Kyy- I hate love (episode 16)

Hello everyone.. I hope u all didn’t forget me…. I m back..
Sorry for being soooooooooooooooooo late….
I was really very busy…
BT form now till Tuesday i promise to give regular updates as I have four days holidays…
Plzzzz comment today coz I have take slot of efforts writing this part…
Eager to know ur response…
*****************************************************************************Nandu was lying senseless on the floor….
Navya after the performance to Nandu’s luck decided to go to Nandu’s house..as she knew that she would be crying…
BT to her shock..it was something more worst…

Navya came at the door of her house n Nandu once gave her a spare key of her house…
She opened the door of the house with that as she rang the door bells many times BT there was no answer…

She had a feeling that there was something wrong…so she ran to her bedroom…
She climbed the staircase n finally reached the room…
She opened the gate…

She saw Nandu lying literally lifeless on the floor…
Navya saw her n was shocked n started panicking…
She called Aryaman in Nandu’s house…
Aryaman came..

He called the doctor on the way to come in Nandu’s house…

Both came to Nandu’s house….

Doctor checked Nandu…

Navya was jst praying to God for her health…

She thought to inform this to Manik..

She called Manik..
He picked the Phn at once.

Navya-” Manik Nandu… Nan..”
Manik-” what?? What happened to her?? Say”
Navya-” Vo she fell..”
Manik-” fell?? From the stairs..?” ” Navya r u dumb.. Plz jst say what happened,”
Navya-” Manik listen.. She fell on the floor senseless… She felt dizzy.. She was unwell..
N she is not conscious now… Doctor is checking her”

Manik-” what?…. HOW? I mean… She…. Ok… M coming…”
Navya-” what how r u coming now?”
Manik-” Navya I m coming now..I don’t know anything m coming”

Before Navya could say anything else Manik cuts the call…

Manik had to return back to Mumbai the next day BT he decided to take the first flight of now n go to mumbai…
He informed fab 5 n asked them to pack their bags n get ready in 30 mins…
No one uttered a word coz everyone knew Manik loved her…
BT this was the first time they saw that Manik loved her to this extent…

All got ready n left for the airport…

Navya here was very tensed…

Doctor came out of NANDU’s room…

Navya-” what happened to my sister.. Is she fine?”
Doctor-” relax Navya… She is f9 now… She was very weak that y she became unconscious.. That it…”
Aryaman-” thank god…”
Doctor-” not so soon… It can be a serious problem too if it happens more..”
Navya-” what happens more doctor?”
Doctor-” u don’t know?… Well she is not eating anything from last two to three days n that’s y she became weak..
N she even has some sort of tension n depression which caused this!”

Navya-” what? She hadn’t eaten anything from last two days?..”
Navya was really tensed for Nandu n Aryaman was in same..

Doctor-” I have given some medicines n some food courses to make her healthy.. Take care of that.. N any problem contact me again”

Both-” Tq Doctor..”

Aryaman leaves Doctor outside..

Navya tried calling Manik to tell him that it’s not such a big matter bt when he comes they ll take care of her…BT she failed..
Manik’s Phn was not reachable…

Navya was sitting beside Nandu n taking proper care of her,…

Manik n gang came to the airport with full security n his PA..

They took the first flight of air india n boarded in the business class…

Navya was continuously calling Manik BT his Phn was switched off….

Nandu woke up…

Nandu-” Navya what happened to me… N y r u here?”
She saw herself on the bed…

Navya-” nothing Nandu… U jst went UNCONSCIOUS…” Shouting…
Navya-” u idiot.. Y didn’t u eat from last two days Haan??? U went weak n switched urself off….”
Nandu-” ah..a..ah…vo… Am..”
Navya-” ah..u..m..Kya?.. See Nandu I know u r depressed…I understand that..I told u ll talk about this sometime…BT u started fasting.. For what?? Nandu…take care..n stop making urself suffer for all small matters…”

Nandu-” yeah Navya… I got u… I ll.. I ll eat food… BT for now I need some rest..”

