ff . make it a lil long . waiting for the next one

    1. thanks varshini. and will make it longer next time

  3. Anushya

    lovely dialogues… hope u include rams bros in next epi

    1. ya anushya i will include ram s bros in the next episode and thank u very much

  4. Jayani

    Its awesome Preethi akka

    1. thanks jayani dear

  5. I want the bonding and love story of lakshmila … Keep going …nalla iruku …

    1. thank u ridhima akka

  6. Priya15

    amazing ff yr…as well as ur dp is yukti looking superb..

    1. thank u very much priya di for commentingon my ff and my dp.And i agree with u yukti is looking amazing

  7. Very beautiful ff after such a long time

    1. ur dp is also nice

    2. thank u very much anjali and love your dp too

  8. Jayani

    Ur welcum akka n ur dp is awesome Preethi akka

    1. thank u jayani cutie !!! very sweet of u and your dp is awesome too.

      1. Jayani

        Thank u Preethi akka

      2. Jayani

        Thank u Preethi akka n best of luck for ur xam (if u hav ?)

    2. jayani i do have my xams !!! and if u dont mind me asking u told that u are from dubai right??? which school r u from .sorry if it is personal. then u dont need to tell me

      1. Jayani

        I’m from ihs

  9. Jayani

    Which skul r u from Preethi di

    1. jayani, even i am in ihs are u in the oud metha branch and if yes can u tell me in which class are u from because we can meet each other .reply soon jayani cutie

      1. Jayani

        Now for d xam time, I’m in 8D but I’m in 7H

      2. Jayani

        Which class r u from Preethi di? Reply soon please.

      3. Jayani

        Shall v try meeting during d regular days coz d invigilator won’t allow us 2 come out of d class during d xam days r8? Maybe on wednesday or thursday, I guess? Waiting for ur reply di.

        Jai Siya Ram

  10. jayani no prob lets meet on wednesday during the recess.i will come to your class and i cant believe that u are in my school and your class is opposite my class.i am in 8-j .yayaya!! i am so happy .we shall definitly meet on wednesday

  11. definitely

  12. oh sorry we r not in opposite classes .sorry i got confused but i will definitely meet u on wednesday

  13. dont forget and reply soon

  14. jayani i have one doubt both grade 7 and grade 8 are in the same level right ?? and is your class past the staff room next to the washroom and jayani i am in 8 h classrom for the exam. dont worry i will figure it out tomorrow and will surely visit u on wednesday

  15. an jayani is your real name jayani becaue suppose i go and ask your classmates for u then they tell me that there is no girl whose name is jayani in this class i dont want that to happen.plz dont take it in a wrong way

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