Kyy- I hate love (episode 17)

Kavya dear!!! Where r u?? M missing ur comments… Plz read my ff dear..Episode 17..
So this one is a long part…. Hope u like it….
Let start….
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Manan hug was endless….
They seemed to never separate….
Nandu suddenly realised what she was doing n separated with manikπŸ˜”
Nandu started to walk away..
Manik was left there alone…
Manik called her..

Nandu..Nandu…

BT she didn’t listen to him n simply walked out…

She ran through the corridors…

She went in to the restroom…

Managed herself n walked straight to her home…

Manik was left stunned..
He was standing still there…

Navya came to the jam room finding Nandu BT found Manik…

Manik turned towards her and asked her…

Manik-” Navya… Do u k y she behaved so weird?”
Navya-” no Manik…Ho..how..could I..Ik…y Nandu..behaved..lyk that!!”

Manik-” really?πŸ€”. BT how do u know I was taking about Nandu, I didn’t even mention her name!!”
Navya became nervous..
Jst then cabir entered.. With fab3..
Navya-” vo..no one..else was there na…so.o..o..I..thought…u would be…”
Manik-” oh! Then how do u k how she behaved? U were not there that tym…!”

Cabir-” Manik..what happened?.. Say na!”
Manik-” say Navya…”
Cabir-” Manik what?”
Manik-” Navya speak na..”

Navya-” woh…I jst saw it…m ..I was..ah…”

Manik-” oh jst shut up Navya…. Speak the truth..y she behaved lyk that…”
Cabir-” what is wrong with u Manik..y r u instigating her?”😑😑

Manik-” BECOZ CABIR!!!! She is lying!!”

Cabir didn’t believe it….

Cabir-” navu whatever he is saying..tell him the truth… Plz..”

Navya-“Vo…”
She got interrupted by a voice…

Announcement from the speaker…

-” fab5..the principal has invited u all to his cabin for meeting some other officials….
Plz gather in his cabin asap… Tq”

Fab5 left the matter for the mean while n went to the princi’s office…

Navya was this tym saved by her luck…bt was afraid to when again this topic would be raised….

Days passed….

Navya kept ignoring coming infront of fab4…

Nandu was constantly avoiding fab5.. And specially Manik!!

She whenever saw him… Felt to hug him once more…
Wanted to feel him..
BT in his heavenly arms forever…BT she was left with no other choice rather that staying away…

Manik was now frustrated n was badly wanting to meet Nandu….

Manik went to Navya….

Navya was with fab4.

Manik-” Navya…enough…u ll have to say me…y she behaved lyk that…n what’s wrong….
Say other wise I ll kill u…”

All-” what?????”

Cabir-” Manik r u mad…”

Manik-” no wait..I ll kill cabir….say now….”

Navya-” ok..wait Manik..I m saying….
Manik y Nandu is behaving with u lyk this..that I know BT I cannot tell u coz she has given me promise..her promise..if I tell u…she ll have to suffer something really bad…I know it’s a superstitious believe..BT it is….I believe it…n she too does….
N Manik I m also…majboor….
If I know the reason..I would have told u in the beginning itself….
N when it comes to her…
I don’t know y she is doing this to herself….
I don’t know what is in her mind….”

Manik-” ok…. I’ll know it myself…n don’t worry I was jst threatening u…I ll never kill any one of u…”

Navya-” that I knew…u r a good boy…”

Both smiled…

One day Nandu was walking towards the library…in the corridor..
Someone pulled her with gr8 force kept his hand on her mouth n took her to the room beside….

Nandu’s was constantly fighting BT when she saw the person she became still like a statue with big eyes…

The person was non other than our very own manik😎
Nandu-” Manik…y did u pull me here??? ”
Manik-” I have not pulled u here to answer all ur question…I won’t answer any of ur questions…today u answer me a question…!!”

Nandu became nervous…
Nandu-” ahh..wha..what question??? I ll not answer any”
Manik-” u ll have too….”

Manik-” what is going on??”
Nandu-” what ?? Nothing!!”
Manik-” shut up..y r u ignoring me Haan??? All the time..what ever I ask u..u jst speak that much…u don’t stay infront of me….u r always away…y??? ”

Nandu totally knew y he is behaving lyk that BT ignored it..