Navya-” yeah u sleep now…BT wait…tomorrow toh…u ll have to come to college na?”
Nandu-” y? I ll not come to college”
Navya-” idiot…if u don’t come then who will submit ur assignment?”
Nandu-” u…….. Oh… Shit…tomorrow is viva also na?…. Shit I ll have to come to college tomorrow??…”
Navya-” don’t be sad..take a break.. Leave it..”
Nandu-” oh… I m not like u all..for u all it ll be OK to leave ur 10 marks of exam BT not for me…I ll come to college tomorrow… I have to do top in this semester…ok!”

Navya-” yah..ok… BT that reminded me.. I have till now not done my assignment…shit?????

Nandu-” uff… Go home now…complete ur assignment..”
Navya-” no..how can I?”
Nandu-” y can’t u?”
Navya-” BT u?”
Nandu-” I ll be f9… I ll eat my medicine also..don’t worry…go…”
Navya-” pakka?”
Nandu hummed….

Navya went out..

Navya thinks..
Oh.. I forgot to inform her about fab5… Well let it be… Other wise she ll be in shock n ll Panic from now only….

Manik n gang landed in mumbai within 2 hrs…
Fans got the news n all were standing at the airport…

Fab5 managed to go to their car from other gate of the airport….

They were in the car…
Cabir called Navya…

Cabir-” hello sweetheart…! How r u? ”
Navya-” m f9 BT busy…”
Cabir-” aacha even busy fr me”
Navya-” no baby…”
Navya-” aacha did u reach here?”
Cabir-” yeah we reached wanna meet u desperately”

Manik rolled his eyes n slaps cabir lightly…

Manik-” idiot u can talk these cheesy things later.. TAlking as if talked after 1 year…
Ask her the thing which u called her for!!”

Cabir-” what should I ask her?”
Manik-” dumbo ask her how to…”

Cabir-” oh got it….”

Cabir on Phn-” Navya quickly tell me how to go to Nandu’s house coz it ll be locked isn’t it…”

Navya-” come here n take the keys… I have a spare key of her house”

Cabir-” really?” Excited to meet Navya…
-” we r coming”

They go to navya’s house n take the keys…
CAVYA hug..n they don’t want to separate BT had to…

All went to Nandu’s house…

Manik rushed to her room….

He opened the door of her room slowly…all waited outside….

Manik went in…

Nandu was sleeping peacefully…

Manik went near… He saw dark circles in her eyes… She became thin…
He had tears in her eyes,…

Manik slowly touched her face…
He felt her soft skin..fluffy cheeks…her soft lips…
Smell of strawberry from her…
Her soft n silky long hair…

He wanted to hug her..kiss her…BT jst sat there luking at her….
Observing her…
Indulging every bid of her in his eyes…

Manik sat there fr an hour n then decided to leave as if the crowd n media now comes to know that he is there then they ll all gather in front of her house which he doesn’t want…

Manik says mukhti to stay there for Nandu…

All went home…
Mukhti slept beside Nandu….

Next day……..

Mukhti early morning went to her house n called Navya at Nandu’s house….

Came to her house n started making breakfast for both of them…

Nandu woke up By the alarm…
She switched the alarm off…

She was feeling very weak BT she got ready n went down to make something for her BT was surprised to see Navya with breakfast ready….

She wished her good morning to Navya…
Both had breakfast…Nandu took her medicines..

They left for college….

Nandu n Navya submitted their assignments…

Navya did her viva..it was ok!..
Nandu got her viva done…she did well n was happy with herself…

Nandu jst didnt know about fab5 that they were in mumbai already….

She was nervous as she knew that they r going to come Mumbai today itself n she ll have to meet them.. Even ll have to meet Manik…..

