Laal Ishq FF – MATSH, SNS, YHM, Swararagini, Saraswatichandra Part 11

We all were addressing Shravan and Vidya as ViVan till now.But Nandana and Shakaib address them as ShaVi.I dedicate this chapter to them for giving them a new jodi name.Dedicating this to Shakaib too for suggesting 2 jodi names for Samar Monica-Sonica or Monar.

Gaura took an album from the cupboard and showed some photos.

Gaura:This is my son Mihir,Dharam’s twin.
Vidya could’nt believe it:What?
Gaura:Yes.Durga was Mihir’s wife and was pregnant.But Mihir died in an accident.Durga was an orphan.And she was carrying our baby in her womb.So I made Dharam marry Durga.Shravan was born then and Dharam accepted him as his son.
Durga:The truth is that Dharamji took care of me and my son very well.But he never loved me.His love was always Taani.And your sister Meera is Taani’s reincarnation.
Vidya wept:I know that.
Durga was stunned:You know that?
V:Yes.But Meera di will never take your place Maaji.
Dur:But we should unite them Vidya.
V:Maaji..what are you saying?How is it possible?
Dur:I don’t know.But we should unite them.I am just a wife for name sake.Dharamji needs a wife who gives him a lot of love.Only Meera can do that.And the truth is that only Meera has place in Dharamji’s heart.Then why should they stay away from each other because of me?
Vidya and Gaura wept.

Vidya was in her room thinking of what Durga and Gaura revealed.Shravan came.He noticed her.
Shr:What happened Vidya?Is anything disturbing you?About Priyal?
V:Nothing Shravan.You simply feel like that.
Shr:Look Vidya..I can understand your change in facial expression.So tell me what is the matter.
Vidya thought:Right now Shravan should not know the truth.He may not be able to bear it.
V:Shravan…I told you.Nothing is there.Just a small head ache and I took medicine.So I will be alright soon.

Shr:Are you sure?
V:Yes baba.
Shr:Ok.
He thought:Why do I feel that Vidya is hiding something from me?

Ahem embraced Gopi from behind.Gopi blushed.
G:Ahemji..

Ah:Gopi…recently we faced lots of tensions.To get relief shall we go for a drive.
G:Ok..I also want to go for a drive with you.
Ah:Then we will leave now.
G:Ok..will get ready now.
After changing clothes they went near the car.
G:Ahemji..I want to go for a bike ride.
Ah:What?I thought a drive by car.
G:Ya..but we have gone by car many times.Today I want to have a bike ride by you and I will ride the bike.
Ahem could’nt believe it.
Ah:What?You will ride the bike?How?
G:Ahemji…recently when you went abroad for meeting my colleague Anuragji taught me bike riding.
Ah:Anurag is the teacher who worked in your school.Right?
G:Yes.I was working as a painting teacher and Anuragji was a Maths teacher there.
Ah:Anurag taught you bike riding?But you never told me that.
G:I thought i will surprise you and I thought this was the perfect occasion to surprise you.
Ah:But Anurag…how come you met him?
G:Recently I met him accidently at an exhibition.He told me about him teaching bike riding these days in the driving school.So I joined there.As I knew Anuragji well I was comfortable with him.
Ah:Comfortable?What do you mean by comfortable with him?

Gopi was stunned by his reaction.Slowly she burst into laughter.
Ah:Why are you laughing?
G:You are the father of 2 adult girls and you are a grand father too.Still getting jealous?
Ahem was embarrassed:I am not jealous.Why should I be jealous of that over intelligent Anurag?
Gopi giggled:Ok ok.But I know how to make your mood nice.
She pulled his cheeks cutely.She sat on the bike.
G:Sit behind me Ahemji.
He sat behind her.She started riding the bike.Slowly Ahem smiled.She took a sudden brake.Suddenly when the bike shook Ahem held Gopi by her waist.She blushed.She turned back and looked at him.They shared a sweet romantic eye lock.
Ah:I really enjoyed your bike ride Gopi.You are riding well.
G:Thank you Ahemji.
They smiled.