Nandu-” Vo…u know na…becoz there is so much of work n studies left with me na..that’s y..I m busy….”

Manik-” stop it…busy not in studies..BT in fooling around the corridors with Navya???”

Nandu-” so y r u getting mad at me Haan…y do u care where I go…friends can stay away from eo for some days na..then y r u going so impatient??”

She purposely said those words as she thought that this would make Manik stop instigating her…. BT Manik is Manik…

Manik said loudly-” bcoz I want u….not as a friend..BT as a lover……” It echoed in the whole room loud…

She was stunned….

Manik took a deep sigh….

He stood on his knees…

Manik-” miss NANDINI MURTHY….I LOVE U…… I REALLY REALLY DO LOVE U WITH WHOLE OF MY HEART AND MIND N I M READY TO ACCEPT U AS U R…. CAN I HAVE THE PLEASURE BE UR LIFE PARTNER FOR LYF….
n that is y I was impatient…when I went to the tour I realised that I m missing u really badly n that’s when I realised that I love u….
I love u very very much…..”

Nandu who was standing there had never expected this to happen at that point of time…
She Was standing still lyk a statue….

It was 10 mins n she was jst staring at Manik….

What he said…she was taken aback By those words…
She didn’t even think in her worst nightmare that this would happen lyk this….

Manik who was sitting on that way got lil nervous now..coz she didn’t reply till now….
He stood….

Cupped her face…
Manik-” Nandu..say something…plzz baby….”

Nandu who was still in state of shock now realised what was going on….
Tears started brimming in her eyes….

Nandu-” Manik….I hate u…..I hate u….I trusted u as a friend BT u broke my trust….
I..I..m …..m…so …..”
She started crying…..

Manik-“Nandu.. What…I was…m”
Nandu-” leave me….stay away……”
Manik-” hey..what..”
Nandu took his hand n threw it from her….

She pushed him n went crying….

Manik who was standing there was stunned BT her sudden act…
He was still in trans…
It has never happened…
Every girl loves Manik..n whom he loved..she didn’t love him…

Manik-” no..this can’t happen….m…… ”
His eyes had tears….

He walked out hiding his tears…

While he was passing…he saw Nandu sitting alone on a chair in a silent alone place….

He saw her….
He could see…she was hurt by something else…she was not hurt bcoz of Manik….
Her loud roar showed that there was some other intense pain in her which was coming out her her crying roar….
It showed that she too loved him n it was something which was forcing her to stay away from him….
Manik now got it….
He thought( Nandu….its somethings which is bothering u…I know u love me….BT it’s something which is forcing us to stay apart….I ll get to know that… BT how??
Any ways….. I jst know I need u n u need me….)

Manik was very depressed….

All went home….
Manik told everything to fab5…. N Aryaman n Navya…..

Alya recommended-” guys…. Cavya has come together…we both (druliya) has come together…. So forgot we needed a party…we have to get a party done yaar…”

Druv-” Alya.. Have u lost it…here Manik is saying about his tragedy n u r planning a party…”

Alya-” by dumbo Bf…listen…aaise she is avoiding us…giving some or the other reasons n not getting together…BT if we give this bahana na…she ll have to come….
She can’t deny…we ll force her n do blackmail….to come in the party..n till then there is no interaction..nothing ll get sorted..so in the party….they ll….”
Mukhti interrupted excitedly-” they ll get together n talk n worth out things…..”

Manik become very happy listening to the plan…all were happy..

Manik-” alooo.. Not bad yaar….u have some mind left with u…”

Alya-” oh…plzzz leaving studies ask me anything..I have proper mind..n this love thing..no one has more experience n mind than mine….don’t forget I m the first one to fall in love from u all..even before druv..I fell in love with him..then later he too fell for me..so I l ur love guru…πŸ™πŸ™βœ‹βœ‹βœ‹βœ‹πŸ‘ΌπŸ‘ΌπŸ‘ΌπŸ‘ΈπŸ‘ΈπŸ‘ΈπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œ”

All laughed…

Nandu’s house…

Nandu was crying badly..she was loosing all her attitude…herself….

She got a message…

Nandu was informed about the party…
She decided not to go….

