Kya Ma Manengi ? …… A Devakshi FF (Episode 1)


Hi everybody …. i am Tanvi and i’m 13 years old … i was a silent reader of this forum …. but now after reading all the ff”s of devakshi here …. i thought why should’nt i also write one … this is the first time that i’m writing a ff and that also on My favourite serial Kuch Rang Pyaar Ke Aise Bhi’s pair the one and only …. Devakshi !! i’m a big fan of Shaheer Sheikh ….. not many people know that he also appeared in best of luck nikki as riteish …. !! Ok now enough of my bak – bak …. I’ll tell u all about the story ….. All the characters will be the same and i’ll start the story from where dev break’s off his engagement with natasha on realising that he loves sonakshi !! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 So here i present u …… The First Episode !

Neha's Room ……
Neha – Ok girls ! chalo naachna shuru karein !! 1,2,3, Start ! (The Song Plays)
When neha sees nikki is not Performing properly …
Neha – Nikki,Aaj tune khaana kam khaaya thha kya ? Steps khaye ja rahi hai !
Nikki – Di !
(The trio laughed)

Dev's Room
Dev after hearing the music from outside …
Dev – Neha,Riya,Nikki ! Yeh kya laga rakha hai ! mein kaam kar raha hu ! i'm getting disturbed !
Nikki – Bhai ! Kal aapki engagement hai humein apna mazaak thhotena udwaana hai .. !! we are preparing for a dance performance for your engagement.aap hi kuch batao ! hum or kya kar sakte hai ? bhai aap bhi kuchh suggestions do na … Warna we'll get insulted in front of NG !
Dev – Mujhe nahi pata ! Shor Thhota Kam Machao ! Bye Goodnight Mein chala Vaapas.
They Together Shout – Bhai !!!!!!!!!!! Ruko !!!
Dev – Are ! Tum Log Ye Kya Kar Re Ho .. !! Mujhe kheech ke kaha le ja rahe ho !!
Neha – Bhai pehle aap bethho toh sahi ! lo .. is chair par bethho ! Or abh apni Aakhein band Karo !
Dev – Par .. Before he could even complete his sisters ordered him to do so !
Nikki – Abh dheere dheere aapki aankhon ke saamne ek bohot hi expensive anarkali suit mein aaegi aapki honewali patni !!
Dev – (While opening his eyes) Mujhe kuchh bhi nahi dikh raha ! mein jaa raha hu !
bhaiiiii !!!!! again they together shouted and made him sit on the chair.
Neha – Apni Aankhein Band Kijiye !!
He Lets out a sigh and says .. – Achha baba mein hara tum jeete ! mein apni aankhein band kar raha hu.
Neha – Aapke liye saare jahaan ki awaazein band ho gayi hai sivaaye uski paayal ki chhanchhan ke …. aapke liye vakt jaise thham gaya hai use dekhne pe ….
Nikki – Wo Dheere Dheere Aapke saamne aa rahi in a beautiful orange – coloured anarkali …
Riya – Chhan-Chann-Chhan …. Uski Payal Ki Awaaz Se Pata Chal Raha Hai Ki Wo Dheere Dheere aapke paas aa rahi hai hai
Neha – She's Breathtakingly Beautiful And She's none other than …. Natasha !
Dev – (In his mind) Ms Bose ?
And then suddenly he opens his eyes and stands up in shock !
Dev – Neha ! Tum Logo Ne Ye Sabh Kya laga Rakha Hai … patanahi kya hai ye sabh .. !! mein ja raha hu !

Dev's Room
He Gets Shocked After realising that he saw Miss bose as the girl whom he wants to spend his life with … ! He suddenly once again closes his eyes and sees sonakshi looking at him smiling !
Dev – yeh … yeh sabh kya ho raha hai ?! Kya miss bose sirf dost nahi hai? kya mein unse sach mein pyar karta hu ?
He suddenly goes to the mirror aur wo apne aap se baatein karna shuru kar deta hai !
Dev – (smiles) Iska matlab ms bose sirf dost nahi …. dost se zyada hai !
suddenly he's remembers that his engagement with natasha is tommorow !
Dev – Abh tum natasha ko kya jawaab doge dev ? nahi dev tumhe unhe kal batana hi hoga that u love ms bose ! Tum Ms Sonakshi Bose Se Pyaar karte ho !!!
Waise toh tum bada formal rehte ho sabhke saath ! Hi I'm Mr Dev Dixit. Abh Ho Gaya Na Dr Sona Se Pyar !

Precap : Dev Will Announce That He's Calling off the engagement with natasha And Will Now Think Of Ways To Propose Sonakshi.

Hey guys .. I Request That Please Like And Comment Ur Review On This If Anybody'll not review It I'll Discontinue it ! … Requests !! Sincere Apologies If Any Mistakes Or Grammatical Errors !!
Thank u

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  1. Nice. Start

  2. Cul…really gud..worth appreciating..keep writing..

  3. Nice start

  4. That was woooonderfullll…..

    1. Simplesweety1

      thank u …. bas i’ll update it in 30 mins 🙂

    2. Simplesweety1

      i’ve updated the 2nd and 3rd epi of the ff .. plz do read and review !!!

  5. You said that you are 13 year old but the story you had written is quite impressing. It also match the promo I mean similar. You were right he (shaheer) played the role of Riteish in best of lucky Nikki.
    Keep writing.

    1. Simplesweety1

      thank u so much i have updated the 2nd episode please do read 🙂

  6. Nice start it will be interesting to see how dev proposes sona n convinces the family….. Post soon
    N ya saheer sheikh did play reteish in best of luck Nikki

    1. Simplesweety1

      thank u … i have updated the 2nd episode please do read .. 🙂

  7. RANdomfANCreationz

    Nice start 🙂

    1. Simplesweety1

      thank u … 🙂 i’ve updated the 2nd part plz do read

  8. Di!!!!hi!!!you are like so amazing!!!!u are so so so talented and you writing skills are like poof(speechless)!!❤️Pls pls don’t stop writing!!

    1. Simplesweety1

      Thank u 🙂 i’ve updated the second part please do read it 🙂

  9. Simplesweety1

    Hey Guys ! I Wanted To Ask U All That If We Have To Publish the 2nd episode of a ff Then we’ll go to the submit article option at the top and continue our ff right! humein title mein ff ke naam ke saath episode no. bhi likhna hota hai … actually mein yaha nayi hu toh isleye mujhe samajh nahi aa raha thhoda …. and agar jo title humne pehle rakha thha uspe click kardo toh wo yellow banjaata hai title or agar usme episode no. likho to white …. lol kya karu mein … im a confused personality 😛

  10. Simplesweety1

    or jab mene apna episode khatam karke likh diya toh waha aa raha thha ki ur ff will appear in 24 hours lekin mein jab ff waale section mein gayi toh waha aaj ke din itni saari ff’s upload huyi huyi thhi …

  11. Partho

    Good start keep it up

  12. verrry gooood start
    plzz. never discontinue it
    i liked it so much keep it up

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