Raman and Romi came.
Raman:It’s been proved that God exists.
Mr.Bhalla:Any thing special?
Romi smiled:Ashok who cheated me got arrested in cheating.
Toshi:This is such a nice news.Bad people will get punishment one day.Ashok’s arrest is an example.
Sarika:That scroundrel deserved it.
Ishita:Now we can be peaceful without his disturbance.
Toshi:You are right Ishita puttar.Ashok was keeping on creating problens for us.Hope he learns lesson from this.
Romi was surprised to see his favourite dishes on the table.
Sarika:How is my surprise Romi?I made all your favourite dishes.

Romi:Great.Sarika..thank you so much.But on what happiness did you make all this?
Sarika:Occasion is Ashok’s arrrest.
Romi:What?Ashok’s arrest?Will anyone celebrate when somebody gets arrested?
Sarika:Yes.I will celebrate.You tell me.Is Ashok’s arrest anything less than celebration?Because of him,you were terribly sick Romi.Because of him Raman bhaiyya and Ishita bhabhi too got distanced from us.He ruined our relationships.I can never forget all this.So Ashok’s arrest needs to be celebrated.
Romi:Even I can’t forget what he did to us.He made me go against Raman bhai.For that I can’t even forgive myself.But it’s all because of Ashok.You are right Sarika.We need to celebrate his arrest.
Sarika smiled.Romi started eating.
Sari:Will you eat all by yourself or will you feed me also?
Romi:What?I should feed you?Why?
Sari:Why means?
Ro:I mean..you have hands to eat by yourself.You are not sick and no mehendi on your hands.Then why are you asking me to feed you?
Sari:You look like Romeo,but actually you don’t even know how to get romantic with your wife.
Sarika showed an angry face which made Romi laugh.
Romi:I was just kidding yaar.Come to me.I will feed you.
With a smile Sarika went near him.He fed her.
Darmiyaan… (4)
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan
Darmiyaan… (4)
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan– Jodi Breakers

Shravan went near Vidya:Vidya..how do you feel now?
V:I am alright now.
Shravan smiled:Good.
V:You look so happy.
Sh:Yes Vidya.I am very happy.I got my mother back and my father and mother are together with me now.I am happy.
Vidya thought:Shravan is so happy.All his happiness will vanish if he comes to know the truth of Maaji and papaji.Shravan should not know it.Butone day the truth will be out and it will be so painful.
Sh:Vidya..there is a surprise for you.
V:Surprise?
Sh:Yes.Come with me.
He took her to the garden.She was surprised to see the swing being decorated with leaves and flowers.
V:Shravan..it’s so beautiful that I feel like swinging immediately.
Sh:Who is stopping you?Let us sit there now itself.
They sat there together and started swinging.
V:I love swinging since childhood and swinging on a grand swing is a real treat.And the biggest happiness is that you are giving me company to swing.Love you for this Shravan.
Shr:Love you too Vidya.

They shared a romantic eye lock.Vidya rested her head on his shoulder while they were swinging.

Shravan started singing for her.
Aaaa.. aaa…aaaa
Labon ko Labon pe sajao

Kya ho tum mujhe ab batao –2
Todh do khud ko tum

Banhon mein meri
Banhon mein meri
Banhon mein meri
Banhon mein –2

They started dancing.
Aaaaa.. aaa..
Tere ehsaasson mein Bheege lamhato mein
Mujhko dooba tishnagi si hain
Teri adao se dilkash khatao se

In lamho mein zindagi si hai
Haya ko zara bhool jao
Mere hi tarah pesh aao
Ko bhi do khud ko tum
Raaton mein meri
Raaton mein meri
Raaton mein meri
Raaton mein
Aaaa,aaa..