All of the fab4 with Aryaman and Navya convinced her on Phn….alya’s plan worked..she blackmailed Nandu….

Alya-” Nandu…this is how u r..this is how u show friendship….u ll not come to celebrate our happiness….I didn’t expect this from u…seriously…. Are u jealous of us…??”

And her plan worked…Nandu was convinced…she decided to go….

Aryaman came to take Nandu…….

Nandu n Aryaman went on Nandu’s car….

They reached….

The party was at Manik’s house….fab5 was in the garden with Navya…….

Both cavya and druliya were looking stunning couple…
Alya and Navya wore an evening gown of red and pink colour respectively….
Druv and cabir were also dressed in formals… Lookin absolutely handsome….

Mukhti was wearing a dress of purple colour with peels on it….

Abhi was also looking dashing…both were exchanging glances to eo….

Manik came down wearing a white blazer with sky blue shirt and denim pants..his hair were perfectly gelled up backwards…I wonder how he always managed to look so handsome n perfect….

The big malhotra mansion was decorated beautifully….

All the guests were almost there….
There was no sign of Nandu to come there though…

So our heartthrob was on stage…

He took the Mike said a long speech for his friends cavya and druliya….they had a grp hug…..Manik sag song on love for them…..

They opened the Champagne bottle n threw its all over….
Half the party was over….

All were very disappointed as they now thought that she would not come….

When suddenly Manik from far saw a car stopped….

A girl came out… She very far so her face was not visible…

Soon she walked in n came nearer…

Now she was visible…

Manik P.O.V

I saw the girl walking towards us only..she was now visible…she was wearing a long dark blue skirt and a sky blue crop top…which was showing half of her waist…she had a silver chain around her waist…she wore little heels…she had two bouquets in her hands…… her right hand had a platinum bracelet… When I looked at her face…she was non other than my Nandu…. She didn’t had much makeup on her..with jst some kajal and a light pink gloss I guess.i don’t know what it’s said.. Anyways…. Her hair was open…
Her eyes still had redness maybe coz she was crying at her home too….BT she still looked attractive or should say even more attractive and mesmerising….. I was stunned looking at her…she was looking as an angel has landed on earth and is coming towards me…. Ufff….if I was alone with her..I would have told everything which I m thinking now….
I really do love her…..I love her TRULY..DEEPLY…N…MADLY!!”

END OF P.O.V

Nandu came n gave one bouquet to each couple.. Cavya and druliya….

They all talked as if everything is normal and no one knows anything which has happened….
She was ignoring looking at Manik..while Manik was constantly looking at her… Admiring her…..

They all had much fun….

All had drinks except for Nandu….even Navya had it😜

When nothing happened…neither Nandu takes with Manik nor Manik talked with her….
Cabir and Navya thought of a plan….

Cabir brought a drink for Nandu….

Cabir-” naannduu…take thisssss……”
Nandu-” what is this..I don’t drink….”
Cabir-” areeee…idiot…its jst soft drink…”
Nandu-” sure?”
Cabir-” hmmm….. Jst soft drink”

Nandu-” drank the drink slowly…”

Here mukhti brought a drink for Manik…
Mukhti-” maaanikkkkkkk…..le…. This”
Manik-” mukhti r u ok..y r u shouting..n I already have a drink..so u drink it…”
Mukhti-” ok..I ll. Dink it…”
Mukhti was about to drink it BT Navya took it…
Navya whispers in mukhti’s ears-” idiot..give it to Manik not u…. Other wise u know na…”

Mukhti-” oh… Haannnn.right…baby” she said in a childish voice….
Mukhti-” Manik…drink na…for me… Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz…….. Otherwise…how will I fall in love?”
Manik-” what????”
Mukhti-” forget it…. Jst drink it….”

All slapped their heads…

Mukhti made a cute baby face..pleading for something….

All laughs…
Manik drank it…..
Mukhti shouted…-” yehhhhhhhhhhh”

Cabir closed her mouth…

All laughed….

All were enjoying the party….. Mukhti was dancing with abhi…druliya were dancing….
Cavya were singing the songs….

Ppl were very happy….

Nandu who was sitting was feeling very dizzy… And same with Manik….

