Kyu dard hai itna tere is ishq mei…..(Episode 1)

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Hey guys its me with another ff…. I just hope you like it…….

Man 1: she is mine…… And she can only be mine

Man 2: let her be free and live her life…. You just made her life a hell…. She will never love you….. its not love what you are having kabir you just simply wants her as yours

Kabir: a small correction veer she is already mine as my wife

Veer: you are a beast….. You forced her to marry you…. How can you steep so low?

Kabir: shut your mouth or else i crush your bones

Veer: iam not sanchi who would be afraid of you

Kabir: haha…. this nothing bro there yet to see about me…..

Veer: yah you are right yet to remove the masks on your face…..i just aunty should see your real face…..I dont know how sanchi tolerates you…..Being such a beast

Kabir: i gave her right to love me but unfortunatly not to hate…..

Veer: how can you be so cruel to her when you says you loves her…..Is this what you call love? She is your wife not a thing or property

Kabir: for me she is precious than all my treasures……She is a diamond…. Who would keep a diamond freely?…..I cant take risk….. i only have right to see her and to love her

Veer: kabir…..for god sake dont do this to her……..Please dont harm her…..She never did wrong to you….

Kabir catches veer’s collar and whispers in his ears

kabir: i wont let anyone even pluck a single hai of her as i only have right to do that…..on her smiles and tears i only have right….I only have only right to hurt her

Veer: you are gone crazy kabir…..You are phsycho…..U need a phsycaterist urgently

Kabir: im crazy as i love her

Veer in mind : now only god can save her from his grasp

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13 Comments
  1. luv it pls continue

  2. OMG itna accha ….. tum toh mera patta katwaogi TU se…..itna accha na likha karo yaar bestie….meri stories koi nahi padhega.Do update soon & lots of love to u.

  3. Riyarocks

    Sana……..too good………really interesting……I would really love to watch kabir as a possessive lover avtaar……….osm……..can’t wait for the nxt one……..luv u sweetieeee……..

  4. Trisha139

    A dhamakedar start keep going this is fab

  5. RuCh23

    Wow 😍😍😍 Kabir’s a bit scary but it’s a different shade of him. Awesome sana 😀😀😀

  6. Neha7873

    Too good ! Really nice ..update soon dear

  7. Riyarocks

    sana dear, I’m giving this comment on behalf of Anu….Awesome dear… Darwazatod episode… U r amazing dear… Fabulous writing…

  8. Yaashi23

    Hiii sana , commenting on your article for first time.. this is superb mindblowing Dear.. it reminds me of serial soubhagyavati bhav! . Pls continue soon…

  9. A new kabir….. Interesting…… Update soon

  10. Niyaaa

    Hey sana same here u remind me seriel saubhagyavati bhav btw sana it is scary but interesting to see kabir new shade.. I hope at end everything will be fine.. Loved it do post nxt one asap

  11. Abhilasha

    Woww fabulous yr ye kabir vikrant type bate kese krra h kher WO to reveal hogs hi but excited to see this kabir!!

  12. Sajnana900

    Such a different kabir i jzt luved it
    Ots totally a different plot
    Cant wait for further

  13. Jessicca

    Loved this new side if Kabir… Epi was amazing… Brilliant… Outstanding… Hope everything gets fixed in the end… Love you ❤

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