Labon ko Labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao –2
Tere zajbaaton mein mehki si saason mein
Yeh jo mehek Sandali si hai
Dil ki panahon mein bekhri si aahon mein
Sone ki khwasish jagi si hai
Chehre se chehra chupao
Sene ki dhadkan suno
Dekhlo khud ko tum
Annkhon mein meri
Annkhon mein meri
Annkhon mein meri
Annkhon mein
AAaa..aaa.. – Bhool Bhulaiyaa

They slept off in each others arms.

Kumari entered the drawing room.It was dark.
Kumari:Why the lights are off?
Suddenly the lights were on and she saw Manoj,Shagun,Saras,Kumud and Danny.
They said together:Happy birthday Kumari.
She was surprised.
Danny brought a cake:You favourite strawberry cake.
Kumari:Wow..Danny…you are so sweet.Let me cut the cake.
Danny:I knew that seeing this cake you will forget all of us and eat in up in a moment.
Everyone laughed while Kumari was embarrassed.
Shagun:Don’t feel bad Kumari.What Danny meant is..here we are going to party and you are the birthday girl.So you should be well dressed.So Danny wants you to dress well before cake cutting.
D:Exactly.
Danny gave her a cover:Wear this and come soon.
Kumari:If it’s Danny’s gift then how will I be well dressed?Because I know that Danny’s selection will be horrible.
Danny:Hey girl…this is selected by Shagun bhabhi.I just paid the bill.
Kumari:Really?
Shagun:Yes.Hope you will like my selection.
Kumari:Shagun bhabhi is style Icon.How can I not like it?She has chosen the best for me for sure.
Everybody smiled.
Kumari came wearing a beautiful suit.
Danny was lost in her.Kumari blushed.
Kumari:Hey Danny..will you keep staring at me like this or will you let me cut the cake?
Everybody laughed.Danny was embarrassed.
Kumari cut the cake.Danny opened his mouth hoping that the first piece will be for him.
Kumari:Why are you keeping your mouth open?Mosquitoes will go inside.
Everybody laughed.
Danny:I thought you will feed me the first piece.
Kumari:Hello…why should I feed you?I am the birthday girl.So I should eat the whole cake.Right?
Danny was embarrassed.Everybody laughed.Suddenly Kumari opened his mouth with her hand and put a cake piece inside.Danny was surprised.
Danny:Kumari!
Kumari:I am not that greedy enough not to share the cake with my sweet heart Danny.
They smiled at each other romantically.He fed her the cake.Everybody smiled.
Danny took a ring:My special gift for you Kumari.
Kumari was surprised.He put a ring on her finger.

Kumari:Thank you Danny.You are the best.
She embraced him.

Danny and Kumari started dancing to music.
Tumhi Dekho Na Yeh Kya Ho Gaya

Tumhara Hoon Main Aur Tum Meri

Main Hairaan Hoon Tumhen Kya Kahu
Ke Din Mein Hui Kaisi Chaandani

Manoj Shagun too danced.

Jaagi Jaagi Si Hai Phir Bhi
Khwaabon Mein Hai
Khoyi Khoyi Zindagi

Saras told Kumud romantically:Kumud,guess not only the birthday girl and her partner are allowed to dance,but also us.So shall we dance together?
Kumud blushed.

Saras Kumud started dancing together.

Tumhi Dekho Na Yeh Kya Ho Gaya
Tumhara Hoon Main Aur Tum Meri

Unexpectedly Saras put a diamond ring on Kumud’s finger.
She was surprised:What is this Saras?
Saras:A gift for you.
Kum:But why?Today is Kumari’s birthday,not mine.
S:Should I wait for your birthday to gift you something?No need to be birthday to gift you something Kumud.
Kumud smiled.
S:When Danny and I went to buy ring for Kumari, Danny was busy selecting a ring for Kumari.This ring struck my eyes and I thought it will suit you a lot.
She smiled.
S:Must say this diamond is shining more on you.Guess it liked you very much.
She blushed.
He looked at the diamond ring:You may be attached to Kumud as she will be wearing you.But don’t be over attached to her as I am possessive towards her.I have more rights on her.
Saras Kumud laughed.
Kum:Thank you so much Saras.This ring is very beautiful.The best ring of mine.
Saras pulled her closer and touched her forehead with his.She blushed.
He continued dancing with her.