Manik came to Nandu….both sat together….and suddenly Manik took Nandu’s hand n dragged her towards a different place of his house which had silence..coz party was on the other side of the house….

Cabir saw that and told to Navya..fab3 and Aryaman all laughed….
Cabir-” poor manan…they both were not talking so what else could we do…”
Mukhti-” so we spiked their drinks…..”

All became excited…..

Here manan were standing alone…

Nandu-” maanikkk…y did…u take..me …..here….?”( guys imagine it as they are speaking it when they r drunk…)😀😀😀
Manik-” to ask u y u did this to me??”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”
Nandu-” what I did…..n u did good to take me here…….. See…..they…are….shouting tooooooooo much..!”πŸ™‰πŸ™‰πŸ™‰πŸ™‰

Manik-” hmmmm..leave that……u tell me….y did u leave me…n what happened that u hate me?? .πŸ˜ŸπŸ˜–πŸ˜–
Nandu-” Manik…..I don’t hate u…”πŸ˜ΆπŸ˜•

Manik-“so then??”😧
Nandu-” I hate….I hate……food….πŸ²πŸ²πŸ²πŸ˜–πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€”
Manik-” aeeeee… No…..tell meeeeee… What do u….really hate…”
Nandu-” I hate……love..!!πŸ˜ͺ
Manik-” what???”😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😡😡😡😡😡
Nandu-” yesssss….I hateeeeeeeee. it….”😑😑

Manik-” BT I love it…. I love u….plzzzzz be with me….plz plzzzzzzzzzzzz!!” Making a cute face….πŸ€•β˜ΉοΈβ˜ΉοΈβ˜ΉοΈ
Nandu gives a peck on his cheeks..

Manik-” I m serious Nandu”😀
Nandu-” Manik it cannot happen…no…. I cannot love anyone plzz..I..I m not allo..”

When suddenly she felt something on her lips… Sucking her lips… She saw Manik kissing her passionately….
She didn’t respond to it in the beginning BT soon gave in..
She was also sucking him slowly BT they were out of breath and had to seperate….

Both looked at eo….
Manik was about to leave her BT Nandu kissed him again..
this time it was even more passionate and intense kiss…both were sucking eo as a hungry kid does for food…
Manik was sucking her upper lips taking the taste of her cheery lipstick…
it tasted so sweet…Nandu entered Manik’s warm mouth..
taking every bit of him inside her…, both taking eo into themselves…
it was a passionate yet unending kiss…..
They separated due to lack of breath….
Nandu was in his arms..
both lay on the garden and slept there itself….

All the guests went back home…fab4 with Aryaman and Navya slept in Manik’s house only..
Form the window of the house…
they saw manan in the garden sleeping peacefully in eo’s arms..
and they smiled..

Alya had put blanked on manan…

They slept there like too really lovers do…both had a smile on there face..both were literally sleeping in heaven I.e eo’s arms…

Druliya were busy romancing the whole night…

Cavya also slept happily in eo’s arms….

Mukhti was already on the bed sleeping like a ‘kumbkaran ‘ 😜
Aryaman also slept in a separate room peacefully…

It was a beautiful night…with lots of love and passion…
The stars were shining bright and the fireflies were rejoicing the beautiful moment of love showing the immense they all had…

Precap- still thinking
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Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz today I want lots and lots of comments coz I have taken lots and lots and lots of efforts in writing this part…this has romance in it as well as pain….plzzzzzzzzz if u don’t comment today..I l, not give update tomorrow…so I want comments..plzzzzzzzzz☹️☹️☹️☹️
Suggestions welcomed..criticism accepted..ignore typos….

N PLZZZZZ ALL THE SILENT READERS..AAZ COMMENT KARNA..PLZZZZZZ I REQUEST
Love u all…..