She went to the jamming room for alone time…

She sat here thinking about Manik…

She loved Manik n didn’t wanted to let go of him…
She didn’t wanted to be away from him…
She wanted stay with him…
Wanted to love him..be loved,..
She didn’t wanted to say no to him…

She started singing…

Ab tohe jane na doongi
Ab tohe jane na doongi
Sautan si ye rain hai aayi
Sautan si ye rain hai aayi
Ab tohe jane na doongi

Prem barsaao sang so jaao
Jane na doongi
Ab tohe jane na doongi

Kuch bhi na bolun aisa kar jaao
Honthon pe mere honth dhar jaao (x2)

Sukh wali rutt jane na doongi
Prem barsaao sang so jaao
Jane na doongi
Ab tohe jane na doongi

Then suddenly she heard some one sing….

Ek hai mannat, ek hai duaa
Dono ne ishq ki rooh ko hai chhua

She turned towards the door n what she saw made her loose herself…

She was shocked as well as unreadable watching him..

It was Manik…

Daayen se padh ya baayen se padh
Farsh se arsh tak ishq hai likha

She continued singing…as she when saw him forgot about everything else….what she had in her mind…

Na jaane na jaane na
Na jaane na doongi

Ab tohe jane na doongi
Ab tohe jane na doongi

Nandu ran and hugged Manik….

They hugged eo so tight that even air couldn’t enter them…

Both were in tears….

Nandu was crying silently….

For both it was a feeling of heaven….. Both were feeling eo….

Precap- ignore game starts…

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done with today’s episode…hope u all liked it…
Pppplllllzzzzzzz comment it’s my request… I have taken lots of efforts on this episode….
Ignore typos suggestions welcomed,criticism accepted..
Keep commenting I ll keep Entertaining..
Love u all….

Credit to: Tash

26 comments

    • Tash

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      Tq kyy…yah I love them hugging..n would like to know ur real name dear..plz tell me if u don’t mind

  1. Alisha

    |Registered Member

    That was such a cute episode. You always make me go like, “Awww..” ?❤️.
    Anyways, the episode was superb and amazing as always. You just can stop impressing me, right? ? Hehehehe… Loved every bit of it.
    Keep writing and I am eagerly waiting for the next one. ???

    • Tash

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      Hey Tq Alisha yaar… Ur such long n cute makes me so happy…m sooooooo happy that u liked it so much…. Getting comments from writers like u means a lot…
      Next part soon…
      N where is ur ff?? Waiting for it..
      Missing ur ff too…
      Love u
      Tq ??

  2. Mahi13

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    Mind blowing update di. Can’t wait to see what Manik’ll do to win Nandini. Plz update asap. How r u di? Take care n love u n sorry for not replying to ur msg. Very sorry for that. Actually my exam is going on so busy with studies. Again sorry.

    • Tash

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      Tq very much mahi… M happy that u commented despite being busy… M f9 jst lil busy..how r u?? I hope u r concentrating on ur exams too.. Do well… N plzz don’t be sorry..I don’t like ppl saying sorry to me..n u r my lil sis na!! Then no sorry ok! Love u..
      Tc..n do well in ur exams

  3. Ananya

    Its sooo awesome dear.. So for commenting late but it awesome. Update fast .. Will wait for your ff

  4. IshaJain3006

    |Registered Member

    u know i was soo angry becoz i wasn’t able to read because it was showing error on opening this episode n i was hell irritated but now i m happy 😀
    btw this epiosde was too awesome n m impatiently waiting for next episode…… 🙂
    keep writing ;P

    • Tash

      |Registered Member

      Aweeeee…is that true?? U were angry reading that I became happy…??u were so much desperate to read it…that so much big thing for me…I m so happy that u love my ff this much….
      Ll update asap…Tq so much Isha dear..
      Love u
      Tc…

  5. Priya

    Good one tashu…..am happy that u mentioned u will update regularly……and Sindhu start some new ff yaar…..

    • Tash

      Tq Priya di…n me to saying sindhu to write an ff..BT she isn’t listening to me…now what to do….u also say her na to write an ff or if not ff then she can write os one shorts….bolo na🙏

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