Tumhi Dekho Na Yeh Kya Ho Gaya

Tumhara Hoon Main Aur Tum Meri – Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna

Ishita was dreaming of the baby and moved on the bed in an abnormal way.Raman noticed it.
Raman:Ishita!
Suddenly ishita woke up from her dream.
Ishi:What happened Raman?
R:I need to ask you this question.Were you dreaming of that baby?
Ishi:Ya..you understood it?
R:From your facial expression itself I understood that.I think you should be taken to parapsychologist.
Ishi:What is the need of all this?It is not a scary dream I see.It’s a sweet dream regarding baby.
R:But why this baby is always coming to your dream?
Ishita caressed his face.
Ishi:Raman..why are you getting worried over such a small thing?
I think something is special about this baby which makes me remember her in my subconscious mind.That’s why the baby is visiting in my dreams.So relax Raman.

R:Ok Madrasan.Now sleep properly.
Ishi:Ok.
They slept in each other’s arms.

Raman shared this with Ishita’s mother Madhavi.
M:When Ishita told me about this I consulted an astrologist.He suggested that Ishita should be accompanied to Shiv Temple by her husband.
R:But amma..I don’t believe in astrology.
M:I know.But at least for Ishu won’t you do that Raman?At least for my peace of mind?If the astrologer had’nt stressed that Ishu should be accompanied by her husband I would’nt have forced you.
R:Ok amma.I will take Ishita to the temple.Anything for my Ishita.
Madhavi smiled:God bless you both.
Raman smiled.

Raman Ishita went to the temple.

The stairs were very huge.
Raman:My God!Never knew that I will have to climb such huge stairs.
Ishita giggled.
R:Don’t laugh and come with me.
While walking suddenly Ishita’s leg got sprained:Ah..
R:What happened Ishita?
Ishi:Raman..my legs are sprained. I don’t think I will be able to climb stairs.I feel sad that though we reached till here I won’t be able to do darshan.
Raman felt sad for her.
R:When I am there you will be able to do darshan.Don’t worry.
Ishi:But how?
He lifted her up and started climbing stairs.She was surprised.

Ishi:Are you not feeling strain to carry me and walking?
R:When I see happiness on your face about doing darshan I don’t find it a strain.
She smiled.

Ho Kabhi Kam Na Ho Ye hai Chaahatein

Pal Pal Badhe ye hai Mohabbatein

She kept looking at his face admiring him.

Ho Kabhi Kam Na Ho Ye hai Chaahatein

Pal Pal Badhe ye hai Mohabbatein

They both prayed in the temple.
Raman prayed:Shiv Bhagwan..please remove all problems from my Madrasan’s life.
Ishi:Thank you so much Raman.Without you this would not have been possible.

You carried me in your arms and climbed stairs.It is not a silly thing.

R:Of course.Carrying a fat woman like you and climbing huge stairs is not silling thing.Carrying you was a little bit difficult.But no problem.But I warning you to lose some weight.Every time I won’t be able to carry big Jack fruit in my hands.

ye khatti meethi takraar hai ya pyaar

yeh rootha roothi ye khatti meethi

saath saath rehna hai roothna manaana hai

Ishita frowned:Ravan Kumar Bhalla!

R:Please don’t be Jhansi Ki Rani now as it’s a temple.

yeh kaisi hai ladaai

ek dor kheenchey hai ek dor baandhey hai

hoti nahi hai judaai

They both burst into laughter.

ek duje se hai shikayatein

phir bhi sang hai yeh hai mohabbatein

Jigar Rashi came with air tickets towards Samar Monica and Sahir Sona..
Rashi:After marriage you all could’nt go for honeymoon because of various issues.So we have decided to send you all for honeymoon now.
Jigar:Tickets to Switzerland.
Jigar Rashi said together:So go enjoy guys.