33 comments

  1. Sindhu_Varma

    |Registered Member

    Tashuuuuuuuu!!!!!
    This is like super awesome.!!
    I loved it.! But I thought Nandu’s suspense will be revealed but u did not, smart move 😜 Aur their kiss was so cute πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ

  2. Nee

    Awesome update…dil khush hua by their naughtiness bt eager to no y nandu didnt accept manik

    • Tash

      |Author

      Tq nee…m glad u commented..saw ur comment after a long time…Tq again…that’s a big suspense ..ll be revealed soon..tc

  3. Anandi

    |Registered Member

    Taashh dear….I just loved it….thankyou for a realllyyyy looong update …it was really nice…why the suspense…hope you’ll reveal it soon …waaiiitingg for mooooree.. 😘😘

  4. Mahi13

    |Registered Member

    Di the update was a blockbuster hit πŸ˜› loved it a loooooooot. It’s full of everything romance pain fun. It’s superb. Manan 1st kiss!!! dancing with happiness πŸ˜› But di plz reveal y nandu is avoiding manik plz.
    Love u n take care.

    • Tash

      |Author

      Really?? Was it blockbuster hit???😜😜😜😜
      Yah even I was smiling like a stupid maniac while writing manan first kiss….
      Ll reveal the suspense soon..stay tuned..love u too..
      Tc

  5. Kyy

    Superb yar …
    I thought the suspense will be opened but no answer very very smart move
    Loved MANAN scenes and their kiss.♑♑♑❀❀❀❀❀❀❀

    • Tash

      |Author

      Tq kyy..BT plzz tel me ur real name if u don’t mind….
      N I was too sooo happy while writing their kiss..😜
      Latakia tuned n Tq for commenting…m very happy that u commented

  6. Manan_0206

    |Registered Member

    Di I’ve no words to describe ur creativity in writing . It’s just beyond words ….. Manan kiss …. And yes the suspense ….di pls do write in wattpad , maybe ur book might turn famous ! Thanks for the lengthy update . Tc , bye

    • Tash

      |Author

      Tq for such lovely compliments…. I m on cloud 9..u really feel so..I mean..m so happy to hear someone appreciating my writing skills..Tq…
      N welcome…
      Tc..
      Love u

    • Tash

      |Author

      Oh my god!….sunita aunty… I too read my ff…. Is it real or my dream… Some one pinch me…
      U really read it…n u commented too…..oh my god!..m sooooooooo happy n on 9th cloud… That u.. Such a nyc writer..I mean my one of the favouriteeeeeeee writer has commend on my ff…ur ffs are my ideal ff…Tq soooo much for commenting…love u…

  7. Priya

    Whats the nandus secret tashu tell me I won’t tell anyone…….pinky promise…
    Their plan is nice and it worked as well but nandus secret isn’t yet revealed….

    • Tash

      |Author

      Hahaha…. U really want to know it…then sorry BT I can’t other wise u ll loose interest in the story..this story is basically based on the revelation only…so if I tell u that..then..u ll have no other mystery left..BT if u wanna know it..stay tuned..I m goo a reveal in in more 2 to 3 episodes…so stay tuned…n sorry for not telling u n making u wait for so long…
      N Tq so much😊😊😊😊

  8. kavya

    Hey tash……how r u dear……

    Nd I m sry yar…..for not commenting…..in last episode…….
    Actually aj kl main thodi si busy rehti hoo…..nd I only get time in late night……

    But main apke sare update padhe h……
    Seriously……aj ka update too record thoore update tha…..
    Emotions, frdship, true love, sb kuch……

    Keep going dear……
    Nd I m always ur fan yar…..
    Nd dil se sorry……nd sorry itni late comment dene ke liye…..

    Love u loads yar…..

    • Tash

      |Author

      Kavya dear plzzz don’t say sorry… I don’t like anyone saying sorry to me..its jst that I missed ur comments… So said it….n l m soooo very happy that u commented….
      N also such long comments…whenever I read a long comment na..my heart dances…
      U really make me smile by ur comments…
      N love u too…
      Stay tuned…
      Tc

      • kavya

        Soo apne mujhe maaf kar diya na…..

        Pakka…..???

        Nd I promise…..aage se main kitni bhi busy hoo….yaa late hoo….chota yaa badha…..comment jarure karogi…..

        Pakka wala promise……

      • Tash

        |Author

        Oh..tq for the promise kavya dear…n I love ur comments seriously..the way u encourage us na… That’s y I missed ur comments..love u

    • Tash

      |Author

      Tq so much aaliy…I ll try to..dear m really busy nowadays so it’s being difficult for me to update fast..sorry

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