laakhAM : the love story that stole our heart (Episode 11)

hey i m bck……..i was busy due to my final exams……but i’ve got time to update it so here is the next part………

recap : poonam guddi laakhan in b’day party……….bindiya’s entry

bindiya smirks seeing laakhan constantly looking at poonam and thinks that why he is looking so lovingly at an ordinary looking girl and is ignoring me the most beautiful girl here………her thoughts are disturbed by guddi
guddi : where are you staying bindiya ?
bindiya : in a hotel
guddi : hotel……….why in a hotel you r my friend u should stay here !
bindiya : no…….its ok
guddi : no its not !………..pls stay here i insist !

..priyom comes there
priyom : pls stay it will be our pleasure to serve u !……………bindiya looks at him and smiles
bindiya : who is he guddi ?
guddi : he is my brother…………priyom bhaiya
bindiya : ohh
priyom : so will u stay here ?
bindiya : if u r insisting so much then………….ok
guddi : wow! great !
bindiya : i’ll ask my Secretary ghungroo to bring my luggage here !
guddi : ok……………….the party ends everyone is going back poonam to is heading towards her home when she heard someone………it was laakhan

poonam turns……..poonam : ji !
laakhan : u are looking very pretty !
poonam shyingly says……..
poonam : thank u…………..they share an eyelock
laakhan : ghar jao warna der ho jayegi !
poonam : hmm………laakhan smiles.
next day phulan and manjita r talking
phulan : manjita u have to go to patna for the work !
manjita : ji………but i have a problem

phulan : what problem ?
manjita : punmi’s mother has gone to her maayka and if i’ll also leave for patna than poonam will be alone !
phulan : oh…………don’t till ur return poonam will stay with us……..in badi haveli !
manjita : thank u
phulan : what thank u………poonam is like our daughter !………………..laakhan listens to all this and smiles. after manjita leaves he comes to phulan
laakhan : bade papa..
phulan : yes laakhan
laakhan : woh… nowdays theka’s work has risen up……..and becuz i don’t live here mithilesh bhaiya has to handle every work single handedly so i was thinking that untill the work pressure comes down i sould live here
phulan : yes yes………..why not beta its ur home too……. stay here !

precap : bindiya gets jealous seeing poonam and laakhan

Credit to: shruti

8 comments

  1. ap

    wow….very nice…. yes plz write it little lengthy….if possible .. anyways u write too gud…really every word picturizes….keep writing… eagerly waiting for next part.

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