They all were very happy:Wow.

Samar Sahir hugged Jigar Rashi:Our mom dad are the best.
Rashi:Yes we are the best.And another thing is that girls..come with me for shopping.You girls have to be best dressed in Switzerland.
Monica hugged Rashi:Momji..we are so lucky to have a mother in law like you.
Sona hugged Rashi:Sasumaa..you are really rocking.
Rashi:Of course I am.That’s why everybody says that I am still young.
Jigar:Rashi..you can never stop self praising.
Everybody laughed.

Sona Monica went for shopping with Rashi and bought dresses for themselves.
The next day Samar Monica,Sahir Sona flew to Switzerland.

They romanced a lot and enjoyed.

Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hota hai jo love se jyada waise wala love

Ishq wala love
Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love

Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love

Meri neend jaise pehli baar tooti hai
Aankhein mal ke dekhi hai maine subah
Hui dhoop zyada leke teri roshni din chadha
Ishq wala love– Student Of The Year

Rachana pinched Vidya’s baby.Priyal started crying loudly.She was recording it also.
Rachana said to herself angrily:Durga…what did you think?You thought now you all can live peacefully?No…here your grand daughter Priyal will be tortured every moment like you were tortured and all of you should feel that pain.Then you will understand how I felt when I lost my son.

Rachana sent the video to Shravan’s mobile and she started laughing in an evil manner.Shravan viewed the video and got shocked.He screamed:Priyal!
Everybody heard it and ran towards Shravan.

15 comments

  1. Varshini

    |Registered Member

    ahem getting cute was sooo cute and sweet . romi -sarika scene was cute and funny . kumari b’day celebrations wid danny-kumari dance was good . wow ,rashi is so affectionate towards he DILs . their honeymoon was good . i am hating this rachana , she is troubling priyal . sad about that . hope priyal comes back to vidhya soon . eagerly waiting for next part

  2. Duva

    |Registered Member

    Loved it soooo much Akka no words to express can u please give me ur what’s app number Akka …..and post the next soon no words to express how r u

  3. Ragini

    Hi di! I love this part. Aad that rachna is torturing priyal but which one is playing rachna’s role????I think di! All have name shravan vidya as ViVan. I think Sonica is more parfect for Samar and Monica. Di! Please to show, Tolu and Sonakshi’s scene. Yes, i too guess a name for them- ToNakshi. How is it? Sorry because I’ve start reading it from part 10, so don’t know clearly that they are couple of your ff or not? Go hem scene was too nice. And ishra too. Keep giving such amazing updates.
    With Best Wishes,
    Ragini

    • Jasminerahul

      |Author

      thx 4 reading this ff.Tasneem Sheikh is playing Rachana’s role.Hey..Tolu’s real name is Sahir n I have shown Sahir Sona romantic scenes on part10 n part11.so plz them once more

  4. Nandhini

    |Registered Member

    Gohem scenes different and nice! The cover page beautifully matches with this current update scene of Ishita and raman..nice romantic scene of kumud and saras in kumari’s birthday party..now dheera will be united and they will be happy…shravan must take his daughter back from rachana at any cost.

  5. Nandana

    |Registered Member

    Nice episode di I really liked the part of shavi or vivan swing and kumari’s birthday party ishra’s temple seen and her dream and why is she dreaming . And because if that only our Raman is getting tensed and over all it was superb and thank u so much for dedicating the episode for me and sorry for the late comment

  6. Mansi

    |Registered Member

    OMG dis rachna is soo evil hw could she do dis to a baby jst to fulfill hr revnge😓hope she chnges 4 d better gd tht gaura isn’t evil n helpng durga to unite dheera waitng 4 dheera union😊😊update soon!!!😃

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